Kahani hamare Romeo aur Juliet ki(RN) NOTE pg16

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

The part was just awesome n Marvellous. How did u do it so well???
Initially I felt bad coz Raj was in HELL?????? But everything turned so gud. At last u sent him to Heaven though thru a secret passage. It was nice to c dat even Lata cudnt refuse him. After all WHO CAN???

The film stars part was just WOW. Gr8 job dear.

So I guess finally we r going to knw abt the real story. W8ing eagerly 4 dat coz I desparately wanna knw wat made Raj land in HELL??

I Hope U'll send him to heaven in the end.

The prologue was very much interesting. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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arwa

@awaazilicious

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: watch rajeev

god!!!arwa tumhein ye idea kahan se mila ya yun kahoon ki kaise socha??????😆 - hehehe thanks alot first of all. and now the idea? well its a long story but.

i mean i was rolling on floor wid laughter....raj narak mein?????😆aur naina sawarg mein....navin bhi narak mein....😆aur uppar technical problems!!!!!1😆 - i'm glad u had a ball reading this and found it so funny

aur vo film stars ka idea to bhut hi accha tha...👏 - thanks

raj ne narak ka rule no.10toda😆😆😆vo bhi again kuch technical prob..... - hehehe yeh her cheez me technical fault

navin aur raj pooore cartooons hain......i m waiting to know their life story...ah love story....ah sorry living love life story..ahhh forget it....u got it rite????😆😆😆 - sure, i can c u already getting confused. hehehe it'll be fun to see ur reaction in the later parts.

soooo cont soon...u hv all my love and best wishes😊 - thanks once again seema and i hope u continue reading and enjoying.

⭐️seema⭐️

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
The part was just awesome n Marvellous. How did u do it so well???
Initially I felt bad coz Raj was in HELL?????? But everything turned so gud. At last u sent him to Heaven though thru a secret passage. It was nice to c dat even Lata cudnt refuse him. After all WHO CAN???

The film stars part was just WOW. Gr8 job dear.

So I guess finally we r going to knw abt the real story. W8ing eagerly 4 dat coz I desparately wanna knw wat made Raj land in HELL??

I Hope U'll send him to heaven in the end.

The prologue was very much interesting. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

hey thanks a lot

I'm glad u luved the update.

yeh Raj hai hee aisa ke koi ose refuse karhee nahi sakta and yep now u shall know the story soon.

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Wow Arwa...kya idea hai...!!! 😉😉The whole story in flashback...!!!😛😛

It was simply superb..👏👏👏.I was laughing like an insane person....🤣🤣

Poor Rajveer being sent to hell...😭😭 But I think he had a nice time with the heroines of heaven...😉😉

Gawd...I don't know wat else to write...I just loved it...!!!😃😃😃

I wonder how you will manage 3 fics at a time...😕😕

Update soon...

Love,
Dhara.....

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springsign29

@springsign29

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

the concept of the fic is really different👏,the prologue
was really hilarious😆 even though raj and naina are dead i m laughing..
naina is being sent to heaven and raj to hell......where he meets navin
the fic is simply outstanding...
do ud soon

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arwa

@awaazilicious

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: srojaleen
Hiiiii Arwa...😊

sab se pahle mai yeh kahna chahungi ki Ekta kapur ko tum se jyada nahin to thoda bahat to sikhna hi chahiye...!!! kya kya concepts likhti ho tum...just mindblowing yaar...👏!!!tumhare kisi bhi fic k ek bhi ud boring nahin hoti...hala ki mai regularly tumhe rply nahin kar pati ...bt i must say ur a fantastic writter...👏!!! LOST aur EK AJNABI k baad... KHRAJK ...tumhara aur ek fab. fic hai...!!!👏 - wow, thanks alot for the appreciation Priya. hehehehe well Ekta mata the gr8 kaha kisee kee sunti hai. I'm glad u've appreciated you've appreciated all my updates so far and all my fics so far.

is ud k har part par dil khol kar hassi hun...mai...😆!!! first of all jab maine 1st page dekha...to mujhe laga k first ud main tum mujhe K.M.A ki shair karayougi...magar tumne to mujhe swarg aur nark dono k hi darshan karwa diya...!!!😆 - It's gud to see u had a gr8 laugh and i succeeded. Hmmm got u there didn't i..

vahan par bhi computers hain aur vahan par bhi tech pro.hote hain...😆!!! aur haan mujhe yeh bhi nahin pata tha k vahan par bhi aatmayon ki security checking hoti hai...😆!!! - hehehehe yeh complete modernisation with the 21st century

naina swarg main aur raj apne saale naveen k sath nark main...😆!!! film stars... part was just mindblowing...!!!😛 - Ha dono bichar gaye. Thanks for liking that as fist i thought it miight be too much but i guess it wasnt that bad

lastly...aur kya kahun yaar...!!! dis ud was superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrb...& refeshing...😃!!! hassna sehat k liye achha hota hai...aur mai aaj bahat hassi hun...😆!!! thanx for dat...!!! - i'm really happy to see i made u laugh so much and I hope i can continue making u laugh.

cont soon.

take care

luv

Priya😊

Originally posted by: crackpots86
Wow Arwa...kya idea hai...!!! 😉😉The whole story in flashback...!!!😛😛 - Thanks alot Dhara. I'm glad u luved the concept

It was simply superb..👏👏👏.I was laughing like an insane person....🤣🤣 - hehehe that was the whole idea

Poor Rajveer being sent to hell...😭😭 But I think he had a nice time with the heroines of heaven...😉😉 - yes it was sad per aakhir me sab accha hee hota hai na

Gawd...I don't know wat else to write...I just loved it...!!!😃😃😃 - ur gesture is perfectly understood

I wonder how you will manage 3 fics at a time...😕😕 - hmmm don't worry i manage alright

Update soon...

Love,
Dhara.....

Originally posted by: springsign29
the concept of the fic is really different👏,the prologue
was really hilarious😆 even though raj and naina are dead i m laughing..
naina is being sent to heaven and raj to hell......where he meets navin
the fic is simply outstanding...
do ud soon

hey thanks a lot for the appreciation

I'm glad u luved it and had a ball reading it.

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

wow this is certainly differant and i have to say, you took the sting out of death for sure...lol

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Now i am here for my lovely RN.

Dono me itna pyaar hai ki kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai ki god bhi un ko alag karne ki himmat nahi karenge 😉 😉 😉 par ab ye dekho na kya gadbad ghotala kiya god ne Naina ko Heaven me aur mere Raj ko Hell me kyoun bhej diya?😲 😲 😲 Ye bhi koi baat hai?😕 😕 😕 Dono kitna tadpenge ek doosre se milne k liye na.😭 😭 😭 Raj bhi poora nautanki hai yahan aate hi us ne yahan bhi apne style aur attitudes se sab ko impress karna start kar diya na.😛 😛 😛 Sab k sab us k deewane ho rahe hain.😳 😳 😳 Kya mast comic fic likha hai, har scene humari life jaisa 👏 👏 👏 aur vo SRK, Hrithik , Kareena , Bipasha , Preety, Sush vaala scene to yaar bahut hi funny hai.😆 😆 😆 Sab k sab flimstars ko apne saamne dekh kar shocked hain.😲 😲 😲 Naveen yahan bhi Raj ki aadaton se pareshaan hai aur Raj k charm se jyada pareshaan hai. Par hell me bhi maar peet par lage hue hain dono gande bacche.😡 😡 😡 Vo Dj vaala scene bhi kaafi funny tha 😊 😊 😊. To aakhir Raj se raha nahi gaya aur vo apni Naina se milne pahuch hi gaya.😉 😉 😉

Keep on updating.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago