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Bugger

@Bugger

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

ok ....me too juss read the 2nd part as others ....and again only word .........fantabulous!!

its appearing so real ....with the perfect pace ........i m really loving it ....

i like the way u have included tht ginger tea part......and slowly slowly this man will adapt every indian style!!

gud one skepti ...........post the next part soon .......

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Bugger
ok ....me too juss read the 2nd part as others ....and again only word .........fantabulous!!
its appearing so real ....with the perfect pace ........i m really loving it ....

i like the way u have included tht ginger tea part......and slowly slowly this man will adapt every indian style!!

gud one skepti ...........post the next part soon .......

Ginger tea is something my sprite likes, so I wrote it and biryani was out of Ranjana's KOTW. Tell me some of your likes, I'll include that too. 😆

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Skepti just now read the continuation😳..so finally the stage is set for Mission Amritsar😛

Ok the whole tea fiasco was quite good😳..loved those typical nok-jhok of Raj-Kranti over a cup of Ginger tea😆😛...So Raj is already feeling the presence of Kranti everywhere😉😳

I m hving high hopes from Amritsar now😳..yes I hv become a bit demanding😆...

Skepti now a days I can see that u r giving too much importance to my Raju's overall looks and appearence😉...its evident in this story also😛..the way u described how he loves his English hat😆😳...hmmmmmmm😉😆😆..ok just kidding😆

But once again Mindblowing screeplay👏

Waiting for the continuation now😳..achha just edit your title and write Updt:Pg 1😳

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Heya.. when was this?? I missed the update.. just now read it..

Absolutely refreshing, and involving Skep..

God, I m falling head over heels in love with this Raj..more than the version shown now, if I may say so.. its the old Raj, in all his glory..

Spellbinding Skep.. you ARE a witch.. 😉

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

skep...I have just read both the parts...and as usual it was mind blowing..👏........saari yaadein taaza ho gayi............a million zillion thanks to you dear.........

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Skepti just now read the continuation😳..so finally the stage is set for Mission Amritsar😛

Ok the whole tea fiasco was quite good😳..loved those typical nok-jhok of Raj-Kranti over a cup of Ginger tea😆😛...So Raj is already feeling the presence of Kranti everywhere😉😳

I m hving high hopes from Amritsar now😳..yes I hv become a bit demanding😆...

Skepti now a days I can see that u r giving too much importance to my Raju's overall looks and appearence😉...its evident in this story also😛..the way u described how he loves his English hat😆😳...hmmmmmmm😉😆😆..ok just kidding😆

But once again Mindblowing screeplay👏

Waiting for the continuation now😳..achha just edit your title and write Updt:Pg 1😳

Arre baba ..................... I am playing to the galleries and amongst the forum members but for we four musketeers, all of you find the Rat droolicious. 🤢

So I have to pay attention to his this and that. Besides he has to compliment my kudi. Samjha na.......? 😉

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: morningdew
Heya.. when was this?? I missed the update.. just now read it..

Absolutely refreshing, and involving Skep..

God, I m falling head over heels in love with this Raj..more than the version shown now, if I may say so.. its the old Raj, in all his glory..

Spellbinding Skep.. you ARE a witch.. 😉

Yes I am. Just had tea with my Godmother Sycorax. Y'know the one from The Tempest? 😉

I so wanted to change Your hero into a frog. But then I said what's the difference? Rat or Frog?

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: skeptical

Arre baba ..................... I am playing to the galleries and amongst the forum members but for we four musketeers, all of you find the Rat droolicious. 🤢

So I have to pay attention to his this and that. Besides he has to compliment my kudi. Samjha na.......? 😉

😆😆Skepti showing excuses now to hide her secret feelings for the lovely Rat cum Frog cum Raju😆..hmmmmmmm😆...

Achha in your next part is it possible to show him shirtless and describe in detail😉😆😆....after all in the future episode he will hv to pick your Kudi so many times..so we should b aware of his muscles na😉😆..see I m talking in favour of your kudi's future only😆😆😆

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: jyoti06

😆😆Skepti showing excuses now to hide her secret feelings for the lovely Rat cum Frog cum Raju😆..hmmmmmmm😆...

Achha in your next part is it possible to show him shirtless and describe in detail😉😆😆....after all in the future episode he will hv to pick your Kudi so many times..so we should b aware of his muscles na😉😆..see I m talking in favour of your kudi's future only😆😆😆

My doll................................ hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!! 😆

Show him shirtless ? So soon? And the one after that you'll want the tabela? Is ladki ka main kya karoo? 😕

Thoda intezar karo.......... I am poor at writing such hot scenes. 😉

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: skeptical

My doll................................ hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!! 😆

Show him shirtless ? So soon? And the one after that you'll want the tabela? Is ladki ka main kya karoo? 😕

Thoda intezar karo.......... I am poor at writing such hot scenes. 😉

Nah skep you are not at all poor in writing such hot scenes remember reading your post Tabela scenerios.

By the way turn your Rat into a frog so that your Kudi can kiss him andhe can turn into a prince or there are too many of us to do the honors.😉