MRD....my way 16/1 Updtd Pg 112 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Bugger

ok ....me too juss read the 2nd part as others ....and again only word .........fantabulous!!

its appearing so real ....with the perfect pace ........i m really loving it ....

i like the way u have included tht ginger tea part......and slowly slowly this man will adapt every indian style!!

gud one skepti ...........post the next part soon .......

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Skepti just now read the continuation😳..so finally the stage is set for Mission Amritsar😛

Ok the whole tea fiasco was quite good😳..loved those typical nok-jhok of Raj-Kranti over a cup of Ginger tea😆😛...So Raj is already feeling the presence of Kranti everywhere😉😳

I m hving high hopes from Amritsar now😳..yes I hv become a bit demanding😆...

Skepti now a days I can see that u r giving too much importance to my Raju's overall looks and appearence😉...its evident in this story also😛..the way u described how he loves his English hat😆😳...hmmmmmmm😉😆😆..ok just kidding😆

But once again Mindblowing screeplay👏

Waiting for the continuation now😳..achha just edit your title and write Updt:Pg 1😳

Originally posted by: morningdew

Heya.. when was this?? I missed the update.. just now read it..

Absolutely refreshing, and involving Skep..

God, I m falling head over heels in love with this Raj..more than the version shown now, if I may say so.. its the old Raj, in all his glory..

Spellbinding Skep.. you ARE a witch.. 😉

Originally posted by: skeptical

Arre baba ..................... I am playing to the galleries and amongst the forum members but for we four musketeers, all of you find the Rat droolicious. 🤢

So I have to pay attention to his this and that. Besides he has to compliment my kudi. Samjha na.......? 😉

Originally posted by: jyoti06

😆😆Skepti showing excuses now to hide her secret feelings for the lovely Rat cum Frog cum Raju😆..hmmmmmmm😆...

Achha in your next part is it possible to show him shirtless and describe in detail😉😆😆....after all in the future episode he will hv to pick your Kudi so many times..so we should b aware of his muscles na😉😆..see I m talking in favour of your kudi's future only😆😆😆

Originally posted by: skeptical

My doll................................ hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!! 😆

Show him shirtless ? So soon? And the one after that you'll want the tabela? Is ladki ka main kya karoo? 😕

Thoda intezar karo.......... I am poor at writing such hot scenes. 😉