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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Thanks dear Skep ...........

I'm glad you'll start before Sohan Tauji's hanging .......... and good let's keep him alive .......... And NO buddha party please ...........

and ......... OMG I'm out of breath .... so excited that I'll get to read your wonderful story ..........😍.🤗

And Skep ..........

You know there was a scene early on in the serial .........

Somewhere after the press was lost I think ........

Kranti is sitting by a river ......... on the steps ..... a ghat like palce ..........

Sohan Tauji comes there and says "I knew I'd find you here. You always come here when you are disturbed ".......

That was a beautifully serene place ........ the river flowing along quitely .......

I always thot .... this place will feature again in the serial ....... whenever Kranti's mind in is turmoil ..........

Sighhhhhhh ...........

But no ...........

The creatives soon donned the role of butchers and every single shred of subtleness and sensitiveness flew out of the window .......

Can you use this scene please ?????? 😳

Hope I'm not taking liberties here .......... I know we need to give a writer some space ....... But ....... 😳

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Skep ..........

Actually I posted this in another of you posts ..........

But since the posts are getting pushed to the older pages quite fast I thot of copying the same here ...........

So that you'll get to see this ........... 😳

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Amazing.. could almost feel the vibes, they were palpable..
You'll make me fall in love with Raj all over again.. 😉

Whats the 'reserved' for?

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netu19

@netu19

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

skepti its always a fascinating to read your take on things.... you create magic out of simple things....same scene when it comes out of your pen (keyboard.....) becomes captivating....I still cant forget the impact that introspection scene of kranti had on me....i was speechless (thats y cd nt compliment you then😛 ...).😳

n this time it was after a long break.... but yet again was wonderful... loved it.... we never got enough interaction between R K in serial... you kind of making for it...... if those damn fools 🤢plan to continue it...i wonder if they can show all these scenes in flash back...

plz continue soon

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Hi all,

I'm glad all of you liked it. This is going to proceed the way we wanted it to. So if anyone has a wish to make, please do so.... so that I can incorporate it in my story.

My doll ----- you wanted me to start before the hanging of Sohan tauji, so that's where I have started it from. And no, tauji will not die either.

My Sprite --- the river will enter the story and there will be no buddha party.

My prickly pear ------ I have reserved those pages so that I can update there. readers don't need to keep clicking on pages to find the new update. The font colour will change to let you know that an update has been done.

Thanks for appreciating...Poetic, Ranju, dilip, Arwen, netu, pennu

Happy Reading......... 😆

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Skepti u gave me a huge relief by saying that Sohan Tauji is not dieing in your story😃...Also another good news is no buddha party fiasco either😆😃...achha I don't want RK-Marriage in your version of the story so soon😳...I always thought that RK-Marriage could hv come later after Raj falling in love with Kranti and after his complete transformation😳...so just give it a thought😉...because I don't want kitchen politics either in our version of MRD😳

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Skepti u gave me a huge relief by saying that Sohan Tauji is not dieing in your story😃...Also another good news is no buddha party fiasco either😆😃...achha I don't want RK-Marriage in your version of the story so soon😳...I always thought that RK-Marriage could hv come later after Raj falling in love with Kranti and after his complete transformation😳...so just give it a thought😉...because I don't want kitchen politics either in our version of MRD😳

Sweetie,

There will be no kitchen politics. BBR will be brought in for comic relief only. Buaji and Chaijee will be there. Y'know the characters of R and K are very diverse. The two are not going to come close together unless circumstances force them to. I cant promise that I wont take them up the marriage path..... but hopefully you may like the twist. However, love will be an important ingredient. And there certainly will be clashes. But not the deliberate goading that we were shown. Sensitivity will be there. And subtlety too --- as Walter wanted.

I am sure none of you want a milk and water romance. 😉

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: skeptical
Hi all,

I'm glad all of you liked it. This is going to proceed the way we wanted it to. So if anyone has a wish to make, please do so.... so that I can incorporate it in my story.

My doll ----- you wanted me to start before the hanging of Sohan tauji, so that's where I have started it from. And no, tauji will not die either.

My Sprite --- the river will enter the story and there will be no buddha party.

My prickly pear ------ I have reserved those pages so that I can update there. readers don't need to keep clicking on pages to find the new update. The font colour will change to let you know that an update has been done.

Thanks for appreciating...Poetic, Ranju, dilip, Arwen, netu, pennu

Happy Reading......... 😆

Oh..ok.. 😃

Jojo, same pinch..even I asked Skep to start before Tauji's hanging, so that she could have the story firmly in hand before the point it scattered into pieces..

Am wtg for the next one Skep.. 😊

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Sri_Nidhi

@Sri_Nidhi

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

It was wonderful .I havenot seen this show from starting.I have read the discussions in the forum regarding the court scenes and all but could not get the video.Now i dont even want to watch them .I will just visualise them by just reading ur FF.I was waiting for this type sensible one in the show but...

Edited by Sri_Nidhi - 16 years ago

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Sri_Nidhi

It was wonderful .I havenot seen this show from starting.Although the situations mayb similar, the reactions of the characters will be the way that we've longed for.I have read the discussions in the forum regarding the court scenes and all but could not get the video.Now i dont even want to watch them .I will just visualise them by just reading ur FF.I was waiting for this type sensible one in the show but...

We are all sighing Sri. We've been left wondering ......... with ifs and buts.

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purvi

@coolpurvi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Cudnt come here on IF . I was very busy . I'll create an account on livejournal to post comment on ur blog

Wow Skep loved ur FF. U know that tiffin scene is one of my fav . Ur version of tiffin scene is fantastic. they r not married in ur FF. maaza aayega. waiting for the next part

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