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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: skeptical

Getting better now? Where ? in my story?
In the serial, he's shown as a sad sack........... and honey you won't find me mooning after such a character!!!! Not at the end of a barge pole. 😃


got it.... that wretched soul has none of skeps sympathies😭... but really it was so mechanical earlier at least we got sumthing called emotion attached to it now...
so you are following the show
was thinking of sending you a PM in case you not watching....your kudi spoke after a long maun vrat....her pain was obvious n she went on admit that she has accepted him as her partner...
but they are back to square one...but i think the understanding b/w em (if creatives decide to back up that there was sum) wont vanish..lets see...
why i have to worry
😊...i got my daily dose n ll keep getting the way i like it....
yet again it was wonderful dear.....kranti s pain and longings...it was so heartrending... i was like plz someone comfort her immediately...
n wat you do yar... with one sentence stir so many emotions ... with your writings it never takes elaborations to feel...just one
gesture/action/expression/glance/look.....n it says allll....


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Posted: 16 years ago
hey loved it
actually i liked best d way u compared Kranti n that garden...........
gr8 work👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
The poem was fantastic and the story is going great . Raj fighting for motherland Wow
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh skep you are simply brilliant👏👏....
As usual Great and beutiful work yaar... 👏👏👏
Hats off to you. I have no words to praise you dear.👏
I just loved the way you paused the story.......superb👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tetuty66

hey loved it
actually i liked best d way u compared Kranti n that garden...........
gr8 work👏

I am as fascinated by the garden as I am by the sea. And the trees..... I love making them almost human. Hence you will find them almost avuncular with Kranti. The true witnesses to everything.
I am glad you appreciated that. Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri_Nidhi

The poem was fantastic and the story is going great . Raj fighting for motherland Wow

The lullabye is an intrinsic part of everybody's childhood. It is the most soothing song and to me on par with a hymn.........because it is sung (usually) by a mother to her baby. And the love and gentleness that oozes out is absolutely pure. I wanted to use a hindi 'lori'. I racked my brains for the right words but they wouldn't come easily ........so I used English. I hope the effect was just as good. Thanks Sri
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank you Ranju................................😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Edited by skeptical - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Soulful, plaintive and deep.
Amazing, this last update..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: morningdew

Soulful, plaintive and deep.

Amazing, this last update..

Hello Dewy,
Glad to see you after a long time.
Actually, while I wrote the update, I was a bit unnerved myself. I always felt that thetrees, the garden and the house had also got a story to tell. Their looking on at the distressed girl added to the pathos......at least that was the effect that I wanted. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pennu

Oh skep you are simply brilliant👏👏....

As usual Great and beutiful work yaar... 👏👏👏
Hats off to you. I have no words to praise you dear.👏
I just loved the way you paused the story.......superb👏

Thank you Pen, your words are very encouraging.
Infact I am really touched by the response that I receive daily. Each reader tells me what part impressed him the most. This helps me to evolve. Restarting or picking up threads again to start a fresh update is also a task in itself. Then the body or content of the passage and lastly the signing off part. That has to make the reader wonder and ask for more.

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