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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 16 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: skeptical

I have to mould the character of the hero so that he can be palatable to my kudi. Keep on reading, my MRD is going to be different from this trash that they have forced us to watch. And the end of the story .......is tailor made for you, my doll. 😉🤗

I am going to give away nothing more............

😲Skepti u r giving me a heart attack now..how come u know Bengali so well😲😲..that was perfect😆😳...bas instead of dushtu...write mishti there😉😆...

And I m glad that the hero in your MRD is not wooden and neither he behaves like a robot like how it was portrayed in the serial initially😆..

Ok just read the last two parts😳...the Mela scene which u narrated reminded me of the title song where Raj pulls Kranti towards her in a similar manner😳...that was the promo which attracted me towards this show...but alas we could never see such beautiful scene in the actual serial😡....but now I m highly pleased because finally I could imagine such a beautiful scene in the mela thanks to your version😳...Kranti making an issue of her hunger was very humourous😆...I think this is where u excel in your writing..u never forget to add that extra humour element in your writing👏..

Next part ...of Kranti's Journey to Amritsar was equally well written👏...I could get that flavour of Punjab after a long time in your writings😳...So Raj getting flashes of his life in London😳...sounded really good..and of course I don't mind Raj getting extra footage in your version these days😉😆...After all its equally important to show Raj's thought processing also and the fact that he was never a bad human being😳...Now its final I m mailing this script to those baffoons😆..at least they can take some tutions from u on how to write a screenplay😃..

Skepti...this daily soap of yours is becoming an instant hit now😲...and yes u deserve all the praises and applause👏....One of your best works till date...😳

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: netu19
waited long last night but ultimately succumbed to sleep... but the first think in the morning was checking for update....
n wow wow wow 👏
you are keeping our moral up in times of depression.....

i just love the story... i love the way you pay attention to all the minor details...the expressions, the movements👍🏼... haven't seen this mela thing in show n dont intend to... dont want to cum out of trance by seeing sumthing substandard....with your story i just dont read.. i see it.... kranti reacting like a kid when caught n she shaking her legs while eating...i love this kranti mature, sensbile n charismatic all at same time..n wat to say about Raj... already lot of leg pulling going on for your detailed description of Raj(t)😉😉...but he is definitely balanced man😊...but lets see for how long he is able too be one..the way he is fallin for kranti....(he lately realised that she is beautiful😳...isnt?)
also like that both raj n kranti are firmly rooted to thier idealogies but not unaware of each other.....

you have captured it in your words so beautifully! Love it! Continue soon!!
😊😊

Hello N2

I know you wait up to read the update at night. I can write best only when everything is quiet and my brain is free enough to dwell. Per update sometimes takes me 2 hours to write. The translation of thoughts into words is not always that easy or simple. (for me)

I have never liked the Raj that the serial depicted. I found him dumb, unfeeling, odious and loathsome. So I created this one the way he should have been shown. Again that's my opinion. But I am glad that you too like the character of Raj the way I have made him out to be.

Thanks for yr continued encouragement. 😆

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

Amazing as usual I just caught both the parts the kiddie was down with viral hence no net for 2 days. Now since he is aleeping peacefully I couls read both of them together. Now that was some treat infact If I had caught only one part something would have been amiss.

But now also I am feeling lost actuallt didnt want it to end please update soon.

I knew you were missing for a few days, since I didn't see any new post by you or yr replies in KOTW. Actually wanted to ask you a few questions. So should I post a few questions there?

Thanks for yr kind words on my story. (pl also read my answer to N2 above) 😆

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: poetic
Skep

I must thank you for writing this story so brilliantly and so logically.

I read all the parts now and they are so great. It's almost like I am reliving each moment again and seeing them in a different light.

I am waiting for your update, so please do update soon.

BTW, not only Rat, you called Raj a skunk too? 😆 Me noticed! Hahahahaha Read my reply to N2, you'll find 5 more synonyms there

I am updating on a daily basis and I am trying to keep the storyline as gripping as possible. Its difficult when you have add all kinds of ingredients to make it chatpata. 😉

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Bhawna1004

@Bhawna1004

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Posted: 16 years ago

#105

skippy it was awesome dear.

you have explained each and everything beautifully.

i mean about golden templeand the langar.

it was very touchy dear.

other than that i love the part where you have described raj's past.

it was really interesting one.

and i think it will definately give a light to raj's character.

anyaways last part was awesome dear .

sorry i could not reply.

especially krantii running and raj grab her hand part.

totally like tittle track.

right time right place.

keep on writing dear.

you are the best.

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netu19

@netu19

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Posted: 16 years ago

#106

hi skep😊

wow dear amazing part. so well crafted 👏👏 and the story line is a gripping '..

The way u hav gone abt this part is simply brilliant' each emotion....each scene is soooooo awesomely described.

Loved kranti s naive reactions' that sumhow look more natural for her age'

N that amritsar and golden temple part was brilliant 'the serenity of the place' the impact that sacred place has on me every time I go there is sumthing inexpressible for me' you put have put it very nicely in words'.

N I m Loving this thinking Raj😳'he portrays so many emotions'
and to top it all Raj is involved in freedom struggle '.. wow what a shock..

u really deserve a standing ovation n a thunderous applause for such a story'.

👏

Edited by netu19 - 16 years ago

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#107

I'm glad you're enjoying it, Bhawna, Swapna and Tetu 😊

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

This was what I said yesterday ........

Today ....?????? All of the above and more ...............

Sighhhhhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!

The highlight of today's part ???

The Golden Temple ............

You know I've never been to Amritsar ............

Now I feel I've seen it .........

You have described it so beautifully .......... I had goose bumps ......... I could almost hear the chant of the hymns ............. and see the glorious golden vision at dusk .......... a inexplicable feeling of peace descended on me as I read & reread this part ........ Sighhhhhhhhh !!!!!!

Absolutely tops !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kranti's interactions with her KK friends are so natural and sweet .........

And Raj ??? What a revalation here ............

Raj had a mentor in London !!!!!!! Whose goal was freedom for the Motherland ??? And he was pleased with Raj !!!!!!!!!

What a master stroke Skep ..........

Great going ............. Can hardly wait to read the next part !!!!!!!!

I'm glad you like the "master stroke". Y'know no man worth his salt could not have felt the stirring of love for his country. Quit India movement and that era swept everyone with the fever of satyagraha and civil disobedience. It never quite appealed to me that Raj could be so obnoxious as depicted in the serial. This guy is more believable......and with that I have tried to make the story a little more plausible.

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netu19

@netu19

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Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: skeptical
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I have never liked the Raj that the serial depicted. I found him dumb, unfeeling, odious and loathsome. So I created this one the way he should have been shown. Again that's my opinion. But I am glad that you too like the character of Raj the way I have made him out to be.

i definitely like your character of Raj....but i see you playing defensive now😉....with all your leg pulling sessions of you paying attention to raj.... you called this poor soul all this😈....you better admit it that you noticed him😊....of course not in dark😃
agreed he was all this...but he is getting better now days😊...

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: netu19

i definitely like your character of Raj....but i see you playing defensive now😉....with all your leg pulling sessions of you paying attention to raj.... you called this poor soul all this😈....you better admit it that you noticed him😊....of course not in dark😃
agreed he was all this...but he is getting better now days😊...

Getting better now? Where ? in my story?

In the serial, he's shown as a sad sack........... and honey you won't find me mooning after such a character!!!! Not at the end of a barge pole. 😃

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