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Once again Great work skep... Go on👍🏼..... Wow Skep... I really liked your way of thought about Raj's thoughts👏....

skept.... this part was simply marvelous and definitely worth the wait of two days! although i knew you ll off for weekend, I have been eagerly checking for updates...sum kind of addiction 😳

earlier staying up was problem n now i'm thinking how will i go to sleep after reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was dwelling on last sentence of last update....n now there is so much more....

liked i way Raj is indulging in his surroundings....

cerebral Raj... thats so thoughtful of you

n with your words it just flows in front of eyes...simply superb👏...

P. S. cant we have it on page 1 all the time...

Originally posted by: pennu

Once again Great work skep... Go on👍🏼..... Wow Skep... I really liked your way of thought about Raj's thoughts👏....

He suddenly saw a figure ? a female running down the path towards the fields. He dupatta trailing behind her. He narrowed his eyes. She was chasing a little lamb and reached it. She swung it in her arms. The sound of laughter reached his ears. He saw her cuddling the creature. She turned and started running once more. He shook his head and smiled. What was it about these girls ?.. running all the while? It was such an unnecessary waste of energy. Did they need to be so high strung all the time?

.@ blue.... That was a very funny thought... 🤣

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

OMIGISH .... Skep ...........👏

Like Dew said once ..... you've made me fall in love with Raj all over again ........... Though I must admit your Raj is way above the serial Raj !!!!! Thanks....now you know why I called the serial Raj --the Rat?

Absolutely brilliantly put ....... the whole thought process of Raj ...... his musings ........ I wish the serial Raj had been like this

His indulgent thots about 'highly strung' girls !!!! Too good !!!!! 👍🏼

I can just imagine Raj here .......

I'm getting addicted to your lovely tale !!!!!! Thanks

Standing on the terrace ..... arms folded ..... a small smile playing on his face as he watches the girl !!!! 😍

Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

I dont havw words Skep just that I didnt want it to end.

Lovely as usual.

Originally posted by: netu19

skept.... this part was simply marvelous and definitely worth the wait of two days! although i knew you ll off for weekend, I have been eagerly checking for updates...sum kind of addiction 😳 Hahaha ...btw altho I gave this story a break, I wrote another short story "A wintry night" did you read that?

earlier staying up was problem n now i'm thinking how will i go to sleep after reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was dwelling on last sentence of last update....n now there is so much more.... oh oh 😲

liked i way Raj is indulging in his surroundings....

cerebral Raj... thats so thoughtful of you I couldn't stand a namby pamby Raj who was only good at boot licking

n with your words it just flows in front of eyes...simply superb👏...

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P. S. cant we have it on page 1 all the time... The page becomes heavy and reject editing after sometime, so I chose a new page. Maybe I should put a link on Pg 1? But then the font changes and ......omg and the page becomes a mess.

Originally posted by: sevy_bvb

Skep dear. Wat a grt updt. 👏👏👏

Love both ur R & K. The rat here has depth.😉 As well as our kudi.

Wish those destructives could think like u.😡 Keep going Prof.👏