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arwa

@awaazilicious

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hey this was a gr8 intro. Luved the shayari and Veer being the heart broken lover was gud too.

hope to read more soon.

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Subha

@Life_Is_Dutiful

Stunner

+ 40

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Gr8 start.
Madhu,u r really a very creative person.
Plz continue asap.

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ashah030
WOWWWWWWWW...... OMGG... IT IS SOOOO GOOD... awww welcum di to my latest FF..I em hounered to hav u as my first reader..Love u for this...
ur descriptions make the ff look real Hmm thanx..thanx a lot..

plssssssssssss continue.... i wanna see their love storyyyyy Hmm Love story..Thik hai ji..apka hukm sar-ankhon par..

love yaaaaaaa

Love ya loads too.....t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww
not bad Hmm..em glad humari pyaari si di ko pasand ayya...

veer hai kaun yaar aur yeh agni kab se uska dost ho gaya Arey ji jaanu I mean Agni dost nahi hai ji..voh toh faking sympathy u see..n yes Veer kaun hai yeh nxt update mein pata chalega..

aur yeh drunkards gr88888888 veer ne sahi jwaab diya.

Haan par apka pyaara sa Veer bhi ek drunkard hi hai...

good job chooti

aww thanx jiji...

do upadate soon. Oh yes..jaldi hi hoga yeh complete...surely...

Love ya loads di.....t.cccccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ektay11
wow madhu
ur simply amazing

thanx a lot deare aww di..I shud be the one thankin u..Thank u soo much for takin out u'r precious time for me..I knw u were busy wiv exams n all n em vry pleased to see u here...

its sooooo niceeee

wonderful

Thanx yet again di..

Love ya loads shonu....t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: hiri
wow eik eik brill ff aww thanx..saare FF's ki tarrif ek saath..lolllzzz

maddy dear i jus love it hmm em rilli happy to here tht...plz cont asap and plz clear your inbox ok..AND pm me ok... Hmmm sab ke liye ok ji..surely will cont fast n yes will make space in my Dabba n ofcourse will PM u...

Love ya loads sweet pea.....t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

esha

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
😈waiting for next part.. too short to comment ...

U..U baadmaash..hmm lambe update chahiye archu ji ko..Jyada badmaashi ki na..toh nahi milenge update isliyeeeeee..Jab prt 1 aye toh chup chap post karna comments....

warna maar khayegi archu...

Love ya loads baby...t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: 090909as
OMG Madhu awsome work though cheesy but i do LOVE cheesy.

Hmm aww u chooo chweet..was waitin for u hala..hmm n yh thanx love for u'r cutu comment..thanxxx...

Love ya loads......t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kiran99
lovly yaar wating for next part

aww thank u di..hmm will update sn dear....

Love ya loads di......t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: arwa72
hey this was a gr8 intro. Luved the shayari and Veer being the heart broken lover was gud too.
aww thank u arwa di..em so glad u liked it..hmm thanx for likin the shayari bbuh Veer isn't heartbroken lover..he is not in love till now......

hope to read more soon. Oh yes surely......

Love ya loads sweetziee.....t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳