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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: subha2601
Gr8 start. hmm..em glad u like it..
Madhu,u r really a very creative person.Thank u di...
Plz continue asap. Yes surely enuf tis time... I love u for always supportin me..seriously I love u sooooooooo much for tht...

Love ya loads di...t.ccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

U..U baadmaash..hmm lambe update chahiye archu ji ko..Jyada badmaashi ki na..toh nahi milenge update isliyeeeeee..Jab prt 1 aye toh chup chap post karna comments....

warna maar khayegi archu...

Love ya loads baby...t.cccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

oh ya sure, but pehle update toh karo... phir dekhenge.. 😆

Edited by Girl_2007 - 16 years ago

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

oh ya sure, but pehle update toh karo... phir dekhenge.. 😆

yes yes

Updated archu ji...

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sarika

@kiran99

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

ur simply amazing update soon

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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

tha was brill yaar the way u described the feeling between veer and shera was mind blowing.

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Hala

@MrMonster

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

awww that was so cute i loved it how shrieya was taking care of veer yeh and the convo between sakhshi and shrieya and how veer was fight that backwards guy hmm though i imagined his Jai LOL i couldn't find someone else zara khan? hmm i really forgot him.. though when thing i actully thought that RL was the same as BM lol i am an idiot right? anyway awsome update but one more thing if you put salt on wounds theyy heal well they sting but heal so how could agni be the salt? LOL i know doesn't make sense.. awsome exellent can't wait for B and part 2..

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prtihvi

@prtihvi

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Hi,

I'm new here.But i like ur story. this is so beautifully described by u. When, I read this story, i like iread any novel.thank u for this lovely story.

Tum post kab kar rehiho. ur next part . please inform me.