~||Bepanha Mohabbat||~ *MINI FF VS *{ Prt 1 (A) }

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Posted: 16 years ago
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😉Heya all..

My dear sweet Barbie puns..I knw iss baar maska marne se kuch nahi hoga buh still..I promise to update tis sn..n yes Star-Crossed is also progressing n Royal Love too..

Okk..tis is gonna be updated in five prts I suppose..

Now don't kill me for tis okk..

Intro:

" Bikhari zindagi ki ek ek chott yaad aney lagi,

Pi jo madira, voh ashkoh se bahar aney lagi.

Khali dill ke armaano ko kiss tarah bharne lagi,

Khayalon ko, khayalon mein haqiqat karne lagi.

Haqiqat jab sach ko aiena dikhane lagi,

Madira mein dubo khud ko, har haqiqat jhutlane lagi.

Bikhari zindagi ki ek ek chot yaad ane lagi,

Pi jo madira voh ashkoh se bahar aney lagi.


Bhoolne ki chahat mein, tujhse pyaar kiya karte hai,

Pi kar bhi tujhko hum yaad kiya karte hai.

Karte hai yaad tujhi ko, aur chup ho jate hai,

Sun kar teri awaz dill behlaya karte hai.

Kisne kya kaha, abb yeh sawal nahi,

Kaise bitaye zindagi, khud ko samjhaya karte hai.


Bhoolne ki chahat mein, tujhse pyaar kiya karte hai,

Pi kar bhi tujhko hum yaad kiya karte hai.

" Arey waah Veer bohot khoob..Shayari Toh tum shuru se hi achi karte ho par ajj maikhane mein..Kya baat hai.."

"Suraj ajj pashchim se toh nahi uga" pura maikhana thahakon se gunj uthta hai.

"Arey aisa kuch nahi yaaron..tumhe pata nahi ajjkaal humare dost ko ek naya hi nasha chad gaya hai jise utarne ki koshish mein voh yahan, humara jannat mein aya hai?" Agni said, faking sympathy n concern.

"Arey Par yeh kiss nashe ki baat kar rahe ho tum..joh humare nashe se badhkar hai.." A no name gumnam man, asked raising his wine glass..

Agni: " Kaise bawle log ho tum..Kya apne dost ke chehre par yeh noor, ankhon mein yeh chamak dekh kar tumhe samajh nahi aa raha ki isey vahi bhayankar rog ho chala hai.."

"Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Maikhane mein baithe saare log chilaye (hooted)

" Kiss ke ishq mein deewane hue phir rahe ho barkhudar.." said Sanjam

" Haan zara humein bhi toh batao kiss Bala ne khich liya tumhe apni aur.." asked Vikram..

" Tum sab bhi na..kuch bhi keh rahe ho.." said Veer now clearly Flushed by so many questions.

" Arey Miyan..hum roz yahan atte hai..ajj tak kabhi tumhe itna peete hue nahi dekha..aur yeh joh shayari ajj tumne ki hai na..usmein jo dard aur mohabbat jhalak rahi hai na..voh ajj tak tumhari aur kissi baat ya Ghazal mein nahi dikhi humein.."

" Aur waise bhi duniya mein do chizo ke karan ADMI maikhane mein aata hai..

Ek..jab voh bohot dukhi ho?aur dusra tab jab Khumar-E-Ishq chadta hai?

Mante hai ki tumne bohot kuch jhela hai, itni choti umra mein humse bhi jyada dekha hai..bohot se gam sahe hai..lekin ajj tumhare iss nurani chehre par joh nasha chamak raha hai..tumhari ankhon mein joh Husn ki Bala dikh rahi hai..uss sey toh yahi lagta hai ki tumhe?" and the oldest drunkard of the place left the statement in middle n drank the whole glass in one go.

" Batao toh uss Bala-E-Tarunum ka naam jisne humare iss kathor dill yaar ko ghayal kiya..Hum bhi toh jane akhir voh hai kaun.."

" Aap Sabhi toh bina vajah hi gale pad rahe hai..Jab humne kaha ki aisi koi baat hi nahi toh phir kyun app Sabhi?Sharab ka hi toh nasha hai.." Veer didn't want her name to cum on these Filthy tongues.

" Bache Duniya mein sirf do chize nasha chadhati hai..ek toh yeh mai (sharab) aur ek khoobsurat Husn..Tujh par Sharab ka nasha chadhega hi nahi, Kyunki tu pehle se hi uske lajawab husn ke nashe se chur hai.." n he gestured a beautiful woman's frame through his hands.

" Bata bhi do yaara!!"

" Arey yeh nahi batata toh kya hua..mein batata hoon tum Sabhi ko..

Ajj iss waqt iss sar zameen par joh sabse khoobsurat Ladki hai, usi ne humare is Pyaar, ishq aur Mohabbat ko na manne wale dost ko Ashiq bana liya hai?" Harsh made his entry and added wiv sum spice.

" Kitno ko aashiq banaya hai usne, yeh tum nahi jante,

Kabhi karegi tumhe voh pasand, yeh hum nahi mante." Said Agni to wound Veer's almost Dead-Heart.

" Tumhare manne na manne se kuch faraq nahi padta Agni.." Veer didn't even check the acidic tone of his words. " par waise sahi kaha tumne, aashiq toh usne kai banaye, nakam aashiq, tumhare jaise..lekin voh mein hi hoon jiski voh deewani banegi.." he spoke wiv such an air of confidence that any one could have believed him buh how could they? everyone knew that she was the most beautiful princess of all times, the one whose description would match the most beautiful, kind yet bold powerful fairy, with a gorgeous pair of eyes, lush red wine cup enclosed b/w the sugary mouth, baby soft smooth, flawless milky white skin, heaving breasts, the most powerful waist, babies naiveness n Ibies knowledge?

The most beautiful Princess of all times?

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This is all for now, tomm will be the first part, if a Gd no of comments, I plan to finish tis of in a weeks time..This is a totally different from my previous FF's..A totally different Style.

See ya all tomm..same time, same place...

Love ya all loads..t.cccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PRT 1 (A) :

" Toh Thik hai, Agar tum Malika-E-Husn ko apna Deewana bana sakte ho..Waise toh hum sab jante hai ki tum sirf dawa kar sakte ho Rajkumar Veer, agni unchecks the sarcasm in his tone,specially while referring him as Rajkumar..n then continues his venomous talk par phir bhi, agar tum aisa kar sake toh hum mann jaenge tumhe.."

" Gawoh par namak chidakna koi tumse sikhe, manta hoon ki duniya mein abb mera koi nahi, jo they unn sabhi ne daga di..aur haan ek baat..mein uss sey pyaar..ishq..mohabbat nahi karta..sirf sabki tarah uss ke prati pyaar aur samman rakta hoon..par abb jab tumne Veer ko chunoti de hi di hai, toh mein tumhe dikhaonga..usey apna banakar hi dubara apna muhh dikhaunga..samjhe" saying so he walks out, staggering as he was too drunk, buh still somehow he reached his hut..A Prince living in a Hut..

So unlikely, isn't it…buh still the bitter truth of his life…

He fell on the matted cot the moment he entered the hut..he shut his eyes n remembered Agni's words.. " Rajkumar Veer"..

Haan Baadkismati se ek Rajkumar hoon, ek aisi maa ki aulad jo khud iss shramik basti se thi, aur mujhe ek rani ke haaton sounp gayi, ek aisi nazayass aulad jise Nivriti Maa ne khub pyaar se bada kiya, Sab kitna chahte the mujhe, kitna pyaar karte the, Dharam toh jaan manta tha mujhe, lekin waqt ki maar bohot tivr hoti hai, jab lagne laga tha ki zindagi mein kuch bura nahi hota, tabhi pata chala ki mein toh ek shramik hoon, ek shramik ka jaya hua, uski nazayass aulad hoon mein…iss ek sachai se sab kuch tutt gaya, sab kuch..Pata chal gaya ki jeevan mein saath dene wala koi nahi, koi bhi nahi..Nivriti maa toh saath de hi nahi sakti thi Kyunki unhe toh abb khud bolne ka koi haq nahi raha, Dharam ne bhi rajya ko hasil karne ke liye humein chod diya, saath diya toh bass uss Mallik ne jo ajj yahan zinda pada hoon..

Due to all pain he beared, the way everything was snatched away from him, all his happiness, wealth, love, even clothes,food n shelter...He was left alone in tis world of the lower castes who bore pain in the morning, worked late after dusk n then go back to their houses either to pour all the frustration on their wives or to drink to drown the sorrows…This was the life he was now supposed to live, unlike his life as the life when he was a Prince.. ALL this has made him a vry hard hearted fellow, who doesn't have feelings, he does what he has to without caring for the others..sumone from whose life Love had been snatched away as if it was never meant to come to him…

" Abb toh Rajkumari Sheriya ko zarur hasil karunga, usey apna banauga zarur..kyunki abb toh humari aan par bann aii hai, Voh Agni sochta hai ki Rajkumari humein kabhi nahi pasand karega..Toh voh galat hai..bohot hi galat..kyunki Veer ko andekha karna bohot mushkil hai, aur abb toh kissi bhi tarah se Malika-E-Husn ko pakar hi rahunga, usey apna banakar hi rahunga, waise bhi pehli seedhi toh chad hi chuka hoon, voh bhi Mallik ki marzi se..abb agey sab kuch mein karunga..SAB KUCH" His eyes twinkling n his groin burning, lust filled in his Black Heart, he closed his eyes to get some sleep, buh as soon as he closed them, he saw her, in the same black dress, the black enhancing her beauty by complementing her flawless milky white skin, enhancing her rich nubile curves, her small curvy waist, her full breasts, equally round hips, her navel, her small hands n curvy feets..over all, her beauty in full bloom, at it's peak, it's fullest..jus sixteen n she was so beautiful.. He moaned he wanted to hav her…those cherry blossoms, those heaving breasts.. her small hands..why cudn't he get her out of his mind?? He questioned himself..From the time they had met, he cudn't get her out of her mind..all he could see was her, in all her beauty..

" Solah saal mein hi itni sundar hai, toh baad mein na jane kya qayamatt dhaegi..jabse dekha hai, na neend atti hai, na chain padta hai..har waqt sirf wahi rehti hai khayalon mein..Upar wale ne badi fursat mein tarasha hai uska nazni jism, sab kuch diya usey..asim saundarya, budhimata, bohot hi bada dill, itni sadgi, aur bholapan, dekho toh jaan nisar ho jaye..pata nahi yeh uski hirni si ankhon ka vaar hai, yah uske surkh laal labon ka..dekho toh dinn banjaye..lagta hai jaise falak se ek pari utar ayi hai.."

Saying so he recalled their first meetin..

" Apni marzi se banaega murtiyan..humara sangmarmar (marble) lekar aisi miurtiyan banaega.. Maa Durga ki, Ganesha ki..Inn sab ki murtiyan baad mein banana.. Kaha na tujhse..Abhi Aisi murti bana jise dekhkar bade se bade sanyasi ke mukh se laar tapke..Yeh kaisi murtiyan bana raha hai…Yeh soch ki tujhe koi apsara banani hai..behad khoobsurat..uski ankhein hirani si chanchal, hoth…"

"Yeh Kya banane ka keh rahe hai app inse" A Shramik gal spoke in b/w.

" Voh kuch nahi..tumhare kaam ki baat nahi hai..jao yahan se.. Na jane kahan kahan se chali aati hai.."

buh the girl didn't budge..so he forcefully gripped her by the arm n said " Kaha na jaa yahan se..samajh nahi aata kya..Yah kissi aur tarah se samjhau.."

Buh still she didn't move..

So he pushed her to the floor.. Her head hit the floor n blood oozed out..

" Tune suna na..maine kaha waisi hi murti banana..uss par jyada wastra matt chadhana.." The cruel man, asked Veer to make a po*n statue..

" Par Kyun..maine tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki mein aisi koi bhi cheez nahi banata..aur waise bhi iss rajya mein aisi koi bhi cheez banane ki izzazat nahi hai.." Veer sumhow controlled his anger..he didn'y knw why he felt bad for the gal laying there..she had taken up the so courageous task to cum in front of tis lusty fellow..

"Dekh bahar se saudagar aa rahe hai..Yeh unhe deni hai.."

" Par..Yeh toh galat hai..kanun ke khilaf hai.."

" Tu mujhe matt sikha samjha..bohot sa maal milega aisi murtiyon ke badle..waise bhi afgani logon ko aisi hi cheeze pasand hoti hai"

" Par yeh kitni galat hai..nahi mein nahi banaunga" N he got up from there..

" Ek Shramik hoke..mujhe bataega ki kya karna hai… Mujhe mana karega..huh..Teri itni himaat kaise hui.."

" Ismein himmat ki koi baat hi nahi thi..Tere jaise Naamard hi iss tarah ki baatein kar sakte hai..bina wastra ki murti banau.."

" Arey oo Shramik ki aulad..jyada matt bol..warna tera voh haal karunga joh zindagi bhar yaad rahega.."

" Ajj toh mein tumhara voh hashr karunga jo tum zindagi bhar bhula nahi paoge"

" Bohot boll raha hai..Chal toh phir yeh pakad talwaar" n he threw the sword towards Veer " Aur ajja maidane jang mein".

( Now the man who is the owner n Veer the worker.. get into a blood thirsty duel..Veer was angry as tis man from nowhere was first askin him to work against his own rules as he was a Shramik..n then was tryin to hurt him..Tis angered Veer to the core n he went in for the man's blood..)

Both the men r indulged in fightin the bloody duel..

" Arey yeh kya..itna bada ghera kyun bana rakha hai.."

" Arey au chamiya..Kahan chali.".A man standin nearby commented on her. She gulped down her anger as she was on an inspection round " Inki khabar toh baad mein le lenge hum..pehle yeh toh dekhe ek dum se humare khush haal shaant rajya mein yeh toofan kaisa" muttering under her breath she tucked at her gunghat even more firmly.

" Yeh kya ho raha hai.." She asked louder this time..

Everyone including the duelists ( Veer n the Man) luked towards the source of the mellifluous voice..

" Arey Chamiya jo tujhe dikh raha hai"

The man turned to Veer.. " Yeh ladki dekh raha hai na..Badi khoobsurat hai..shayad teri hi biradari ki hai koi Shramik..Ajj agar mein jita toh yeh ek raat ke liye meri aur agar tu jita toh.."

" Teri soch toh bohot ghatiya hai..par abb jab tune keh hi diya hai..toh thik hai."

And they continued fighting..finally when Veer was abt to kill the men after the bloody duel, the man had to beg Veer for leavin him..n once he left the man..the man back pounced..slashin Veer at his spine deeply..buh Veer didn't flinch..he caught the Sword in the mid n blood ran down his palms buh he didn't seem to notice it..He single handedly strangled the men n threw him to the ground..

" Kaha tha na..Jitunga toh mein hi..kyunki Veer ne kabhi harna nahi sikha..aur tujh jaiso se toh bilkul nahi.."

When he turned he saw the masked gal..the one whom he had won..at the place where the Shramik gal had fallen helping her to get up..

" Aap bhi na Sakshi..yeh kya kiya..sidhe humein bulana chahiye tha na.."

N she helped the gal to get up..n then she turned over to the owner..

" Haan toh kya kaha tha apne. tu jeet gaya toh teri warna meri…pehle app batane ka kasth karenge ki app hai kaun.."

The owner was furious wiv tis gal..here he was wounded already n she was speakin to him in such a way..as if he was a nobody...

" Iss shahar ka sabse manna hua murtiyon ka saudagar, aur Rajaji ka aziz.."

" Oh rajaji ke aziz..hmm..toh kya rajaji ko pata hai ki app aisi ashlil murtiyan bhi banvate hai.."

" Tu yeh sab kyun puch rahi hai.." N he went closer to her..

" Tameez se baat kariye.."

" Oh toh tu mujhe bataega..huh" n he pulled her

" CHTTTT" The voice of her slap could be heard for a long distance n time..

" Teri yeh mazzal..ek toh yeh kaal ka chokra aur ek tu..na jane tum shramikon mein itni himmat kaise aai"

" Himmat toh bohot pehle se thi..par app jaiso ko dikhai nahi di..par shayad abb dikh gayi"

he gripped her arms tightly..

" HAATH CHODO" she shouted at him

" Abb toh nahi chodunga"

"Acha..sachi.." n she kicked him in the shin..

" Saina pati..Inhe abhi aur issi waqt karagar mein dala jaye..dekh liya apne ki apke hote hue bhi yahan yeh sab hota hai..Aur haan..ajj ke baad humein inke jaise log nahi dikhne chahiye.."

" Ji..Ji Rajkumari ji"

" Aur haan pitaji..voh humara matlab hai Maharaj ko yahi kahiyega ki inhe apne hi pakda hai.."

" Par"

" Warna humein daant padegi na..hum mahal se bahar suraksha karmiyon ke bina.." She spoke in a low voice..

" Thik hai raj..umm Shera" He understood as she raised her eyebrow.. tht the princess didn't want people to knw she was here n thus called her Shera.

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" Acha hua sakshi tumne bata diya warna yeh Seth-Sahukar humare pitaji ka naam badnaam kar dete.."

" Sachi Shera..acha hua tum waqt par aa gayi"

" Par tumhe bohot chot lagi Sakshi"

" Arey yeh kuch nahi..Apke liye toh jaan nisar hai Rajkumari ji.."

" Shooo…rajkumari matt bolo..sab humein dekh rahe hai..waise bhi apke liye sirf Shera sakshi ji.."

"Duniya ki sabse khoobsurat ladki ko toh dekhenge hi.."

" Shh!! Kitna bolti ho..sabse sundar..voh toh tum ho.."

" Hmm kuch bhi bolna hai..tumhe..Shera par tum kahan jaa rahi ho"

" Arey voh jinhone itni achi ladai..humara matlab talwaar bazi ki thi unko daad dene aur unhe bohot lagi thi na..so hum soch rahe hai ki unhe marhaam bhi lagva de.."

" Tumhe dekh lenge toh apne app hi saare gav bhar jaenge.."

" Dhat!! Pagli..kuch bhi bolti hai"

n continuing to chat the gals head out of the crowd, wiv thousands of eyes following them, roving over her curvy body.

She spotted him besides a tree, his clothes soaked wiv blood and perspiration n still he was walking away towards a hut…Lots of blood had poured out of the wounds, n he was feeling dizzy n his confident strides were now staggering..Shera rushed towards him and supported him b4 he fell down..

He was in no condition to even get up..so she placed his head on her lap n tore off her chunari and wrapped it around him..she didn't even care whether people were seeing them..she just knw tht the boy who was lying in her lap needed full care and attention..

she asked sakhsi to call for help and meanwhile sat their tryin to stop the overflowing blood…He moaned each time he felt the pain as she pressed the cloth to soak the blood…

" Ahhhh"…

" Ohh maaf kijiyega..voh agli baar thoda dhere karenge…"

and she took care to be vry soft wiv him..

As she moved down to his back..she had to turn him..she tried to turn him away from her buh she cudn't..as he groaned aloud…

" Apki peeth par bhi lagi hai na..kaise karen.." she said placing her hand on his face..she luked at his hansum face (instead shud say stared at it..) she had seen him during the fight..he was too handsum to go unnoticed..he had such princely features tht she hardly cud believe he was a Shramik..and the way he talked like a prince wiv tht authorative note in his voice and the fire burning in his eyes..or the way he walked..each step a long confident stride..

He tried to get up…

Put she put her hand on his chest and said.. " Jab humein koi sharam nahi aa rahi toh app iss halat mein kyun uth rahe hai..waise bhi koi nahi hai abb bazaar mein..sab chale gaye.."

He grumbled and turned to her side…There was not much space b/w them so when he turned his face touched her heaving breasts..She gasped..buh then she knw it wasn't intentional so she let tht go..she just opened up his buttons to check his bleeding back..

He caught her hand..

" Kya kar rahi ho.." her soft small hands in his rough big hands..

" Uff..apko kya lag raha hai.." sayin so she tried to free her hands from his grip..He left her hands..as he felt them moving down his back from across his chest..he had fuzzy feels..he was aware of his body nearly touchin hers..he was dimly getting aware of her prowess…

As she freed him from his shirt..she bend down to examine the wound on his back..her upfront touched him as she bend..

" Hmm yeh toh bohot hi gehra hai.." she made a concerned face and slowly tried to remove all the blood..once the blood had stopped dripping she bend down again to remove the tiny pieces of skin..As she did so..he moved closer into her as he felt the pain..snuggling into her....his hands encircled her small waist as he left his hot breath lingering ova her upper stomach..She gasped again..

..he was slipping away..he cud still feel her trying to revive him..all he saw last was her beautiful face full of concern..

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Well so finally..updated tis too..I knw it's too lng from when I posted b4..buh now em updating regularly..so js waitin for u'r comments..

N yes,

This Prt is divided in 2 prts.. (A) & (B)…

So here is Prt (A)..

Love ya loads sweeties…t.cccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Edited by cute_madhu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOWWWWWWWW...... OMGG... IT IS SOOOO GOOD...
ur descriptions make the ff look real
plssssssssssss continue.... i wanna see their love storyyyyy
love yaaaaaaa
ashah
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww
not bad
veer hai kaun yaar aur yeh agni kab se uska dost ho gaya
aur yeh drunkards gr88888888 veer ne sahi jwaab diya.
good job chooti
do upadate soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow madhu
ur simply amazing
thanx a lot deare
its sooooo niceeee
wonderful
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow eik eik brill ff maddy dear i jus love it plz cont asap and plz clear your inbox ok..AND pm me ok...
esha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😈waiting for next part.. too short to comment ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Madhu awsome work though cheesy but i do LOVE cheesy.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovly yaar wating for next part

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