DMG 5 years from now# 4 - Link to #5 Pg 155 - Page 93

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey kiran di
too gud a part
i was reduced to tears
pls dont speak about ending this ff
it is the best!!!!!!!
kavya
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Posted: 16 years ago
I HATE U KIRAN....
seriously...u made my cry...i hate to cry....ARGGHHH....
and wht the hell do you think are u doing...? competing with ur ownself huh..?sometimes u write bettr than ur own self...
and dont u dare ...dont u even dare to end this FF
...u get me...good...
now abt the part ....yes all very well written...d emotions were very well written ....so thats y i obviously cried...
nw upd soon again....
Love Steffi
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Kiran,
Wonderful part yaar!Please update 1 more part this weekend if possible.
How were your exams?
Waiting for your next part!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

*"Dad...!!"

His voice shook, quivering, loaded with tears as he muttered that one word. When his father turned to look at him, he found his only son on his knees, kneeling before him, crying, his head bent, his hands folded together in a plea. And for the first time in a decade, Vinay Mallik's heart softened to the only piece of him that was left on this earth. His son. Armaan.*

I just love this part of the update .. Its AMAZING ! ... woah .. excellent .. This FF is definitely way better than the original show .. Awesome Kiran ..


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Posted: 16 years ago
Ohh...!!It was just fabulous..!!

I really had tears for Armaan..

Looking forward to know Emaan's side of story..
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Posted: 16 years ago
hellos kiran.........😊
sorry.......for disappearing n not commenting.........for last few weeks...
i knoe...i knoe u missed me a lot....😃
but actually was busy wid ma xams n den dis godamn net had some probs...so wsnt able to log in....
i missed da ff a lot!!

n u just made my day!!!
all d parts wer so nice........esp d two of dem---wid her father(shashank) n his father(vinay)!!

i can see armaan in all of his attiude n anger n purity of love for ridz in d convo wod shashank........d best reply he can ever give to his ques.......!! i hate shashank!!

but i hate his dad--dat vinay, even more dan he does!! how can he b so rude??? those words......
i got tears in my eyes...for i can never even imagine armaan to b lik dat!! how can he blame his own son lik dat!! n over dat...he said dat he doesnt hv ne son!! poor ammy!!
but twas totally unxpected d way u xplained armaan pleaded in front of him!! i thot he wud hit d same way back!! but pity on him dat he dint.....myt b coz he cant afford to lose ridz!!


Edited by baby bubbles - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww...so nice...
luvd it yaar...ur each part is so very well written tat i simply dont hav wrds to xplain how much i luv it...!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
kiran!!!!!!!!!
awesome!!
it was sooo heart felt
sooooo emoctional!!!!!!!
after soo lonG!!!
nd kiran nooooooo
plz dont end this ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love iT!!!!!!
its jus lik dmg to me!!!
i need it!! plzz!
its not all tat long!!
lol! hahah i kno it is!!
but its awesome!!
nd it rox!!!!!!!!
nyways d upd was sperb
i hope ridz doesnt get to mad at armaan
i mean he is already goin thro a lot!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kiran di,
That was an amazing part. I told you before that you are the best writer! I enjoyed it, it felt so real.
Anyways, I hope that you aced your exams. It was well worth the wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
I also forgot to mention, I like your version of Armaan's parents story a whole lot better than the actual shows. Keep up the good work.

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Posted by: PeachyPisces · 1 years ago

Is there anyone interested in reading ArSh(Armaan-Shipa) ff, it's such a old show that I'm not sure if there any fans left in this forum.

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