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Sammy

@sammy4u

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#911

nice part kiran do continue soon.

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Raj/Armaan

@Armaan_Raj

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#912

WHAT A GREAT PART.......but I have to say is WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.Hope u continue soon.

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Spriha

@KaranShilpa:)

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+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#913

You just started competing with youself dii..Maybe I have mentioned this fact earlier, but lemme make it very clear to yu once again that there is no one even near yu..near yur excellence..the way yu just know exactly to bring out the emotions...the jist of the whole saga...I mean how can yu always..always write SO brilliantly yaar..kabhi toh koi galti karo...lekin nahi..your updates are just..or have to be just the best...each n every one of them...um so happy for yu dii!!

muah

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angel

@-Love.is.You-

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#914

heyy kiran dii the part is just freaking awesome

i really loved it to the cores

awwww the last scene was sooo emotional

i just loved it...............

i wish the same story had been in DMG then it wud have been rocked but sad its just getting worsened....................

anyways continue sooon.................

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AditiGandhi

@AditiGandhi

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#915

hey kiran...

i have been a silent reader of ur story so far...

this is d first time i m commenting....

wat u wrote was just toooo good...

i actually cried in the last scene and even wen armaan met his mum n wen u described his feelings abt entering d house after so long...

it was awesome...

i loved it to d core...

thanks 4 writing😊😊😊

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#916

hey kiran the part ws jst tremendously brilliant its freaking omg all emotions of armaan went out aw poor boy or kya kya karna padega bechare ko nd ridz ws angry on him tht he lied to her but nikki knows thnk god ridz doesn't warna ar to gaya kaam se nd his dadhow could he armaan means nothng to him cruel seriously cnt believe this cnt wait yaar cont sooooooooon
luv yachna

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#917

Kiran...hmph.. hmmm... uffff....... hah.....hmmmm...... huh...

tumne koi pran leke rakhi hai kya.. hum sab ko at a time rulaane ki... kya end tha yaar woh is update ka... i am like 😭.. just don't feel like talking to anyone...

hmmm anyways.... this part had all the emotions in equal portions...worry..anger.. fear...joy...laugh....and of course cry... kya nahin tha is mein...hmmm... loved the short yet subtle conversation btw AA.. so happy to see them move forward atleast in this Fic...ab Vinay jaldi maan jaaye and get his son his' beloved... just waiting for it ki.. how will u unfold the story further...