Kya pyaar aisa bhi hota hai,part-17updatd in pg.23

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aarora

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

hey amazing ff..plzzz add me 2 ur PM list..

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Sreejoyee Bose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: aarora
hey amazing ff..plzzz add me 2 ur PM list..

Thanx a lotz for ur comments on ma FF yaar...

so did u read each and every part of ma FF??

nyways thanx again

Loads of Luv

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shonaveer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

hey sreejoyee,

waiting for your update.....

luv

deepu :)

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Sreejoyee Bose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: pradeepthidmg
hey sreejoyee,

waiting for your update.....

luv

deepu :)

I will surely update soon sweety..

I am glad dat u r still waitin 4 ma update...

loads of luv

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Sreejoyee Bose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

Part-15...

2 new entries..

1)Rahul

and

2)Muskaan...

They both were best frn eva seen...They shared each and everything....Sabko lagta tha that they r bf and gf..bt darasal baat yeh thi ki ...woh dost ke alawa Kuch nahi they...Woh baten to bahut karte and jhagda bhi bahut karte ...Lekin kisi ko pata hi nahi chalta ...jab we jhagda karte...

........................................................................................

Back to Armaan ...

Armaan:Yeh proffessor kitna bada lecture de raha hai....mujhe bilkul nahi pasand yeh....bap re baap kaan me dard hone lagta hai...and kabhi kabhi to need b aati hai...

Atul:SHHHHHH...HH...Kya Armaan..Pagal ho gae ho kya???Khud se hi baten kar rahe ho??

Armaan:Ab tu chup kar..proffessor ke chamche..

Atul:Tu na zyada mat bol...ok...Nahi to...nahi to... nahi to..

Armaan:Nahi to kya be?

Atul:Main sukriti ko bata donga..

Armaan:Is sukriti se kaun darta hai...

Atul:Mere baap plz mujhe thoda sa concentrate karne de class me,,

Armaan:Okk...

Armaan suddenly luks at Shilpa..(Jab se..usse pata chala hai ki shilpa usse pyaar karti hai..tab se armana sirf usi ke baren mein soch raha hai.....

Woh apne zulfen Hata rahi thi..aapne haathon se.....

Armaan started starring at Shilpa..He was feeling completely different....uske muh me hasi tha..

Ting ting ting ting...

the bell rang...

Armaan:Atul....Kal...valentines day,,hai and tum apni wali ko pata...hum sab nicco park jaenge ghumne.....

Atul:Thanx yaar...tu hi mera bhai hai...tu bahut acha hai...

Armaan:Oye abhi...tu humare saath kal...chal na..nicco park...Bhaut maza aaega...

Abhi:Ok..waise bhi kalka..koi plannin nahi hai..so think hai..main chalunga..

Shilpa:Kya baten kar rahe ho tum log..mujhe bhi batao..

Armaan:Hum kal...Nicco park jaenge..Islia..

Shilpa:Main bhi chalu plz

Atul:Haan sure...tum chalogi to..mujhe koi nahi chidaege...

Shilpa:Done..den..

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Udher..Rahul and Muskaan convo

Rahul:Muski...Kal..chale gi mere saath..nicco park me???Wahan suna hai..ki starone me Dill Mill Gayyee ka hero...Karan Singh Grover aane wala hai..apne patni sharaddha ke saath...

Muskaan:OKkk...Yaar..to tu plz...mere mummy ko batana dat..hum group study karenge....Ok..nahi to woh mujhe nahi chodegi..

Rahul:Ok...sure..itna to main kar hi sakta hoon...terelia..

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Sab ghar chale gae...den...yeh sochne lage..dat ..kal kya kya pehenenge...

Every1 were very excited...

Bt Shilpa..

Shilpa...Ko...valemtines day ke baad wale din...Check up ke lia jana tha dr ke paas...she was very tensed...usse saren report...lane jana tha....

.....Shilpa...dr ke paas.....q????/

Kya iske peeche bhi koi karan hai????

Woh to valentines day ke baad wale din hi pata chalega..na..

Till den wait for de 16th part...

Ur critisism and Comments r allowed...

Loads of Luv

$reejoyee

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Surbhi

@arvanu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

hey sree,

shilpa ko kya hua?????why is she visiting a doctor??????please koi bada sa twist aane wala hai kya?????it was lovely......awesome update,dear......especially the way armaan started feeling something for shilpa was cute........aur hahahaa u added karan from DMG too in the FF.....very interesting.......do continue soon.....cant wait to know abt shilpa and what happenes at the park for celebrating valentines day......thanks for the pm!!!!

-surbhi😊

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tarishi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

wowwwwwwwwww

its gr8

yaaaaaaaaaaaar u r doing a gr8 job

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Sreejoyee Bose

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: arvanu
hey sree,

shilpa ko kya hua?????why is she visiting a doctor??????please koi bada sa twist aane wala hai kya?????it was lovely......awesome update,dear......especially the way armaan started feeling something for shilpa was cute........aur hahahaa u added karan from DMG too in the FF.....very interesting.......do continue soon.....cant wait to know abt shilpa and what happenes at the park for celebrating valentines day......thanks for the pm!!!!

-surbhi😊

Ya...deres another twist...dere...I dunno how do u catch me...dat wat am i goin to do in future..

U r really an experienced ,gud reader and writter ofcourse....

Thanz a tonnes for de comments.,...

Luvd ur comments..

I am glad dat u lyked ma Update..

Loads of luv

$reejoyee