~RM FF~ Bachpan ka Pyaar** Part6/Pg11 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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NIce intro,awesome storyline please add me to your PM list!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Whoa! it's R-M season! i see a new R-M ff everyday dude! rocking intro! Pm me as well!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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By the way this is in Muskaan's perspective so when i mean ii, yuw will know Muskaan is spekaing.
I didnt want to wake up that morning, it felt like a burden to get up have a shower and fix my curly horiible hair. The sun was directly poiting at my eye as if we had some enimity. I rolled on my back.
It felt so nice to be on the soft matress digging my face into my pillow.
" Muskaan!!! Wake up" Riddhima was screaming her head off
Yes they lived together in thsi mansion. It was left on her name ever since her father died a year ago
"Uff Ridzii yar, mujhe school nahin jaana"
I felt disgusted as Ridzii entered my rom wearing nothing but a towel.
"Oyye Ridzii, tu playboy mansion mein nahin hai, jaakar kapre pen!!"
I screamed as i felt shivers. Well Riddhiam could go to playboy mansion if she wanted. I though endlessly.
Dopwnstairs i could hear someone's car beping really loudly.
"Ridzii, tera pittemu ageya"
I could hear Riddhima laugh. Armaan had kept hr so happy, ii just wish i had someone. Armaan continuosly honked. I was annoyed now. I dasged out of bed wearing my silk turqouise night gown and put my head out of the window. The air was warm and it felt nice. It wasn't a usual cold day in Forks.
"Araha hai, skamine" I screamed using all my breath.
Armaan's shiny black range rover was outside waiting. He was leaing on the car waiting for Riddhima obviously. His driver lifting hs hat off and showed respect to me by bowing. That felt so strange. Armaan was a rich guy. His black shrt made him look quite nice, but so wird as he ahd his top three buttons open. Whenever you would say somehting about that he would reply
" Thats' how i got ym girl" I imitated him. Gross.
"Pata nahin Riddhiam ko aise ladke so kyun pyaar hogeya"
"MUSKAAN!!"
Riddhiam hugged me from the back,kissed me on the cheek and left. She was the worlds bestest frined. I no ino, there's no word such as bestest but no word sfit in to describve Riddhima.
I entered the showr thinking about the party Edward ahd held yesterday. Gosh, im so glad i didnt get drunk. Th hot water trickled down my body, i sent goosebumps across ym cold skin. I managd to reach out of the shower to put on some music. Yes! It was my song. My favourite tune at the moment. DJ Ironic - Stay with me ..
I sang along with it, i remember how i used to go crazy about this guy last year, bu soon thsi mini crush faded away.
"Stay with me, dont fall asleep too soon, the angels can wait for a moment"
<<< here's the link
I used to sing this song afte my dad pased away. I could feel the tears forming in ym eyes. Muskaan chaddha wasnt a girl who crie taht easily but when the topic of my dad came tears would come automatically. Me and my dad were like best friends. I know it sounds weird but i was little teddy bear.
I came out shivering as the wind blew my hair. I woudl have ocme out earlier. Sorry but my hair just is so annoying. I went to my cupboard. Ok so what shoudl i wear today. I'm not boastign but being the most popular gil in high school seriosuly doesn't help, people try copying ym style which irrataes m to the highest level.
Ok todayi was goign simple. I was just simplyy going to war my purple dress with yellow tights. Oh god that reminds me i shoudlnt wear purple cuz Mark thinks i look too sexy in that. Gosh, why doesnt taht boy understand i don't wanna go out with anyone.
Oh i forgot to tell yuw why. the rason is Rahul. Well i think that was his name. I ahvent sen him for year and he IS stiill my best firned even before Ridzii but ii havent told her taht becuz she dosnt know about him. Not that i loved him, i think. He was so close i couldnt think of any guy aking his place. I miss him.
My driver was waiting downstairs, black convertibl, it was the bets car yuw could ask for. This was my gift form my mom. Mrs. Sukirti Chaddha. By the name yuw can tell i am a panjabi kudi and i don't regret that.
I get my looks form her, wll thats what Armaan says, but taht guy is so amd. All he thinsk about is Riddhima.
"Morning ma'am"
"Morning Paul"
Have i told yuw yet that Paul is such a sweetheart. He is like my little caretaker. He makes sure i get whatever i wnat. but ii keep it to a limit. I treat him more like a friend
"What did ii say Paul, im not yur ma'am, i am Muskaan"
"Sorry Muskaan"
"Hey no sorry's or thanx in firnedship"
"KK Muskaan"
He opened the car door for me in i went. My leather seats were confortable and i always manag to go to my peaceful places here. It worked better than yoga i tell you that.
"May i say yuw look fabulous today"
"Thanx paul"
"Hey? No thanks or soory inf riendhsip"
"Yuw got me ther Paul"
We both chuckled at ut little joke and before we kn wit i was there. in Forks High School. Thye were right when they said thye were to refurbish the place. It looked good. Thye chaged the interiors and everything
Before i got out, i fixed my dress. Oh yeah! .. I stuck to my purple dress, who cared if ii look too sxc, thats uupto me.
I stepped out of the car and a huge crowd cam rushing to me. Wll it were th ones that didnt see me in Edwards party last night.
I had gone to Hawaii for a vacation in the summer holidays and returned only a aweek ago so my room was a mess. Im not such a clean person like my parnts. I mean parent.
We went into the court yard. I met AR there and thye hugge dme talkig about how fabulous i look. i just grinned. All eyes were starign at me, it was just weird. Evn after fur yeas.
Anyways here was my first part for all yuw RM fans.
Precap: " Who's that sexy boy" I smirked as ii saw a sexy by infront of me
Stay tuned to Bachpan ka Pyaar ..
tcxx .. Riddhima
Edited by DMG4EVER - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
jab shurwat itna acha hain to end kitna acha hoga 😉
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
Awesome!!!!!
can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Well that was really nice!!!
thanks 4 PMing!!
continue soon!!!!
can't wait till RM meeting!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
that was very nicely writtennn!!!! can't wait to read the next part!!! and thank u for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

I love the way you right ur FF ! Cute !

And btw...u a Twilight fan I suppose? Forks high school...and Edward...LOL...
I like Jasper Hale better than Edward...!!
Anywayz UPD soon !!
Appy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!! Riddhima that was just great!! 👏 Thanks a lot for the pm!! awesome part!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
WOW! nicely written awsome
thanx for d PM

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