~RM FF~ ~ Mujhse Dosti Karoge?~Upd-Page 73! 05/10 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
dude my name is not in PM list :-(
any ways i luv ur FF
specially that part
"

Rahul: Toh'. Toh yeh tumhara pehla din hai?

Muskaan: Yup

Rahul: Uhmm' aur' kaisa tha tumhara pehla din?

Muskaan: Acha tha.

Rahul: Okay'..

Both were really awkward, they don't know what else to say. So Rahul just decides to leave.

Rahul: Anyways' mein chalta hoon, nice meeting you.

Muskaan: Same here.

Rahul: Aur agar tujhe' I mean' agar tujhe kisse bhi you know.. help' ki zaroorat ho' toh tum mujhse pooch sakti ho.

Muskaan: Yea' thanks. "

i am Flattered on that part
keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
hey namrata can i call u nami ,let come into the crux .
brilliant ff superb intro, loved it,plzz continue soon 👍🏼👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
hey Namrata....firstly thanks for the PM and lovely concept yaar...jaldi continue kar ...wanna knw wat will happen next in the party and plz try to PM me when u update next...seems to be a cute lovestory
With Love
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
hey nammu!!!!!read it all at one go!!!!!so sorry for commenting so late jaana....tune bura toh nahi maana?
anyways,its great!!!!!!!!!!i already know you writ really well from ur parts in wwrm....but an FF is a different thing...
so wow!!!!!!!love at first sight for Rahul then?lets see muskaan dosti karti hai ki nahi!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!!!
and please add me to your PM list!!!!!
Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: justluvmayank

hey nammu!!!!!read it all at one go!!!!!so sorry for commenting so late jaana....tune bura toh nahi maana?

anyways,its great!!!!!!!!!!i already know you writ really well from ur parts in wwrm....but an FF is a different thing...
so wow!!!!!!!love at first sight for Rahul then?lets see muskaan dosti karti hai ki nahi!!!
update soon!!!!!!!!!!
and please add me to your PM list!!!!!

heyy! thankk uu no no i dint feel bad its better to read it late then never rite just like i said to sonia. yupp ill be updating soon! thnx for the comment once again.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Part 5:

The next morning everybody was busy organizing the party. Rahul was driving around picking up food, Armaan was busy on the phone all day inviting everyone and atul was busy in his house looking for all the cds he could find.

The first person Armaan had called was Muskaan.

Trringg ttrinng.

Muskaan: Hello?

Armaan: Hi whos speaking?

Muskaan: uhmm im Muskaan.. who are you?

Armaan: Ohh Muskaan, im Armaan.

Muskaan didnt know what to say... why did Armaan call her??

Muskaan: Armaan?

Armaan: Haan, woh actually maine isiliye phone kiya kyunki maine mere ghar par ek party organize ki hai aur main sabko invite kar raha hoon. Toh maine tumhe invite karne ke liye phone kiya hai.

Muskaan: Ohh thanks.. lekin.. uhmm mujhe nahin lagta ki main aa payungi.

Muskaan really didn't want to go to all these parties, she didn't know anyone there, and she knew she wouldn't like it.

Armaan: Kyun???

Muskaan: Uhm... woh.. actually.... Mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Armaan: kaam? Raat ko? Please Muskaan kaam toh tum kabhi bhi kar sakti ho. Please party mein aana na, wahan pe sab log honge. Ridhima, Anjali, main, aur... Rahul.

Muskaan: hmm.. ill see okay.. main dekhti hoon. Agar mujhe kaam nahin hoga toh main ayungi theek hai?

Armaan: Alrite.. lekin please aana zaroor theek hai.

Muskaan: Haan okay..

Armaan: Haan to theek hai, mera address note down karo aur agar tumhe ghar nahin milta toh tum Rahul ko phone kar sakti ho who bhi wahin pe aa raha hai.

Muskaan: Rahul ko kyun? Main tumhe ya phir Ridhima ko bhi toh phone kar sakti hoon right? Anyways, haan batau tumhara address.

Armaan gave her the address and his phone number and they said their goodbyes and cut the phone.

Armaan was very sure that muskaan would come. He went and called the rest of the people after that. After calling everyone he called Rahul.

Rahul: Hello?

Armaan: Hey dude' maine sabko phone kar diya.

Rahul: Gr8 maine bhi khana sab pick up kar diya hai. Main tere ghar pe drop kardunga theek hai?

Armaan: haan. Waise maine muskaan ko pehle phone kiya.

Rahul: Aur? Usne kya bola? Woh party mein aayegi na?

Armaan: Yea chill. Toh party 8 baje ko shuru ho jayegi par tu 7 baje wahan pe paunch jaana.

Rahul: Okay.. chal mein jara hoon. Raat ko milte hai

Armaan: Yea okay bye.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
nice oneee!!!!!!!!!!! waiting to read wat happens in the party:P i hope something good happens between RM:P
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 6:

Everyone had come to Armaan's party by 8. They were having a lot of fun, everyone was dancing, eating, there was awesome music,so basically the party was rocking!

But' till now Rahul and Muskaan still didn't talk properly. Forget being friends. So it was enough for Rahul now, he went to Armaan to take some advice.

Armaan was there talking to few of his friends.

Rahul: Armaan, tu ek minute yahan pe aa sakta hai please?

Armaan: uhmm sure, excuse me please ( he said to the people he was talking with)

Armaan: haan bol, kya hua?

Rahul: Ek baat bata armaan, yeh party tune kyun organze ki hai?

Armaan: Kyun ki mujhe parties bahut achi lagti hai.

Rahul: Shut up armaan, dude humne ye party isliye organize ki hai taki mein aur muskaan dost ban sage. Yahan toh dosti toh bahut door ki baat hai, hum to ek dusre se baat bhi nahin kar rahe.

Armaan: ohhhh to yeh baat hai' hmm okay' I have a idea. You just wait and watch.

Rahul: Kaisa idea? Armaan please kuch aisa waisa mat karna theek hai?

Armaan: Trust me buddy, tu jaake party enjoy kar aur bahut jald tu aur Muskaan dost ban jayoge.

Rahul: As you say...

He goes from there.

Suddenly the lights went off and the spotlight was on Armaan, and he had a mike in his hand.

Armaan: Hi everyone!

Rahul (thinking): abhey yaar! Yeh Armaan kya karne wala hai? Please woh kuch ulta seeda nahin kar de!

Armaan: Hmm having fun tonight?

Everyone was screaming.

Armaan: Awesome! So to make this night more fun, we will play a game. Haan hum ek game khelenge. Aur woh game ka naam hai : Mujhse dosti karoge?

Everyone started to whisper now and everyone was wondering what the game was about. Even Rahul had no clue to what was going on. Muskaan and Ridhima were standing together and they had already decided that they wouldn't play.

Armaan: Is game mein, ab sab logo ko ek partner millega, LEKIN main woh partners choose karunga, because the point of the game is that you shouldn't be partners with your friends.

Rahul: Huh? Yeh kaisa game hai? Armaan bhi na bilkul pagal hai.

Armaan: What say? Soo mein sab logo ka naam ek paper pe likhe ek bowl mein rakhunga, aur joh 2 chits mere haath me honge woh hi partners.

So he prepared the chits and put them in the bowl. He knew that he had to put Rahul and Muskaan together. So he announced some random names of people that were there at the party.

Armaan: Suman and Rocky, tum dono partners ho ( these people are just there in the party)

Atul, and Anjali you both will be partners.

Anjali: What? Yeh atul kaun hai?

Armaan: Rahul' aur Muskaan!

Muskaan: What! Rahul?

In a way she was shocked and she didn't want to be with Rahul but in the other way she was kind of happy that she didn't have anyone else.

Now we see Rahul smiling so big, and being so happy, and having such a great friend like Armaan.

Soon Armaan finished saying names of all the pairs.

Muskaan: Ridhma, mujhe yeh game nahin khelna hai!

Ridhima: Haan mujhe bhi nahin, woh Armaan mera partner hai! Waise hume is game mein karna kya hai?

Muskaan: Pata nahin!

Armaan: Wait up guys! Is game ke rules toh suno. Haan toh is game mein tum aur tumhare partner ko ek dusre ke saath beht kar baate karne hoge aur ek dusre ke pasand aur na pasand jaana hoga. Aise tum aur tumhare partner ek dusre ko jaan sakte ho aur tumhe ek naya dost bhi mil sakta hai. Phir tumhe joh bhi cheesein apne partner ke baare mein pata ho woh ek paper par likhe idhar aake is bowl mein rakhna hoga. Joh bhi apne partner ke baare mein zyaada jaanta ho woh is game ka winner. And remember, tumhe apne parnter ko jaane mein sirf 20 minutes diye jayenge. So now wasting time!!! Now go to your partners and start talking.

Muskaan: Yeh kaisa game hai! Chee, what partner partner, mein is Rahul ke saat kitna baat karungi?

Ridhima: Pata nahin Muskaan, mein to bol ti hoon ki chal hum yahan se chalte hai.

Muskaan: Haan good idea!

Rahul: Bad idea!

Muskaan: Tum? Tum hamari baatein sun rahe the?

Rahul: Uhh no' mein toh tumhe duhnd raha tha. Hum partners joh hai.

Ridhima: uhmm Muskaan.. excuse me.. mein abhi aati hun.

Muskaan: Okay...

Muskaan: uhmm' Rahul' mein ghar nahin ja sakti?

Rahul: What? Tumhe ghar jaana hai?

Muskaan: haan.. mujhe yeh game nahin kehlna. Pleasee main jayun?

Rahul: Lekin hum partners joh hai' tum aise nahin ja sakti mujhe us paper mein kuch toh likna hoga na. Please hum sirf thodi der ke liye baat kar sakte hai phir mein tumhe ghar drop kar dunga.

Muskaan: uhmm.. fine.. lekin mujhe ghar drop karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai, mujhe ridhima drop kar degi.

Rahul: Uhhh i dont think so.. wahan dekho.

He was pointing towards Ridhima and Armaan talking to each other sitting on a sofa and laughing.

Muskaan: Ridhima!?

Rahul: Muskaan please, hum bhi kahin jaake beht sakte hai. Humhe sirf 20 minute hai aur humne 5 minute already waste kar diye.

Muskaan: Oh sorry.. haan chal...

They went outside in the garden where there was a swing and the moon was shining on them. For a while none of them spoke since they didn't know how to start. Muskaan seriously wanted to go from here, but she couldn't.

Rahul: Hmm... Uhmm.. Muskaan...

Muskaan: Dekh Rahul.. tumhe sirf mere baare mein us paper pe likhna hai right.. toh likh mera favorite movie kuch kuch hota hai hai. I love chocalates, and I love to eat pani puri. Mera favorite color pink hai, aur mujhe yeh parties bilkul pasand nahin hai. I hate these parties jahan pe itna loud music hai, itne sare loog, I just love peace and quietness. I am 22 years old, mera birthday February 14th ko hai, I am a aquarius, aur main yahan se jari hoon. Bye!

Rahul couldn't take his eyes off her, she said all that soo fast, but he still remembered everything she said, each word. She was simply beautiful especially when she talks so much realizing that no one is even listening to her, he just loved her for saying all her information and it felt like he knew everything about her, even though these were just a few details about her. He just kept staring at her without realizing that she got up and left from there. Soon he snapped out of his thoughts and ran inside to see if she was still there. And guess what she was, but she was sitting all alone on a sofa waiting for Ridhima to finish so that they both can go home.

Rahul didn't want to go there otherwise she would get up again and go from there. So he quickly took a piece of paper and wrote everything he knew about Muskaan.

And of course Armaan being a genius, he said that Rahul is the winner, even though other people did have more things on their paper than Rahul did. But Muskaan had already left from there leaving Ridhima behind; she went alone in a taxi so she couldn't see that they had won. For Rahul this had been the best party ever and he knew that Muskaan was the only one made for him!
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
heyy im sorry i think this part turned out to be very lame.. i tried to make it gud but it didnt turn out to be. sorry abt that, ill try to do better in my next part.
dipi btw can i call u that?? thanks for the comment read part 6 also.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Great parts.and the game was quite uniqe!

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