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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hey Namrata,

My name is Sabreena, and Im a new member. I really love this fanfic, you wrote and I was wondering if you could add me to your PM list, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!!!

~Sab/Saby (I have way too many nicknames lol)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: Sab93
Hey Namrata,
My name is Sabreena, and Im a new member. I really love this fanfic, you wrote and I was wondering if you could add me to your PM list, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!!!

~Sab/Saby (I have way too many nicknames lol)

Heyy sabreena

first of all welcome to the forum 😊

then its great to have a new reader reading my FF

thank uuu soo much for commenting, sure i dont have a pm list but i can pm u if u want..

thanks once again

Keep reading

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Thanks for welcoming me, Namrata. And yes if you could PM me that's be great, thanks.

And as for the keep reading comment, I wouldn't be able to stop myself if I tried, lol. I'm like addicted to your fanfic, it is sooo good, one of the best RM fanfics I've read. I love RM and I wish stuff that happened in your fanfic could actually happen to them on the show.

~ Sabreena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: Sab93
Thanks for welcoming me, Namrata. And yes if you could PM me that's be great, thanks.
And as for the keep reading comment, I wouldn't be able to stop myself if I tried, lol. I'm like addicted to your fanfic, it is sooo good, one of the best RM fanfics I've read. I love RM and I wish stuff that happened in your fanfic could actually happen to them on the show.

~ Sabreena

Suree ill be updating like by tomorrow again so will pm u:) hahah thankss for thatt, omg yeah i wishh even a tiniest part of ANY of the fanfics happen in the show.. sigh i dont think it will happen anytime soon so lets just continue writing and all we can do is imagine them with the scenes:)

thanks again for commenting:)

take care

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Posted: 16 years ago

#425

Namrata!!!!!!!! When are you going to update? Please update soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hi!

Namrata... When you gonna update?? 😊...

Take Care

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sab93
Namrata!!!!!!!! When are you going to update? Please update soon.

Heyy im updating right now:))

Just a couple minutes and the update will be here, sorry for the delay

Take care

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: N786

Hi!

Namrata... When you gonna update?? 😊...

Take Care

Heyy Nayab im updating right now, just a few minutes,

really sorry for the delayy

Take care

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Heyy Friends, how are you guys doing??

First of all im reallyy very sorry for having to keep you all waiting for so long, but this part turned out to be pretty long so i hope that makes up for it.

Thanks to all of you who are commenting,

Keep reading..

Take care

~Namrata~

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Posted: 16 years ago

#430

Part 30:

All of them left their rooms to go down to the club where the party was held. They all were chilling with drinks and food, chatting around, and laughing.

Anjali: Guys can you believe it kal hum log wapas Mumbai ja rahe hain

Atul: I know, mera toh man hi nahin hai wapas jaane ka

Armaan: Haan lekin jaana toh parega na....

Muskaan: Shit...

Rahul: Ey guys tum log mu latka ke kyun behte ho, this is our last day so lets party!

Armaan: True, ridhima chale dance karne?

Ridhima: Sure

Atul: Anjali hum bhi dance karne chale?

Anjali: Yea okay, rahul tum a rahe ho?

Rahul: Hmm tum log jao hum aate hain

Anjali: Okay as you say.

Now all of them went to dance and as usual Rahul and Muskaan were left behind.

Muskaan: Hum bhi chalein dance karne?

Rahul: Naa, mujhe tumhare saath akele time spend karna hai, after all its our last day here.

Muskaan: Oyee tu toh aise keh raha hai ki hum Mumbai mein kabhi nahin millenge.

Rahul: Millenge lekin phir college aur exams mein busy ho jayenge

Muskaan: Ey rahul please koi dusra bahana dundh tujhe yeh college wale baatein bilkul suit nahin karti.

Rahul: Okay so plain and simple, hum dono pool side chalein?

Muskaan: ahhh ab aaya na line pe, theek hai chal.

Both of them went and informed Armaan that they will be back in a while. They went by the pool and beach side. No one was there except them. The pool was shining because of the lights that were lighting inside it. Muskaan kicked off her slippers and started walking in the sand that was all around the pool going into the beach. The moon was full shining right at them. Both of them sat down on the sand sticking their feet in the water.

Rahul: Hmmm.... Muskaan agar koi abhi pool mein jump kare toh? Kya pani bahaut tandha hoga?

Muskaan: uhh haan hoga.... kyun?

Rahul: Sach? Toh agar main tujhe abhi push karun toh tujhe bahaut tandh lage gi na?

Muskaan: Haan isiliye tu aisa kuch nahin karega

Rahul: Par agar main bhi jump karun aur phir jaldi se tujhe hug karun tab toh tujhe tandh nahin lage gi right?

Muskaan: No way, rahul.... tu... tu.... mujhe push nahin karega

But rahul didn't listen to a word she said, he grabbed her by the waist and pulled her in the pool along with him.

Muskaan: Rahul! Dekh kya kiya tune, meri puri dress kharab go gayi!

Rahul started splashing her with water, making her hair all wet, he thought Muskaan would hate him for doing this but it turned out to be that she actually enjoyed it and she started splashing him back.

Rahul: Kyun ab tujhe tandh nahin lag rahi?

Muskaan: Nahinn!

She started laughing and splashed him some more, she was just floating around and swimming from here to there. Rahul started to come close to her and held her by the waist pulling her close to him, both their noses were touching, Muskaan was red from blushing and Rahul kept on giving her tiny kisses all over her cheek, forehead, and neck.

Rahul: Humne wahan par toh dance nahin kiya lekin idhar toh kar sakte hain na?

Muskaan: Yahan pani mein?

Rahul: Haan?

Rahul put muskaans hand on his shoulder and he put his hand on her waist. They started to dance really slow with Rahul turning Muskaan a few times and then pulling her back close to him. After the dance, and some more splashing around in the water, they got out of the pool completely soaked and both of them laid down in the sand.

Muskaan: Rahul, mujhe yahan par settle hona hai shaadi ke baad okay?

Rahul: Ohh tu kabse shaadi ke bare main sochne lagi?

Muskaan: Hamesha se, main hamesha sochti hoon ki hum dono shaadi karenge, hamare do bache honge ek ladka aur ek ladki. Ladka bilkul teri tara hoga aur uske bhi teri tara green eyes hoyenge, aur ladki bilkul mere tara.

Rahul: Ohhh full future planning kar li tune, good good. Lekin sirf doh bache? Mujhe toh 6 bache chahiye 3 ladke aur 3 ladkiyan.

Muskaan: 6? Rahul main 6 bachon ke saath pagal ho jayungi, aur main jaanti hoon tum bhi bachon ke saath ek dum bache ban jayoge, so please not 6. doh kafi hai.

Rahul: Okay.. fine.. doh theek hai, lekin phir bachon main tum toh mujhe bhul hi jaogi.

Muskaan: Noo way, aisa kyun hoga?

Rahul: You know, tum busy ho jaogi diapers change karogi, unko khana khilaogi, aur phir jab woh so jayenge tab tum bhi bahaut tak jaogi aur phir tum kaho gi ki hum kal bat karenge, lekin phir kal bhi same hoga tum uthogi, bachon ko teyar karogi..

Muskaan: Oh god! Stop it. Main koi house maid nahin hoon, main thodi na puri zindagi sirf bachon ke peeche bhagungi, tum mere pati hoge main tumhe kaise bhul sakti hoon.

Rahul: Paka na? Agar aisa hoga toh mujhe ek bhi bacha nahin chahiye.

Muskaan: paka baba, kabhi nahin.

Rahul: Good.

Muskaan: Eyyyy rahul pool main wapas chale?

Rahul: kyun?

Muskaan: Aise hi... bas.. waise bhi hum wapas party main toh ja nahin sakte hamare kapre pure kharab ho chuke hain.... isiliye. Chal na please

They both got up and went back into the pool, they continued to splash each other, laughing together, having their best time of their life. Alone. Both of them went and sat on the stair of the pool.

Rahul: Mus.. ab chale? Room main chal change karne chale, waise bhi hum puri tara se bheeg chuke hai.

Muskaan: Hmm, okay.

They both went up to Rahul's room, and Rahul took out a pair of shorts and a huge t-shirt for Muskaan.

Rahul: Yeh le, jaake fresh hoke change kar le.

Muskaan: Rahul, main room main chali jayungi, its okay.

Rahul: Nahin theek hai, ab yeh pehn le phir tu badme jaana.

Muskaan: Par main change kar ke wapas idhar ayungi na.

Rahul: Muskaan, maine kaha na tu yeh hi pehnle, badme tu chali jaana na. Aur waise bhi tu puri gille hai aise kaie tu apne room tak jayegi? Everyone will stare at you.

Muskaan: Lekin main tere kapre kaise pehn sakti hoon?

Rahul: Shhh bas pehnle.

Muskaan went in the bathroom and changed into his clothes, she was feeling so embarrassed to come out, she was basically drowning in his shirt since it was so big, and the shorts were hidden under the shirt. She came out slowly, and Rahul was just sitting on the bed waiting for Muskaan to come out.

Muskaan: Uhhh..... Rahuul... mujhe abh bhi lagta hai ki mujhe apne room main jaana chahiye.

Rahul turned around to see how she looked and he cracked up laughing so hard that he fell off the bed and continued laughing on the floor rolling around.

Muskaan: Ey.. main ja rahi hoon.

Rahul: Noo!

He got up quickly and ran to Muskaan and grabbed her by the waist and hugged her really tightly.

Rahul: Myy jaan you look so cutee!

He gave her a big kiss on the cheek.

Muskaan: Chod mujhee.

Rahul: Muskaan don't worry tu bahut bahut bahaut cute lag rahi hai!

Muskaan couldn't help but smile, right now she was the biggest idiot in the room with Rahul's clothes on, and then also Rahul made her smile.

Muskaan: toh isiliye tu chahta tha ki main tumhare kapre pehnu taki tu mere uppar has sake?

Rahul: Noo, main sirf yeh chahta tha ki tu mujhe chod kar apne room main nahin ja, mujhe kya laga ki tu mere kapron main bhi itni sexy lago gi. Pehle toh tu towel mein ITNI sexy lag rahi thi, phir woh dress, ab mere shorts aur t-shirt main. Wahhh tu toh kuch bhi pehn sakti hain.

Muskaan: Ek din main bhi dekhna chahti hoon ki tu mere kapron main kaise lage ga. Chal na mere room main chal.

Rahul: Ha Ha no.

Muskaan: Toh main tumhare kapre kyun pehnu?

Rahul: Kyunki tu mere kapron main bahutttt khubsoorat lagti hai, agar main tumhare kapre pehnu toh pehli baat tere kapre phat jayenge aur dusri baat ill look like a freak, so No.

Muskaan: Psshh okay. Hmm ab tu ja na change karne, dekh tu pura gilla hai aur mujhe hug kar ke mere kapre bhi gille kar diye.

Rahul: Ohhh sorry, tujhe dusra t-shirt chahiye?

Muskaan: No, its okay.

Rahul: Okay, so im coming okay, please tu kahin mat jaana.

Muskaan: Main nahin jaungi jaldi kar.

Rahul went in the bathroom, and meanwhile Muskaan just went out in the balcony, she was enjoying the cool breeze and the view from there. She saw people downstairs walking around, eating, drinking, talking, riding their bicycles, it was a really busy city. Moving away from her wandering thoughts, she was just about to go in when she saw a cockroach on the wall, she screamed so loud and ran inside.

Muskaan: Rahullll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rahul got so scared, he came out of the bathroom in only his boxer shorts with no shirt on him and no other shorts on.

Rahul: Kya huaa???

Muskaan saw rahul and forgot about the cockroach completely, now she started to laugh really hard, just the way rahul laughed at her when she came out of the bathroom.

Rahul: Oyee, tune itna chilaya kyun? Ab tu has rahi hai?

Muskaan: Rahul... tu boxers mein kafi cute lag rahe ho!

Rahul looked down and noticed what he was wearing.

Rahul: Oh shit! Yeh sab tumhare waja se hua hai, agar tune chilaya nahin hota toh main aise bhar nahin aata. Now wait main shirt pehne aata hoon.

Muskaan: Nooo!

She ran to him and cuddled in him.

Muskaan: Rahullll myy jaaan tum kitne cute lag rahe hoo!! I lovee you!!!

She gave him a big kiss on the cheek.

Rahul: Mere hi lines repeat kar rahi hai?

Muskaan: Sorry mujhse raha nahin gaya, tu sirf boxers kyun nahin pehnta? Sab ladkiyan tujhe dekhar pagal ho jayenge.

Rahul: Ahhh theek hai toh main abhi aise hi party main chala jaunga.

Muskaan: Uh no, its okay. Mujhe hi hakh banta hai tujhe boxers me dekhna ka samjha???

Rahul: Yes mam, same goes for you, main hi tujhe towel main aur mere t-shirt main dekh sakta hoon.

Muskaan: Haan ofcourse, but im sure yeh same t-shirt pata nahin kitne aur ladkiyan ne pehna hoga.

Rahul: Nope sirf tune, lekin don't tell me ki kissi aur ladke ne tujhe towel mein dekha?

Muskaan: Waise haan, kafi sare ladke ne dekha towel main.

Rahul: What?? Muskaan? Tune mujhe pehle kabhi bataya nahin? Tujhe pehle kitne boyfriends the? Aur un sab ne tujhe towel mein dekh liya? Whaattttt???

Muskaan: Rahull im joking yaar.

Rahul: God you are unbelievable! Seriously toh kissi aur ne tujhe towel mein nahin dekha?

Muskaan: No no no. kissi aur ne nahin dekha.

Rahul: Gooddd!

Muskaan: Rahul mujhe lagta hai ki humme chalna chahiye' woh sab party main hain na toh who hamara wait kar rahe honge.

Rahul jumped on the bed and laid down, he grabbed muskaans hand and pulled her also.

Rahul: Abhi abhi hum aayein hai, mujhe wapas tumhe aise t-shirt aur shorts main nahin dekh paunga, let me enjoy u.

Muskaan: Hmmm main bhi tumhe boxers main shahid phirse nahin dekh paungi.

They stayed laying on the bed face to face with their hands enclosed with each other.

Muskaan: Rahul?

Rahul: Hmmm

Muskaan: Tum mujhe kabhi chod ke nahin jaoge na?

Rahul: Kya?

Muskaan: Maine kaha ki tum mujhe kabhi chod kar nahin jaoge na?

Rahul: Yeh....tum... I mean... achanak?

Muskaan: I know.. pata nahin main tumse yeh kyun puch rahi hoon' Rahul tumhare shahid bahut sare girlfriends ho chuke honge, tumne bahaut ladkiyon ke dil tore honge, bahut ladkiyan ne tumhe boxers mein dekhe honge, tumne bahut ladkiya ko towel me dekha hoga, lekin Rahul tum mere zindagi ke pehle ladke ho, aur main nahin chahti ki tum mujhe chod ke chale jao.

Rahul: Shhhh

He put his fingers on her lips telling her to stop talking. He put his hand on her neck and caressed her face with his thumb.

Rahul: Muskaan tu mere bare mein aisa sochti ho? Ki maine bahut sare ladkiyon ke dil tore?

Muskaan: Nahin... mera matlab...

Rahul: Mus... mujhe tere saath meri puri zindagi guzarni hai, tere saath shaadi karni hai, tere saath bache peda karne hai, aur tere saath marna hai. Main tujhe kabhi nahin chod ke jaunga, aise kabhi sochna bhi mat okay?

Muskaan just nodded her head, she didn't even know why she was asking him this when she knew he could never betray her and never ever leave her and go. All she did was now cuddle in with him and she hugged him really tightly.

Muskaan: Rahul abt bahaut raat ho chuki hai, mujhe chalna chahiye.

Rahul pulled her back just when she was about to get up.

Rahul: Don't go please.

Muskaan: Hum kal mil rahe hai naa??

Rahul: Hmm woh toh hai.

Muskaan: Ey main abhi se tujhe keh rahi hoon, ki please plane mein truth or dare nahin khelna.

Rahul: Nahin kabhi nahin, us din ke baad no more truth or dare for me. Waise tu....uh... mere shorts mein room me jayegi?

Muskaan: like I have a choice? Main apna gilla dress toh nahin pehnu gi na?

Rahul: Nahin... sorry lekin main kuch nahin kar sakta'. Agar main tumhe apna jeans dun toh koi faida nahin hai..

Muskaan: Its okay, waise bhi sab party mein honge toh I don't think koi mujhe dekhega.

Rahul: Alright.... Bye then

Muskaan: Uhmm rahul... im sorry

Rahul: Kyun?

Muskaan: I duno mujhe kya ho gaya tha, I know ki tum aise nahin ho, phir bhi pata nahin kyun maine...

Rahul: Eyy babe, its okay. Don't worry, dekh.... nah forget it, main iske bare main aur baat nahin karna chahta, this night has been beautiful. Then he whispered in her ears:

Rahul: Specially....

Muskaan: jab tune mujhe tumhare kapre main dekhar floor mein gir kar has pare, I know.

Rahul: Hahah okayyy basically tumhe mere t-shirt aur short main dekh kar.

Muskaan: Hmmm okay main ja rahi hoon.

Muskaan left the room obviously after giving Rahul a kiss, just as she was about to go up trying to hide her face from anyone in the ridiculous t-shirt, from far it looked like she wasn't wearing anything under since the shorts were hidden under it. She suddenly bumped into ridhima.

Ridhima: MUSKAAN? Tu kahan chali gayi thi, aur tu..... cheeee tune yeh kya pehna hai? Kiska hai yeh?

Muskaan: Shhhhh!

Muskaan dragged ridhima to their room.

Ridhima: Whats going on?

Muskaan: Let me explain, mein aur Rahul pool side gaye aur phir

Ridhima: Muskaan, tum logon ne toh kaha tha ki tum kuch der mein wapas a jaoge...

Muskaan: Sun toh naa

Ridhima: Haan okay bata

Muskaan: haan so hum dono pool side par gaye, phir usne mujhe pool mein push kiya aur khudh bhi jump kar liya aur phir hum pure gille ho gaye'

Ridhima: isiliye tumne Rahul ke kapre pehn liye?

Muskaan: hmmm

Ridhima: Muskaan tum humse itni duur kyun chali gayi? Jab dekho toh Rahul Rahul Rahul, aaj hamara akhri din tha yahan, aur aaj bhi tum hamare saath time spend nahin kar saki?

Muskaan: Ridhima main jaanti hoon, and im sorry, lekin hum wapas Mumbai main itna zyaada nahin mil payenge, you know college, exams etc. isiliye aaj humne itna maza kiya ki....

Ridhima: Aaj nahin is pure trip main, humne ek room toh share kiya lekin pura time tu Rahul ke saath thi.

Muskaan: So what?? We were just having fun, ab hum wapas ja rahe hai phir nahin millenge. Okay?

Ridhima: look muski, tu..

Muskaan: ridz please mujhe bahut neend a rahi hain, please hum aur argue nahin karen?

Ridhima: Main argue nahin karna chahti

Muskaan: Main bhi nahin karna chahti, isiliye im going off to sleep okay?

Ridhima: Okay....

Muskaan was too tired to get up and change, so she just went off to sleep in rahuls giant shirt, which she thought was actually the most comfortable thing she has ever worn.

*NOTE- I changed the story a little I meant to have Muskaan get drunk at the party, but then I dropped that idea and made it more romantic, since all of us are missing RM so much.

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