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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 29:

Muskaan got up before Rahul and realized that Rahul was sleeping on the floor and she felt guilty about it. She had to go to her room before Anjali and Ridhima get up or else they will be asking her a ton of questions. She wrote a quick note to Rahul, kept it on the table and left. Soon after she left Rahul woke up as well and saw her note. It said:

Good morning, have to leave now....sorry you had to sleep on the floor because of me. See you soon. Love you- Muskaan.

Rahul kept the note on the side and went to take a shower. He soon freshened up and went downstairs to join everyone for breakfast.

Rahul: Hey guys.

Atul: Heyy, hum bas abhi tumhare baare mein hi baat kar rahe the.

Rahul: Acha kyun?

Atul: Tu kahan tha? Tu kitna sohta hai yaar, hum kab se tumhara wait kar rahe hain.

Rahul: Chill man, waise aaj ka plan kya hai?

Anjali: Suna hai, aaj raat ko hotel ke club mein ek party hain, what say guys chale?

Armaan: Sounds good. Lekin woh toh raat ko hai, hum abhi kya karen?

Muskaan: Anji shopping chale?

Rahul: Ey ey ey, no shopping okay.

Muskaan: Kya ey ey ey , hum toh shopping hi jayenge, kyun anji?

Anjali: Of course, tumhe aana hai toh aao warna mat aao.

Rahul: Hum toh kahin aur hi jayenge, shopping kitna boring hai yaar, hum teeno beach pe jayenge, swimming, tanning, and oooo lalaaa chicks what fun!

Muskaan: Tum jao apne chickens ke paas hum ja rahe hai shopping.

Rahul: Oye chickens nahin chicks yani ki girls, ladkiyan, samjhi?

Muskaan: HAH ladkiyaan, funny Rahul, sapne dekhna band kar, tumhe koi ladki nahin milne wali.

Rahul: Milne ki kahan baat kar rahe hain, hum toh sirf unko dekhne ja rahe hain, aur you know maybe some flirting.....

Muskaan: Rahul, tu na un ladkiyon se dur hi rai samjha?

Rahul: Kyunn tujhe jhalan ho rahi hai??

Armaan: Ey guys stop it yaar, tumhe shopping jaana hai na toh jao, humhe jo karna hai woh hum karenge.

Anjali: Yea yea, chalo.

The three girls leave to shop at a nearby mall. They went inside a shop just to see a few dresses.

Anjali: Ey ridzy, main yeh try kar ke aati hoon theek hai?

Ridhima: Okay..

Muskaan: Ridzz, mujhe bhi aaj raat ke party ke liye dress chahiye, help kar na.

Ridhima: Suree yeh dekh yeh black dress kitna acha hai.

She pointed at a really pretty black dress which muksaan SO HAD TO BUY!

Muskaan: Main abhi try kar ke aati hoon okay.

She was walking towards the trial room when someone suddenly pushed her inside the room and locked the door. Muskaan was about to scream when she saw that it was none other than Rahul. The room was so small, barely one person could fit, here both of them were inside and they were so close to each other.

Rahul whispered: Hey beautiful.

Muskaan: Oye tu yahan kya kar raha hai?

Rahul: Tujhe miss kar raha tha.

Muskaan: Toh tu wahan hotel main itna natak kyun kar raha tha?

Rahul: Ladka hoon na, koi bhi ladke ko shopping achi nahin lagti, isiliye.

Muskaan: Ooohhhh toh yeh baat hai, phir tu apne CHICKENS ko beach pe dekhne nahin gaya?

Rahul: Naahh, tu hi mere sabse pyaari chicken hai, mujhe koi aur ki zaroorat hi nahin hai. Waise tu kya try karna wali thi?

Muskaan: Dress hai.

Rahul: Toh try kar na.

Muskaan: Toh tu bhar ja na.

Rahul: Oh... haan.. right...

He went outside meanwhile muskaan tried on her dress. She opened the door and quickly Rahul came back inside and locked the door. Once again both of them were so close it was hard to move.

Muskaan: Rahul, bata mera dress kaisa hai.

Rahul: I......can't.... i can't really see right now....

Muskaan just realized how close they were and got a little uncomfortable.

Rahul: Hey, relax... main ja raha hoon.

He opened the door, but before leaving he gave a kiss on muskaans cheek and went out. Muskaan changed and went back out.

Anjali: Heyy tune dress toh dikhaya hi nahin.

Muskaan: Ohh... sorry... party mein dekh lena.

Anjali: Main ek our dress try kar ke aati hoon theek hai.

Muskaan: Okay..

Muskaan: Ey Ridhima, kyun na tu Armaan ke liye kuch le aur main Rahul ke liye?

Ridhima: Yea sure... lekin kya?

Muskaan: Mujhe toh pata hai ki main Rahul ke liye kya lene wali hoon.

Ridhima: Acha? Bata na.

Muskaan: Main uske liye ek red shirt lungi, kyunki mujhe red bahut pasand hai woh toh shirt zaroor pehnega.

Ridhima: Ohh how cute, ab bata ki main Armaan ke liye kya lun?

Muskaan: Mmmm.... Lets see... chal wahan dekh kar chale hain.

They walk to the mens department and Muskaan picked up a red, half sleeved shirt for Rahul.

Ridhima: Kyun na main uske liye ek cute sa teddy gift karun?

Muskaan: Yeaa!! Great idea!

They go pick up a small cute teddy. They pay for both of it and wait for Anjali to come. She came and paid for her dress as well and they all left. They were just about to enter the other shop when Muskaan got worried because she couldn't see Rahul anywhere.

Muskaan: Ey guys tum log jao, main abhi washroom ho kar aati hoon.

So they go and Muskaan starts to look around for Rahul but couldn't see him anywhere, suddenly someone grabbed her hand and pulled her into one corner. Ofcourse its Rahul. They both sit down on the floor, nobody could see them since the corner was really tiny.

Rahul: Mujhe dundh rahi thi....

Muskaan: Uh... nahin... woh main washroom ja rahi thi..

Rahul: Ohhhh.... toh tu mujhe miss nahin kar rahi thi?

Muskaan: Hmmm... Thoda sa...

Rahul: Acha hai atleast thoda sa toh miss kar rahi thi...

Muskaan: Rahul waise tu yahan kyun aaya?

Rahul: Kaha na, tujhe miss kar raha tha.

Muskaan: Toh Armaan aur atul beach par gaye?

Rahul: Nahhh woh toh hotel main hi hain, main bahana kar ke yahan pe aaya.

Muskaan: Ooohhh

Rahul started caressing Muskaan cheek, and moved her strands of hair. Both of them just stared at each other for a little while, they didn't even realize that the corner was so tiny, and how uncomfortable they were since they didn't have any space.

Muskaan: Rahul mujhe jaana hai.

Rahul: Kyun?

Muskaan: Woh Anjali aur Ridhima wait kar rahi hongi.

Rahul: Okay...

Muskaan got up and was just about to walk when Rahul grabbed her once again and pinned her against the wall.

Rahul: Tu aise hi ja rahi thi?

Muskaan knew exactly what he meant but acted as if she was innocent.

Muskaan: Haan aur kaise jayun?

Rahul slowly slid his arm around Muskaan's neck and was leaning in for a kiss, before he could kiss her, Muskaan quickly gave him a kiss on the cheek and ran off. She turned back and gave him a flying kiss and smiled. He smiled back, and left from there and went back to the hotel. After some more shopping the girls returned to the hotel also. Ridhima and Anjali thought of getting coffee before going in the room but Muskaan didn't want to she just decided to go in the room and start getting ready. She was all alone in the room so she went for her shower, washed her hair, and just came out in her towel.

When she opened the door she saw Rahul lying down on the bed with his chin rested in his hands. Muskaan got so scared that she gave a small scream.

Rahul: Arrey tu hamesha mujhe dekh kar itni khabra kyun jaati hai?

Muskaan hid behind the door since she was only in her towel.

Muskaan: Agar tu hamesha itni achanak se mere samne aa jata hai toh main aur kya karun? Ab please tu jayega kyunki mujhe teyar hona hai, aur mera dress wahan bed par hai.

Rahul: Tu toh already tayar hai, towel mein kitne sexy lag rahi hai, dress ki kya zaroorat hai.

Muskaan: Shut up Rahul, ab romance ka time nahin hai, aur please next time knock kar ke aaya kar.

Rahul: Kyun? Mujhe farak nahin parega agar tu mere kamre mein aye jab main sirf towel mein hoon.

Muskaan: Tujhe farak nahin parga lekin mujhe farak parega. Now please go.

Rahul: Nope, main nahin jaane wala.

Muskaan: Rahul! Mujhe mera dress chahiye.

Rahul: Toh akar le na.

Muskaan: Tu de na please.

Rahul: Fine...

He got up and walked towards the bathroom with her dress. Muskaan was still behind the door.

Muskaan: Dekh tu andar mat aa, idhar hi rukh aur mera dress de.

Rahul didn't listen to one word she said, he went inside the bathroom and started walking towards her. She bumped into the bathtub. She quietly took the shower without Rahul noticing, he was too busy staring at her, she turned it on and sprayed Rahul. He was soaked, from top to bottom Muskaan had made him wet.

Rahul: Muskaan! Ab tu dekh, main tujhe nahin chorne wala.

Muskaan ran out the bathroom and Rahul ran behind her. Both of them were running around the room, jumping from bed to bed, behind the chairs, outside in the balcony, and then Muskaan jumped on the bed again but this time Rahul caught her leg and she fell down on the bed with Rahul on top of her. Both were breathing hard since they were running around. Rahul couldn't take his eyes off her, his hair was wet, and water drops dropping on her face and her towel. Rahul started moving her wet hair from her face.

Rahul: Sach mein, towel mein tu bahut sexy lag rahi hai, aur tere baal, haye haye. I love you Muskaan.

Muskaan moved her hand up to his hair and ruffled it a little so the wetness comes out. She smiled and said:

Muskaan: I love you too.

He got off the bed and Muskaan got up also.

Rahul: Okay toh main chalun?

Muskaan: Uhmm ek minute.

She grabbed her shopping bags and looked for his shirt.

Muskaan: Yeh lo, yeh shirt tum party main pehna please.

Rahul: Haan ab toh shirt change karna parega.

Muskaan: Sorry...

Rahul: Its okay, waise bahut maza aaya. Thanks for the shirt.

He smiled and kissed muskaans forehead.

Rahul: Party mein milte hain okay? And you look really sexy.

Rahul gave her a wink and left the room and Muskaan smiled to herself. Muskaan got dressed, and soon Anjali and Ridhima were back also.

Ridhima: Muskaan, bed ko tune kya kiya? Itna geela kyun hai?

Muskaan quickly thought of a lie.

Muskaan: Uhh woh.. maine geela towel rakh liya tha.. sorry.

Ridhima: Towel? Lekin pura bed geela hain, ek towel se itna geela kaise ho sakta hai?

Muskaan: Ek nahin... doh towels maine apne baal bhi wash kiye na.. isiliye..

Ridhima still looked confused but let the matter go.

Precap: Muskaan gets drunk in the party.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy Hope you all like the update.
please do leave comments
Take care
Namrata
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!

AMAZING update Namrata! 👏... Actually no... AMAZING FF 😆... Read it all a little while back but couldn't be bothered commenting then (sorry!)... Seriously... Mindblowing!
Really needed my daily dose of RM... So thanks 😛... Loved all the RM scenes... SO cute!
Update soon! 😊
Take Care
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Posted: 16 years ago

wonderful part!!

can't wait for your next update!!
Namrata_12 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thankss Radhika!
-----> Keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: N786

Hi!


AMAZING update Namrata! 👏... Actually no... AMAZING FF 😆... Read it all a little while back but couldn't be bothered commenting then (sorry!)... Seriously... Mindblowing!
Really needed my daily dose of RM... So thanks 😛... Loved all the RM scenes... SO cute!
Update soon! 😊
Take Care

Nayabb!!
Thankk uu soo much for the comment!
lol thats okay atleast you commented and now keep doing so okay??
Yeahh we all need our Rm dose since we dont get that on TV anymore.. oh well..
Thanks once again!
Keep reading and comenting
Take care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lovebapu18

wonderful part!!

can't wait for your next update!!

Thankss a lot!
Keep reading and commenting
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nam first of soo sorry for late comment...was very busy during weekdays...coming to ur update, it was simply AWESOME..totally FABULOUS....lovedall RM scene...specially the towel and bed scene..they soo cute...once agian it was totallly AMAZING!!!!!👏 please continue soon..dying to read more...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul

hey nam first of soo sorry for late comment...was very busy during weekdays...coming to ur update, it was simply AWESOME..totally FABULOUS....lovedall RM scene...specially the towel and bed scene..they soo cute...once agian it was totallly AMAZING!!!!!👏 please continue soon..dying to read more...

Aww dipzzy!
Thankk u!!!!!
Its okay i understand dont worry, better late than never 😊
Keep readingg
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy Friedns,
Keep commentingg, loving all of them..
Next part will be up soon
Take care,
Namrata
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