~RM FF~ ~ Mujhse Dosti Karoge?~Upd-Page 73! 05/10 - Page 40

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_mahima

Heyy Namu..

i think i missed to comment on some parts..
i will catch up with that and update my comments soon!!
sory for the delay!!

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Heyy Mahima!
Thankss for posting the comment..
Its okay wil be waiting for your comment when you are done reading
Enjoy the parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy peeepss please doo comment yaar.. waiting for them..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 28:

Muskaan's diary:

My first meeting with Rahul:

College.... my first day in college I saw him and that was the time I knew that hes the guy for me, but I never had the guts to go up and talk to him. But he made my life easier when he came and spoke to me for the very first time. It was a very funny meeting actually we both felt very awkward.. why?? Did he feel the same thing for me? Haha no Muskaan no way. We didn't have anything to say but still the minute he walked away I smiled to myself for no reason. Then in class... the minute i stepped in a noticed him staring at me as if he landed in dreamland.. pleasee i hate it when people staree.. hahaa the funniest thing was when Atul and Armaan had to scream in his ears for him to come out of dreamland!

Armaans party:

Ughhh.... that's what I thought when Armaan had called me for inviting me to his party. I really didn't want to go. But Anjali and Ridhima were going but that wasn't the reason I went for. Rahul.... I knew he would be there.... and if I wouldn't have gone I wouldn't have been able to be paired up with him in that game and then talk to him. Godd hes just so cute! We sat outside in the garden, and the way he looked at me, it felt like I was in heaven. Muskaan snap out of it, you are acting to girly now, since when did you think about guys and how cute they look? That's so not you. But still he did look pretty cute. Okay anyways then just to show my real side I got "mad" at him and left from there.... I hated myself for that, wonder what he thought of me. I wanted to know about him as well.... but for the first time in my life I felt shy in front of someone and I didn't want to say anything. Hah well lets see in college tomorrow, god I cant wait to go to college tomorrow and see him again! WAIT WHAT? I cant wait to go to college? Shut up Muskaan, you can wait to go to college okay? =)

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Rahul felt wrong for reading this... this diary showed a complete new side of Muskaan, he always thought that muskaan wasnt the girly type but the truth was that she never showed it.. even though it was a part of her. He thought of closing it up, keeping it back where it was and leaving. But then he wanted to know more about this side of Muskaan, about her feelings for him. Rahul flipped through some of the pages and saw all the events written in there which she was there with him. How come Muskaan never told me about this diary? He thought. He heard a noise from the bathroom, so he quickly took the diary with him and left from there. He went in his room and jumped on the bed under his blanket and read further.

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My "date" with Rahul:

Its really not a date but theres no harm in thinking that it is one right? So ofcourse I have to be the idiot who pretended that I was really not interested in going, but a sweetheart like Rahul forced me to go with him =) Ahhhhh just thinking about the day brings a smile to my face. First the coffee... wasn't that bad but Pani Puri is sooo much better. Hes a darling to take me to eat Pani Puri, and gosh how can Pani Puri ever be yummier (if that's a word.) I never even thought that I would stand with Rahul eating my favorite food, the day couldn't get any better could it? Oh yes it could, in fact it did, it rained! YESSS I felt like I was in heaven once again. I enjoyed the rain so much. I have been in the rain so many times before but it never felt like this before. Was it because of him? HAH how can he change my view about the weather? Nonsense. Anywayssss, then guess what I finally had the guts to talk to him, I even invited him in the house. First it felt like I couldn't eat anything else after all that pani puri but then Rahul made THE most delicious hot chocolate, and come on how could I have said no to that? It was YUUMMMMYYY!!!! ACHOOO yes I became sick! Im running out of words so im just going to use the word darling again. Darling Rahul took care of me, hes just soo sweet! I sneezed once and he ran in the kitchen to get medicine and made the hot chocolate. I should sneeze more often so I can get that hot chocolate. So from today me and Rahul are officially friends..... YIPEEE!!!! Atleast we are friends now...wonder when the next part will come...

I love you:

Yepp the next part has come!
O.....M.....G..... Rahul.. he said I love you to ME today! Yess ME! Goshhhhhh im soo happyyy eeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! I remember each and every word of our conversation that day so it was like this:

First he called me because he was getting bored, we went out for a walk and I was soo waiting for that moment for him to tell me that he loves me. But I barely expected that. For the fun of it I played a game with him, ughh he felt so awkward but he kissed mee on the cheek during the game =) first good point. But since he felt so awkward in the game I dint even want to think how awkward he would feel if he would actually tell me. Then we went to his house. "Agar hum sirf dost na hote toh?" that's what he said. The moment just came so suddenly, he just walked close and closer till I bumped into the wall. " I love you Muskaan" I couldn't think, couldn't breathe, couldn't talk. I couldn't say I love you Rahul back as much as I wanted to. But I finally said it. "I love you too Rahul" Then came the kiss. It all seems like a movie, first the guy says I love you, then the girl being all shy, then kissing, how did my world all of a sudden just became so perfect? My mind just stopped working, I don't even know if this is right or wrong.. what should I do? Hmph... i think im complete now, I think I found the right guy.... but then again... would he hurt me? Is this some type of joke? What if its those typical bets that happen in movies where a couple of guys bet and say that i can get that girl in no time, what if its a bet for rahul to make me fall in love with him and then he wins the bet and as usual the girl is left heartbroken? Am i thinking way too much right now?? Grrrr What is it? please let all this be real, I don't want to be hurt....

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Rahul was just about to turn the page when..... KNOCK KNOCK. He quickly hid the pillow under his pillow and went to see whos at the door. It was Muskaan. She was crying. She hugged Rahul really tight.

Rahul: Muskaan?? Kya hua??

Muskaan didn't let go of him.

Rahul: Heyy,baby.... bata na?

She finally let go but still held Rahul really right by his arms.

Muskaan: Rahul... mera diary gum ho gaya hai.. pata nahin kahan hai. Maine pure room mein dekha hai lekin mil nahin raha hai. Main kya karun ab?

She cried more and hugged him again.

Rahul felt guilty for taking it, if he would tell her he would make her even more mad but he couldn't hide the fact either.

Rahul: Mere pass hai.

Muskaan: Kya?

She broke away from the hug.

Rahul: Dekh please please please naraz mat ho.

Muskaan: tune sab kuch par liya?

Rahul: Sab nahin... bas thoda sa hi....

Muskaan started to cry even more.

Rahul: Im sorryyyy please don't cry..

Rahul felt like he was going to cry himself seeing her.

Rahul: Dekh tu andar aa, pani pi, shant ho ja, aur rona band kar okay?

She nodded her head and went inside. She sat on the bed and he got her a glass of water. Her crying soon stopped and Rahul went and sat beside her.

Muskaan: Kahan hai meri diary?

Rahul took it out from under his pillow. She got a smile on her face when she held it in her hands.

Muskaan: Tujhe pata hai ki main isse kitna dhund rahi thi? Pata nahin kya ho jata agar yeh diary tere pas na hota toh.

Rahul: Toh tu ghussa nahin hai ki diary mere pas thi?

Muskaan: Whatever Rahul.... tune mera mood bahut khab kar liya ab bas.... Mein tere waja se kyun apna mood kharab karun? But please don't ever joke like that with me again.

Rahul: Never I promise. Waise....

Muskaan: Eyy mere diary keh bare main kuch mat puchna, jab mein isme likhti hun na, tab main bilkul ek bachi ke tara behave kar ti hoon, isiliye main kissi koh bhi mera diary nahin parne dehti, kyunki agar woh mera diary parengi toh sab mere uppar hassenge. I bet tu bhi has raha hoga.

Rahul: Actually no, main toh bas tere hi bare main soch raha tha jab main par raha tha, tere baatein kafi cute thi. Lekin tu toh bahut chuphi rustam nikli, pehle kabhi bataya nahin ki tu mujhse itna pyaar karti hai, aur is diary ke bare mein bhi kabhi nahin bataya.

Muskaan: Haan kyunki main apni feelings kissi ko nahin bata ti main sirf apne diary meh likthi hoon.

Rahul: Lekin mere saath toh share kar sakti hai na?

Muskaan: Maine kaha na kissi ke saath nahin.

Rahul: Toh mein aur paru?

Muskaan: No ways, mein apna diary apne room main lekar ja rahi hoon.

Rahul: No no no no no, pleaseee parne de na.

Muskaan: Rahul...

Rahul: Pleasee??

Rahul was asking so lovingly that she couldn't resist saying no.

Muskaan: Okay fine.

Rahul: Yes!

They both sat close on the bed and started reading the diary.

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Valentines Day:

This day.... Was simply the BEST! Today I went for a real date with Rahul. It all started off when he came home to pick me up, I still wasn't ready but in his voice you could tell that he was so desperate to see me! He looked damnnn hot in the red shirt. Heheeheh. Then we went for a drive, we went for atleast 2 hours but our talks never finished, both of us actually didn't even feel like going to the party but we had to because of our friends. Then came the party, which was A LOT of fun! First it was only me and him on the terrace alone. It was like dreamland. The sweetest thing was when I didn't want to sit down because my dress would get ready, so he made me sit on his lap. Awwww!!!

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Rahul: You never told me that I looked hot in red, or that you liked it when you sat on my lap.

Muskaan: Sab kuch batana zaroori hai?

Rahul: Nahin lekin agar batati toh phir main aur zyaada red shirts pehnta aur phir....

He pulled Muskaan and made him sit on his lap.

Rahul: Ab theek hai?

Muskaan: Perfect.

They both smiled and Muskaan leaned back and rested her head on his chest and they continued to read.

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Almost 12.... I was so waiting to give Rahul my gift, but what did I know that he planned something way bigger than my small little gift? He took me to his house and I was the fool who was mad at him that he took me from the party when I was enjoying myself. We went to his house and the minute he opened the door my voice was gone, I was shaken by all the balloons that were there. And then that HUGE heart that was painted on the floor with RM in it. He whispered: Happy Valentines Day. i really didn't know what to say to him, how to thank him, I felt bad for only giving him a tiny photoframe with our ugly picture in it. Then one more surprise..... He told me to close my eyes and he came and put a chain on my neck which had R pendant on it and he bought himself a M god how can anyone even think of that?? Im never going to take that necklace off my neck. Then I gave him my gift even though I didn't want to anymore, I had put our first picture but we made my gift even better, at that time he brought his camera and took a picture with me. He put the camera on timer and came and kissed me on the cheek with me in schock and that's how the picture came out. No matter how much I hated that picture I have to admit that was our cutest picture ever. The night just didn't seem to get over, he had planned way too many surprises for me. After all that we went outside in his garden and OMG there was SUCH a beautiful hammock, it was just soo nice, and it was even nicer when me and Rahul cuddled together and made the night just perfect. I fell asleep there and so Rahul carried me and put me in the room. I was awake when he carried me but I pretended that I was still sleeping because I didn't want to get out of his arms. And so I spend the night in Rahul's house. WOW what a valentines day.... simply the BEST! Loveeee uuuu Rahull!!!!!

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Rahul: I love you too Muskaan.

Muskaan had fallen asleep on his chest. Rahul couldn't help but staring at her, he noticed that what she wrote was right, she still had the necklace on with the R on it. Shes just as cute as her writing in her diary he thought. Rahul moved her on the bed and put a blanket on her, just as he put it she cuddled into it and pulled the blanket closer to her and smiled. Rahul smiled too.

Rahul: Im sure shes still awake.. kitni bari actress hai yaar. He muttered to himself.
He took another blanket from the closet and the pillow from the bed and went to sleep on the floor.
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Heyy my fellow Rm FF readers! 😃
Wow my part came out to be wayy longer than it should have and please let the your comments be as long!
Last time when i updated i got barely any comments please let that not be this time, do comment i really appriciate it. 😊
Hope you like the parttt!
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~Namrata~
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOWWWWWWW
That was AWESOME!!!
Loved all the things.
specially that valentine one!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part!!
will be waiting for your next update!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww Nami fainay u Update it Yaar i was soo waiting for ur update =)
that ws Super Besst 👍🏼 Thanks for such a long part i was soo enjoiyng reading it😳😳
Plz hun do continue soon don't make us wait soo long 😳
Thank you!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwww it was tooo toooo tooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved each bit of it!!!!!!!! it was totallly AWESOME, GREAT MIND BLOWING PART!!!!!!!!!!!!👏
continue soon love to read more!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
THIS PART IS SOO cuteeeeeeeeeee....mind blowing....like omg...
i am in love with RM even more...rahul is chooooo chweeet...and muski is adorable...red shirt=hotness, valentines day= magical hammock, carrying her to the bed=classic, sleeping on teh floor=lovingly respectable...thanks for the update...and please contd soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

WOWWWWWWW

That was AWESOME!!!
Loved all the things.
specially that valentine one!!!!

Radhikaa!!! How are you??
Long timee havent chatted!
Thankss for commenting, as usual u were the first one!
Hehehe thankkss a lot!
Keep reading!
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