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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

nice part ...........!!!!

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Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Updateee coming upp!!!

Guyss Im reallyy sorry for the delay! I just didnt have time to update, but now i have this whole week off, so hopefully i can update more frequently!
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Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 20:

Next morning, Rahul got up before Muskaan. He went in his room just to check if Muskaan was fine. She was sound asleep; he didn't want to disturb her, so he took his clothes and went for his shower. After he came out she was still sleeping. His phone started to ring, and his phone was in his room where Muskaan was sleeping. He ran to the room, but it was too late, the phone stopped. And because of the ring, Muskaan got up.

Muskaan: Good morning Rahul.

Rahul was shocked, he thought that Muskaan would start getting worried that why she was at his house, he never expected her to say this.

Rahul: G...goo...Good morning.

Muskaan: Rahul.... Tum mere liye ek cup coffee bana sakte ho?? Pleaseeee.

Rahul: Yea sure, tum jaake fresh hojao, main abhi banake lata hoon.

Muskaan: Thanks jaan.

She got up and went in the bathroom. And Rahul went in the kitchen to make coffee for both of them. When Muskaan came out, Rahul had already made the coffe and a sandwich for her to eat. He was sitting on a sofa waiting for her.

Muskaan went and sat beside him.

Muskaan: Mmmmm yummy, coffee aur sandwich dono hi bahut tasty hain, thanks Rahul, pata hai mujhe kitni bhook lagi hain.

Rahu: Haan woh toh dikhi raha hai.

Rahul could see Muskaan fidgeting with her hair, because it kept coming in her face. He took the strand of her hair and put it behind her ear.

Muskaan: Rahul, I think mujhe abhi chalna chahiye.

Rahul: Kyun? Tum abhi abhi toh uthi ho, thodi der ke liye behto na.

Muskaan: Nahin mujhe jaana hoga, mere paas dusre kapre bhi nahin hai, aur humhe kal college bhi jaana hai.

Rahul: Thodi der? Pleaseee??

Muskaan: Theek hai, lekin sirf thodi der ke liye.

She layed down on the sofa and rested her head on Rahuls leg.

Rahul: Muskaan, ek baat puchun? He was caressing her hair now.

Muskaan: hmm puch.

Rahul: Mujhe laga tha ki tu udaas ho jayegi jab tujhe pata chalega ki tu sari raat yahan pe thi, aur yahin pe sogayi. Lekin aisa toh kuch bhi nahin hua.

Muskaan: I trust you Rahul, mujhe pata hai ki tu mere saat kabhi kuch ghalat kar hi nahin sakta, aur kal raat mere zindagi ka sabse special Valentines raha hai, all thanks to you. Toh mujhe bura kyun lage ga? Waise mujhe toh badi achi neend ayi, sorry ki tumhe mere waja se sofa pe sona para.

Rahul: Yeh mere zindagi ka bhi sabse special valentines tha, tum joh thi mere saath, waise tumhare liye sofa pe to kya, zameen pe bhi sone ke liye tayar hoon.

Muskaan: Acha?? Toh soja, tujhe aaj raat ko bhi bed nahin milne wala, main yahin pe songi. Chalega na?

Rahul: Haan chalega.

Muskaan: Oye chad, main mazak kar rahi hoon, main abhi ghar ja rahi hoon.

Now she got up and sat straight.

Rahul: Muskaan!! Chod na' college jaakar kya karna hai?

Muskaan: Shahid tujhe pata nahin, ki main Mumbai sirf isiliye ayi hun taaki mein apna graduation khatam kar sagun, isiliye mujhe college jaana hoga. Toh main abhi ja rahi hoon, phone karungi theek hai?

Rahul: Fine' theek hai..

Muskaan smiled: love u

She gave him a kiss on the cheek and got up and started to walk by the door. She opened the door and went outside. Rahul was by the door, just looking at her not closing the door.

Muskaan:Oye tu darwaza band bhi karega ya nahin?

Rahul: Nahin, Muskaan jaana zaroori hai?

Muskaan: Tu itna udaas kyun ho raha hai? Dekh Maine kal se apne kapre change nahin ki hai, mere baal dekh, kitni jangli lag rahi hoon, hum kal college mein mil rahe hai na..

Rahul: Mujhe koi fark nahin parta agar tu jangli dekhe.

Muskaan: Rahul tu naa'

Now this old woman opposite rahuls apartment opened the door.

Lady: Tum dono chup nahin reh sakte? Yeh ladki ko jaane deh, aur please dum dono chup hojao, kabse darwaze par baatein kar rahe ho, kabhi socha hai ki tumhare samne bhi koi rehta hai. Agar itna hi baat karna hai phir kahin aur jaake baat karo. Please!

She banged the door shut.

Rahul: Abhi tum mere baat samaj gayi? Agar tum yahan pe nahin hoti ho, toh sara time is budiya ka awaz suna parta hai.

Muskaan laughed: Rahul, phir tum is budiya ka awaz kuch der aur suno, aur hum kal mil rahe hain.

She started to run down the stairs, and Rahul chased behind her. Finally he caught up with her and held her arm, but she lost balance and slipped down the next set of stairs. Since Rahul was holding her arm, both of them went rolling down the stairs and Rahul landed on top of Muskaan. Both of them were lost into each others eyes until another old man came.

Man: Arrey, tum dono theek toh ho?

Rahul (thinking): Abhey is budhe ko abhi hi aana tha?

He got up and helped Muskaan get up too.

Rahul: Ji uncle hum theek hai.

Man: Theek hai, agli bar zara sambhal ke, theek hai?

Muskaan: Haan theek hai.

The man left from there. The minute he was gone, Muskaan cracked up laughing.

Rahul: Muskaan, hass mat, its not funny. But he couldn't control his laughter either.

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The next day in college:

Everyone was sitting in the canteen talking:

Armaan: Yaar valentine party mein kitna maza aya haina guys?

Atul: Agree armaan, bahut maza aya, music kitna acha tha na, ek dum first class.

Anjali: Yaa, and the food!!! Was sooo good!

Ridhima: But the best was at 12. This was the best valentines day of my life.

Anjali: Rahul tum kyun jaldi chale gaye the?

Rahul: Wohh'. Mujhe kisiko surprise dena tha.

Ridhima: Surprise? Kis ko?

Armaan: Oye, kahin tune usko bataya toh nahin?

Anjali: Whats going on'.. Rahul' spill it' kisko surprise dena tha?

Rahul: Uhh'. He looked towards Muskaan, but she also had no idea what to say.

Before anyone could say anything, the announcement bell started to ring.

Announcment: All the senior students please come to the main auditorium.

Atul: Abhey ab kya hai, Rahul tum humhe badme batana theek hai?

Rahul: Ya okay'

Muskaan and Rahul were relieved, the announcement saved their life.

They all went to the auditorium and sat down. The principal was on stage and waiting for it to be quiet.

Principal: Good afternoon students, humne aap sab ko yahan pe isiliye bulaya hai kyunki hamare paas tum logo ke liye ek surprise hain.

Rahul and Muskaan exchanged looks, surprise?

Principal: Maine aur sab teachers ne tum sab logon ke liye Maritius jaane ka plan banaya hai. Humare paas sab tickets hai. This trip if your senior trip since the term is soon coming to an end. You all will be going for 2 weeks. Have funn!! The rest of the details you will come to know in class.

Everyone got happy, and there was a lot of talking going on.

Armaan and atul hi-fived each other.

Armaan: Wowwwww Mauritiuss!! Cooooll!! Yaar humara principal bara acha nikla.

Rahul: Yeah dude, and that also 2 whole weeks!

Anjali: Awesomee!!

They all went to class and came to know that they will be leaving after two days. Everyone was really excited to go.

They next day they had a day off so that they can prepare their bags, and be ready on time.

Now everyone was ready and they were at the airport. For the first time Rahul saw Muskaan in jeans, and even Armaan so Ridhima for the first time in jeans. Both of them looked stunning, and that's why Rahul and Armaan couldn't take their eyes off them. All three of the guys were wearing a casual shirt with jeans.

Precap: Loads of fun and masti coming up on the plane!!
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Hope you Enjoy the part!!!
Do commentt!!!😃
~Namrata~
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

I am going off now, so leave ur comments and ill read them when im backk

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great Part!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankss Radhikaa!
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Posted: 16 years ago
HAI! SAVE ME IF I DIE ONE DAY IT'S SOOO GOOOOD!
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Posted: 16 years ago
AWESOME!!...
love the trust Muskaan has in Rahul...
n this trip is so cool....
cant wait to read how that goes!!..
its gonna be so great!..
n the old lady was quite funny...hehe
pls do continue soon!!
-Simran
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh_Deewaanie

HAI! SAVE ME IF I DIE ONE DAY IT'S SOOO GOOOOD!

Thankkkk uuuu!! Btw whats ur name???
Havent seen u comment before. glad that i got another reader!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg123

AWESOME!!...

love the trust Muskaan has in Rahul...
n this trip is so cool....
cant wait to read how that goes!!..
its gonna be so great!..
n the old lady was quite funny...hehe
pls do continue soon!!
-Simran

Thankkksss sooo much simii!!!
Hahha even i thought the old lady would be funny,
i can so imagine rahul getting mad at her:P:P loll
thanks for the comment again!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part!!!!
loved to see musskan's trust on rahul and she more expressive about her love to him...that;s the good part!!!!! loved old lady and that uncle part tooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

yeeeee i m also excited for Mauritius!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

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