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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: divyashaz

HHHEEEEYY Hun FANTASTIC PART👏👏

Muskaan: Hey! She first hesitated but then she also gave him a smell kiss on the cheek.

Now Rahul was taken back at this too, he was thinking " Wow! Muskaan just kissed me! I love this game!"😍

I LOVED THIS GAME TOOO😳😳
DO CONTINUE SOONN HUN

thanksss sooo muchh divyaa!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipi_dipu

finally read last two scenes!!!!!!
LOVED THEM TOTALLLYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AWESOME SCENES AND LOVED THE GAME TOOO:p

thankss for the commnet dipii!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 15:

Rahul opened the door and led Muskaan in.

Muskaan: Wahh Rahul itna mast ghar, aur ab tu mujhe invite kar raha hai? Pehle kyun nahin kiya?

Rahul: Wohh sorry, lekin mere ghar mein kya mast hai? Itna chota joh hai, sirf mein aur mere mom rehte hain lekin woh kuch dinon ke liye dehli gayi hai kuch kaam ke wajah se.

Muskaan: Chota hai toh kya hua? I feel like home here. Mera ghar Patiala mein ekdum aisa hi hai, aur wahan pe bhi sirf mein aur mummy hi rehthe the lekin ab mein yahan Mumbai mein aayi hoon toh woh wahan pe akeli hain.

Rahul: Ohhh, Muskaan tune kabhi notice kiya hai ki hum dono kitne similar hain?

Muskaan: Haan woh toh hai'. Isiliye hum dost hain na?

Rahul: Dost?

Muskaan: Haan.... dost....

Rahul: lekin tune hi toh kaha tha ki agar hum sirf dost nahin hote to?

Muskaan: Uhhh'.Toh??

She was feeling little uncomfortable so she started to step back, and Rahul came closer and closer to her, she kept on going back till she hit the wall. Rahul put both his arms on both sides of her so there was no escape.

Muskaan: Rahul....?

Rahul: Muskaan....

He went closer to her whispering in her ear.

Rahul: I love you Muskaan.

Muskaan: Ra..ra...rahul.... yeh....yehh... tu?

Rahul: Tu mujhse pyaar nahin karti?

He leaned even more forward, they were so close now that both of them could hear each others heart beats.

Rahul: Keh de Muskaan, aaj tu kehde, main aur intezaar nahin kar sakta.

Muskaan: I....love.....you.....too

As muskaan said this, she lowerd her eyes so she wasnt facing him.

Rahul took muskaans face in his hands and made her look into his eyes. He leaned forward and kissed Muskaan on the lips. Muskaan closed her eyes and kissed him back. She started caressing his hair and Rahul put his arm around muskaans waist. Soon they broke away and just looked into each others eyes. They were lost in there.

Rahul: I love you

He gave a kiss on her cheek and turned around and started to walk when Muskaan held his hand.

Muskaan: Ey, tum kahan ja rahe ho? Tumme mera jawaab nahin suna kya?

Rahul: Jawaab?

Muskaan walked to him gave him a kiss on the cheek and said:

Muskaan: I love you too.

She smiled and rested her head by rahuls chest. Rahul wrapped both his arms around Muskaan. Both of them couldn't believe how beautiful this moment had been.
Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 16:

The next day in college:

Muskaan was walking towards class when Rahul pulled her and took her into an empty room.

Muskaan: Rahul, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho??

Rahul: Muskaan, maine tumhe pure 11 ghante tak nahin dekha hain, pata hai main tumhe kitna miss kar raha tha?

Muskaan: Acha? Tum mujhe miss kar rahe the?

Rahul: Aur nahin to kya, tum toh mujhe kabhi miss hi nahin karti, lekin iska matlab yeh toh nahin ki main tumhe miss nahin karta.

Muskaan: Yeh tumhe kisne kaha ki main tumhe miss nahin karti? Main shahid tumhe kuch zyaada hi miss kar rahi hoon. Waise you are wrong, tumne mujhe 11 ghante aur exactly 4 minute ke liye nahin dekha tha. Pure 4 minute, tumhe pata bhi hai 4 minute mein kya ho sakta hai?

Rahul: Wow tum toh mujhse bhi aage nikal gayi yaar, pehle batana chahiya tha na mein raat ko hi tumhare ghar a jaata.

Now he took Muskaan tightly in his arms and hugged her.

Rahul: Ab mein tumhe kahin nahin jaane dunga.

Muskaan: Rahul chodo, class ke liye hum already late ho chuke hain, aur late nahin hona.

Rahul: Kya Muskaan tum ek class miss nahin kar sakti?

Muskaan: Uhmm.... waise miss toh kar sakti hoon... magar....

Rahul: Magar wagar kuch nahin, hum class miss kar rahe hain, aur main tumhe canteen lekar jar raha hoon.

Muskaan: Okay.... As you say.

Both sat down with a cup of coffee.

Muskaan: Rahul.....

Rahul: Hmm...

Muskaan: Yeh sab ek sapna toh nahin hai na joh kuch hi der mein khatam ho jayega?

Rahul: Agar yeh sapna ho jaata toh sach mein main apne aap ko mar deta.

Muskaan: Shhh, maarne ki baat mat karo. No seriously, batao na... yeh sab ek sapne jaisa hi lag raha hai. Kya tum sach mein mujhse pyaar karte ho?

Rahul: Muskaan, tum kabhi soch bhi nahin sakti ki mein tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon. Yeh sawal toh mujhe tumse puchna chahiye, kya tum sach mein mujhse pyaar karti ho?

Muskaan: Rahul.... sach toh yeh hai ki mujhe kabhi tumse pyaar hone laga mujhe pata bhi nahin chala. Joh bhi ridhima kehti thi mujhe hamesha bakwaas lagta tha, hamesha lagta tha ki mein aur tum? No ways! Waise tum mujhse kab se pyaar kar te ho?

Rahul: Jab se maine tumhe pehle bar dekha, jab tum pehli bar is college mein aayi thi, jabse maine tumhe dekha tha mujhe pata tha ki tum sirf mere liye bani ho.

Muskaan: Aur tumne mujhe yeh ab bataya jab ki hum ek dusre ke itne ache dost ban gaye the?

Rahul: Mujhe nahin batana tha kyunki mujhe laga ki agar main tumhe bataon toh phir shahid mein yeh dosti kho na dun.

Muskaan: Rahul lekin....

Rahul: Shhh bas.. ab hum sirf achi achi baatein karenge. Jaise ki valentine party. Ab hum ek couple ke tara Club Aquarius jayenge. Aur yaad rakhna, main tumhe 8 baje pick up karunga theek hai?

Muskaan: 8 baje?

Rahul: haan... kyun? Jaldi hai?

Muskaan: jaldi?? Bahut late hai rahul, main tumhari 8 baje tak intezaar nahin kar sakti!

Rahul: Ohhhhhhhhhh toh yeh baat hai! Chalo mein tumhe 6 baje pick up karke drive par lekar jayunga, dont worry mein is baar ek ghari lekar aayunga.

Muskaan: Perfect! Chalo ab mujhe class ke liye der ho rahi hai, tum chal rahe ho ya nahin?

Rahul: Nopes, mujhe class mein nahin jaana.

Muskaan: Jaise tumhari marzi!

She got up from the chair, but from behind him Rahul pulled her hand and made her sit in his lap.

Rahul: Aise kaise ja rahi ho?

Muskaan: Kyun? Kya hua?

Rahul: Tum kuch bhul nahin rahi ho?

Muskaan: Nahin toh... kya?

Rahul: Mera kiss?

Muskaan: No ways, mujhe jaana hai.

Rahul: Ek kiss, please.

Muskaan gave him a quick kiss on the cheek and got up in a hurry. Rahul wasn't satisfied he got up grabbed her by the waist and turned her around.

Muskaan:Rahul!? Chodo mujhe, koi dekh lega.

Rahul: Yahan pe koi nahin hai, sirf mein aur tum.

Muskaan: Chodo naaa

Rahul leaned forward gave her a kiss on the cheek.

Rahul: Love you jaan.

Muskaan: love you too.

Muskaan blushed and slowely walked away.

Edited by Namrata_12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Heyy Namu!!!😛

yay!! me first!! lolz ;)
that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! yayy!! they confessed!! totally loved it!! it was soo sweet and cute!!!!! awww! lol....great part!!
waiting for valentines day!!! :D
plz cont soon!

<3333333
Mahima




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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgluver01

Heyy Namu!!!😛

yay!! me first!! lolz ;)
that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! yayy!! they confessed!! totally loved it!! it was soo sweet and cute!!!!! awww! lol....great part!!
waiting for valentines day!!! :D
plz cont soon!

<3333333
Mahima




heyy thanksss sooo much mahima!! yupp u are the first one to comment!
thankss once again!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankss!!
I hope it made ur day better!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Namrata_12

Thankss!!
I hope it made ur day better!

it really did and thank you so much for just ypdating for me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing!!!! fabulousss!!! mind blowinggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!great!!!! awesomeee
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dipi_dipu

amazing!!!! fabulousss!!! mind blowinggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!great!!!! awesomeee

Thank u Thank u Thank u Thank u!!!!!!!!!😃😃

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