Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Simply awsome.

The start was too good. It was like naina ka jadooo Raj par chal gaya samjho.
I think Raj is somewhere indirectly related to the past life of naina. It is very strange even vishal is feeling guilty for what he had done to her though it is not shown who this vishal is.
i only wish naina does not loose bharos a from Raj, coz he is the on sahara for her right now.
Please see to it that both raj and naina are not separated warna bahut gadbad ho jayegi na.
kan't wait, please update and the earliest.
bye
jyothi
Edited by jyothilakshmi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

WOW!!!!! Thats the word 4 this part. I was reading it intensely. Donno y but it seemed very real. Fantastic UD. Luved the scene when Raj had actually picked that person up holding his neck. Truely Heroic. But I wonder wat he has done to feel guilty. Now thats the Raaz n w8ing 4 that to b revealed.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
update was superb. very beautiful.😃
naina ko raj par bharosa hona chaie😲 update soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Rajveer hairani se Naina ko dekh raha tha aur usse apni baahon mein uthakar bench par sula diya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiii!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Usne aaj tak ish chhote se shaher mein itni khubsurat ladki nahi dekhi thi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He is so caring!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Usne apne upar se shawl nikal kar Naina ko acchi tarah se cover kiya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh jaan kar ke yeh Ratan Singh ki beti Naina hai Rajveer chauk gaya!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲Magar usne Vishal ke haatho kya karwaya tha??😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Toh Naina ki shaadi kisi kameene Vikram Rai Singh se fix huyi thi aur isliye Naina shaadi se pehle bhaag aayi!!!!

Bechari Naina!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Kitna darri huyi hai!!!! Itne saare logo ko dekh kar simat kar baithi huyi rone lagi aur sabko darte huye dekh rahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Rajveer felt that Naina bahut bhayanak cheez dekh kar bhaagi hai jiski wajah se she is still scared!!!!!

Naina ko uski baaton mein apnapan laga aur laga ke woh accha hai aur uski help kar sakta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Uski ankhon mein ek chamak thi jisse dekh kar Naina ko laga ki woh ankhen kabhi usse dhoka nahi de sakti!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ka jadoo Rajveer par chal gaya!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is looking at her carefully thinking that she is beautiful and he could see his relfection in her eyes!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

When Naina choked while drinking the water and Raj comforted her!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How caring!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Naina ko bhi uski awaz mein apnepan ki jhalak mili!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina was shocked to see Vishal aur sochne lagi kahi woh dosto ki talaash mein aakar dushmaano ke haathon toh nahi aa gayi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Vishal also became nervous!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Yeh Vishal hai kaun aur uska Naina ke saath kya connection hai!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Vishal seems to do everything at Rajveer's bidding!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajveer understood everything and promised Naina to protect her as long as he lives!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But what is he feeling guilty for??😔 😔 😔 😔

There is no one in Naina's family alive now!!! Thats so sad!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Uska ish duniya mein ab koi nahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Usne Naina ke saath jo kiya gusse mein kiya aur anjaane mein kiya and now feels it is his duty to protect her!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔I think he is indirectly related to the past life of Naina!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Woh usse kehta hai ke uske saath uske ghar chale!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Woh log aa gaye aur Naina ka haath pakda huya hai but Rajveer is standing calmly!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Rajveer offered his hand to Naina and she also held it tightly showing her fear as well as her trust on him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajveer is still staring into Naina's eyes and seeing her trust on him in them and Naina bhi uski ankhon mein apne liye bahut kuch khas mehsoos kar rahi thi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Kya baat hai!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kitne aram se ush admi ka gala pakad kar Rajveer ne usse latka diya!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Wow!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Truly heroice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Rajveer pulled Naina towards him aur woh aakar Rajveer ke seene se lag gayi aur usne uski ankhon mein dekha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaaiiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Mujhe Rajveer ka Aishwariya Rai aur Abhishek Bachhan wala dialogue bahut accha laga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Yeh picche se jis admi ne kaha yehi Vikram hai Naina ka so called fiance!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

I knew this was Rajveer!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Uske alawa aur koi ho hi nahi sakta jo Naina ka aise khayal rakhe!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Rajveer ka naam sunke achanak Naina chauki kyun??😲 😲 😲 😲

Rajveer now felt Naina's grip getting loose and fear of him and a doubt ke woh jisse dost samaj raha hai kya woh sahi mein uska dost hai!!!!!

I wish Naina does not lose her trust in Rajveer kyunki ab wahi uska ek lauta sahara hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Rajveer aur Naina alag nahi hona chahiye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This seems like a royal family war kind of thing!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Very interesting!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
really nice UD yeh to love story shuru hone se pehle hi end dikh raha hai
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
wow fascinating...........sounds like a very feudal setup with rival zamindars and powerplays and a rural background and every thing....definitely differant from the usual RN ff and highly readable i must say
once again i have to commend your skill in describing things especially naina's expressions and body language as well as that of raj (hah, i knew it would be him!) and others
thanx so much for the pm and i hope we can expect the next part sooon cause i can't wait to read why the tension b/w the families is there and whether naina will still trust him (course she will....after all this is raj but still...)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!the ud was awesome.....yehhhhh!!!vo insaaan rajveer hi tha😊....aur story bilkul hi different hai yaaar...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
that was great fic
really interesting
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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FANTASTIC update....
I was completely engrosed in the story....
i am waiting to know what is that raj has done for which he is feeling so guilty...
i hope that naina will trust raj and not misunderstand him.....
please update soon...waiting eagerly to read more
and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Fabulous update !!! simply Gr8........

no word !!! it's sooo interesting plot.....finally Rajveers identity is revieled...but y Raj is feeling guilty n y Naina scared after hearing Rajveer's name ? what the mistry behind all this mess ? plzzzzzzzzz update soon to clear out everything....plzzzzzzzz.m waiting !!!

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