Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152

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tina_1234

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1071

amazing...but plz post d next part soon....nd jaldi jaldi raj nd nanin ko milaoo...:) :)

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ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1072

the up is ver good but eh aanat main kya hue n ko goli laag gae oh my god plz n ko baccha leena aur waise hi na hi olo then also u will safe her bcoz she is the heroine of the story

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1073

Wow yaar Ghaseeta Prasad!!! kya naam rakha dadi ne (ya mein kahoon priya ne) aur unka explaination to aur bhi dilchasp thi. Bechara Arjun, yeh do mele me bichde hua bhaiyyon ke beech phasa…😆

Arjun:- "kyoun ki Hanumaan jee hamare desh k sab se pahle police commissioner the...!!!"

Ghaseeta prasad:-"sach sir jee...??? tabhi Raam jee ne unhe Seeta mata ki kidnapping ka case hal karne k liye diya tha...!!! lekin sir jee voh kis department me the...???"

Arjun:- "crime branch me...!!! agar dushra sawal kiya na...toh tujhe yahin goli maar dunga...samjah...!!!" 🤣 ek aur sixer, hamare Arjun saab ke tarah se 👏

Rajveer ne ek halki si smile di...hala ki adi ko us mushkurahat me ek dard ka ehsaas hua...!!!.....awww raj! tum aise kyon kar rahe ho? Bas naina se I Love You kehdo, poore IF tumhare saath hai! 😳 Ab dekho na, tumne usse shimla jane ke liye majboor kiya aur bechari ko goli lagi 😡.

Btw priya, agar next episode mein kuch acchi si romance nahin hai to next goli tumhe lagegi, understand? 😆 Thanx for the pm, aur us idiot raj ko samjhana ki naina ki jagah uske saath hai

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Dhara Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1074

Happy Birthday ' Tere Naina "...!!!!

Congrats Priya for the completion of 1 yr. of this fic...!!!!

The update was fantastic...!!!!

Ghaseeta Prasad ka naam and story isd interesting...!!!!

So both accept that they love each other toh fir har hero ki tarah uske dimaag me bhi yehi drama ke you have to go away from me...!!!!😕😕😕

Ab kaise bhejega door...???? Sharafat se ghar me rakha hota toh goli nahi lagti naa....??? Naa koi station aata naa kisiko goli lagti...!!!!

Now you better update fast...Naina ko bullet lagi hai...uska operation bhi toh jaldi karna padega...!!!!

And I don't understand why you writers cannot understand a simple thing like keeping written updates in mail or PM box...????

Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1075

Happy Anniversary ! 🤗 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 and may this be just a beginning of a long and successful series of RN ffs

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1076

A very happy bday 2 Tere Naina....May this fic continues 2 run brilliantly!

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1077

Hi Priya!

First of congrats to Tere Naina and u fr completing one year. 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Ab atey hai update pe! it was fantastic!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ghaseeta Prasad se hi shubharambh kia jaye to kesa rahega. Ek to naam hi itna unique hai- tumhe ye ideas kaha se atey hai yar? they are 2 gud! Aur jab ek baar iska muh khula, to bas band hone ka naam hi nahi leta hai... Achi kisma t hai uski k arjun singh ne usey uski money saving scheme k liye ghaseet ghaseet k nahi mara!

Aur Hanuman ji wala logic was excellent! Crime branch officer...🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Ab atey hai humare main characters Raj aur Naina pe....ye kya kia tumne Priya? Achchi khasi romantic story chal rahi thi....Fir beech me Raj ne break kyu laga dia? Naina ne to bade pyar se usko kiss kia, I love u bola, aur ye mahashay sir ghuma k chal diye? honestly speaking mujhe Raj k reaction pe hasi a rahi hai. Magar sach me, kuch zyada gadbad hogi...tabhi to vo Naina se apne pyar ka izhar nahi kar paya 😭

Aur ye smoke karna galat baat hai...usko bolo cigrette phek de...usse tension thodi na khatam hogi. Adi is such asweet heart, uski har baat bina kahe samajhti hai. Aur uske sath aisa kya hua hai jisse Raj itna darr gaya k Naina k liye apni feelings tak accept nahi kar pa raha? Zaroor isme us gadhe Vikram aur Gaurav ka koi hath hoga.

Adi ne sahi kaha Raj ko apne dil ki baat sunni chahiye..kyuki vahi usey sahi rasta dikhayega! She is a sweet sis!😊

Aur Naina to khush bhi hai aur confused bhi. par Adi ne ussey wada liya na k wo hamesha Raj ka sath degi... bas ab jaldi se ye dono sath a jaye.

aur ye itna purana gana tumhe mila kaha se? i just love this song! i wasnt even sure if many people knew this one. its just fabolous! gr8 choice dear!👏

Raj ko kya sach me lagta hai k Naina ussey door rehkar khush ya mahfus reh sakti hai? ye baat to bilkul ulti hi nikli. Last scene was simply 2 good Priya. Padhte padhte hi mere hosh udd gaye k ye achanak hua kya? UD k starting me to sab fir bhi thik tha, end atey atey Naina ko goli mar di! ye vikram nahi sudhrega. Aur Raj to react hi nahi kar paya...how terrible.ab na Naina ko jaldi se thik kar dena, ok. ab to vikram ki band bajegi, haha.

atleast ab Raj aur Naina alag to nahi honge(i hope so)...dard mebhi Naina k chehre pe muskurahat thi...Raj k kareeb hone ka ehsaas uske dard se kahi zada bada tha...aur ise tumne itni achi tarah se likha, k mene har scene ko mehsus kia!

U know tumhari ek ek ud mai kam se kam 3 bar padhti hu(no kidding)

ab isi tarah is fic ko jladi se ud kar do

beautiful part👏 ⭐️

cont d gr8 work asap

love

Sur

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1078

Hi priya...

How are you??? Fabulous update dear. Mazaa aa gaya. Par ye kya, Naina ke confession ke baad Rajveer ne jawab nahi diya. Mujhe laga ha ki wo kuch toh kahega. Par wo toh khamosh ho gaya.

Aditi apne bhai ki har aat bina kahe samajh jaati hai. Usne apne bhai se kaha ki use apni behen ki jidd puri karni padegi. Aur usne Naina se Rajveer ka saath dene ka wada bhi le liya. How sweet!!!

Par Rajveer ne Naina ko Shimla bhejne ka mann bana liya hai. Magar kyun. Naina ne aap aur I trust you kehkar kina kuch keh diya. Kitne kam shabdon me kitni gehri baat keh gayi. Par Adi ke saath aisa kya hua hai jiski wajah se Raj darta hai aur nahi chahta ki Naina ke saath waisa kuch ho? Jaldi se confusion dur karo.

Also, jab Naina dagmagai, tabhi mai samajh gayi ki kuch gadbad hai. Usko gli lagi hai. Mgar ye sach hai ya sapna. Please Naina kokuch nahi hona chahiye. Jaldi update karo. Mujhse aur bardash nahi ho raha.

Once again, a fabulous update. And congratulations for completing a year. And a very HAPPY MakarSankranti to you too.

Cont soon.

Love
Guglu

Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago

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Nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1079

CONGRATULATIONS on completing 1 year. Tere Naina is now 1 year old. 🥳

Superb update👏

The starting was very funny. Ghaseeta prasad ka naam kaise pada was very hilarious. 😆Aur Hanuman was the first police Commissioner. OMG where do you come up with ideas like this. I rolled with laughter while reading it.🤣

I had expected Raj to confess his love to naina then and there. But what is the worry that is stopping him to do so. Aditi can easily make out what is going on in Raj's mind..She knows dat Raj loves Naina very much. But it is only her past that is stopping him from accepting her love. But what did happen to Aditi in the past?😲

Naina is happy that she has finally told Raj about her feelings...She is waiting for his answer. When Raj tells her about moving to Shimla...she is shocked and feels hurt. She is unable to understand why he is sending her away ..but she trusts him completely and so does not question.😕

Despite all the safety arengements that Raj had made, Naina gets shot😭...although it appears that he was the target and she was only trying to save him. Hats off to you for wrtiing the whole scene so perfectly....very differnt but Superb.👍🏼

If raj had not thought of sending Naina aways then she would not have been hurt. He needs to understand that Naina is most safe in his house and with him.😭

Please continue soon...waiting most eagerly to read more....

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1080

sorry for late reply.....

dono hi updts k reply saath mein dungi....

pehli updt was awesome.....totally romantic rn wer too good....😳😳

finally u made evry readers new year very beautiful ......too good....😳😊⭐️

aur yeh wala updt toh bilkul hi opposite yet awesome...👏👏

loved d way u showed d situation of two hearts and beautifully expressed der feeling....

loved it....👏

last part breathtaking......amazing...👏👏

aur har baar I say dis aur iss baar bhi dat d dialgues in ur fics always to look frwd too....👏
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