Tere Naina..(RN) Note n pg 152

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1081

awesome update Priya,
Arjun Ghaseeta k saath apne aap ko ghaseet raha hai, jaanta hai varna kaise band bajayega Ankur un dono ki. Hanuman jee ko bahut yaad karna pad raha hai bechare ko.
Bhaut kuch likh diya ek hi update me tum ne. Pyaar. judai, dard, bebasi, trust aur shayad ehsaas bhi itne ki sab ko explain karna mere liye bahut mushkil hoga. Phir bhi mai koshish kar sakti hoon i think.
Raj aur Naina me se Naina to sab samajh rahi hai par Raj ki shayad majboori aise hai ki sab samajhte hue bhi vo sach accept nahi karna chahta hai.
Reason simply yahi hai ki shayad us ko Naina ko kho dene ka dar sata raha hai kahin na kahin. Adi ne bhi utna samjha diya jitna jaroori tha, Naina ki khushi se vo bhi khush hai.
Raj ka is condition me aisa faisla lena justified hai mere view se, kyounki mai jaanti hoon ki is dar me vo Naina ko jeene nahi dena chahta hai ki kal ko vo Raj se alag ho jaayegi.
Shimla bhejne ki saari taiyaari ho gayi hai. Mujhe Raj ki bhi condition soch k bura lag raha hai n so as Naina, dono me se koi bhi doosre se door nahi jaana chahta hai.
Par ye last moment pe kis ne Naina ko goli maar di? I think Vikram k hi aadmi honge, aur kaun ho sakta hai? Raj ka dekha hua day dream sach ho gaya .
I hope ki jaldi hi continue karogi.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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vvdn

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1082

WONDERFUL update.......waise Naina ko bullet lagi usme wondeful waali koi baat toh nahi hai but ye tumhari writing ke liye tha.simply gr8
last part is superb.m sure Raj ka pyaar Naina ko bacha lega par....par iska matlab ye nahi ki aap aaram se update karogi....update fast...kyunki Naina ko jaldi hospital le jana hai..aur agar update mein der hui to use hospital le jane mein bhi der hogi right !😊

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1083

Originally posted by: preet09
hi priya..............really nice part dear ....Hiiii Preet....thanqqqq😃

congratulations 4 completing one year
keep up the good work
really like the conversation between raj and adi
they share a beautiful relationship Glad u like it dear...😃

raj ko naina ko door nhi bhejna chahiye tha but the last part really surprised me.....
plz naina ko kuch nhi hona chahiye ...ab naina ko kuch hoga ya nahi yeh toh next part me pata chalega na...😛

plz update soon
luv preet

Thanxxxxxxxxx a lot Preet...!!!😃

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1084

Originally posted by: vvdn
wow !" tere Naina " ko ek saal pura hua...pata hi nahi chala yaar...congrat's 😃 & this is for u dear 👏

Happy Makar Sankranti.....keep writing.

yupe...Tere naina ko ek saal ho gaya....😛!!! ab mujhe is k nappies bhi change karne nahi padenge😆...kyoun ki yeh thrd toh khatam honewala hai na yaar..😛.!!! aur taliyon k liye Thanxxxxxxxxxx a lot Namita...aur is fic k bich bich me tum jo Galiyon deti thi us k liye double Thanxxxxxxxxx...😃!!! Happy Makar sankrati...dear..tum ne kites udaya kya...???😃

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liquidfantasy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1085

😲 ye tumne kya kiya!!naina ko goli maar di 😭 abhi abhi to becharon ko pyaar hua hai aur tumne alag kar diya...hw can anyone shot shot her when raj is thr..ab us goli chalane wale ki to shamat hai..😆

u better make her alright n fine in coming nxt few updates...n tht better b soon...

n u included a long part abt my sweetu 😳

bt thts nt fair..i m still angry even if u hv included arjun n ghaseeta ram's conversation 😆

thnks bt no thanks for this update 😛 😊
update asap
tc,
mehendi

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-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1086

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HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TERE NAINA 🥳 🥳 🥳

priya thank u so much dear for giving us such a wonderful n lovely fic 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1087

Awesome part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ghaseeta Prasads kismat acchi thi ek flash back ne usse arjun ke hatton se bacha liye,the scene between arjun n ghaseeta is so funny,arjun sirf itna poocha ki kisne uska ye naam rakha aur ghaseeta to poora kahani hi sunadiya usko free main..us fake marriage certificate main bechara ghaseeta ka koi galthi nahi hain wo tho paisa bachane ke ckakkar main tha aur arjun usko galat samjha n usko ek thappad mara ...poor fellow wo wahi pe do round ghum kar phir se wahi jagah par khadha hogaya 😆 😆 😆 😆

TN fic ki wajah se my g.k also improving yaar ab dekho mujhe ye baat bilkul bhi nahi pata ki Lord hanuman is the first police commissioner...aapka bahut bahut shukriya priyajee for this precious info

Raj ko itna sad sad dekh ke mujhe bilkul accha nahi lag raha hain ,jaldi kuch karo na adi is a perfect sis, wo kitni acchi tarah se samaj gayi raj ki uljanon ko n most importantly us ki dil ki baat ko n adi ne bilkul sahi kaha raj se kabhi apni dil ki bhi sun liya kar .....ab tu jaldi clear karde ki adi ke saath actually kya hua

Yaha Naina bhi pareshan hain ki uske confession ke badh bhi raj ne kuch kyun nahin kaha.. naina tu nahin jaanthi hain kya yaha pe priya madam ne izzazat nahi di raj ko apne dil ki baat batanekeliye

Adi n nainas wo vaada wala part is really nice

ye raj dinner kare bina bahar jaate dekh ke mujhe laga kisi kaam pe jara tha shayad lekin ye to naina ko shimla bejhne ke poori tayyariyan karke aaya...ab raj ka bhi koi dosh nahin i can feel his pain from this one line "uska chehra aisa lagraha tha jaisa wo khudh ko kahi chodh aaya ho"naina to statue bangayi when she came to know that raj is sending her away from him. raj tikhi kaha naina ne aap keh kar usko ko ek pal main dur kardiya n i trust u keh kar us ko kareeb bhi le aayi

the lines u have writtenwhen raj n naina r looking at the moon .......pyar koi bol nahin......mujhe bahuttttttttt acche lage.

All r very sad when naina is leaving sasu mom bhi bahut sad hain n i liked it when she said that mera dil kehtha hain ki bahut jaldh tum is ghar main wapas aaogi lekin Tujhe to manna padega yaar naina ko jaane se rokhne ke liye usko goli ka shikar banadiya ..aur koi tarika nahi mila tujhe usse rokne ke liye..tumpe to main is baat ke liye gussa bhi nahi hosakthi kyunki tumne us last scene beautifully describe kiya ...the way naina daud kar raj ke pass aayi n the way she hugged him n raj ki dil ki baat n the way he hugged her tightly.....the whole scene is simply superb ...👏 👏 👏 👏

ye jaroor us vikram hi kaam hoga ,ab raj usse chodega nahin ...mujhe bahut maza aayega us din... ab tu jaldi naina ko tikh kardena ohk

thank u so much yaar for this wonderful part 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Ek baat bata ye LRl ka joke hain kaha.

now i think ye kehna jarrori nahin ki waiting for the next part eagerly

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1088

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Hi Priya Hiiii Suhana...😃

How r u??? f9...wat abt u ???😃

Update was brilliantly written... thanqqqqqqqqq so much Suhana...😃

Arjun Singh us Ghaseeta Prasad ki baatein sunkar kitna dukhi ho gaya hai..Uska naam hi kuch ajeeb hai..😆😆he he he....naam thoda nahi baht ajeeb hai...😆 😆

Usko lag raha hai kahin unka plan sab ke samne khul na jaaye..Hanumanji hi ab uski raksha kar sakte hain.. haan yeh baat toh hai...😆

Why is Raj so confused after the confession??? Even Naina is confused but atleast she is happy dat she proposed him.. is ka jawab toh aage hi pata chalega na...tab tak k liye Sabr kar lo...😃

No distance can keep us apart,
long as youre here in my heart.

Love is the shortest distance between hearts.

I would give up anything just to be with you."

If he is the first thing you think of when you wake up,
the only thing you think of when you're awake,
and the last thing you think of before you go to bed,
then he is really somebody special.

Anything is possible,
when it comes to love.

Everytime I think of you,
I'm sad.
Everytime I hear you're name,
I'm mad.
But everytime I think of how you made me feel,
I'm glad.

Your love as far as I can see
is all I'm ever gonna need.

Some say it is a sin to love,
I never did ask why,
But, if I sin in loving you, I'll sin until I die! Wooooooooooooow AWESOME👏 👏 👏....!!!! yaar...mujhe lagta hai jiju ka kafi asar padne laga hai tum par...😛

Aditi can easily make out wats going in Raj's mind..She knows dat Raj loves Naina n she too loves hom back but den wat is stopping him from confessing??? Raj ka dimag kharab hai aur yeh baar aditi ko pata hai...😆...jokes apart...raj ko kuch uljhanain hain...bass isiliye...par ab delhi dur nahi😃

That song is 1 of my favourites..It is so meaningful n touching.. mera bhi fav song hai...KHAMOSHI movie ka song hai na...aur Wahida Rahman oldies movies ki meri fav bhi hain😃

Raj has decided that Naina wud b going to Shimla with Vishaal.Why is he doing this???Wat happened to Aditi in the past that Raj is forced to tke such step.. bata dungi...par thoda aur intezaar kar lo...😃

Naina didn't question him..She accept his decision coz she promised Aditi dat she will always support Raj but she is really hurt with this.. naina hurt toh hui...aur adi se kiya hua vaada bhi nahi toda...par bina kahe voh raj ko baht kuch kah bhi toh gayi thi na...😃

I think last part is the dream sequence..Pls dont make it real n den u stopped at such crucial point..I think u love giving jhatkas to your readers😆😆nahi...voh dream seq nahi hai...😆 😆 😆 itna mujh par bharosha kar sakti ho...😆 😆 😆

Continue soon

Bye

I missed the joke dat u always write in d end😊is baar mera DIMAG KUMBH K MELE me kho gaya tha...isiliye koi joke dimag me aaya hi nahi...😆 sorryyyy😳

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#1089

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit
Congrats on completion of 1 year..
Hope dere r many more to come👍🏼

muaahhhh!!!

Luv u !!!!

Bye🤗

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lottttt Suhana....Luv u toooooooo darl...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗