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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#101

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Tusshar aake sabse milta hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Uday kehta hai ke accha hai Tusshar Sonia ka make up kit leke aa gaya warna make up ke bina usse dekhna bahut risky hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Tusshar toh Raj ke saath hi dinner karna chahta hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Tusshar is very attached to Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko Naina aur Tusshar ka interact karna accha nahi laga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#102

that was so good

and why Raj is jealous😉 of Tussar knowing naina?

plz continue soon

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#103

i THINK THIS PLOT IS SOME WAT LIKE kAHIN TO hOGA

anyways nice update

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#104

very nice ud.

mujhe lagta hai yeh fic puri tarah se inspire hai 'ekta mata' ki 'kahin to hoga' se...!!!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#105

I really hate Raj for what he did to Naina,😡 😡 😡 agar Naina ko lift de thi to car he utaarne ki kya jaroorat thi us ko?😒 😒 😒 Pata nahi agar Tushaar nahi aaya hota sahi waqt par to Naina ka kya hota?🤔 🤔 🤔

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#106

ab Raj ko kya takleef ho rahi hai 😡 😡 😡? Pehle to Naina ko pareshaan karne k bahane dhoondhta rehta tha ab Tushaar se bhi problem hai in ko. 😔 😔 😔

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#107

guys i dont know my ff got some similarities with kth serial or not but i never watched that serial .my ff got some aspects from a bengali movie

agle din subhe

ma-n dia aake breakfast kar le

n-jee ma

door rings

ma opens the door

ma-aa kripa

kripa-namaste uncle

papa-beta kaise ho

kripa-thik hu uncle

papa-aacha main nikalta hu

papa college jaate ha

kripa-hey n kaisa chal raha ha tera office

n-bohot he boring

kripa-kun tere boss toh bohot he handsome ha

n-kharus jaangli ha woh

kripa-kya

n-kripa mera boss insan nahin ek no ke kharus ha tujhe pata ha us din ka hua tha

kripa-kya hua tha(teasing tone)

n -kripa us din jab main aa rahe the tab

n tells her everything

kripa-kya tune masi ko baataya

n-pagal ha kya agar papa ko pata chal jaayega toh mujhe kabhie office jaane nahin dege

kripa-hmm n aaj tera office nahin ha

n-nahin kripa aaj mera off ha

kripa-toh chal ghumne chalte ha

n-thik ha

shekhawat house

madhuri-majee main mandir jaa rahe

dadi-thik ha bahu

madhuri mandir jaate ha

kripa aur n dono ghumne jaate ha

n-kripa itna aacha lag raha ha na

kripa-ha

n-kripa woh dekh panipuri

kripa-wow

n-bhaiya do panipuri ka plate lagaye

madhuri-pandit jee mujhe pooja karne ha

pandit jee-thik ha

pandit jee pooja karte ha

pandit jee-lijiye

madhuri mandir se bahar aa rahe ha tabhie ek car aake madhuri ko dhakka deta ha

n aur kripa pass main panipuri kha rahe the

n dur ke aate ha madhuri ke pass

n-aunty aap thik toh ha na

madhuri-ha beta

n-yeh carbale hote he aase ha kisi ko bhi dhakka deke nikal jaate ha

madhuri-beta kya tum mujhe mere car tak leke chaloge

n-ha ha

n madhuri ko car tak leke chalte ha

n-aunty main aapko ghar chor dete hu

madhuri-nahin nahin beta tum kun

n-aunty plz

madhuri-thik ha beta

n-kripa tu ghar jaa main aunty ko ghar chor ke aate hu

kripa-thik ha

n madhuri ko ghar leke aate ha

dadi-are yeh kya hoga bahu tumhe

madhuri-maajee woh ek car ne

dadi-som kaka jaldi aao

som-kya hua dadi

dadi-dr ko phone karo

som-jee dadi

n-aunty aapka room kon sa ha

madhuri-beta uper

n-thik ha chalee

n madhuri ko room main leke jaate ha

dadi-thank u beta aaj agar tum nahin hote toh

madhuri-ha beta tumne aaj bohot help ke mere

n-aunty is main sukriya kahene kya baat ha

som-dadi dr aate he honge

dadi-thik ha

n-thik ha aunty ab main chalte hu

dadi-beta nasta kar ke jaao

n-nahin dadi ma ghar main intezar kar rahe hoge

dadi-thik ha beta

n ghar aate ha

ma-n tune itne dar kun ke

n-ma aaj mandir ke bahar ek carbale ne ek aunty ko dhakka de dia tha main aunty ko ghar chor kar aaye hu

ma-aacha kiya beta tune jaa ab jaake naha le main khanna lagate hu

n the evening

karthik udhay tushaar ghar wapis aate ha

tusshar-mama yeh kya hua aap ko

madhuri-kuch nahin beta woh ek car par thanks ke ek larki aake mujhe ghar chor gaye

tusshar-larki

madhuri-ha beta bohot aache larki the mujhe ghar chor kar gae

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina tells Kripa ke uska boss khadus jungli hai and tells her about the incident!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina ne accha kiya jo ghar par nahi bataya warna usse office nahi jaane dete!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

Madhuri ko ek car dhakka deta hai and Naina helps her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina Madhuri ko ghar chhodne bhi jaati hai aur unhe room tak leke jaati hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina narrates this incident to her mom and Madhuri to her sons!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Good going aur Naina ne accha kiya ki Madhuri jee ki help ki.

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#110

very nice ud.

plz cont soon.

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