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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya_luvseizy

That's great thanks! I promise it will only be a "there was this one time when..." kind of thing from the past . I am calling this one "MayUr- Flash from the past":


Back in college, when Mayank was trying to impress Nupur,he sees this ad about a perfume that apparently casts a spell on girls and makes them fall for the guy who is wearing it. Mayank buys the perfume and sprays it on himself before going to college that day, in a bid to attract Nupz! Nupur is hurrying to the class tensely talking to herself "Agar iss Shukla ke bacche ki class ke liye late ho gayee toh mujhe apne tel ke badboo se mardalega" and she bumps into Mayank. Mayank (with that killer of a smile) says, "Good Morning Nupur. Itni jaldi main kahaan jaa rahi ho?". Nupur looks at Mayank and thinks she is dreaming, she starts murmuring "By God, aaj kal mujhe college main class ke liye der hone ke sapne bhi aa rahe hai" to herself with a worried look on her face. Mayank snaps his fingers in front of her eyes and says sarcastically, "Pata hai ki tum main greeting ke liye reply karne jaisi acchi aadat nahi hai lekin phir bhi kabhi kabhi muskuraane ki koshish toh karo meri tarah". Nupur looks at Mayank surprised, "Kya? To yeh sapna nahi hai, tum muskuraa rahe ho? Mayank Sharma- the angry young man smile kar raha hai?", she smiles and continues "By God, mazaa aa gaya!". Suddenly, her expression changes back to worry, "Ek minute! Iska matlab aaj zaroor kuch gadbad hone waala hai. Subah subah maine tumhe jo dekhliya. Bhagwaan please aaj mujhe bachaa lena" . Mayank, still smiling, says "Subah subah bhagwaan ko kyun pareshaan kar rahi ho? Anyways, tum kahin jaa rahi thi ". Nupur looks at her watch and shrieks "Hey Bhagwaan, main class ke liye der ho rahi hoon jaldi se yahaan se kalti maarti hoon" and is about to walk away when Mayank extends his arm blocking her way. Nupur, angry yet forces a smile on her face saying "Mayank, agar tumhe raasta roko waala game khelna hai hum class ke baad aaraam se khelenge abhi mujhe jaana hai, bye". She is about to walk off pushing his arm away but then stops and holds her nose, like she smelled something bad and looks around saying "Yeh ajeeb si smell kaisi hai?". Mayank feels embarrassed and gives an expression mixed with awkwardness and embarrassment at Nupur's comment. Nupur continues "Tumhe nahi aa raha hai yeh smell?". Mayank, in his embarrassment, stammers "No.. errr mera matlab nahi'tumhe nahi lagta tum class ke liye late ho jaaogi? ". On hearing the words 'class' and 'late', Nupur almost has a heart attack and hurries away to the class murmuring "By god! Yeh Shukla toh aaj mujhe uske badboodaar tel se zinda jala dega". Mayank disappointedly looks at Nupur who is hurrying away to the class . Mayank, goes to the wash room and talks to himself standing in front of the mirror, "It is okay Mayank, chill! Agar usey tera perfume pasand nahi aaya toh kya hua? Ultimately, usey tujhko hee pasand karna hoga aur woh tujhe hee pasand karegi", he flashes his smile still looking at mirror, pats his back and walks back to the classroom That evening, at his house, he takes the perfume bottle and smashes it down on the floor.


Okk I really hope that you guys liked it!



Aww what Mayank did to impress Nupur was so sweet :-)
Ur writing is good man :-) keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
^^ Hey thanks. You write awesome too and kudos to your imagination 😊.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sabzz

hey plz read my first post carefully ...
because they are going to paris not shimla
thanx😊

ooops..my bad😳 missed the paris part...but i'll continue my next scene with paris...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya_luvseizy

^^ Hey thanks. You write awesome too and kudos to your imagination 😊.

thanks to u 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was really good Please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinklystar_hp

ooops..my bad😳 missed the paris part...but i'll continue my next scene with paris...😃

aww.. its okay !😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya_luvseizy

That's great thanks! I promise it will only be a "there was this one time when..." kind of thing from the past . I am calling this one "MayUr- Flash from the past":


Back in college, when Mayank was trying to impress Nupur,he sees this ad about a perfume that apparently casts a spell on girls and makes them fall for the guy who is wearing it. Mayank buys the perfume and sprays it on himself before going to college that day, in a bid to attract Nupz! Nupur is hurrying to the class tensely talking to herself "Agar iss Shukla ke bacche ki class ke liye late ho gayee toh mujhe apne tel ke badboo se mardalega" and she bumps into Mayank. Mayank (with that killer of a smile) says, "Good Morning Nupur. Itni jaldi main kahaan jaa rahi ho?". Nupur looks at Mayank and thinks she is dreaming, she starts murmuring "By God, aaj kal mujhe college main class ke liye der hone ke sapne bhi aa rahe hai" to herself with a worried look on her face. Mayank snaps his fingers in front of her eyes and says sarcastically, "Pata hai ki tum main greeting ke liye reply karne jaisi acchi aadat nahi hai lekin phir bhi kabhi kabhi muskuraane ki koshish toh karo meri tarah". Nupur looks at Mayank surprised, "Kya? To yeh sapna nahi hai, tum muskuraa rahe ho? Mayank Sharma- the angry young man smile kar raha hai?", she smiles and continues "By God, mazaa aa gaya!". Suddenly, her expression changes back to worry, "Ek minute! Iska matlab aaj zaroor kuch gadbad hone waala hai. Subah subah maine tumhe jo dekhliya. Bhagwaan please aaj mujhe bachaa lena" . Mayank, still smiling, says "Subah subah bhagwaan ko kyun pareshaan kar rahi ho? Anyways, tum kahin jaa rahi thi ". Nupur looks at her watch and shrieks "Hey Bhagwaan, main class ke liye der ho rahi hoon jaldi se yahaan se kalti maarti hoon" and is about to walk away when Mayank extends his arm blocking her way. Nupur, angry yet forces a smile on her face saying "Mayank, agar tumhe raasta roko waala game khelna hai hum class ke baad aaraam se khelenge abhi mujhe jaana hai, bye". She is about to walk off pushing his arm away but then stops and holds her nose, like she smelled something bad and looks around saying "Yeh ajeeb si smell kaisi hai?". Mayank feels embarrassed and gives an expression mixed with awkwardness and embarrassment at Nupur's comment. Nupur continues "Tumhe nahi aa raha hai yeh smell?". Mayank, in his embarrassment, stammers "No.. errr mera matlab nahi'tumhe nahi lagta tum class ke liye late ho jaaogi? ". On hearing the words 'class' and 'late', Nupur almost has a heart attack and hurries away to the class murmuring "By god! Yeh Shukla toh aaj mujhe uske badboodaar tel se zinda jala dega". Mayank disappointedly looks at Nupur who is hurrying away to the class . Mayank, goes to the wash room and talks to himself standing in front of the mirror, "It is okay Mayank, chill! Agar usey tera perfume pasand nahi aaya toh kya hua? Ultimately, usey tujhko hee pasand karna hoga aur woh tujhe hee pasand karegi", he flashes his smile still looking at mirror, pats his back and walks back to the classroom That evening, at his house, he takes the perfume bottle and smashes it down on the floor.


Okk I really hope that you guys liked it!



awww cutee !!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
All of u guyz doing fantabulous job.... plz some one continue soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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do continue plzzz....n i like the part of the flashback!! really creative
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lemme continue it from the flashback's end:
"Mayank....so gaye kya???"
Mayank opened his eyes with a start. He hadnt quiet fallen asleep, but slipped into a subconscious state, remembering his past cherished moments with nupur.
He smiled at the memory, then looked at nupur and said:
"Nahi...meri yeh majaal? tumhare uthte hueye bhala mai kaise so sakta hoo??"
Nupz: "Hayee..mayank tum kitne ache hoo mera kitna khayal rakhte ho...sachi" she said, giving him a broad smile, then added: "haan agar tum apni angry young man ki lookgthori mild kar do, kaam karna thora kam kardo, aur mujhe aur mummyji ko filmo pe leke jaaya karo zyada..phir by god tum na best husband hoge!"
Mayank raised eyebrows at her, and muttered, " abhi acha hoo toh itna jhagarti ho..best ho jaunga toh kitna sunna parega..."
"kya kaha??" nupz said, hearing part of the muttering...
"kuch nahi..yeh soch raha hoo mai ke kitna time reh gaya hai flight ke pohanchne mein?"
nupz frowned at him -"ufff ho...abhi dekho na hum badalon mei hai tumko maza nahi aaraha? poohanch jayeinge waha bbhi pohanch jayeinge per mujhe toh plane pe bara hi maza aaraha hai..mera to dil kar raha hai hum plane pe hi bethe rahein bas BY GOD"
M: "nhi ..aisa mat karna..nahi toh tum bore hoke kahin pilot se baatein karna hi na shuru kar do..pata chala paris ke bajaye bermuda triangle pe pohanch gaye!"
Nupz gave him an angry look, and said "jao mai baat nahi karti!"
Mayank exclaimed "SACHI???" with a broard smile, then at nupz's look repeated with a frown "Sachi??"
Nupz got up from her seat besides the window, and pushed past mayank, who surprisingly asked: "kahan jaa rahiho? "
"bhaar mei!" nupz said iirritatedly....to which mayank held her hand, saying, "mujhe yahan chhor ke akela? nahi mai nahi jaane dunga.."
"mayank chhoro mera haath...sab dekh rahi hain...chhoro na washroom jaa rahi thi", to which mayank let her go.
5 minutes later, when nupz tried to move past mayank to reach her seat, he caught her by her waist, twisted her and made her sit in his lap, while holding her hands behind her in one hand of his.
"mayank..KYA KAR RAHE HO! tum pagal ho gaye ho kya poora jahaz dekh raha hai..KYA KAHEINGE SAB!"
"yahi kaheinge..ke ek loving pati...apni patni ke saath romance kar raha hai" mayank replied with a cunning smile.
He kissed her cheek, while nupz squirmed..."mayankkkkkk....kya kar rahe hooo...chhoroo.." she stared across their seats at an old couple who were gawking at them, and a couple of girls who were giggling..she gave the old couple a guilty smile, and starting squirming again...
mayank replied: "ok..fine..mrs. mayank sharma..ek shart pe..phir kabhi mujhe chhorne ki ya baat cheet band karne ki dhamki nahi dogi...kabhi naraz nahi hogii.."
nupz .." aur jo TUM aise hi mujhe sunate rehte ho by god nupur tum yeh tum woh..mai naraz bhi nahi ho sakti!"
mayank moved in and kissed her other cheek..
"ufff hoo...CHHORO...acha theeek hai...NAHI hungi naaraaz!!ab chhoro" she tried to push herself off him.
"promise?" asked mayank with a smile watching her struggling...
"Promisee!" mayank once again kissed her cheek, while at the same time got her off his lap and allowed her to settle in her seat, while a huge blush settled on her face..
Just then the air hostess announced to put on their seat belts as the plane was landing...
"So my dear wife...paris ke liye tayaaar???" he asked with a wink while placing her hand in his hand..
"by god....haaan! kitna maza aayega nahi!" and with this she launched into a list of places to go food to eat and things to shop for, while mayank just took out cotton buds from his pocket, stuffed them secretly in his ears, and continued to gaze lovingly at the love of his life...who was also the strangest twist of his life..😊
Edited by twinklystar_hp - 16 years ago

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