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Posted: 16 years ago
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At Nupur's house
G: Udhay Bhaiyya! Nupur di agayi hain
U: Nupur!!!!!! (he falls before reaching Nupur)
N: Are Udhay bhaiyya, araam se. Ab main agayi hoon to...(she sees tears coming out of Udhhay'seyes) rone ki zaroorat nehin hai
U(crying and laughing in his own way): Kya Nupur, main tumhe nehin, balke tumhare filmi jokes ko zyada miss kar raha tha!
N(laughing): acha acha. Aur sunao Gunjan?
G: Main theek hoon Di. Aap bas apna khayal rakhna.
To Mayank: Mayank, meri Di ka bohot khayal rakhna plz
M: Tum fikar na karo Gunjan, lekin tumhe iske liye darne ki koi zaroorat nehin hai. Mujhe to wahan ke logon par tarass aa raha hai...Une kya pata kaun si bhala unke paass aane wali hai
Gunjan and Mayank laugh
Nupur gets angry
N: haan haan, ura lo mera mazak tum dono !
She's a angry and doesn't wanna talk to anyone. So she goes and sits with Uday
lol this wasn't that good but if someone wanna continue... :-)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^ no actually it was pretty gud..uday falling before reaching nupz was hilarious😆

Nupz: Uday bhaiya..apna na poora khayal rakhiyega aap..by god itna roeinge to tabiyat kharab ho jayegi..
Uday: hain?? tabiyat kharab? isi liye mere peyt mei subha se dard ho raha hai😲woh na film mei to keh rahe the rona sehat ke liye acha hai..woh hero roya tha na to usko na ek boht hi hot si girlfriend mil gayi thi..toh mai bhi ronga to mujhe bhi milegi naa????😃
M: 😲 haan uday..per yaar itni mehnat kyu ki tumne rone mei..mai toh kehraha hoo agli baar se jayb me pyaz aur chhuri leke ghoomna..jab larkiyan dekho to pyaz kaatna shuru kar dena..natural tears mehnat ki bhi zarurat nahi😉
Nupz gives mayank an "mind it" look at which he just chuckles while uday is lost in his thoughts..
uday: YEH MAINE PEHLE KYU NAHI SOCHA!! pata hai nupur tumhare jaane pe rone ke liye poori raat na maine kal ho na ho ki ending part dekha!!😭
Nupz is shocked at first..then hides a smile while consoling uday bhaiya by patting on his arm and saying: "koi baat nahi uday bhaiyya..mai aap logon ko boht miss karungi"
Uday starts crying again...."Nupur ab mujhe filmon ki stories kaun batayega itne dino tak? "
Nupz: "array uday bhaiyya..mai na aapko na by god roz phone kara karungi aur na jo film dekheinge na hum mai aapko uski story bataya karungi taake aap na larkiyon ko us pe date pe leke jayein taae wo khush ho jayein"😃
Mayank raises an eyebrow at this, and says: "haan haan..hum to waha filmon mei phD karne jaa rahe hain na..let me check yaar agar film theatre ke upper hi koi room rent pe mil jaata hai to 'by god' wahi room na le lein? tum 24/7 theatre mei hi reh sakti hoo nahi?"
Nupz is happy at first thinking he's serious, but then sees him chuckling and stares at him with "ill deal with u later" look, which for a moment silences mayank..
Meanwhile gunjan looks at her watch and reminds them that they hav to leave for the flight..
Mayank and Nupz go upstairs to find Nupz's baba and chacha..and take aashirwaad from both..Nupz baba says to Mayank: "beta meri bachi ka boht khayal rakhna beta..yeh na shararti boht hai tang boht karti hai kabhi kabhi..kyu nupur?" he asks her with a smile..
nupur goes like: "haaww...baba yeh aap kya kehr ahe hain..mai aap logon ko tang karti thi itna kya? abhi film ki tickets maangna aur srk aur ranbir ka autograph maangna to koi bari baat nahi na..BABAA!"
baba laughs and then adds in a soft and sad tone: "beta mera bas chale to tere har armaan har sapna poora karu...tujhe mai apne paas hi rakh loo tujhe jitna tang karna hai karna meri to subha hi tere filmy baaton aur farmayeshon se hoti thi"...at which nupz becums sad...
Mayank: "array baba aap fikr na karein..mujeh iski shararton ka pata hai aur handle bhi karna aata hai.." he adds with a cunning smile at nupz, but continues in a sober tone to baba "aap bas apna khayal rakhna mai nupur ka poora khayal rakhunga..apne beta pe bharosa nahi? "
nupz luks at his with respect and a smile, while baba hugs him and gives them his asshirwaad..
on their way out gunjan wishes both g'luck and tells mayank to take care of himself and nupur to which mayan replies to lighten the atmosphere : "array yeh to tumko shimla ke logon ko phone karke bolna chahiye -khayal rakhiyega...after all...excel college ki dance & drama queen jaa rahi hain wahan..bicharon ko warning to milni chahiye"
gunjan smiles at this whiile nupur punches him in the arm "tum zara chalo to sahi boht bol rahe ho aaj abhi batati hoo"..
to which mayank gives gunjan a tortured "oops, help' smile..
gunjan: "di..aap jeeju ko aise mat kaho..dekho na kitna khayal rakhte hain..bas ab boht jhagra ho gaya..dono larayi kiye baghayr pyar se jao aur pyar se aao" 😊
every1 wishes them bye, and they head to their car, which mayank had bought a few days before their wedding. while reaching the car, nupur grabs mayank's hand, and kisses him on the cheek, which surprises him, and he exclaims: "nupur, gunjan baba koi aajayega..kya kar rahi ho..sahi se chalo"..
to which nupur raises both her eyebrows, surprised, and replies: "aaha...mai kahu koi aajayega to tumko tension nahi.. aur by god apne sasuraal mei kaise dar dar ke ghoomte ho...waisey bhi suna nahi gunjan ne kya kaha -pyar se jao😉 !?"
Mayank: "ab...tumko unhi se to liya hai..image ka sawal hai" he winks at her..
Nupz gasps : "by god tumko kya ho gaya! mayank kab se IMAGE ka khayal rakhne lag gaya"?
Mayank smiles, and replies : "jab se mayank ko nupur se pyar hua hai.."
nupz blushes..and holding hands they head towards the car...
Edited by twinklystar_hp - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Can I go to the past in this FF i.e. before MayUr marriage and before they confessed their love for each other and write a casual MayUr scene from their college days? The next person who is continuing after me can probably link it in some way to their present. Is that allowed?
Edited by kavya_luvseizy - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely concept👏
i 'll read it for sure
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kavya_luvseizy

Can I go to the past in this FF i.e. before MayUr marriage and before they confessed their love for each other and write a casual MayUr scene from their college days? The next person who is continuing after me can probably link it in some way to their present. Is that allowed?

amm.... well you can do flash back and then end the flash back !
but plz you end the flash back so that other person can continue from the present !
and just once write a flash back !
thanx😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabzz

amm.... well you can do flash back and then end the flash back !
but plz you end the flash back so that other person can continue from the present !
and just once write a flash back because its a mayur married f-f !
thanx😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinklystar_hp

^^ no actually it was pretty gud..uday falling before reaching nupz was hilarious😆

Nupz: Uday bhaiya..apna na poora khayal rakhiyega aap..by god itna roeinge to tabiyat kharab ho jayegi..
Uday: hain?? tabiyat kharab? isi liye mere peyt mei subha se dard ho raha hai😲woh na film mei to keh rahe the rona sehat ke liye acha hai..woh hero roya tha na to usko na ek boht hi hot si girlfriend mil gayi thi..toh mai bhi ronga to mujhe bhi milegi naa????😃
M: 😲 haan uday..per yaar itni mehnat kyu ki tumne rone mei..mai toh kehraha hoo agli baar se jayb me pyaz aur chhuri leke ghoomna..jab larkiyan dekho to pyaz kaatna shuru kar dena..natural tears mehnat ki bhi zarurat nahi😉
Nupz gives mayank an "mind it" look at which he just chuckles while uday is lost in his thoughts..
uday: YEH MAINE PEHLE KYU NAHI SOCHA!! pata hai nupur tumhare jaane pe rone ke liye poori raat na maine kal ho na ho ki ending part dekha!!😭
Nupz is shocked at first..then hides a smile while consoling uday bhaiya by patting on his arm and saying: "koi baat nahi uday bhaiyya..mai aap logon ko boht miss karungi"
Uday starts crying again...."Nupur ab mujhe filmon ki stories kaun batayega itne dino tak? "
Nupz: "array uday bhaiyya..mai na aapko na by god roz phone kara karungi aur na jo film dekheinge na hum mai aapko uski story bataya karungi taake aap na larkiyon ko us pe date pe leke jayein taae wo khush ho jayein"😃
Mayank raises an eyebrow at this, and says: "haan haan..hum to waha filmon mei phD karne jaa rahe hain na..let me check yaar agar film theatre ke upper hi koi room rent pe mil jaata hai to 'by god' wahi room na le lein? tum 24/7 theatre mei hi reh sakti hoo nahi?"
Nupz is happy at first thinking he's serious, but then sees him chuckling and stares at him with "ill deal with u later" look, which for a moment silences mayank..
Meanwhile gunjan looks at her watch and reminds them that they hav to leave for the flight..
Mayank and Nupz go upstairs to find Nupz's baba and chacha..and take aashirwaad from both..Nupz baba says to Mayank: "beta meri bachi ka boht khayal rakhna beta..yeh na shararti boht hai tang boht karti hai kabhi kabhi..kyu nupur?" he asks her with a smile..
nupur goes like: "haaww...baba yeh aap kya kehr ahe hain..mai aap logon ko tang karti thi itna kya? abhi film ki tickets maangna aur srk aur ranbir ka autograph maangna to koi bari baat nahi na..BABAA!"
baba laughs and then adds in a soft and sad tone: "beta mera bas chale to tere har armaan har sapna poora karu...tujhe mai apne paas hi rakh loo tujhe jitna tang karna hai karna meri to subha hi tere filmy baaton aur farmayeshon se hoti thi"...at which nupz becums sad...
Mayank: "array baba aap fikr na karein..mujeh iski shararton ka pata hai aur handle bhi karna aata hai.." he adds with a cunning smile at nupz, but continues in a sober tone to baba "aap bas apna khayal rakhna mai nupur ka poora khayal rakhunga..apne beta pe bharosa nahi? "
nupz luks at his with respect and a smile, while baba hugs him and gives them his asshirwaad..
on their way out gunjan wishes both g'luck and tells mayank to take care of himself and nupur to which mayan replies to lighten the atmosphere : "array yeh to tumko shimla ke logon ko phone karke bolna chahiye -khayal rakhiyega...after all...excel college ki dance & drama queen jaa rahi hain wahan..bicharon ko warning to milni chahiye"
gunjan smiles at this whiile nupur punches him in the arm "tum zara chalo to sahi boht bol rahe ho aaj abhi batati hoo"..
to which mayank gives gunjan a tortured "oops, help' smile..
gunjan: "di..aap jeeju ko aise mat kaho..dekho na kitna khayal rakhte hain..bas ab boht jhagra ho gaya..dono larayi kiye baghayr pyar se jao aur pyar se aao" 😊
every1 wishes them bye, and they head to their car, which mayank had bought a few days before their wedding. while reaching the car, nupur grabs mayank's hand, and kisses him on the cheek, which surprises him, and he exclaims: "nupur, gunjan baba koi aajayega..kya kar rahi ho..sahi se chalo"..
to which nupur raises both her eyebrows, surprised, and replies: "aaha...mai kahu koi aajayega to tumko tension nahi.. aur by god apne sasuraal mei kaise dar dar ke ghoomte ho...waisey bhi suna nahi gunjan ne kya kaha -pyar se jao😉 !?"
Mayank: "ab...tumko unhi se to liya hai..image ka sawal hai" he winks at her..
Nupz gasps : "by god tumko kya ho gaya! mayank kab se IMAGE ka khayal rakhne lag gaya"?
Mayank smiles, and replies : "jab se mayank ko nupur se pyar hua hai.."
nupz blushes..and holding hands they head towards the car...

hey plz read my first post carefully ...
because they are going to paris not shimla
thanx😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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all of u guys are wonderful writers!!! plzz continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nupur and Mayank are in the plane now and Nupur is praying coz she is very scared of travelling by air.

N: by god bhagwaan ji, agar aap mujhe saayi salamat is duniya mein waapis utare gein, to main aapke liye bohot saari pooja karoon gi..plz god...
M(laughing): bas karo Nupur, mujhe nehin lagta ke bhagwaan hawa mein ki huyi prayer bhi sunte hain...
N: kyun nehin Mayank? By god, tum bhi kitne stupid ho! Hum hawa mein hain, iska matlab hum bhagwaan ke kareeb hain, to woh kyun nehin sunne ge?
M: acha baba, lekin tumhe kuch nehin hoga
N: tumhe kaise pata? Tum antaryami ho kya?
M(amused): haan na...tumhe nehin pata tha?
N (gets confused and then understands that he was joking):Mayank!! Tum bhi na!
And they continue the nhok jhok
After a while, Mayank is feeling asleep but Nupur is too excited to sleep.
N: are Mayank! yeh dekho, hum poori duniya ke upar hain!
M: haan Nupur...
N: Mayank! Yeh dekho, hum log chand ke paas hain!
M(confused, with a "what the f**k" look): ...chand ke kya?.
N: haan na! Dekho, hum chand ke kuch hi cm durr hain
M: Nupur! Plz mujhe thori der sone do...
N: kyun? Tum thak gaye ho ??
M: hmm
N: tumhari tabiyat to theek hai na Mayank??
M(getting helpless): haan Nupur, ab main so jaoon??
N(not convinced):Haan...
M: thank u
N: lekin agar tumhe darr lage to tum mera haath pakar sakte ho!
M(getting angry): kya tum neend ki goliyan lekar aayi ho?
N(feeling happy that she can help him): haan!
M: aur tum sure ho ke isse lene ke baad poori flight tak so sakte hain?
N(with a loving tone): Haan Mayank
M: good! To tum ek goli kha lo!
N(angry): By god!
Looolz plz someone continue :-)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That's great thanks! I promise it will only be a "there was this one time when..." kind of thing from the past . I am calling this one "MayUr- Flash from the past":


Back in college, when Mayank was trying to impress Nupur,he sees this ad about a perfume that apparently casts a spell on girls and makes them fall for the guy who is wearing it. Mayank buys the perfume and sprays it on himself before going to college that day, in a bid to attract Nupz! Nupur is hurrying to the class tensely talking to herself "Agar iss Shukla ke bacche ki class ke liye late ho gayee toh mujhe apne tel ke badboo se mardalega" and she bumps into Mayank. Mayank (with that killer of a smile) says, "Good Morning Nupur. Itni jaldi main kahaan jaa rahi ho?". Nupur looks at Mayank and thinks she is dreaming, she starts murmuring "By God, aaj kal mujhe college main class ke liye der hone ke sapne bhi aa rahe hai" to herself with a worried look on her face. Mayank snaps his fingers in front of her eyes and says sarcastically, "Pata hai ki tum main greeting ke liye reply karne jaisi acchi aadat nahi hai lekin phir bhi kabhi kabhi muskuraane ki koshish toh karo meri tarah". Nupur looks at Mayank surprised, "Kya? To yeh sapna nahi hai, tum muskuraa rahe ho? Mayank Sharma- the angry young man smile kar raha hai?", she smiles and continues "By God, mazaa aa gaya!". Suddenly, her expression changes back to worry, "Ek minute! Iska matlab aaj zaroor kuch gadbad hone waala hai. Subah subah maine tumhe jo dekhliya. Bhagwaan please aaj mujhe bachaa lena" . Mayank, still smiling, says "Subah subah bhagwaan ko kyun pareshaan kar rahi ho? Anyways, tum kahin jaa rahi thi ". Nupur looks at her watch and shrieks "Hey Bhagwaan, main class ke liye der ho rahi hoon jaldi se yahaan se kalti maarti hoon" and is about to walk away when Mayank extends his arm blocking her way. Nupur, angry yet forces a smile on her face saying "Mayank, agar tumhe raasta roko waala game khelna hai hum class ke baad aaraam se khelenge abhi mujhe jaana hai, bye". She is about to walk off pushing his arm away but then stops and holds her nose, like she smelled something bad and looks around saying "Yeh ajeeb si smell kaisi hai?". Mayank feels embarrassed and gives an expression mixed with awkwardness and embarrassment at Nupur's comment. Nupur continues "Tumhe nahi aa raha hai yeh smell?". Mayank, in his embarrassment, stammers "No.. errr mera matlab nahi'tumhe nahi lagta tum class ke liye late ho jaaogi? ". On hearing the words 'class' and 'late', Nupur almost has a heart attack and hurries away to the class murmuring "By god! Yeh Shukla toh aaj mujhe uske badboodaar tel se zinda jala dega". Mayank disappointedly looks at Nupur who is hurrying away to the class . Mayank, goes to the wash room and talks to himself standing in front of the mirror, "It is okay Mayank, chill! Agar usey tera perfume pasand nahi aaya toh kya hua? Ultimately, usey tujhko hee pasand karna hoga aur woh tujhe hee pasand karegi", he flashes his smile still looking at mirror, pats his back and walks back to the classroom That evening, at his house, he takes the perfume bottle and smashes it down on the floor.


Okk I really hope that you guys liked it!



Edited by kavya_luvseizy - 16 years ago

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