*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7

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ruchi

@simranruchi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

guys you are doing great job

do continue

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Sid

@Sid4TeamCanada

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Hey FF writers...ok so i just thought of sumthing that i thought i shud mention here...how abt the next person who continues works in an ekta-ish twist in the story...i mean i knwo how much v luv our mayur but i think story kuch zyada hi seedhi seedhi chal rahi hai ab i think v shud separate them for a bit in order to make them and us yearn for them to be together even more...make their luv stronger..how abt puttting in an ekta-ish twist? or if ekta-ish twist wud be too much (which i know it wud be) then how abt just a simple but interesting twist inthe story...zara teekhi story bane..these nok jhoks r fine..but sumthing big this time to make them separate up (i know it hurts me to say it too😭) only for a lil while..! how abt it? the next person who continues can work this twist in if ya'all agree...

Edited by twinklystar_hp - 16 years ago

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Kavya

@Bazinga

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Wow guys, you are all doing a brilliant job 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼! Sidra, we will not have a heavy duty Ekta kind of twist exactly- how about Nupur meets this good looking guy from good ol' Morena days who is working in Paris now? Thisguy is supposed to have had a huge crush on Nupur when they were friends in school and Nupur had insisted that they stayed friends as she did not feel for him the same way. This guy still likes Nupur and is very happy to see his first crush, you guys can have him flirt a bit with Nupur and see Mayu getting jealous of him 😉 😉 and the attention he is showering on her. We can also have Nupur praising this guy sky high and telling Mayu that he had a crush on her in the past and making Mayuu even more jealous! This way, we will still have a twist in the tale yet it will not be a serious one. What say? Plus a jealous Mayoo is always welcome 😉😉

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Aditi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@kavya-"By god! Yeh Shukla toh aaj mujhe uske badboodaar tel se zinda jala dega"
🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣.....
loved ur update...😊👏🤗...
....nice work everyone...👏

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Ananya

@ananya_s

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

hey nice idea ekta twist.....mmmmm.......i dont hav time oder wise id hav done it......so d next person plz add d twist nd lots of romance nd nokh jokhs nd boxing mathces...lol😆

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Kavya

@Bazinga

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

@Aditi: Thanks babe! Lol! that is so like Nupur ain't it???

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Henna

@Manhen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Hey guyz u all r doing great jobs :-) Mayur are so funny together and yeah, i think that a lil twist in their story would be nice Love u alll <3

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roshaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

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okay guys you can put the guy twist but very small as i dont want them to FighT plz make it a happy story !

like just mayank getting jelouse of the guy .... ! and then make every thing alright

because this never happens in the show that why ! i want to make this a happy f-f !

thanks and good work guyz !😳

Edited by sabzz - 16 years ago

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roshaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: twinklystar_hp
lemme continue it from the flashback's end:

"Mayank....so gaye kya???"

Mayank opened his eyes with a start. He hadnt quiet fallen asleep, but slipped into a subconscious state, remembering his past cherished moments with nupur.

He smiled at the memory, then looked at nupur and said:

"Nahi...meri yeh majaal? tumhare uthte hueye bhala mai kaise so sakta hoo??"

Nupz: "Hayee..mayank tum kitne ache hoo mera kitna khayal rakhte ho...sachi" she said, giving him a broad smile, then added: "haan agar tum apni angry young man ki lookgthori mild kar do, kaam karna thora kam kardo, aur mujhe aur mummyji ko filmo pe leke jaaya karo zyada..phir by god tum na best husband hoge!"

Mayank raised eyebrows at her, and muttered, " abhi acha hoo toh itna jhagarti ho..best ho jaunga toh kitna sunna parega..."

"kya kaha??" nupz said, hearing part of the muttering...

"kuch nahi..yeh soch raha hoo mai ke kitna time reh gaya hai flight ke pohanchne mein?"

nupz frowned at him -"ufff ho...abhi dekho na hum badalon mei hai tumko maza nahi aaraha? poohanch jayeinge waha bbhi pohanch jayeinge per mujhe toh plane pe bara hi maza aaraha hai..mera to dil kar raha hai hum plane pe hi bethe rahein bas BY GOD"

M: "nhi ..aisa mat karna..nahi toh tum bore hoke kahin pilot se baatein karna hi na shuru kar do..pata chala paris ke bajaye bermuda triangle pe pohanch gaye!"

Nupz gave him an angry look, and said "jao mai baat nahi karti!"

Mayank exclaimed "SACHI???" with a broard smile, then at nupz's look repeated with a frown "Sachi??"

Nupz got up from her seat besides the window, and pushed past mayank, who surprisingly asked: "kahan jaa rahiho? "

"bhaar mei!" nupz said iirritatedly....to which mayank held her hand, saying, "mujhe yahan chhor ke akela? nahi mai nahi jaane dunga.."

"mayank chhoro mera haath...sab dekh rahi hain...chhoro na washroom jaa rahi thi", to which mayank let her go.

5 minutes later, when nupz tried to move past mayank to reach her seat, he caught her by her waist, twisted her and made her sit in his lap, while holding her hands behind her in one hand of his.

"mayank..KYA KAR RAHE HO! tum pagal ho gaye ho kya poora jahaz dekh raha hai..KYA KAHEINGE SAB!"

"yahi kaheinge..ke ek loving pati...apni patni ke saath romance kar raha hai" mayank replied with a cunning smile.

He kissed her cheek, while nupz squirmed..."mayankkkkkk....kya kar rahe hooo...chhoroo.." she stared across their seats at an old couple who were gawking at them, and a couple of girls who were giggling..she gave the old couple a guilty smile, and starting squirming again...

mayank replied: "ok..fine..mrs. mayank sharma..ek shart pe..phir kabhi mujhe chhorne ki ya baat cheet band karne ki dhamki nahi dogi...kabhi naraz nahi hogii.."

nupz .." aur jo TUM aise hi mujhe sunate rehte ho by god nupur tum yeh tum woh..mai naraz bhi nahi ho sakti!"

mayank moved in and kissed her other cheek..

"ufff hoo...CHHORO...acha theeek hai...NAHI hungi naaraaz!!ab chhoro" she tried to push herself off him.

"promise?" asked mayank with a smile watching her struggling...

"Promisee!" mayank once again kissed her cheek, while at the same time got her off his lap and allowed her to settle in her seat, while a huge blush settled on her face..

Just then the air hostess announced to put on their seat belts as the plane was landing...

"So my dear wife...paris ke liye tayaaar???" he asked with a wink while placing her hand in his hand..

"by god....haaan! kitna maza aayega nahi!" and with this she launched into a list of places to go food to eat and things to shop for, while mayank just took out cotton buds from his pocket, stuffed them secretly in his ears, and continued to gaze lovingly at the love of his life...who was also the strangest twist of his life..😊