*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved the part :-)

I dont knw Mayank's mother name so ill call her Ma
Ma: Are Nupur beta, kaisi ho?
N: main theek hoon aunty...(she starts thinkiong something...)
Ma: Kya hua beta?
N: main aapse ek baat poochoon?
Ma: haan poocho na
N: kya main aapko Ma keh sakti hoon?
Ma (with tears in her eyes): Idhar aao...(she hugs her)
Nupur and Ma cry and laugh also while Mayank comes in the kitchen
M: are...aap dono kyun ro rahi hain? Kya saas-bahu ke jhagre shuru ho gaye?? (laughing)
Ma: chup kar! Saas bahu ke nehin, ma aur beti ke..
N(cries a little more): aaj main bohot kush hoon. Ma, aap aur Mayank bahir jaakar behtiye, main breakfast banati hoon.
After that, Nupur goes into their bedroom and continues for the packing. Mayank comes 5 mins later.
M(putting his hands around her waist): kya meri pyari si biwi khush hai?
N: Haan Mayank...aaj meri zindagi ka sab se acha din hai...Aaj mujhe ek pati ke saath saath maa bhi mil gayi...
M(turns her around to face him and kisses her forehead): Acha suno, ab emotional hona band karo warna mujhe lage ga ke tum normal ho
N(hitting him on the chest): By god Mayank, tum bhi na...
Then they hug each other and Mayank takes the luggage outside.
Voila :-) Plz someone continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: simranruchi

so let me try

its 8o clock in the morning and mayank is still asleep, nupur comes out from washroom after getting ready

she is wearing blue coloured sari and mayank is in black vest
nupur; by god mayank abhi tak soo rahe ho
she sits near mayank and tries to wake him up
nupur; abhi tak baccho ke tarah sote ho...by god mein ja rahi hoon ma ki help karwane
as soon as she gets mayank pulls her back and nupur falls over mayank
nupur; mayank kya kar rahe ho , chodho mujhe
mayank; nahin
nupur is trying to move away but mayanks grip was quite tight
her locks were covering her face
mayank puts her locks behind and they share an eyelock
then only they hear ma calling for nupur
the both get up but her mangalsutra [ i am sorry if i spelled it wrong] got stuck in his watch
nupur; ouch
mayank; kya hua?[he looked concern]
mayank sees it and tries to get mangalsutra out
nupur; by god mayank tum raat ko bhi watch laga kar soote ho
mayank; toh isme buraayi kya hai
mayank gets it done and nupur adjusts her mangalsutra
thats it guys
hopr you liked it and if not plz start from square one , i wont mind
now its ur turn
do comment

lemme try it from here:

Nupz enters the kitchen and takes her mother-in-law's aashirwaad.
Mom: itni deyr laga di tum log ne aane mein aaj flight hai tum logon ki kya miss karni hai kya?
Nupz: Mummyji By god aapka beta jo hai na..jab office ka kaam ho..toh to subha 6 baje hi uth jaate hain😡...aur abhi jab chhutty hai aur kahin bahar jaana hai toh bas sone se hi fursat nahi milti..by god na 5, 5 baar uthana parta hai subha se leke tab jaa ker uthte hain!!
at this mayank, whose just entered the kitchen himself, calls from the back: "haan maa, aur office jab jaana ho to madam ko kabhi srk toh kabhi ranbeer ke sapne dekhne se hi fursat nahi milti...aur bahar jaana ho to dekho fat se uth gayi subha subha"😛
Nupz opens her mouth to retort back but mom interrupts with: "tum dono bas bhi karo, abhi naashta karna hai ke nahi, nahi to is behes mei jo time bacha hai flight tak wo bhi nikal jayega..miss karni hai kya flight? cum on chalo aao table pe...nupur mai yeh parathe leke jaa rahi hoo chaye choolay pe rakhi hai le aao tum wo jaldi se..and mayoo get sum plates..jaldi aao dono", and she leaves the kitchen saying this. mayank calls at her back with an irritated voice: "mayooo?" to which nupz laughs..
nupz then turns off the stove, pours the tea in the cups, and heads towards the cupboard behind mayank where the tray is kept.
"abhi kya dekho ja rahe ho, jao na plates lo, mujhe tray nikalni hai almari se hato"...
mayank just pulls her by her arm, and pushes her against the side wall.
"mayank...kya kar rahe ho..chhoro" nupz keeps whispering while trying to free herself.
"sssh" mayank looks in her eye to shut her up..and leans in for a kiss, as nupz closes her eyes, but just then the phone rings!
"phone! chhoro na mayankkkkk" again nupz jumps, then again starts trying to free herself, but mayank wouldn't let her go -"aane do phone ko..by god na nupur..phone ki ghanti na ho patakha ho jaise" mayank teases her..
"nupur beta phone hai gunjan kaa" mayank's mom calls out...
nupur pushes mayank aside, who starts chuckling while watching her put the cups onthe tray quickly, and with a blush on her cheeks...after placing the cups she hurries out past mayank, who tried once again to stop her by holding her dupatta, but this time nupz manages to free her dupatta quickly and goes out, while pausing at the entrance to say: "mayoooo.." mayank looks at her with narrowed eyes, to which nupz giggles, and continues with "by god na bboht slow ho tum kab se khare ho plates nahi nikaaal rahe..:P jaldi se lo plates aur aaao" and goes with a wink at him.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

good post yar guys, l will think about this too

Edited by balshik - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW!!
VERY FUNNY AND ROMENTIC!!!!
AWESOME!!!
SOMEONE CONT SOON!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinklystar_hp

lemme try it from here:

Nupz enters the kitchen and takes her mother-in-law's aashirwaad.
Mom: itni deyr laga di tum log ne aane mein aaj flight hai tum logon ki kya miss karni hai kya?
Nupz: Mummyji By god aapka beta jo hai na..jab office ka kaam ho..toh to subha 6 baje hi uth jaate hain😡...aur abhi jab chhutty hai aur kahin bahar jaana hai toh bas sone se hi fursat nahi milti..by god na 5, 5 baar uthana parta hai subha se leke tab jaa ker uthte hain!!
at this mayank, whose just entered the kitchen himself, calls from the back: "haan maa, aur office jab jaana ho to madam ko kabhi srk toh kabhi ranbeer ke sapne dekhne se hi fursat nahi milti...aur bahar jaana ho to dekho fat se uth gayi subha subha"😛
Nupz opens her mouth to retort back but mom interrupts with: "tum dono bas bhi karo, abhi naashta karna hai ke nahi, nahi to is behes mei jo time bacha hai flight tak wo bhi nikal jayega..miss karni hai kya flight? cum on chalo aao table pe...nupur mai yeh parathe leke jaa rahi hoo chaye choolay pe rakhi hai le aao tum wo jaldi se..and mayoo get sum plates..jaldi aao dono", and she leaves the kitchen saying this. mayank calls at her back with an irritated voice: "mayooo?" to which nupz laughs..
nupz then turns off the stove, pours the tea in the cups, and heads towards the cupboard behind mayank where the tray is kept.
"abhi kya dekho ja rahe ho, jao na plates lo, mujhe tray nikalni hai almari se hato"...
mayank just pulls her by her arm, and pushes her against the side wall.
"mayank...kya kar rahe ho..chhoro" nupz keeps whispering while trying to free herself.
"sssh" mayank looks in her eye to shut her up..and leans in for a kiss, as nupz closes her eyes, but just then the phone rings!
"phone! chhoro na mayankkkkk" again nupz jumps, then again starts trying to free herself, but mayank wouldn't let her go -"aane do phone ko..by god na nupur..phone ki ghanti na ho patakha ho jaise" mayank teases her..
"nupur beta phone hai gunjan kaa" mayank's mom calls out...
nupur pushes mayank aside, who starts chuckling while watching her put the cups onthe tray quickly, and with a blush on her cheeks...after placing the cups she hurries out past mayank, who tried once again to stop her by holding her dupatta, but this time nupz manages to free her dupatta quickly and goes out, while pausing at the entrance to say: "mayoooo.." mayank looks at her with narrowed eyes, to which nupz giggles, and continues with "by god na bboht slow ho tum kab se khare ho plates nahi nikaaal rahe..:P jaldi se lo plates aur aaao" and goes with a wink at him.

great partt ..
i am happy that everyone is replying...
now plz continue from here
like we cant start from where we want to start we have to go line wise !
thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow, i must say all parts are good!!! do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wah!

kya likhate hai yahan pe log????????

i would love to use my hand here too!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nups went towards phone

N : arey gunjan bol kaise hai?

G :main to thik hoon! bas aap ki yaad aa rahi hai!

N: arey mera baccha! tu phikar kyun kar rahi hai? main aaj airport jane se pehle tujhe milke jaungi!

G :main to think hoon di lekin Uday bhaiyya..........

N :kyun unhe kya hua?

G :kal se do-teen tissue papers ka box khatam kar chuke hai!

N :pet kharab hai?

G :arey nahin di! ro roke.........bura haal hai unka! tumhe bohot miss kar rahe hai1

N : ooh! tab to mein jaroor aungi!

G :pakka!

N: haan! uday bhai ko surprise denge!

n nups hang off.

Ma :nupur kahan jane ki soch rahi ho?

M : maa, shayad honeymoon miss karke kisi film ke premier pe to nahi jaa rahi hai na aap ki bahu....oops beti!

Nups gv him a "ur-so-dead" look

N :nahin maa jane se pehle ghar jaake au soch rahi thi.

Maa: yeh to acchi baat hai! gunjan se milke aoo!

N :maa, uday bhaiyaa mujhe kuch jyada hi miss kar rahe hai!

M :oh, wo saala...........

N :mayank! gaali mat do...

M :arey mupur rani, wo mera sala hi hua na!

N :mujhe pata nahi tumhe uday bhaiyya se kya prob hai!

M :kuch nahin! chaho to apne saath honeymoon le chale?

N :hoey moon kyun dahej mein ghar hi leke aoo?

And they continue their nok-jhok as they reach Bhusha house!
Manhen thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was nice anwaya :-)
I'll try now
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
Loved the concept!!
itz a wesome!!
@anwaya:the last part really made me laugh...lol
itz was Damn good!!
plzz continue

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