*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

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i liked the way Anwaya xpressed Mayur's lovely nok jhokh on pg 3.

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minalpink100

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thanks lot for u r comments

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Ananya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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aww dis part was soooo cuuuute....loved it yaar

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Aww . . . how sweet! 😳

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Ranbir Deewani ........

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Posted: 16 years ago

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aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssoooooooommmmeee

thanx fr da PM

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minalpink100

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@ ananya,kanky,loyal-kashian & lekha
thanks for u r sweet comments

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Monica

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Posted: 16 years ago

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WOW SO CUTE PART!!!

CONT SOON

LOVE YAAA

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Swati

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Posted: 16 years ago

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where r u minal???????we r starved 4 ur update yaar...update soon dr...tk cr.. 😊
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

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minalpink100

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hi friends now i m updating next part
first scene in bhushan house
mayank nupur came to bhushan house because nupur father called them when they came
gunajn :- di kaise hai aap (with hug) & jiju aap kaise hai ?
nupur:- me tik hu
mayank :- me bhi tik hu aur hame pata chala hai ki aap aur samrat ke engagement ki bat hone wali hai waw waw kya bat hai( with smile )
gunjan:- jiju aap bi na
mayank:- are kitni shrmati hai
nupur:- ha fir pehle se itni innocent hai silent hai fir ab to shrmati hi hogi
then they both enter into hall
nupur's dad :- are aap agye hai & asked to mayank & nupur kaise ho tum log
nupur:- bauji me bhi tik hu
mayank:- agar nupur tik hai to me bhi tik papa
nupur's dad:- me janti hu beta tum meri beti se kitna pyar karti hu o bahut lucky hai usko tum jaise pati aur itna achha sasural mila
mayank:- aise koi bat nahi me lucky hu itna pyari biwi mili mujhe
nupur:- with smile thanks
then suddenly uday enters
uday:- nupur my sweet sister kaise ho tum
nupur:- me bilkul tik hu aur aap kaise hai ?
uday:- me bhi tik hu jiju aap kaise hai ?
mayank:- me tik hu uday aur aap kaise hai aur apke khane ka bandobast tik se ho rahe hai na fir with teasing eyes
uday:- ha jiju apko meri chinta bahut hai na fir pata hia aaj me morning 8 parotha kha liya
mayank:- waw kya bat hai mujhe lagta ahi aaj morning ghar me kisiko bhi break fast nahi bacha hoga hai na
nupur:- mayank chodo na kyun tum uday bhaiyya ko satate ho
mayank:- me kyun sata raha hu sirf sach bol raha hu jaha uday ho waha khana bachne ki chance hi nahi
nupur:- with angry look mayank
uday:- waise nupur mera niece kaisa hai tum tik se khana kha liya karo tumare liye bhi aur niece ke liye bhi
nupur see to mayank with shy eyes he smiled & nupur told to uday ha bilkul tik hai
mayank:- tum kahne ki chinta mat karo uday khana to nupur khani hai tum nahi
then all r laugh😊
next scene
all are sitting in hall even pandit also come he fixed engagement date then all r happy specially gunjan is fully shy
nupur's dad:- samrat me tum par barosa karke meri beti ki responsibality de rahi hu please usko kush rakna kyunki maynak to meri bete se jyada hogaya hai me yahi ummid karti hu tum gunjan ko sambalogi
samrat:- aap chinta mat kariye papa me uski puri responsibality lelunga aur mayank ki tarah apke dil me ek bete jaise jagah jarur banalunga
then all r smiled
mayank:- are mujhe itna tarif mat kiya karo mujhe azeeb lagta hai
all are asked kyun?
mayank:- kyunki daily meri pyari biwi se jo tarif sunta ho na usse ye tarif thoda alag hai isi liye
then all are laugh
nupur:- maynak tum bi na (with smile )
gunjan :- me sab ke liye sweet leke ati hu
nupur:- me bhi chalti hu chalo
gunjan :- nahi di tumhe ab aram ki jarurat hai kam me karungi tum yahi biti raho
diya:- gunjan tik kehrahi hai nupur hum hai na
mayank:- ghar me bhi me hamesha yahi kehta hu usko
uday:- ha pichli bar holi ke din jo hua me kabhi nahi bhul paunga
then nupur suddenly gone from that place
all are shocked
maynak see uday with angrily & told me leke ata hu usko shayad o upset ho gayi
next scene(third)
nupur comes in gunjan room sit on bed start crying
then mayank suddenly enters & asked nupur ye tum kya kar rahe ho
nupur:- not answer
mayank:- sit infront of her & mat ro nupur mujhe bhi bahut dard hota hai agar me tumhe ise dekta hu dekho jo hota hai achhe ke liye hi hota hai na shayad bagwan ne hamere pehle bachha ko chinliye to kya hua ab ek khushi diya hai na ek aur bachha ke rup me
nupur:- ha tum tik kehte ho mayank but jabbi mujhe us incident ki yad ati hai bahut dukh hota hai
mayank:- past is past bhul jao smile pleaseeee
nupur:- smiled
mayank:- thats like a good girl & give one kiss to forhead😊
nupur:- tum kitne achhe ho mujhe lagta hai is bar jarur ladka hoga bilkul tumare tarah sweet cutee 😊
mayank:- nahi nupur ladki hogi bilkul tumari tarah chulbuli but jyada filmy nahi ha ha ha 😉
nupur:- mayank tum bi na try to hit him
mayank:- suddnely keep her hand say ILU
nupur:- ILU TOO
mayank:- ILU
nupur:- again ?
mayank:- bhul gaye kya ye meri pyari sweet bachha ke liye hai bhul gayi kya
nupur:- smiled tum bi na
mayank:- chalo sab hamra wait karrahe honge
when mayank nupur came to hall they see nupur smile all r happy
uday:- sorry sister mere wajaha se ye sab
nupur:- nahi uday bhaiyya aap chinta mat kijiye
mayank:- agar uday chinta karega to aur ek plate khana jyada khayega fir
then all are laughed 😊

hi friends how is my update please reply me i knw its short but next time i will write big one also some more mayank & nupur romantic scenes 😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 16 years ago