*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7 - Page 33

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Posted: 16 years ago
HI FRIENDS HERE MY NEXT UPDATE IS THERE
FIRST SCENE (IN MAYANK NUPUR HOUSE )
MAYANK ENTER IN HIS BEDROOM AFTER DINNER & NUPUR STANDING INFRONT OF WINDOW COOL AIR IS COMING FROM OUTSIDE & NUPUR HAIRS ARE FLYING MAYANK SEEN IT & SLOWLY COME TOWARDS NUPUR & GIVE ONE KISS TO HER NECK NUPUR SUDDENLY SHOCK & TURNED
nupur:- mayank tum bi na (with smile)
mayank:- waw meri biwi ki chehre par smile dekakhe achha laga
nupur :- hmmm thanks
again nupur hairs flying & coming on her face but this time mayank clean hairs from her face slowly moving towrds her & nupur slowly going behind but wall came
mayank came fully near to nupur they got eye lock for few minutes
nupur suddenly realise & told
nupur:- mujhe neend a rahi hai me sone jati hu
mayank not ready to leave her at any moment & keep her very tight from his hands & told kyun kya hua (with romantic voice)
nupur:- nothing (with shy face)
mayank:- shadi hoke 6 months hogaye aur tum maa bhi bananewali ho fir bhi tina shrmati ho mujhse but tum bahut cute lagti ho jab shrmati ho to
nupur just seeing not saying any thing
mayank bring his face towards her but suddenly phone ring
mayank with angry face kisiko koi kam bhi nahi rehta isi liye is time me call karke distrub karte hai & nupur smiled & told jake phone utao
mayank take phone


arrnmy:- hi mayank sorry for distrubance
mayank:- murmuring distrub kiya hi hai to sorry kyun
arrmy :- kya bola mayank
mayank :- nothing bolo tum is waqt
arrmy :- office ka kam hai me & rhea kal delhi ja rahe hai 1 week ke liye hum bhi thoda waqt sath gujare
mayank:- it is good idea all the best man
arrmy:- thanks isi liye batane ke liye call kiya tha nupur ko bhi inform kardo
mayank:- tik hai bye good night
arrmy:- bye good night


then mayank turned back & nupur sleeping on bed but still her beauty her hairs my god mayank become like doll just seeing her & come on bed keep her hands from back give again one kiss to her cheek
nupur:- (turned back )mayank ji ab sone ke time hua hai
mayank :- pata hai but mujhe aaj bas tumhe ise hi dekne ke liye man kar raha hai
nupur:- hmmm
but mayan slowly bring his face towards nupur face give one kiss to her forhead
nupur became fully shy & talk less & also want to dont avoid this moment & not to say any thing to mayank just she stop to say any thing
mayank then give one more kiss to cheek & her neck
they both hugged
mayank give kiss to her lips this time also she not say any thing simply lost in him & mayank also lost in her
they deeply kissed 😊
then afterwords mayank got up & sit on bed & again see nupur face her face became like tomato (fully red with shy) mayank dont want to got up but he remember that time she is pregnent & nupur also remeber so they both thinks this much only enough because they dont have only physical attraction in between them true love is there it is more to this attraction & all 😊
wn mayank seen nupur after got up she not say say any thing fully silent arise slowly cool air again coming inside then nupur also got up sit on bed with shy face & she not able to see mayank because of shyness 😊
then mayank again come towards her & say ILU 😊
but nupur not see him
then mayank told to her
mayank:- tum itna shrmati kyun har bar but bahut achhi lagti ho bilkul tomato ki tarah
thi time also nupur not say any thing
then mayank slowly keep her shoulder & turned her & tell
mayank:- ek bar meri tarah to dekhho na itna shrmati ho tum by godd agar meri sath jagda karna ho to jhansi ki rani nupur ban jati ho
this time nupur also seen him & tell
nupur:- kyunnnn (with angry face)😡
mayank:- ab tum normal lag rahi ho ha ha ha
nupur :- tum bi na
mayank:- ha me hi hu mayank sharma tumara pati
nupur:- by god mayank jab hum college me the na tab after hamare confession ke bad bhi me kabhi sochi bhi nahi thi ki tum mayank itna romantic insan ho jab shadi hua tabi to pata chala
mayank:- shadi ke bad means kab pata chala bolo (with teasing look)😉
nupur:- shy oooooo
mayank:- are bolo na
nupur:- hamre first night ke din hi pata chala 😉
mayank:- not say any thing again they got eye lock
nupur:- tum kya soch rahe ho
mayank:- wahi hamare sweet memories wahi first night ke & honey moon ke sab
nupur:- mayankkkkkkk tum bi na throw pillow on him (with smile)
mayank:- are nupur tum shrmati ho tabbi muj se jagada karti ho
nupur:- but ye pyar se karti hu
mayank:- ILU DEAR 😊
nupur:- ILU TO 😊
again mayank say one more time ILU
nupur:- ye kis ke liye dubara
mayank:- keep his hand nupur stomach ye hamre bachhe ke liye kyunki o bhi to hamra hissa hai na aur o mujhse naraz huye to ye sochke dad to sirf mumma ko ILU you kaha & kiss bhi kiya isi liye
& give one kiss to her stomach & say ILU & GOOD NIGHT 😊
then they both hugged & say good night to each other with laugh 😊

precap:- engagement talk about gunjan &samrat in bhushan house
& mayank nupur meet one new friend😊

hi friends how is my update plz reply me after reading 😊

Edited by minalpink100 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Tussi ithe changi likhti ho yaaar!!!!👏👏

😳It was shooo very cute!!...Every girl would wish for a guy like Mayank in her life!!!!😳😳
AWESOME UPDATE!!
loved the way the story is moving...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tooo goood!!!!!⭐️
Hey...cant you change the name of the topic??? so that as and when you update you can change it...it will help!!!!
Loads of love...😳
😳
Janani
Edited by jan4artimayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome yaar
update next part sooooooooooooooooooooooonn plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
very very cute dear..... i liked it.. woh romantic wala part aacha hai.... wow engagement talk haan...
who is the new friend...
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow.....after readin ur ff..ny normal girl will blush..... 😳 my god...its so passionate n butiful....god bless ya...
kp writing ur magic yaar.....update soon.... 😍
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
Edited by AngelArTi1988 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Janani

thanks lot for u r sweet comments 😊 ya sure will change name give me some names
Edited by minalpink100 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ swati & preethi

thanks for u r lovely commnets yar thansk for u r support keep supporting me 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
@ ch0c0lates,angelz,tehzeeb25

thanks for u r comments 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
I just read the first page of ur fic n this is a good concept.

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Posted: 16 years ago
so lovely n romantic ud's on pg.2.
All r giving their view on Mayur's love story n all r brilliant.

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