~A Sensuous Affair~ Part 10-pg118 19/08 - Page 5

Originally posted by: afifa2

OMG!

Jiaa! what a begining! I am hooked lolAww Affi u here??? Thi is so sweet of U!!

Hmm i geuss she Lol u bet!!

and lol i do understand about keeping short FFs long HeheYes BIG PROBLM!! LMAO!!😆

xo

Originally posted by: aravi

~Reserved~

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

reserved
luved to be first but never mind first page is defo fine lolz😆
will be right back shortly😉
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hey jia
whats wrong with u dear
if u write so beautifully naa
ull finish off my knowledge of adjectives n then ive to sit with a mighty dictionary with me lolz
ok seriously sorry for that lame joke
or w.e. it was
fantabulous yaar
omg the way u fabricate the story n finally bring the leads together is umazing i just love this aspect of yours yaar n others too
this is really diff from ur other ffs mainly coz ridz is a divorcee n her perspective of life is totally diff from that of armaa's who i guess is that person in the cafe whom ridz was staring at right????
blown over by the inro yaar
as usual um in
so my pm is reserved k????
keep posting when ur net is restored to its proper working condition

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

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wow Jia
what an awesome concept
brilliant writing
so Ridz juggled beteween divorced parents
and man was Abhi an ill mannered jerk
she on a self discovery , great i just loved that bit
Italy sounds cool
and my my those blue eyes
his entry is always super exciting
ok so u add me to you PM list for this one yeh

can't wait for u to take this ahead
just loved the detailed description of emotions

great!

love
Hina

Originally posted by: Jodubai

Wow Jia!!!! Superb concept.....

She got married & later divorced too, had to face all the humilation....poor girl

her mom sounds more fun, I wish I could suggest Ridz's mom to my mom...she will be terrified...hahahaha

lovely concept, can't wait to read further on this....

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

yes anvr one lol

lkin it already very interesting

wndr wot rome has planned for her lol

lkin 4wrd to readin more updtes

cnt wait

luv niz x

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

DAmn..........reserved!

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Omgoosh! this is like hot hot hot hot!!!!!!!!! 😆 aka no words.

I already sense the sensational plot already, I really hope that Ridz can prove that @$@#% Abhi modi down!

I LOVE it babes!!

Luv,

Nats

Originally posted by: musicdiva

Ohhhhhh jia i fainted at the last two lines!!! This has has has to be Armaan, i will kill you if he is not Armaan! 😆😆😆 U bet!! It has to be right?? No prizes for guesing it right!! It has to be Him......😆 knowing me, haha!!

I love the concept, and your writing style for this one! You are honestly one of my favourite FF writers on IF! 😛Awww thanks a lot Thats so sweet!!🤗

Continue very very soon!! 😳

Originally posted by: liza93

Haila!!! Reserved!!

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OMG Di! What a concept!!! Totally Dhamakedaar!!👏 Ridhima in Rome?? Then toh Love will defenitely happen!!! I am so looking forward to this Di! She is already in HIS arms!! =D

Pleaseeeeeeeeeeee Do PM me whenever u continue...!!!

Love ya

Liz😳