~A Sensuous Affair~ Part 10-pg118 19/08

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Sooon just sooooooon...........

*AHEM* please update Rogue!! *PLEASE*

Is Armour today????????👏

Love Kat

OMG Rogue???? Hy i jut put the note there saying i'll move on with roue after I COMPLETE ARMOUR!!😆 Rogue really needs my time, i need to work on it well, as right it just doesnt seem to shape up according o my satisfaction!!

Be satisfied woman!😆 *kidding* shud i start??? For starters let me whisper Sinnnnnnnn, and then.....😆

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saira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

awesome intro👏!

hope you start ASAP😳

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Oh my god Jia another one? Wow girll you never cease to amazing me with that creative mind of yours!
Now about the title...personally the title was what intrigued me to click on this post and read it...well also the fact that it was posted by you made it a MUST read..! haha And hun your ideas and writing are never crap so don't say that. I absolutely love everything you write.
Okay now as for the part...ROME? Wow that is the most perfect place for a get away for self discovery and not mentioning a little romantic fling at the same time...one that she'll probably never forget!
And wow would never have imagined her to be a divorciee...god that Abhimanyu what a womanizer..! The longing for a small fling makes sense considering her past...but more than that i think she wants a true realitionship...a guy that will always support her and hold her. I love Riddhimas determined attitude to prove what Abhi said about her was wrong...actually at the moment she doesn't seem very determined...but i feel as time passes on she will! Personally if i was in riddhimas place and Abhi hurled insult after insult at me i would blow his image of the nice husband and display his true colors of his playboyish acts and the fact that he lied to cover up his image...how dare this guy do this? But whatever i guess what ever happens is for the best...cuz these events are what cause our Ridz to go to Rome...as a get away.. a trip to re discover who she is..and most likely meet out Mr. Supercool aka Armaan..😳
And oh my god she lost her purse? Wow crossing my fingers that her purse is in the cafe...! And those warm hand....hmm i'm guessing are Armaans? I'm actually almost positive their armaans...*sigh* how lucky is she to be able to be able to fall in his arms...and those anxious blue eyes are soo enchanting and captivating..hehe i'm acutally starting to daydream now..so i'll stop and come back to reality..lolz
Your right..this is a new concept and different from what you have written before...which is why i love it soo much. It's unique and stands out....its not garbage and i can't wait till you continue! I hope your net gets fixed soon...wanting to read more =] Hehe and was that last lil bit italian?? Nicee touch..giving us the true feel of Rome..😉
Amazing job..loving the concept..you already have me hooked!
Luv MIra🤗

Edited by Gotta_luv_KYPH - 16 years ago

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Jiaaaaaa! I can't believe you didn't tell me that you posted a NEW one! I would have noticed it...but been so busy in life with dad's eyes surgery...running errands all over town...going grocery shopping..uni entrance stufff...that I didn't get a chance to catch up on all the updates I've been missing on....

But I'm loving this as I love all your other fics...The concept is great...Ridz turning to a new definition to her life and going on vacation for a rejuvination to her chaaracter and persona all because of Abhi and since she wants it too in a way! I so think I've seen a movie on this type of story...somewhat similar..but can't pinpoint the name...But oh well, I know you are gonna rock this FIC! I'm hooked already Jia!!!

I hate Abhi;s character...Needs a reality check..He needs help and not Ridz!

sigh..Armaan falling and catching her...It has to be him...LOL...

Can't wait to see what you have in store for us!!

Continue soon!

Love ya, Anita

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Aishwarya

@Aishwarya..

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

i totally luvd this concept

the way ridz hates PDA, to her past memories, then forgetting her purse and finally falling into the arms of .........????😉

do we know him???

continue soon

love:

aishwarya

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@bernard shaw

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

ANother one? child, where do you get teh inspiration to write so much and the ideas? Sounds interesting....

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ridzi830

@ridzi830

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

hey...
osome....do pm me when u update

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: na2339
reserved - dont worry i'll be brutally honest mwuhahaha 😉 Hehe i neednt doubt that....😆

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okies commentary time

I am absolutely in love with this concept! from the secretly watching lovers and longing yet dispising it at the same time to the womanizing abhi details and the not so grand upbringing... and finally to those eyes *sigh* blue 😍 every detail was explained and expressed soo clearly.Haila such a compliment from u??? Thanks a ton Lubbi, haha blue eyes!!😳 thanks a ton!!

The abhi details were so brilliant I immediately took a disliking to his character and then his words during the divorce settlement added the final nail to the coffin, if he turns up in the story again I think I might have to knock some sense and manners into the man!LMAO, lets see if he makes a retentry, if he does i'll call u!!😳

Rome is by far the most gorgeous destination someone can expect to fall in love in, self-discovery trip hehe I'd love to take one of those if it meant to just get awayI can so imagne Luubbii......thanks a ton for encouraging here yet again!!

okies so this isn't your usual style, yet you do definately do more than justice to it, you actually make it your own and make us wonder what is this girl going on about? she's an absolutely fab and star of a writer.

Haha now that was over the top, its nothing that way, i was half feeling its CRAP!!! And i stll do, its just that ur too sweet, ok i knw u wud puke hearing that...ROFL!! Thanks a billion yet again, really means a lot, um hoping to see u in future too!!😆🤗

I can't wait to see what you have planned for the story.

love Lubna 😳

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Catwoman
omg finally we have a TITLE!!😆... i mean how was i suppose to come up with a title when the details where .... *BEEP BEEP BEEP* and that it!! 🥱😆...omg the breif was it a journey to discovery.. and all!! thank god u posted for a moment i though u would take few days...😳 LMAOOOOOOOOO i thought so too, it took n entire week to decide, but finally with a few threats i did come to posting it, not to mention eating ur brain., rofl.....

Ok enough .... back to the intro.... Just want to advise i have no idea what this one about like the others my jobs just to assist u to post initially😛Talk abt being Miss Humble QUEEN!!😆😳

Wow In Rome... i can see RIdz as our audry hepburn type with the funky sunglasses looking for her life to final gell as they say.... Love the decriptive narration in ur work ....i need tips as u keep nailing these at the moment... love everything about it... 👏👏👏....Tips??? To u??? Shutup, u nednt b so overwhelmingly humble, goh m feeling embaressed!! Lol.....u hav always been my biggest inspiraton!🤗!

Wow heart broken looking for a fix... cant wait... continue soon

Love Kat😳

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Jia

@jia..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: santhideepu
wow Jia.. what an intro.. hmmm.. what shd i say.. so much told in such a simple way.. past life of Riddhima.. her parent's divorce.. abhi's bad attitude.. so much.. yet so different.. wow deariee... keep going...

and yeah if any PMs then plz count me in...

Awww thanks thanks a ton!!! Made my day, pms eh, i ont update till my net is back, so that i can send pms!!😳