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ankita

@muskaan_ankita

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#371

lol!! rahul and armaan are such devils!! 😆 way to go appy!! 👏

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#372

i m waiting for ur update yaaaarrr!!!!!!!

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#373

Sorry for the delay--

Muskaan and Riddima scan the place. It was deserted.

Riddima(a little scared) – Umm….Muskaan…Where are they?

Muskaan – I don't know Riddima.

Riddima – I am scared.

Muskaan - * gulp * …So am I.

Riddima – Do you think we should go?

Muskaan – No.Lets wait for five minutes.

Riddima and Muskaan wait. Suddenly –

Muskaan – AAAAAH!

Riddima – What happened? What happened?

Muskaan – Sorry.Nothing. I thought someone hit me, but it was only your hand.

Riddima places a hand on her chest.

Riddima – You gave me an attack. My heart's beating really fast!

Muskaan – Sorry.

Riddima – Its okay. Muskaan I think we should go now.

Muskaan – Lets go.

But before Muskaan and Riddima could take a step forward.Two men with their faces covered and knifes in their hands, lunged at them.

Muskaan and Riddima screamed. The men were actually Armaan and Rahul but the girls didn't know that.

Armaan – Don't you girls know that walking around in deserted streets in Mumbai is dangerous?

Muskaan – Who are you and what do you want?

Rahul – Muhahahaha! We are thieves and we are gonna kidnap you both and hold you for ransom.

Riddima – Please let us go! Please!

Rahul – No way! You both look from a well to do family. You both will fetch us a good ransom.

Riddima – Our parents don't live here! Let us go please!

Armaan – No problem. Your boyfriends would pay they ransom.

Muskaan – They would never do that!

Rahul( a little hurt) – Of course they would! They love you both a lot and they—

But before Rahul could say anything else Armaan nudged him forbidding him from letting too much information away.

More coming…

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-Mishti_Divz-

@-Mishti_Divz-

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#374

wohaha sooooooooooooooooo cutte R and A 😆

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i-love-dr.rahul

@i-love-dr.rahul

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#375

hahahaha...rahul is tooo cute yaaarrr!

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#376

Riddima - Please let us go!

Muskaan - Please!

Rahul.- No way! Cooperate with us and you wont be hurt.

Riddima was scared, and Muskaan had tears in her eyes.

Rahul's heart melted seeing Muskaan cry.

Rahul - Muskaan don't cry.

Muskaan looked at him stunned.

Muskaan - How do you know my name?

Rahul pulls his the covering off his face.

Rahul - Its me. Rahul and this is Armaan.

Riddima and Muskaan looked at them stunned.

Rahul hands their bags to them.

Rahul - We were the ones who stole your bags.

Muskaan and Riddima were furious.

Muskaan - How could both of play such a prank?

Riddima - Disgusting!

Armaan - Its just a prank.

Riddima - No its not JUST a prank. You scared the hell out of us!

Muskaan - And we don't want to see your faces from now on.

And saying so Muskaan and riddima stomp away while Rahul and Armaan exchenge worried glances

- - - Cya guys !!

Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#377

heyy appy!! awesomee parts!! soo evil rahul and armaan are haha cant wait for the next parts

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#378

Appu awsome parts!!!! Bechaare guys. They totally had it coming!

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: stellarwind

thats because they are on 24/7. some ppl have a life. and it would be nice to read it if it was formatted better.

What is your issue? If you have a problem, say it to our freakin faces you understand. Keep ur negativity to ur damn self. I think ur the one who has no life. All u do is complain. Seriously, leave Apoorva alone. She's had enough of your nonsense. Instead of telling others that they're spamming, why don't you take ur own advice and stop posting things that aren't relevant. What does ur comment have anything to do with her ff? we could just as well report you. Don't like it, don't read it. Simple as that. Don't comment if ur ot going to say anything worthwhile. Have some respect for other's feelings. She doesn't write so she can get negative comments from you. There are better ways to tell someone that you didn't like it. You did the same thing in her other ff, some nonsense about copying ideas... if you have such original ideas, why don't you start an ff urself since the rest of us are so 'unoriginal.' Khud kuch karna nahi hota aur behatke doosron ka mood aur dimaag kharaab karte hain.