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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely yaar....continue soon...plzz pm me when u update...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: VS+RM

IT WAS A NICE PART.....

PLZZZZZZZ DO PM ME WHEN U UPDATE AND PLZZ ADD ME IN UR PM LIST.


Thanks will PM you as soon as I update
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Posted: 16 years ago

Yepp will try and do just that!
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Originally posted by: RM+PS

lovely yaar....continue soon...plzz pm me when u update...


Aww thank you! Will pm you when I update!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: lovebapu18

please do continue soon.


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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 17

Recap:Mehndi occurred ,Muskaan and Rahul have a funny fight on the phone.

Muskaan hummed to herself merrily. She grabbed a cup of coffee and peered out of the window, staring into the distance, taking in the scene.

She started daydreaming about her dream wedding. Imagining herself as a bride, made her cheeks go red, apart from that the thought of Rahul looking like her prince charming, which made her weak in her knees. She soon started to realize that she was missing him more than ever. The very thought, that they could very soon be married, if he proposed, gave her a lot of joy. She took the cup up to her lips and carefully sipped some out of it, leaving the mark of her lip gloss on the cup.

Nikita slowly creeped up behind Muskaan and yelled at the top of her lungs as an attempt to scare her.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

Muskaan lurched out of her vivid imagination, with a jolt she turned around and glared at Nikita.

"Nikita! How dare you. Rukh ek minute tumhe theek karti hoon."

The two started running around the entire room, just like little kids and threw pillows at each other.

"Time out!"Said Nikita as she recollected her breath.

"Yeh le!" Muskaan said throwing the final cushion onto her.

Muskaan sat down attempting to look grumpy,but instead started in her usual fits of laughter.After a while she stopped,leaving an awkward silence in the room.

"Tumhe pata hai aaj kitna khoobsoorat din hai?"

"Haan Haan pata hain,aur yeh bhi pata sakti hoon,ki yeh kyun itna khoobsoorat din hai."said Nikita getting up and adjusting herself onto the sofa."Firstly,aaj Armaan aur Ridz ki Shaadi hain.Aur tumhare liye ,more importantly Rahul wapaas aa raha hain.Aur who bhi 2 ghaanton mein."

"Waise tumhe kaise pata?"

"Usne mujhe phone kiya tha ,ke who flight mein behta hain."said Nikita,realizing that she shouldn't have said that.

"What?Usne tumhe phone kiya,aur mujhe nahi?.Ruk main na use aaj theek karke hi rahoongi."

"Waise kal tumhari meeting kaise thi?"said Niktia tyring to cheekily change the topic.

"Meeting?...Oh haan Saku I mean Sakina se.Bohot hi achi thi.Khoob baatein ki,bohot maza aaya."

"Really?Awesome.."

"Chalo aab ready hote hain.Dr Shashank ko madad jo karni hain."said Muskaan whilst getting up.

"Yepp!Chalo.."said Nikita starting to make her way out of the room.

"Waise Nikita,can u help me straighten my hair?"said Muskaan.

"Yepp sure!Waise tumhare baal toh curly hi ache lagte hain."

"Aaj change,waise bhi uss ulle de pathe ko jaalana hain."said Muskaan turning her nose up in pride.

"Kaun Rahul?"

"Nahin Atul!"replied Muskaan sarcastically.

"Atul?You know na ki Atul kabka Anji pe fida hain."

"Nikita!"Muskaan yelled at the top of her lungs"Rahul nahi toh aur kisko?"

"Sorry baba,chalo tumhare baal baana deti hoon."

Nikita started straightening Muskaan's hair,which took about an hour due to its nature.Muskaan looked at the mirror pleased with the final outlook of it.Muskaan took out the sari that Rahul had specifically brought for her and showed it to Nikita.Nikita smiled as she realized how much they truly loved each other;putting aside all their childish fights.

"Okay,tumhara ho gaya.Aab main chal ke ready hoti hoon."Nikita twinkled her eyes and started to make her way out of the room.

"Ek minute Nikki,ruko,aaj main tumhari hair style karti hoon.How about French plait?Tumpe aacha dikhega.Par tum kya pehen ne waali hon?"

"Umm Abhi ne actually mujhe ek anarkali suit gift kiya tha,wohi pehenoongi."

"Awwww how cute!"said Muskaan "Chal beht tumhare baal bana deti hoon."

Muskaan immediately started to the complex plait,moaning and groaning about how silky Nikita's hair was.Nikita glazed into the mirror,and stared at her reflection.She realized that she never ever had really cared about the way she presented herself to Abhimanyu.It then came to her,how one sided their relationship really was.How much Abhi had proved to be a support for her,through the tough times,and what had she done to Abhi?Infact far from anything,except accept his proposal for a date.

Nikita cast herself away from the reflection in the mirror and looked down.Muskaan noticed the sudden gesture of Nikita,the smile turned frown.

"Kya tum use pyaar karti ho Nikita?"

There was no answer as Nikita looked hard at the floor,hard through her own feelings,her heart,her soul.The question was something she herself had never found an answer to.She had hated him for so long,then loved him as a friend .But did she love him more than that?A true mystery to her.

"Muskaan,Haan kahoongi to bhi ye jhoot rahega,aur na kahoongi tab bhi ye ek jhoot he hoga."

Muskaan looked at Nikita,in an understanding way.Since the two had become room mates,or house mates.They had shared everything in their lives.Problems issues,except this one issue that Muskaan never found her feet to ask Nikita,due to her fear that their friendship would be reduced to nothing.

"Nikita,main tumhe kuch kahoon.Agar kissi ko bhi Abhi jaisa understanding dost aur us hi main hi pyaar mile,toh phir usne sab kuch pa liya.Nikita I don't know ki main tumhe aur kya kahoon,par try karke dekho.Mujhe lagta hain ke tum ek doosre ke saath fit ho.I mean already ho,par agar tum bhi use kuch waqt de sako toh phir,tumhara pyaar aur bhi gehra ho jayega."

Nikita got up and looked towards Muskaan.

"Thanks Muskaan.Try karke dekhoongi.Whole-heartedly"

"Chalo Chalo,bohot hi emotional ho gaya,aab mera plan dekhon uss ulle de pathe ko main chodoongi hi nahi,tumhe phone karta hain ,aur mujhe nahin'Hmmph"

Nikita started to laugh at Muskaan's sudden inclination to get back at Rahul.

Nikita left the room,drying her tears away.

Muskaan immediately set about getting ready.She draped herself in the sari and left her hair out.She put on a bindi and matching jewellery with the sari.

She crept out of her room and entered Nikita's, she saw Nikita ready wearing the anarkali suit,and looking like a true pari.

"Chalo ,makeup main kar dedi hoon , Abhimanyu aaj chauk ke hi reh jayega."laughed Muskaan.

Nikita blushed,as she saw herself in the mirror wearing a cream coloured anarkali suit,with heavy blue embroidery on it,around the sleeves.It flowed till her knees and reminded her of her childhood;when she wore pink glazed frocks and pranced around the garden,chasing Armaan.Armaan ' why did everything have to come back to square one?no this reminded her of their relationship Abhimanyu and hers.

"Done!"screeched Muskaan"By the way main kaisi dikh rahi hoon?"asked Muskaan.

"Bohot hi achi,I'm sure Rahul jealous ho jayega."Nikita said smiling.

Nikita and Muskaan along with Ranvir,and Rahul's mom reached the Gupta household.

It had been decorated with bright red,roses lined the gateway and the porch in the house.The entire house was decorated with magnolia flowers,teamed with complimentary flowers.Muskaan smiled as she entered the house,remembering her earlier daydream.

The four immediately made their way to respect parts of the house.Nikita and Muskaan glided up the stairs ,straight to Ridhimma's room.Where she sat on the bed.Still not ready.

"Chalo Ridzie,ab hum jo aa gaye hain.Toh tumhe saja kar hi rahege"said Muskaan sitting next to Ridhimma who was immersed in thoughts of her own.Her change in life,the way in which everything was happening.

"Guys!Mujhe shaadi nahin karni"said Ridhimma whilst in a trance.

Muskaan and Nikita dropped their mouths and shook Ridhimma.

"Kya?"said Nikita and Muskaan at the same time.

Precap: Ridhimma and Armaan both go through panic attacks about getting married.Rahul arrives in the household to be knocked of his feet by Muskaan's avatar.


Okay that was Part 17..well in a different writing style to my previous ones.Hope you guys don't mind.I know it wasn't really RM centered,but I wanted it to show other couples as well.Well I find AN interesting hence developing the story there.Will be updating everyday for the next two weeks with more RM and a twist in the tale.

So hope you liked it!! Do comment and criticize.Suggestions are welcome.

Cheers,
Radhika

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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww..beautiful part..almost after 2 whole months..had been waiting since ever..loved Muskaan's thoughts..sumtimes Im just like her..always day-dreaming abt my marriage..☺️ I like the story-line of Nikbhi..its diff..and OMG..panic attack..sooo cuteee!!!🤪
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mansi-

Aww..beautiful part..almost after 2 whole months..had been waiting since ever..loved Muskaan's thoughts..sumtimes Im just like her..always day-dreaming abt my marriage..☺️ I like the story-line of Nikbhi..its diff..and OMG..panic attack..sooo cuteee!!!🤪


Haha yeh after like 2 months.LOL so sorry! Hope I made up for it tho..
Haha yeh I guess Its diff..I think I can express myself as Nikki quite a lot.Maybe I just get her or something.
Lol I should start a NikBhi FF lol lol this is turning into one...I love writing abt them 2.But RM are the best. :P

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Posted: 16 years ago
Yes..U did sweety 🤗 Even im updating in a couple of mins..do chk:)
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Posted: 16 years ago

heyy radhika,

i m komal.i was a silent reader of ur ff.
it is great.
loved it.
pls continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.
luv,
komal.

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