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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG Im so soooorry im so late! =(
I was actually in a shock when I read Im Nutty professor!😆
But no worries...Im still laffing!😉😆😆
Anyways I liked this part as well...And all of them dying in freak accident! Scary!😲
But this Armaan-Abhi convo is intruging...Haiii...My Armaan is so bhola bhala😍
Continue soon😳...And ur stupid manager😡😡...Tell him to give u a break since u need to update ur FF...I dunno y i think he wont find it amusing?😆😆
Anyways...Thanks 4the PM...And i dont think my dabba is full? Will check on that😃
Hugs!🤗🤗
-Marisha🤪 The Nutty Professor
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
hey lubi....um so sorry girl...i was intending to read this today....but something...just an unexpected distraction...i will be back soon n read n post my comment...reserved until then!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Hey lubi di!!!!!
Finally seeing u after a long tym seems lyk ur boss hasnt spared u yet.....
Well wat a start nd i mst say u shud nt laugh at urself coz da concept is osm seems intresting... :-)
nd btw whr did ur boss bury u nd wid da wrd bury i guess u visited a graveyard kya or ur boss sent u thr:-D tht u ve cum up wit a thriller
nd omg the title is lyk so appealing i guess it has got sumthin invisible which makes u wanna go further nd read the story......
M so happy tat u r finally bak nd tat 2 wit a bang no wit a vengeance haha lookin forward 2 read more nd crackin ma nut thinkin wat ll happen nxt....
Nd btw m surprised maddy isnt here yet she shud ve got here bfore me...guess the gal is in trouble
do update soon hope u havnt slept seeing ur boss crawl up again nd again im ma comment well newayz update asap
luv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

hey an amazin part loving ur ff, ur definately holding the cards close to ur chest, its definately an interesting part reminds me of final detination anyways one question abhi n armaan r they two seperate ppl or duz he have split personality. i no i no u probably cant reveal anything so im asking anyone and every 1 so readz my post wat do guys think. i cant seem to figure it out.anyways do continue soon.

lov iram
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
hey another amezing ff from u....loved it...cant wait to read more...continue soon...do pm if possible....
❤️MONA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
Switching the car engine off Riddhima sat in her car watching the icy flakes gently float down to the ground. The breeze ruffled through the tree's making them sway slightly and shimmer under the winter sun; though rare with its appearance, when the sun did make a show however sparse they were, it bought a flood of life with it.....

that lubi is in a long long long time gona be my standing fav description of the beautiful winter season...thanx...think its gona be my gchat stautus now...u wudnt mind me hacking wud ya????

sleep meant closing your eyes, closing your eyes meant releasing control of your mind, releasing control of the mind only allowed it to wonder and wonder it did' to places she never wanted to visit again.

another pick...i rarely quote lubi....but somehow ur update is makin g me today....i reread every para i think....almost every atleast....uv done the passage with such grace....i cant descibe well...but i loved it...ever word had its varuiation in impact there wr parts which made me uineasy as u intended n those which made me smile...n some where i had a confusion of emotion coz thats how u got it out...wonderful job lubi...!!!!...

hell...i am actually doing this comment along with the read....somehow the very first paragraph made me do it i wanted to quote i know....n now i just got done reading the dream...OMG...lubi u have my insides unsettled uncomfortably....rushing to find the enxt chapter...urrghhhh...id be freaked to ever fall back to sleep after that kinda nightmare....😕
😕

Edited by spln - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Not doing too well at keeping the irritation out of her tone...i liked the sound of this sentence for no particular reason!!!

best to keep this man away from her man-eating, too good for the world; someone died and made her god boss!
...this one had me in splits....um certain just as u may have intended lubi!!!

alright done reading the 2nd chap now, n i duno who um cursing more here....u for having done just 2 chaps....or myself for having not read it earlier...or myself again for having read it too soon...had i reda it later i wud have read more um presuming....gosh lubi u have me hooked so bad...i gave kratz a ques abt one fic if she knew it wud n cud be just one that she wud wish to be carried on the FF, if they made a rukle to having one for a month....i was having a ahrd time finding an answer ot that....um not exagerating as i never do, its this one, co i9 klnow after reading this chap, its gona play my mind more than i wish it wud coz i have else where to focus on....totally rocked....loving it lubs....please make the updates quick n regular, n just as stunning if not more!!!!

lov n cheers,

nj


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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
LUBI DI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kahan ho tussi
lagta hai aapke boss ki band bajane padegi gimme his address waise bhi main prank master hun
hehehe maza aayega *wink*
mmmmmmmmm
lemme think
mmmm
pehle lets mess with his butts
den wen he ll b in pain we ll do sumthing so that he cant walk
and then haath bandhenge
and now cums the main part
we ll make him sit on ice
ooooooohhh
sounds kewl na
think of it
if u want it to be executed i m always there
weneva
bas ek shart hai update asap
luv ya
@nkit@
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
I'll be waiting 😉

Originally posted by: sujata23

im confused. it wud be gr8 if u wud clear the difference between past n present. n im guessin abhi is armaan's split personality. plz clear this 4 me.

Sorry for being so confusing Sujata, Chapter 2 onwards is the past... when I get back to the present I'll make sure it's easy to understand... regarding the relationship between Abhi and Armaan... that will be cleared up as the story progresses... till then sorry I can't say anything else 😳

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

OMG Im so soooorry im so late! =(

I was actually in a shock when I read Im Nutty professor!😆 hehe it took you how long to come out of shock? LMAO you are a nutty professor.. .abh jhoot toh mein bolti nahi 😉
But no worries...Im still laffing!😉😆😆 see nutty professor always laughs and so do you!
Anyways I liked this part as well...And all of them dying in freak accident! Scary!😲 freaky indeed... i didnt want to go into too much detail of how they died just incase it got a bit too gruesome 😕
But this Armaan-Abhi convo is intruging...Haiii...My Armaan is so bhola bhala😍 LMAO this makes me want to sing 'bholi baali ladki!' LMAO dont ask why... Armaan is definately not a ladki 😆
Continue soon😳...And ur stupid manager😡😡...Tell him to give u a break since u need to update ur FF...I dunno y i think he wont find it amusing?😆😆 hehe I can't blame my manager for this one as much as I want to... I've just been busy with work and studies so juggling time is a bit of a clown act at the moment 😕
Anyways...Thanks 4the PM...And i dont think my dabba is full? Will check on that😃 I wouldn't be surprised if it were full! you talk soo much! 😆😆 don't stop 😳
Hugs!🤗🤗 oh man I don't like huggies uff chal for you 🤗
-Marisha🤪 The Nutty Professor

Originally posted by: magicgirlankita

Hey lubi di!!!!!
Finally seeing u after a long tym seems lyk ur boss hasnt spared u yet..... I wonder if my boss knows how many enemies his made on here 😆
Well wat a start nd i mst say u shud nt laugh at urself coz da concept is osm seems intresting... :-) hmm nice way of putting twisted and confusing hehe chal it'll do 😉
nd btw whr did ur boss bury u nd wid da wrd bury i guess u visited a graveyard kya or ur boss sent u thr:-D hahaha my sister is a hitler and she sends me to hell and back every day LMAO maybe that's where the graveyard title came from lol actually she helped me come up with the name lol tht u ve cum up wit a thriller
nd omg the title is lyk so appealing i guess it has got sumthin invisible which makes u wanna go further nd read the story......
M so happy tat u r finally bak nd tat 2 wit a bang no wit a vengeance haha lookin forward 2 read more nd crackin ma nut thinkin wat ll happen nxt.... kuch bakhi hain crack karne kiliye? your already a crackpot 😉😆😆
Nd btw m surprised maddy isnt here yet she shud ve got here bfore me...guess the gal is in trouble maddy is studying hard by the looks of it... shouldn't you be doing some similar? 😉
do update soon hope u havnt slept seeing ur boss crawl up again nd again im ma comment well newayz hehe I think I scare my boss more then he scares me 😆 update asap
luv ya
@nkit@[/QUOTE] sanku Anku! love the comments, my boss popping up again and again had me laughing hehe

[QUOTE=rani 19]

hey an amazin part loving ur ff, ur definately holding the cards close to ur chest, its definately an interesting part reminds me of final detination anyways one question abhi n armaan r they two seperate ppl or duz he have split personality. i no i no u probably cant reveal anything so im asking anyone and every 1 so readz my post wat do guys think. i cant seem to figure it out.anyways do continue soon.

lov iram
[/QUOTE] lol Iram, yes I am definately holding the cards out of reach here hehe mainly because I'm not quiet sure how the story will develop lol, can;t say something and then change it later right 😉 hehe Abhi and Armaan... what can I say, they are definately a jodi to be reckoned with... but that's all I can say 😳 Thank you soo much for the comments Iram, they really made me smile seeing you liked it so much
[QUOTE=.:.MONA.:.]hey another amezing ff from u....loved it...cant wait to read more...continue soon...do pm if possible....
❤️MONA

Hey Mona! haven't seen you in ages... where you hiding these days? Will definately pm you when I continue, thank you for the comments 😳

Originally posted by: spln

Switching the car engine off Riddhima sat in her car watching the icy flakes gently float down to the ground. The breeze ruffled through the tree's making them sway slightly and shimmer under the winter sun; though rare with its appearance, when the sun did make a show however sparse they were, it bought a flood of life with it.....

that lubi is in a long long long time gona be my standing fav description of the beautiful winter season...thanx...think its gona be my gchat stautus now...u wudnt mind me hacking wud ya???? lol hack away hehe... you've never tried to descrive winter? iit's my favourite season so the descriptions just write themselves, I honestly don't do anything 😳

sleep meant closing your eyes, closing your eyes meant releasing control of your mind, releasing control of the mind only allowed it to wonder and wonder it did' to places she never wanted to visit again.

another pick...i rarely quote lubi....but somehow ur update is makin g me today....i reread every para i think....almost every atleast....uv done the passage with such grace....i cant descibe well...but i loved it...ever word had its varuiation in impact there wr parts which made me uineasy as u intended n those which made me smile...n some where i had a confusion of emotion coz thats how u got it out...wonderful job lubi...!!!!... again I can't help feel humbled with such wonderful comments

hell...i am actually doing this comment along with the read....somehow the very first paragraph made me do it i wanted to quote i know....n now i just got done reading the dream...OMG...lubi u have my insides unsettled uncomfortably....rushing to find the enxt chapter...urrghhhh...id be freaked to ever fall back to sleep after that kinda nightmare....😕 aww the nighhtmare scene had you unsettled? and I tried soo hard to tone it down lol if anyone had dreams I mean nightmares like that i'm sure even they wouldn't sleep again afterwards.
😕

Originally posted by: spln

Not doing too well at keeping the irritation out of her tone...i liked the sound of this sentence for no particular reason!!! lol no wonder why you chair the nut house with Nij and Hina lol you really are a nutter 😆

best to keep this man away from her man-eating, too good for the world; someone died and made her god boss!...this one had me in splits....um certain just as u may have intended lubi!!! hahaha

alright done reading the 2nd chap now, n i duno who um cursing more here....u for having done just 2 chaps....sorry or myself for having not read it earlier... 😆 or myself again for having read it too soon...had i reda it later i wud have read more um presuming....😆😆 gosh lubi u have me hooked so bad...i gave kratz a ques abt one fic if she knew it wud n cud be just one that she wud wish to be carried on the FF, if they made a rukle to having one for a month....i was having a ahrd time finding an answer ot that....um not exagerating as i never do, its this one, co i9 klnow after reading this chap, its gona play my mind more than i wish it wud coz i have else where to focus on....totally rocked....loving it lubs....please make the updates quick n regular, n just as stunning if not more!!!!

seriously Nj what do you do? practice how to write such awesome and definately humbling comments? 😲 talk about pile on the pressure! 😆 jokes... thank you so so so much for the absolutely mind numbingly beautiful comments, I don't even know how to reply to. I just feel bad I haven't been able to out do your comments on your ff's... reminder to self, take comment giving lessons of Nj.


lov n cheers,

nj


Originally posted by: magicgirlankita

LUBI DI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kahan ho tussi tumne bulaiya aur dekho mein ageyi 😆
lagta hai aapke boss ki band bajane padegi gimme his address waise bhi main prank master hun
hehehe maza aayega *wink* OMG child your scaring me! boss ka kya haal karoge I dread to imagine
mmmmmmmmm
lemme think
mmmm
pehle lets mess with his butts 😆😆
den wen he ll b in pain we ll do sumthing so that he cant walk
and then haath bandhenge
and now cums the main part
we ll make him sit on ice
ooooooohhh
sounds kewl na 🤣 sounds like you've done this before!
think of it
if u want it to be executed i m always there
weneva
bas ek shart hai update asap abhi karti hu... how soon before you can do all these thinsg to my manager then? 😳
luv ya
@nkit@

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: na2339

sanku Anku! love the comments, my boss popping up again and again had me laughing hehe good na laughing is good for health
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