~Vengeance Beyond The Grave~ Ending - page 7

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Firstly Happy New Year everyone! and secondly apologies for being away for so long, before anyone asks I will be continuing and fingers crossed completing It's Just Begun very soon. This story is a little different to what I'm used to writing so it's likely it could be a complete disaster; but as I've been told over and over again, you'll never know if you don't try, so here's to trying and if it is a complete mess please do tell me guys. Don't be shy I don't really bite 😉

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General Info:
Genre: Thriller
Rating: As long as your okay with a little jump every now again PG
Author: Yours truly ME 😃 (unless you plan to throw chappals or chase me with danda's, in which case I have no idea who's hacked my account!)


~ Vengeance Beyond The Grave ~
Chapter 1

Switching the car engine off Riddhima sat in her car watching the icy flakes gently float down to the ground. The breeze ruffled through the tree's making them sway slightly and shimmer under the winter sun; though rare with its appearance, when the sun did make a show however sparse they were, it bought a flood of life with it. Today was no different, inspired by the sun and the beautiful snow, birds twittered away singing to their hearts content.

The joyous songs of the birds played the perfect part of the stark contrast to the building they adorned. The building although only two storey was still very grand for its kind; the sharp edges of the building toned down by the circular pillars holding this magnificent building up, the balcony area at the front very prominent overlooking the park she was trudging through which would be a delightful green covered in flowers and bushes of shades and sizes. The sight always amazed Riddhima no matter how many times she laid her eyes upon it.

Stepping out of the car she wrapped her coat around her tighter keeping the cold air out, clutching the small box and envelope under arm as she made her way across the park towards the entrance; holding her signature bouquet of lilies. As her boots crunched on the fresh layer of snow inching her closer to her destination, even the beautiful serene settings couldn't block out the chills her annual visits caused. Even after coming here year in year for the past 5 years she still felt nauseas dreading the outcome of her meetings.

"Ridz darling how are you? His been waiting all day for you" the podgy old receptionist gave Riddhima the sweetest of smiles as she signed her into the building.

"Thank you Irena, I have something for you to today" Smiling widely Riddhima gifted the cheery receptionist with the bouquet of pink lilies "Something to warm up your reception area till spring kicks in"

Knowing her way around the place Riddhima walked down the corridor towards room 224. Peering in through the window she found herself staring at the never changing sight. There he sat looking out of the window, talking no doubt to Abhi. If the sight of the building sent shivers down her spine then this sight down right frightened the life out of her, Armaan talking to Abhi had only ever meant trouble for her. Determined not to let Abhi get the better of her yet again; heck hadn't Irena said he had been waiting for her? She couldn't exactly leave now could she; Riddhima knocked on the door to make her presence known.

"Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear Armaan, happy birthday to you" Placing the present and card down slowly next to his bed Riddhima proceeded to give him a quick awkward hug. Another necessity she was feared but had to perform.

"It's Abhi's birthday too you know" beckoning towards the window where Abhi was unmistakably staring back at Riddhima with all the content in the world.

"Yes but why would she wish me? She hates me remember, she hates us. She only wants to hurts us that's why she put us here. You should have been done with her when you had the chance! But no you were weak; you are weak and always will be!" the venom spewed out of Abhi's mouth, his features twisted to show his true ugly face, the hate evident in every crease of his mouth and frown; The eyes full of sheer disgust for not being able to do anything being the weaker of the two.

"That's not true. Shut up! Riddhima is our friend and she only wants to help us. It wasn't her fault. She is our friend. Aren't you friend?" Puppy eyed, innocent Armaan turned to Riddhima and held her hand caressing it affectionately, as though reassuring him of the facts rather then asking a question.

This was how it had been. Armaan always trying to find the good in their relationship while Abhi only ever tried to poison it; Armaan being the man she fell in love with, while Abhi being the man who tried to' the memories still made her break out in a cold sweat.

Inhaling the aroma of the freshly brewed coffee Riddhima sank into her seat while looking out at the New York horizon. It was just past 4am but the idea of sleeping was outrageous, sleep meant closing your eyes, closing your eyes meant releasing control of your mind, releasing control of the mind only allowed it to wonder and wonder it did' to places she never wanted to visit again.

It would be another sleepless night for her, if there was someone staying over then the comfort of not being alone gave her a sense of security allowing her to close her eyes. But when even the stay in house help had decided to go to their mothers, sleeping was a no go area. Picking up the remote control she flicked through the channels before deciding upon watching the news, as nothing else of interest was on. It drawled on and on and on' before long and as fate had intended her mind drifted off to the darkest of places known to man. The unconscious mind'

The skeletal figure staggered wounded through the isolated shadow covered streets. The howling wind screaming like a thousand ghouls could turn anyone's blood to ice as it travelled across the thunderous sky; the foggy air added to the desolate atmosphere, sharpening the corners of the buildings as they broke through; and through this she staggered on still.

Clutching at her minimal clothing dragging the wounded leg she bore in search of shelter, the sound of her whimpering and laboured breath now took over, the piercing screams of the wind a backdrop now to this new sound. With every staggered step she took, came a fresh whimper of pain; the blood leaving a trail as she hurried to hide in any shadow she could find.

The pitch black surrounding suddenly seemed to take light as a lamp flickered not too far from where she stood. Dragging her leg as a fresh of flow of blood made its way down she tried to reach her new destination, all the elements against her, wind, wound, cold but nothing was going to stop her... nothing but the shadow which now took form under the light; her electric blue eyes turned icy white matching the blood drained pale complexion she now wore. If it weren't for her rosy pink lips which were also fast turning a shade of blue, she could have easily passed for a corpse.

The lamp kept flickering on and off, on and off; as a broad dark shadow slowly started to take form below the light. Standing hunch backed stood a large masculine figure covered mostly by a large coat of sort. With every passing moment the shadow seemed to be get larger and larger; realising it was coming towards he, heavy footed and carrying what appeared to be some form of a bat, dripping with what could easily be passed off as blood, she knew she had to make a run for it now.

It seemed the shadow had some form of hold on her, or was it the sheer fear this shadow had cast on her that had frozen her to the spot. Sensing she wasn't moving she looked down to see what was restraining her, what was making her legs go against her wishes she found them frozen to t he floor. The icy winds had frozen her feet to the ground and now she was a sitting duck waiting to be caught.

Opening her mouth to scream for help she was completely overwhelmed when only a wisp of smoke came out, her hot breath mingling with the cold air... but that was it. No audible sound came out. She looked up one more time to calculate the distance between her impending end and the shadow when an arm from the shadow came out and grabbed her by the throat; threatening to squeeze the life out of her. As she struggled to inhale deeply the cold air stabbed her lungs like a hundred daggers, as she felt her blood freeze over, breathing which was such a simple automatic movement was no becoming difficult to do.

Flaying her arms like a desperate lunatic she tried to swat away the arm around her throat in vain. With his free hand the shadow grabbed the back of her head and pulled it forward, twisting and ripping out the hair in the process. The stench of the dead fish and rotting garbage filled her nostrils immediately, making her want to throw up her insides just to get the stench out. He dragged her face closer to his until she was so close the stench nearly made her pass out "Guess who sweetie"

Jumping up spluttering for air Riddhima shook with fear as cold sweat trickled down her brow; the mangled sheets evidence of her struggle carrying over from her dreams to reality. Clutching her throat she waited for her pulse to stop racing "it was just a dream... no nightmare, nothing else. Its over"

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Haha u dont bite...U only eat sweet people like me😆😆 Anyways...A dhamekadaar start as usual!
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awww, this is so gripping!!! awesome piece of writing, confusing though....the dream seems to be not just a dream, atleast going by the title...plz cont soon👏👏👏

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Originally posted by: arluver15

Hey

another nice one
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its very interesting topic
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thank you so much for the comment, hopefully the story continues to be interesting and less confusing lol

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Hey it's awesome! Great Concept! Please do PM me whenever you update! :)

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Aww thanks Liz, lol I'm not sure how much of the concept you got from this initial part, hopefully the next part will make it clearer

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Haha u dont bite...U only eat sweet people like me😆😆 your as mental as you are sweet donut queen! have you still not stopped laughing? 😲 sachi you laugh so much it makes me think I have competition 😆Anyways...A dhamekadaar start as usual! hehe thank you for your extra sweet and stylish comment as usual

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awww, this is so gripping!!! awesome piece of writing, confusing though....which part did you find confusing? maybe I can clear it up the dream seems to be not just a dream, lol dreams are rarely what they seem, and what they are you can rarely dream of atleast going by the title...plz cont soon👏👏👏

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Chapter 2
FLASHBACK...
Placing her coffee down, a huge smile to spread across her lips; "AM Enterprise ' next to be claimed by the recent market downfall?" allowing her lips to repeat the headline Riddhima couldn't help but yelp for joy. This was the day she had been waiting for, for months she had watched AM Enterprises soar to new heights, an amateur fashion designer came out of nowhere and took the fashion world by storm, from designer to the most sort after fashion label AM had definitely proven Riddhima Gupta, New York's leading venture capitalist wrong; and to make things worse in the midst of the recent market issues AM had decided to expand from designing exclusively for the rich and famous to actually make cheaper versions for the normal public.

"Regret is the bitter sweet truth that will hit you in the face when you least expect it. Your lack of respect for others will cost you dearly Ms Gupta." The note still stung her as it had done the first time she had read it; the challenge in it was irrepressible and one thing Riddhima didn't like was her decisions being challenged. She had taken one look at the business proposal and refused to let the matter go any further, she didn't even have the courtesy to meet the man behind the idea before saying no and letting her receptionist pass on the message.

And regret she had done, who would have thought the pitiable business proposal that had landed on her desk 18 months ago would turn out to be a gold mine. A gold mine she had willingly chosen to kick away. Riddhima Gupta was by no means a poor woman, but when it came to willingly giving away money, it was like charity, something she refused point blank, and that was exactly what she had done here, passed up an opportunity to gain more money. The words of the short but very to the point note still boiled her blood to this day and it was this day she had been waiting for patiently for so long. "Mr AM, let's just see who regrets what shall we, you'll be eating your words once I'm done with you", and down to business she got to accomplish just that.

"Mary cancel all my meetings for the day darling, I have a few pressing issues that need my immediate attention" ending the intercom orders she set about laying her trap. A few clicks here, a little transfer there and voila, Riddhima cracked her knuckles congratulating herself a job well done. "Let's see exactly how fast I can get you to eat your words Mr AM".

The buzz of the intercom bought her out of her musing; narrowing her eyes at the offending object Riddhima let out a sigh of frustration "Why can these people never follow simple instructions". Not doing too well at keeping the irritation out of her tone Riddhima answered the intercom "What is it Mary? What part of I don't want to be disturbed today did you not understand honey?"

"Madam, I have a gentleman here who refuses to leave until his seen you personally..." holding her head in both hands Riddhima shook her head as she frowned upon her air-head assistant "Mary sweetie, it's your job I believe to dismiss people as and when I tell you to, I'm very busy at the moment and can't see anyone. Pass on my apologies and have him book an appointment for later on in the week. Do you think you can manage that much for me?"

A muffled voice in the background caught Riddhima's attention, was the man standing next to Mary? Could he possibly have heard her? "Oh well, what Mary couldn't do, my little set of instructions should have been able to" but she was interrupted from her train of thought once again by Mary "It's about a certain AM Enterprise Ma'am, he believes you will be interested in seeing him now"

"The man himself has come to meet me? Interesting not what I was expecting but hey ho, stranger things have happened" raising an eyebrow and smiling to herself Riddhima attempted to keep from letting on her amusement over the intercom "Mary darling did you really want this to be your last day at work? Do not make me repeat myself!"

"Pompous git" muttering under her breath Mary turned away from the dead intercom "I'm sorry sir; madam is very busy today and cannot be disturbed. Would you like to leave her a message or can I book you an appointment to see her?"

"It's quiet alright, if you could just pass on these flowers to Ms Gupta when she's available that would be perfect and let her know Mr AM sends his sincerest of apologies. Oh here's my card, just in case she needs to contact me. Goodbye Mary" winking and smiling his million dollar smile, dazzling Mary with his brilliant teeth stood the most handsome man Mary had ever laid eyes upon. The silk black shirt complimented and accentuated his chest muscles that much more, the gunpowder grey AM suit matched with the just as grey tie made this man look somewhat out of place to be delivering flowers.

"Rohit Varma." turning the card in her hand Mary decided it was best to keep this man away from her man-eating, too good for the world; someone died and made her god boss!

"With every rising sun begins a new battle, one which we need to fight and win, today brings nothing different; all that is fair is foul and all that is foul is fair Ms Riddhima Gupta. Apologies for my impertinence but our meeting will have to be delayed a little while longer"

Reading the card over and over Riddhima couldn't believe what was happening, "HOW CAN THE MAN BE SO ILLUSIVE!"

Stalking up and down her office Riddhima abruptly stopped to stare out at the darkening horizon, the sleepless city carried on with its daily hustle and bustle while the natural light of the sun gave way to the dark. Was tomorrow's sunrise going to bring another battle with it? The sound of police sirens were blocked out by the triple glazed windows but the lights still turned everything they could reach horrible shades of bright and blue. If the windows hadn't blocked out the noise then the thousand thoughts in Riddhima's mind would most certainly have.

Slumping down in her chair Riddhima picked up the card once more, "Does the man really not care to meet me after I practically saved his business from melt down? And who on earth does he think he is? Shakespeare? Foul is fair, fair is foul what nonsense! Although it seems strangely familiar somehow but where from"

Watching her hold meetings and carry out her daily routines in the extreme efficient manner she liked to adopt in everything she did, one would have thought how placid her life style must have been; nothing seemed to be able to surprise her, everything always went so smoothly and always to plan. What she had forgotten was that not everything in life can be planned and calculated, some thing just happen and we have no control over them. You just have to deal with the outcome as best as possible.

It was exactly a year next week, the day the shocking news of the death of her last surviving high school friend and her high school sweetheart had arrived. Rahul Grewal; the once heart throb of every girl within a 100miles radius thanks to his charm and good looks had succumb to some strange mental disorder and then went missing all of a sudden, only to be found dead a week later, accompanied by a meagre note stating it was a suicide. The not so interested NYPD were willing to look no further, content with the note, however on further persuasion from close friends a murder investigation had started but was later left unsolved and closed off as no further clues were ever discovered. Rahul had no known surviving family willing to fund a dead case to continue being investigated hence his file was neatly packed away to collect dust in some store house with all the other unsolved for cases the New York Police Department had accrued over the years.

Rahul and Riddhima, the last remaining two of their infamous school gang after a strange series of mishaps saw the deaths of each one of her friends year after year. Some died in freak accidents while others committed suicide, the 6 now came down to 1 and on the way Riddhima had learnt to be the emotionless cold hearted cruel business woman she had now become infamous for.

Watching her slump in her chair looking out into space as her client exited the office, for a moment her beauty nearly shone through her exterior hardness. The closed eyes trapped in all the confusion, anguish and pain within.

Smiling at the control he now held over her, he moved further into the shadows as she opened her eyes and seemed to stare directly at him. Impossible as it was for that to be the case what would he do if she had seen him? Taking a quick swig of now cold coffee Armaan Malik aka AM relaxed into black leather chair which was facing Riddhima's office window from his own rented apartment across the street.

For two whole weeks while Riddhima tried desperately to hold onto her sanity and assure herself that she had made the right choice of saving AM Enterprise albeit for her own gain, Armaan had been sitting comfily in his barely furnished apartment.

"The tears flow from the wonderful memories of you

The smile spreads with just a glimpse of you

The heart skips a beat with every sound from you

Imagine what would happen if I were to actually meet you"

"Oh snap out of it Armaan, you'll meet her I promise, we will both meet her, you just have to have patience don't you understand if we go in front of her know then you wouldn't be keeping to your side of the plan"

"Abhi you never did tell me what the plan was. Why can't I meet her know, look at her, she looks so lonely and upset. I can read it in the folds of her frown she needs me"

"Armaan I'm warning, if you don't do as I say then I may have to hurt you and her" Armaan shivered at just the thought of what Abhimanyu could do, he was and had been the stronger of the two. "Remember when they all left you there to rot, who was there to help you and take care of you, take care of us? Me! And when have I ever done anything that would hurt either of us? You know I only do the things I do to you because I care about you. No one else does, they never have"

"I'm sorry Abhi, I will do everything you say"

"Promise?"

"Promise"

Abhi of course had no intention of letting there ever be a happily ever after between Armaan and Riddhima, she was the last of his targets and she almost got away with her deeds, but fate obviously had other plans, it was 5 years ago to be exact Riddhima Gupta had come to light after being the youngest person to be awarded with an internship at AC Investors at the tender age of 21; she had disappeared of the face of the planet some 12 years ago after ruining his life.

Coming out of hiding had done wonders for his plans, while Armaan saw her and fell head over heels for her; Abhi had the perfect opportunity study every aspect of her and her life to see where he could get an inch in. From following her every move in the business world Abhi had come down to following her in personal world to, from where she shopped, to what she ate; from who she met to what time she went to sleep.

"Hello Adam, you're coming back next week Monday, the 05:00 flight has been booked and a car will collect you at 04:30 hours, make sure you're ready. I want you to go straight home and call me as soon as you get there" putting the phone down Abhi looked across his office at the discarded luggage, a crucial element to the next part of his plan.

Thank you everyone who took time out to comment, I know its a killer but they are greatly appreciated; also to all the silent readers thank you too, for not ridiculing my random attempts. 😳 This part should add more to the concept of the story... I think 😕😆 If there's anything which doesn't make sense or you think needs clearing up/reworded etc let me know. Other then that, hopefully you enjoyed reading this part

tc Lubna 😳
Edited by na2339 - 16 years ago
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im confused. it wud be gr8 if u wud clear the difference between past n present. n im guessin abhi is armaan's split personality. plz clear this 4 me.

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