She's My Jannat. PART14 Pg.34 (09/04) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ewow really very nice,....plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sonii.... wow u updated... finally.... nno ma soo much suspense in the part already.. i like soo hate abhi right now....... omg what the hell with nikki n all.... gosh woman.. u really know ow 2 build up suspense already... lmao.. so updating 2dai den? waitin 4 it hunny...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Zainu: Lol! Aww Thnx! Yea wil update long parts! Glad u liked it sweets! X
@Reshma: Hey sweety! Thnku 4 liking it! X
@Rav: Hiya! Srry bw d l8 update! Yup updating 2day! X

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sonni yaar what is going on pata nahi sare ridz ke piche kyu pade rehte hai nd ar to hamesha usi pe lattoo nd now abhi gosssssssshhhhhhhh yaar stupid,idiot ghada............nd ridz ws angry nd arridz scenes wre vryyy cute nd now wht nikki wntd 2 tlk 2 her lts see now new days again chalo cont sooooooooon
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Really liked it..Wonder what nikki has to tell ridz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx for thsi awesome upd .. please continue soooon
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heyy di!
awesome part!! omg why is abhi like that?!?! and where is armaan?!? and what does nikki need to talk about?!?! lolz...so much suspense!! plzz cont soon and thanx fr the PM!!
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waoh🤗 its really an nice one⭐️ superb😳😛 so sweet👍🏼😎 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Zindagi nahin hamain doston say pyari,
Doston pay hazir hay jaan hammari,
Ankhon main hamaray ansu hain to kia,
Jaan say bhi pyaari hay muskaan tumhari."



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thankyooh for liking it! Im gona update tonite okies! Im glad yuu guys liked the parts, well theres a BIG twist cumin up in part 4!! LoveeYuu Sonii X
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Part 3

Terrace

R: Kya hua Nikki?

N: Ridhima. Tumhe Abhi kaise lagta hai?

R: matlab?

N: wel, uno. Woh kaise insaan hai? Is he nice?

R: err…m.. tum yeh mujhse kyun ponch rahi ho?

N: kyunki, tum meri best friend ho. I need to know your opinion. Aur main Abhi se pyaar karne lagi hoon..aur main chahti hoon ke main jisse pyaar karo, sab usko pasand kare.

R: Well, (Ridhima wasn't sure if she should tell Nikki about the caf incident)

N: Batao na… main usse theek tarah se jaanti bhi nahi hoon..Ek mahine hua hai usse yahaan aaye.

R: hmm..lekin Armaan usse salo se jaanta hain..so don't worry.

Ridhima thinking: Behtar hoga if I don't tell Nikki, agar usne phir kuch kiya to phir main usse batao gi!

R: chale neeche?

N: yep! ThankYooh Ridhima.

Same Day...Evening Time

Gupta House.

Armaan and Ridhima had come to visit Nani and Padma.

R: haaan (she laughs) woh shahi kheer!

P: areh, kyun Armaan pe hass rahe ho aap dono. Atleast Armaan ne try to kiya na.

A: thanks Padma aunty.

Na: kya hua Armaan? Teri dabiyat to theek he?

A: haan woh bas sar main dard tha…Ridhima ab chale?

R: haan…Bye Mom (she hugs Padma) Bye Nani (hugs Nani)

A: Bye.

In The Car…

R: tum abhi bi ghussa ho? (Armaan didn't say a word) Armaan!

A: Nahi! (in a very cold manner)

R: Armaan maine tumhare wait kiya tha lekin

A: lekin kyunki maine thori si dher kar di, tum waha se utt ke chali gayi? Rite?

R: nahi Armaan. Aisi koi baat nahi hai.

A: please! Main bohat disturbed hoon. Sirr dard se phatta jaa raha hain. Thori der chup raho ho.

Mallik House.

11.20pm.

It was windy night and Ridhima was sitting outside on the swing, wearing her red silk nightie.

She was really upset, Armaan hadn't spoke to her since they got home. When she offered to nurse him, he rudely refused. Tears fell from Ridhima's eyes. She closed her eyes. After 5 minutes she fell asleep.

Next Morning.

It was cold Tuesday morning. Ridhima opened her eyes and found herself on the swing. She checked the time on her phone. It was 10.20am! This meant Armaan had left for Sanjeevani without Ridz today! This also meant that Armaan didn't give the slightest bother that Ridz had slept in the cold all night but instead he went to work. Tears formed in the Ridhima's eyes, she was really upset due to Armaan's behavior.

Sanjeevani

Nurse Station.

Ridhima was looking through some new case files. She felt a hand on her shoulder, she turned around to look and it was ward boy Manoj.

WB: Doctor Ridhima, yeh aap ke liye.

(WB Manoj was holding a note in his hand)

R: (takes it off him) Thankyou.

The note read:

Im sorry. Meet me on the terrace at 7.00pm. Got surgeries schelduled, so im busy now! Love You, tumhara Armaan! Xxxx

Ridhima smiled.

General Ward.

Rahul and Ridhima were in General ward. There was a new patient called Laila, 35years old, Still Single.

La: Oyye Handsome! Oyye Handsome!

Rahul looked at Ridhima…

La: Oyye Soniyo! Udhar kyun dekhta hain?? Idhar mainu dekha nah!

Ridhima pulled a eyebrow,,

R: (Whispers to Rahul) I think she a little…

Ra: Mad! (he laughs) Inka brain check up kare?

R: (laughs) Yeah, good idea.

That's It!!

Hope Yuu Liked It!

BIG suspence coming up in next part!

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