She's My Jannat. PART14 Pg.34 (09/04) - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Sam: hope its ok 2 cll u Sam lol, thnx hun! X
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wow really nice...i loved it...it was soo funny wen rahul said "mad"...heheh plz continue soon..and pm me if possible..
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@Reshu: hehe! Yup i love Mayank too!! Lol, & yea dw! X
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Posted: 16 years ago
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She's My Jannat PROMO 28th Jan 09

Jis Suspence ka tha aap sab ko intezaar...
Aa raha hai woh ab bas kuch hi dino main..

Dont Miss This Friday's Update
Suspence Will Be Out!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The part you've been waiting for::

Part 4

7:00 pm

Ridhima made her way up to the terrace.. She opened the door and found it really cold and dark outside… The terrace lights weren't on.. Ridhima got a little scared so shouted for Armaan.

R: Armaan…Armaan..Hudd bula kar pata nahi kaha chal gaya… Armaan! (she shouted)

Suddenly, Ridhima felt a hand crawling around her waist. He pulled her towards him and kissed her cheek. Ridhima smiled, thank god Armaan had come. He moved her hair on one side and planted a few kisses on her bare neck. Ridhima was enjoying his touch as it had been days they hadn't romanced. :] After a few minutes of romance he picked her up and made his way up the stairs to the second floor. He lay her down and moved extremely close to her…Ridhima was getting all shy. He moved his face closer to hers and kissed her. After a long passionate kiss, Ridhima realized that they were still in hospital! She quickly moved him away.

R: Armaan! Tum bhi na. kahi bhi shoro ho jaate ho! Chalo utoh.

He didn't reply to her or make a response.

R: Kya hua Armaan? Jabse tum aaye ho, tumne kuch nahi kaha? Kya hua?

Ab: kaise boloo? Tum mujhse baat hi nahi kar rahi, kabse Armaan ka naam le rahi ho. Aur main Armaan nahi……..Abhimanyu hoon.

Ridhima moved back at once. She was shocked. She lost her balance and fell to the ground. What had she done?!

Ab: Hey, tum theek to ho na?

R: JUST SHUT UP!!! (she screamed) Tumne aisa kyun kiya??? Kyun?? Main….ma..main Armaan?! Main Armaan ko kya jawaab doh gi?? (she cried)

Ab: just relax. Na main Armaan ko batao ga aur na tum batana…okay?

R: Tum ek gatiya insaan ho!

Ab: Look, main Armaan ko kuch nahi batao ga. Aur tum Nikki ko. I guess dats fair. Wa say?

R: DAFEH Ho jao!! PLEASE.

Ab: listen (he moved closer to Ridhima)

R: GO AWAY!! (she pushed him away) JAO yahaan se!!!

Ridhima started crying really loud. How could she do this??

He grabbed her by her arms and shook her!!

A: Ridhima!! Dekho idhar…Tum yeh kya keh rahi ho?? Ridhimaa…dekho upar. (ridz doesn't look up) tell me? What's wrong? Tum mujhe kya batana chahti ho?? Main yahi hoon….Ridhima, main Armaan hoon. Kya hua??

Ridhima looked up and it was Armaan!! She hugged him tightly!

Thinking:

Thankyooh bhagwaan! Thankyou…main Armaan ki hi saath thi.

A: tell me Ridhima, kya hua? (pulling her apart) tum aise roh kyun rahi ho?

R: woh…armaa…

Ridhima held her head…she was losing balance. Everything was becoming blurry..

R: Armaan…….

Ridhima collapsed in Armaan arms.

A: Ridhima! Ridhima, kya hua? Ridhima! (he tapped her cheek)

That's It!!

I know, I know VERY short part…BUT I had to keep the suspence up lol

Sooo Now.

Its your turn to Guess && Guess!

Was it Armaan?? OR Was it Abhimanyu??

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice update.........But im really confused..Guess ill have to wait till u update again
Loved it though
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaar ye kya kiya i am also vry confused yaar i think it ws armaan but abhi oh god so mch confusion nd ridz ws fainted omggg she ws shockd whn she saw abhi nd omg yaar kya hoga yaar jaldi suspense khatam karo cnt wait
cont soooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh🤗 its mnd blowing one⭐️ i have just read its both parts😛 superb😍 and what happen to her😉 plz continue it soon😛😉


"You remind me of a balloon,
Happy and bouncy,
Someone people can have fun with,
Enjoyed by all.
You remind me of a lot of things,
But nothing can compare to the real person,
A friend I can look up to,
Cherished by me."


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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg its confusing me yaar...hope its armaan...it cant be abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii....
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@All: Lol, suspence main daal diya nah??? LOL ! X Well all u gta member is.... Wait...Wait...Wait & Wait! LOL

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