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gr8 opart!!!!!!!!! sry fr a late reply bt ws havin exams!!!!!!!!!!
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Hey Sumdha,
The part was really great I really enjoyed it.
Every bit was amazing.
Abhi and Nikki dance and then confession was brilliant.
Armaan and Ridhima dance prepation was too good, I loved it.
I hope everything will be fine between abhi and nikki
Pls continue soon and thnx for the PM.


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woah dear🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ superb😍i have just completed its all parts😳😳 & sorry for being late😳 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

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lovely part yaar, the flashback b/w nikki and abhi was wonderful and the song fitted perfectly...the way you described it, I could just visualising it actually happening b'fore my eyes. same with AR's practise session. Armaan is really a true friend and I loved the way helps nikki with her problem.
ps sorry for the late reply, was just too busy with life!!!
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hey sumeda
do update soon
pls.........
really eager to read the part
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Part 9

12 noon, Ridzi's place

Riddhima smoothed out her skirt and quickly dumped her stuff in her white handbag'Putting on some of her favourite white musk scent she checked herself one last time. She had picked out her favourite aqua blue spaghetti and paired it with a knee length white skirt. Muskaan had locked her in the bathroom that morning insisting that she washed her hair because according to Muski, her going to shop for Armaan's dancing shoes classified as a date.

Hurriedly strapping on her white sandals, Ridzi ran down the stairs and found Armaan leaning on his car, talking to someone on his phone. The moment he saw her he smiled and his blue eyes moved over her body making Riddhima conscious. She felt like maybe he had x-ray vision, his eyes seemed to be pausing at all the right places.As she walked towards him, he shut his phone and pulled her into a warm side hug.

A: Hi Riddhima!
Her whole body tingled at the contact and she mumbled a small hi back to him. They sat down and Armaan started the car when'
A: Riddhima, your seat belt.
Ridzi was caught off guard.She had been staring unabashed but well how could she help it? Did he have to looks smoking hot even in plain casuals? He only wore a plain light blue sleeveless shirt and yet had managed to knock off her senses.

guys please go and see what karan was wearing in this link on 1st may in jdj rehearsal when they played that game.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1172518'

R: Oh yeah! She pulled at the seat belt but it did'nt budge.
A: Oh shit! It's stuck again! Just a second.

Armaan reached over and she was engulfed by the smell of his strong cologne. They were inches apart and his cheek touched hers.She could feel his warm breath tickle her neck as he tugged at the seat belt. Finally he managed to prise it out and neatly brought it over her body.But the belt had not been used in a while and some grease came onto her shoulder.
A: I'm sorry!
He tried to rub it off and Riddhima shivered as his cold fingers touched her naked shoulder.Armaan noticed this and looked at her face.Her eyes were lowered and her whole body was taut with tension. He kept gazing at her, captivated by her innocent face and unknowingly began to caress her shoulder with his thumb.Each time he looked at her he would find a new feature of hers to admire. The way her thick black hair flowed on her back, those sea green eyes, the way she would blush'Armaan had hardly ever seen anyone so beautiful.

Watchman: Sahab, this is a no parking area!
Armaan and Riddhima: huh?

They broke out of their spell and Armaan quickly started the car and began to drive.Both were lost in thoughts of each other unable to meet each other's eyes or shake off the rush of emotions arising within them.Armaan turned on the stereo and as though it was all predisposed this song blared out of the speakers'

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NNC0kIzM1Fo
Love is in the air

Everywhere I look around
Love is in the air
Every sight and every sound
And I don't know if I'm being foolish
Don't know if I'm being wise
But it's something that I must believe in
And it's there when I look in your eyes

Love is in the air
In the whisper of the trees
Love is in the air
In the thunder of the sea
And I don't know if I'm just dreaming
Don't know if I feel sane
But it's something that I must believe in
And it's there when you call out my name

(Chorus)
Love is in the air
Love is in the air
Oh oh oh
Oh oh oh

Love is in the air
In the rising of the sun
Love is in the air
When the day is nearly done
And I don't know if you're an illusion
Don't know if I see it true
But you're something that I must believe in
And you're there when I reach out for you

Love is in the air
Every sight and every sound
And I don't know if I'm being foolish
Don't know if I'm being wise
But it's something that I must believe in
And it's there when I look in your eyes


Both of them turned to look at each other, gasping at this weird coincidence and wondering what the other was thinking and trying to sort out their confused thoughts.


At the mall,

Riddhima and Armaan walked into The Select City Mall and were standing near the elevator when suddenly-"ARMAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
They turned to find a little girl running full speed. She promptly came and collided with Armaan's legs and he quickly lifted the little girl in his arms.

"ARMAAN!!!!!!" she screamed at the top of her voice.
A: Hi!!!!
Girl: Tum Armaan ho??
Armaan nodded his head. " What's your name?"
Girl: I'm Minnie.
A: As in Minnie mouse?Minnie nodded. " I love you!!!! I 've seen all your movies and I watch your show everyday and I also have that magazine in which you said you....
She went on and on and Armaan kept listening to her as though what she had to say was of utmost importance. Then he felt a slight tap on his shoulder...
Lady: Excuse me mister, what are you doing with my daughter?

The moment he turned around " Armaan Mallik!" the lady exclaimed and covered her mouth.
" Hi!" Armaan smiled at her. " Minnie and I were just having a little chat"
Lady: Yeah, she's totally in love with you.Refuses to touch her food if your show is not on!
A: What? Really Minnie?? You know what, I love to eat and I never waste food.
Minnie: I know, even I never waste chocolate like you! It's good for health.
Armaan laughed at her cute logic.The mother smiled at the pair of them.
Lady: She says she'll get married to you someday. Minnie's mother laughed. She's only eight you see.
Armaan: Oh yes! Definitely! I'll be waiting for you, okay Minnie?

Minnie nodded her head vigourously. Riddhima realized that within moments the little girl had lost herself to Armaan's charm.
Lady: I'm so sorry to be bugging you like this, but can we have a picture?
A: Sure, for memories, till Minnie and I get married, haina? He asked her to which she giggled.The lady took out her cellphone and was about to take a picture when...

"Shall I take it?" Riddhima piped up.She took the phone from the lady and clicked a few shots of all of them with Armaan still carrying Minnie.He gave Minnie a little kiss on her cheek and signed autographs and waved them goodbye.

R: You have a lot of fans don't you?
A: Yeah. He smiled. Actually they love the character I play - Dr. Karan Grover.Have you seen the show?
R: DMG? Of course! She exclaimed. Who hasn't? Waise bhi they air it all through the day so its pretty hard to miss on TV.I don't really follow the story. I love watching you whenever you play basketball though, those bits are just amazing!!!

Armaan's heart swelled as she blurted it out. Somehow, deep down inside him he knew he really wanted Riddhima to like and adore him as a character atleast if not in reality.
R: Muskaan's a big fan too she added softly.

Armaan just smiled at her.They stepped out of the elevator and walked into a shoe showroom.Riddhima was not at all surprised to find that they were treated like VIP'S. The moment Armaan uttered the word dancing shoes, almost 50 pairs materialized from nowhere in various shades and colours. Riddhima made him try on some of the pairs

And finally they picked out a black lightweight pair and a brown one too. She was particular that they should be flexible and comfortable for him and not too slippery.

A: Riddhima, come now lets get you a nice pair.

R: No no Armaan. I don't need a new pair.

A: I know you don't need it but I want you to buy one. Get a pair with huge heels that you can throw at me later.

R: But Armaan,

A: No buts!

And before she knew it loads of dancing shoes lay before her waiting to be tried on. Armaan insisted that she buy a pair so she agreed to get a silver strappy pair.


As they were packing up the shoes she noticed a single beautiful dancing shoe in the window and went out to take a look.It was a spectacular black sandal with a two and half inch heel.It was displayed beautifully on pale white silk and a few pearls scattered here and there.Coming closer she realized that the shoe was studded with diamonds.She looked at the price tag - Rs. 12,000. She smirked wondering who would spend such a lot of money on a shoe?

Armaan had followed her out and saw her gazing at the shoe on display.

A: Do you like it?

R: Obviously! It's so dainty and beautiful.

A: Great! Manager, can you give us that one in her size?

Manager: Sure sir,

R: Armaan have you gone crazy???

A: Nope!

R: Armaan what are you doing? You can't do this!

A: Yes, I can.

R: This is outrageous! Armaan, I can't buy that shoe!

A: Who said you are buying it? I am.

R: What? But why? I can't let you buy me this!!!

A: I am going to whether you want me to or not!


Realising that Armaan was'nt going to listen to her, she stomped off in anger and marched out of the shop and walked out.

A: Riddhima, Riddhima!!!!!

She did not reply and kept walking ahead until he caught up with her huffing and puffing.

A: Riddhima!!!

R: What? She snapped at him.

A: What happened? Why did you come away?

Riddhima glared at him as if to ask " as though you don't know?"

A: Okay okay, chill out! Here. He handed her a shopping bag.I swear I only bought the silver pair.

Riddhima took the bag and looked inside.

R: But I did'nt pay for it!

A: Oh come on Riddhima! Its not like I paid a million dollars okay?

R: But, I can't take this! I'll pay you back in a moment, how much was it?

A: I am not telling you that!

R: Armaan please, let me

A: No way!

R: Nahi Armaan, I'll ---

They were interrupted by a large group of ladies.

Ladies: Armaan!!! They shrieked.

They were a bunch of six to seven middle aged ladies dressed in designer shiffon sarees. Apparantly they were here for their kitty party and happened to bump into Armaan!

"What a coincidence" one of them squealed.They all took his autographs and some of them openly complemented his looks and his muscular body.

" And who is this?" one nosy lady asked suspisciously, pointing at Riddhima.

A: This is my friend, Riddhima. She's a choreographer for Naach.

They all smiled at her but still looked like they thought he was lying. Next they all wanted autographs and photographs and Armaan obliged. When Riddhima tried to step away he pulled her back and his arm went around her waist. Each lady wanted an individual photo with them and all the while Armaan's arm lingered around her waist making her feel tingly and jumpy.


Finally they all left and Armaan dragged Riddhima into an apparel store saying he needed to buy himself new clothes. Soon Riddhima learnt that Armaan Mallik unlike most other men, was a very fussy and time-consuming shopper.Things were "too tight" or "too loose", too yellow, too boring, too pink or too bright. Finally he decided to buy himself a pair of plain faded blue jeans, a black tee and a grey one, a plain white shirt and some beach wear. Then he took her to the ladies section asking her to pick out a dress.

R: For whom?

A: Uhm, its for a friend. It's a gift. She's very very pretty and I want to gift her something gorgeous to wear.

R: What's the occasion?

A: Uhm, there's a party at my place before the world tour. He invented wildly.

R: But what if she does'nt like what I pick out?

A: Don't worry. I know her well. She'll love whatever you choose.

Riddhima skimmed through the racks looking at the designer dresses.

R: Is she short?

A: No, she's about as tall as as you and she's sort of dusky and slim, curvy,

R: Okay okay, did'nt ask for the details!

A: In short she's beautiful.

Riddhima picked out a plain green dress wondering who this "friend" of Armaan's was.

R: Armaan, will she like this one?

A: Try it on.

Riddhima walked into the trial room and changed into the dress.Walking out, she stood in front of Armaan, waiting for his reaction.

Please go have a look at how our Rids is looking.

http://foreveramber.typepad.com/photos/uncategorized/2008/02/03/dress_1.jpg

A: Wooooowwwwwww!!!!!!!! It's perfect.

R: Really?

A: Yes. It's more breathtaking than you could imagine.


He said it fondly making Riddhima wonder if this friend of his was actually his girlfriend? But she decided not to poke her nose unless he told her something himself.Riddhima noticed how he just swiped his credit card without even asking how much the dress cost.

He got the dress gift wrapped and they walked out.

A: Riddhima, I'm sorry I forgot, your invited too obviously.

R: For what Armaan?

A: For the party at my place.Uhm, I'll tell you the date and time tonight. I don't want to hear a no get it?

R: Fine, your highness!

A:That's better! Now let's go get something to eat.It's almost 1.30pm.

R: No, that's fine, I'll have lunch at home.

A: But why? Please Riddhima, I just hate eating alone.

Riddhima smiled at him. " Okay, but I have a class at three."

A: That's okay.


They had lunch in the rooftop restaurant of the mall. The food was excellent and the cool breeze added to the refreshing atmosphere.Riddhima and Armaan had no dirth of things to tell each other and soon they realized that there was a lot more to one another than they could tell.Riddhima was unlike most women Armaan had met. Right from the way she dressed to her nave charm, she exuded innocence and simplicity. As for Riddhima, well who could resist Armaan's endearing charm.He was spontaneous and easy-going and he kept her entertained throughout lunch with ease.Soon she was hardly aware of when the time flew by and was enjoying the chat with him long after lunch had been eaten.


2.45 pm: Armaan and Riddhima still at lunch.


R: Oh god, Armaan I have to get back, its 2.45pm

A: Can't you not go? I mean can't muskaan step in for you or something? He pleaded.

Riddhima shook her head with a small smile at his adorable way of asking her to stay for longer.

Armaan looked crestfallen and walked out with her telling her it was all his bad karma from his previous birth.As they were walking out they were confronted by another bunch of Armaan's fans, this time a gang of teenage girls.

"Armaan your so hot!!!!", " I love you Armaan!" " I can't stop looking at you!" they cooed. All of them wanted his autograph, some wanted him to sign their clothes and some wanted him to sign their arm.They all made Riddhima take pictures of them with Armaan in varied poses, hugging Armaan, kissing his cheek, ruffling his hair, pinching his cheeks and Armaan obliged to all this with a smile but Riddhima was getting more and more irritated by these desperate girls and their silly antics.She wished Armaan would stop them but he seemed to be enjoying the attention equally.

Girl: Ooh Armaan, can I have your phone number pleeeaaaaaasssssssssssssssseeeeeeee

Armaan laughed and replied: Why don't you write to me instead? I like reading letters. You can write in at armaanmallik@gmail.com okay? I promise I'll read it.

Then a voluptuous girl with a low neck top went up to him and in a throaty voice she said

"Armaan, won't leave an imprint on my heart????"

That's it! Riddhima had had enough.She could not believe the guts of that girl! She barged into the crowd and tugging on Armaan's arm a little more forcefully than necessary, said " Armaan, I need to leave."

A: Oh yeah, let's go.

He apologized to the girls and left, and just at the exit turned around to give them a last flying kiss, which made them all squeal and swoon and which made Riddhima fume even more.As he was driving, he could not help but laugh at all the expressions on Riddhima's face.She looked like she was positively livid, and a deep frown was set on her brow.

A: Hey, Ms. jealous!

R: Jealous? Are you kidding me?

A: Admit it. Your going green with envy.

R: What rubbish!

A: Oh please, I'm smart enough to know what you were thinking

R: All I'm saying is there should be a limit! I mean fine they love you and all of that but they can't just do or say anything they want! They should learn to control themselves.Specially that last girl---what audacity does she have to come and say stuff like that?

Armaan's heart danced all the way she was reacting to the whole thing.He decided he loved it when she got jealous and possessive about him, reassuring him that maybe she was feeling the same way about him too.

R: Besides, its your fault too. You let them go too far.

A: Me? What did I do? And why should I stop them anyway? They are my fans and this is just their way of showing me how much they love me.

R: Yeah right! What those girls were showing was much more than love!

Armaan smirked at her jealousy and stopped the car infront of the Naach studio.

R: I'll see you at rehearsal tonight.bye.

With that she walked off, still disgruntled with the girls.

A: Riddhima! Riddhima wait! Here you forgot your bags!

Rids took the bag with the sandals and returned the one with the dress to him. " This is yours."

But Armaan gave it back to her. "No, its yours."

R: What? No, Armaan it's the bag with the dress for your friend.

A: Exactly. It's for you Riddhima.

R: What? But why? I mean for what?

A: For the party, of course!

R: Armaan I can't accept this.

A: But why?

R: Because there is no need to.And I just take this from you!

A: Fine.

He walked over to a nearby dustbin and was about to drop the giftwrapped package into it when Riddhima shrieked "Armaan!"

A: What?

R: What are you doing?

A: You don't want it so I'm throwing it in the dustbin.

R: What? Don't do that.She tugged on his arm.

A: Then just take it.

R: No!

Armaan turned around to her and with puppy dog eyes he held her by the shoulder and strted begging her --- Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please

R: Armaan stop it! Your creating a scene!

A: Pleeeeeeaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeee just take it yaar!

Giving up, she shook her head and taking the bag mumbled a thanks to him and went off into the studio.

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Hi guys i know its been a really really long time. its just that everytime i came online to update the fic i would see some ppl bashing karan, shradha and nicole on the jdj forum and that would just piss me off so much that i did'nt feel like writing. i hope u guys understand....i mean i really can't write this fic when i'm pissed with ppl for saying horrible things and targetting karan and shradha and posting mean stuff and snubbing each other!

now coming to the update, i'm really feeling quite unsure about how its turned out...so please silent and my regular readers leave your comments and criticisms.please do see the pics and listen to the song, its one of my favourites.and everything in this fic is fictious including the email id and i've kinda tried twisted the dmg thing around....

so all in all i hope you guys enjoy the read and i'll try to get the next one up soon.pm's will come a little later and so will replies. lastly, i know this seems freaking crazy but i might put up another short story on AR i'm writing soon.thanks a ton

love you all

sumedha

Edited by ~sumedha~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey gr8t prt. Plz continue soonnnnnn.
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Posted: 16 years ago
so glad u updated! loved the part! it was a full on AR update! they are so perfect together!
lovely part, continue soon!
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woah dear🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ superb dear😍so both enjoyed shopping cool😉 and he purchase gift for her😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"May there always be work for your hands to do, may your purse always hold a coin or two. May the sun always shine on your windowpane, may a rainbow be certain to follow each rain. May the hand of a friend always be near you, may God fill your heart with gladness to cheer you."

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With Luv: ~
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hey sumedha,
Ooooooh...cool part! cute and Romantic! Dunno why..but i liked that little twist with Dr. Karan Grover....he he..cracked me up...i'm probably losing it!!! Get a grip girl! Aww...Armaan bought that shoe for her? He is just soooo sweet! Minnie also reminded me of the good ol' days of DMG.....Armaan is amazing with kids, and teenagers, and adults and middle aged women and old women and heck...he is just amazing with Women! All types! 😉 Update soon...i presume fireworks are yet to start..
love,
mia

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