AR ff:Dancing to your tunes...smallprt pg94 1/5 - Page 24

Originally posted by: jia..

Sumeee!!!!!🤗🤗🤗hi jia!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Finally um here...done with a brilliant part...left me smiling and feeling all cheery and bubbly...hehe i knw childish description but honestly ur part was such a delight....such a treat to read!!! thanks a ton yaar....know how superbusy u must be!

Loved the start...Muskaan going Haw and he...and Riidz wondering!! Fabulous description...oh i forget to say everytime...i love the whle msging thing u cook up...cinderalla and the whole idea....love it!! Its just so cute, simple and sweet...cant help loving it babes!! thank you madame....they're still nothing compared to your cliffhangers!!!

Fab part...loved her reactions in the end as well......looking forward eagerly to moreeee!!! Love u babes!!love you loads jia....thanks for taking time to comment!

Originally posted by: everlastingword

hey Sumedha,hey mia!!!

first of all...a big thank you to you for forwarding the link to me...i was kept away from a great read since (OMG, am i reading it correctly??) January!!!yes, i'm quite the slow vareity!!! Finished it all in one go and i have to tell you, its wonderful.thanks a lot

Armaan-Riddhima, rahul-Muskaan, Abhi- Nikki, song dance,mela, water ride, chocolate pasrty...phew...quite an action packed 7 parts! but amazingly enjoyable! The way you describe situations and emotions....makes them endearingly real and an awesome read. I really like Nikki in your FF...i can so totally imagine her bossing around Armaan😛 And Muskaan and the whole mela thingie...reminds me of myself!! i love all the rides in the melas...they are just so much fun!! no rahul in my case(unfortunately) but i once had forced a very good friend of mine to get up on a ferris wheel during pouring rain. he hated it but i dragged him along. to add to his woes, there was a short circuit (due to the rain) and we were stuck on top for a whole 20 minutes!! i enjoyed myself thoroughly but my friend went through the worst 20 minutes of his life....clinging on to the rickety carriage and praying to all the Gods he could remember while getting drenched to the skin. i will never forget the look on his face...ever. To cut a long story short....the part at the mela brought back a lot of memories😃 thanks sooooooo much....trust me mia u don't know how much this means to me....specially because u urself are such a brilliant and exceptionally funny writer!!!!!the mela thing kinda just popped in my head.....just a very muskaanish thing!!!!you've made me laugh even in your comment!!!! was this in kolkata??? coz i was stuck in a ride in nicco park too once and trust me its not a very nice feeling! thanks again!!!!

Liked the last part..Riddhima's introspections and her trust in Armaan....waiting for sparks to fly!! update soon....its been 9 days...

love,

mia

Originally posted by: Steff_DMG

Ouch Sumedha......Excellent Brilliant FF....i simply loved it.......excellent language ...i had a smile on my face throughout.........ouch now my cheeks hurt..ok ok..m kidding......!!!!!!

i wanna say thanks for PMing me abt it..i would have never read it otherwise........!!!!!!!

Ur a fab Writer....u give footage to all characters i c...!!!!! RM AN AR.....!!! well done.....!!!!!!

i like ur concept about the Naach and all industry stuff........!!!!!!!

i Like the Chikki Nikki.......lolz..........

I Love the AR thing here...waiting to c dem in love and...urrmm u kno.........😉

and a lot is like the Real Groverz meeting...!!!!!!..i c u have taken it from there..smilarity u put in is nioce...no one would have though of it...!!!!!!!!!..

all in all lovely FF...👏

keep PM'ing me wen u update.........😳.

Love

Steffi🤗