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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 16 years ago

Closed FF. Parts

Edited by swansea - 16 years ago

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Swancy Cherry xx

@-Cherry-

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Posted: 16 years ago

Closed FF. Parts

Edited by swansea - 16 years ago

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Sujata77

@Sujata77

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey this is gud....

u shud not stop it..

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Dolly

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesome part....

u should not stop it......

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rav

@-midnightsun-

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Posted: 16 years ago

DON'T U DARE DISCONTINUE THIS FF LADOO........🤣 Lol onli jokin... serioulsy.... i love it!!!!!! 👏 n hats off to you for that....

you obeyed my orders for starting a new ff... yayyyyy

so i am here..(a little late... sry) and i am going to postmortem your part 😈 *evil laugh*

😆😆😆 loooollll....

i am still gonna do it though and i promise to be utterly honest.... 😃😃

well well... the preface was beautifully penned down (typed down rather... 😛) It was superbly done... like watchin a trialer in my head of the whole ff... 😳

The diary was again magnificantly written... so naturally... like any 17 year old girl would rite it.... actually it's like me when i write mine... Sonia was doing that as well... going off writing about random things like boys... her pink wardrobe n all.... so it was brill.... 👏👏👏 Through all these liitle things you portaryed her character very well... 😃😃😃 intended or nor not intended 😆😆😆

anyways back to the part.... u got the msg across of her strong bond with her mother... you showed the love between them by showing the little things... like how sonia described her hair and their time at the beach and the shells and everthing.... 🤗 a big big hug to u frm me for doing such a onderful display of emotions...

omg.... sonia says NA!! alot yh.... 😆😆 in her diary i culd spot NA!! after every couple of sentences... lol

hope 2 see more of her diary and her NA's!! in the future....

continue super super soon.........

sry for the annoyingly long comment... 😕😳 onli noticed now how long it was now... 😳😳 see how i babber on about things.... random as well lol

love u lts n lts n lts

ur angel....

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Waleed Ahmed !~~!

@smartleo_walo

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Swancy ~!
Loved The PArt Yr !~
Its Realli Different Concept ~!
Hope To Read More From U !~!~
Please Continue ~!~!~!

And Hun I Want A PM ~!!!~

Take Care !~~!

And Loads Of Thnx For The Great FF ~!~!

-Walo

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey

i m in

ur FF sounds soooooooooooo gud

i m totaly in love with it

plz put me in ur PM list

thnxs

luv

nruti

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unknown cute

@yogzz

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Posted: 16 years ago

omgswancy very nice part.........

loved it.........

thanx for pm

n add me in u r PM list...

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Aimee

@Wild.Aimee

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Swanzzy dear 😊

Thanks for the PM sweetie. When i read the preface, i was a little confused, What to do i am a dim light 😃. Actually after finishing it up, i realized that Sonia Desai is none other than Riddhima herself. So what i have understood is that Riddhima's real name is Sonia Desai.

I liekd the way you have explained her background story in talking to her diary. Interesting it is...

Hmm, so her younger one is called Sinthy, i mean Sinthiya 😆. The story sounds interesting. I liked it. And yes, when you update next, dont forget to PM me 😊.