DON'T U DARE DISCONTINUE THIS FF LADOO........🤣 Lol onli jokin... serioulsy.... i love it!!!!!! 👏 n hats off to you for that....
you obeyed my orders for starting a new ff... yayyyyy
so i am here..(a little late... sry) and i am going to postmortem your part 😈 *evil laugh*
😆😆😆 loooollll....
i am still gonna do it though and i promise to be utterly honest.... 😃😃
well well... the preface was beautifully penned down (typed down rather... 😛) It was superbly done... like watchin a trialer in my head of the whole ff... 😳
The diary was again magnificantly written... so naturally... like any 17 year old girl would rite it.... actually it's like me when i write mine... Sonia was doing that as well... going off writing about random things like boys... her pink wardrobe n all.... so it was brill.... 👏👏👏 Through all these liitle things you portaryed her character very well... 😃😃😃 intended or nor not intended 😆😆😆
anyways back to the part.... u got the msg across of her strong bond with her mother... you showed the love between them by showing the little things... like how sonia described her hair and their time at the beach and the shells and everthing.... 🤗 a big big hug to u frm me for doing such a onderful display of emotions...
omg.... sonia says NA!! alot yh.... 😆😆 in her diary i culd spot NA!! after every couple of sentences... lol
hope 2 see more of her diary and her NA's!! in the future....
continue super super soon.........
sry for the annoyingly long comment... 😕😳 onli noticed now how long it was now... 😳😳 see how i babber on about things.... random as well lol
love u lts n lts n lts
ur angel....
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Edited by lollipops - 17 years ago
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