MAIRAs REJECTION 4.9
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NOTE
Ok.. So all those who have read last two part and commented and not commented….
I have to tell u, writing these parts was awfully difficult for me too. I know these parts were very depressing and sad. But I couldn't help it, if somebody gets hurt in a story then it does become a bit tragic….
Now as for the future everyone's big question of whether he wud get his eyesight or not, with that .50% chance or natural recovery…. Well I don't know. I haven't decided.
All I can promise to all my readers is that this is not going to be sob story nor do I intend for it to have tragic ending…. Sure its being looking down for a last few parts but that was just to built the scenario. I just can't write in 1 part they go on happy date next part he goes to have an accident. 3rd part all problems solved but they are all still unhappy. 4th part he gets it back naturally, guess he was in that lucky .5% category and then happily ever after for everyone.…
I can't write 4 part story like above. It's not realistic. Yah I know this is still just a story.. But I am trying hard to put real emotions and characteristics to it.
Also for all those who didnt read information earlier…. Rin is Sam's wife and Kaveri is Sid's wife.
CHAPTER 21
Is the Hangover over😲?
A few days passed in the same manner….. Kashish took it upon herself to get sujal out of his depression. He may not blame her at all and he may also be right that the accident was not her fault. But she can't let go of the fact that she was involved in it and that remained ignorant of his misery for a whole month.
So come night and Kashish wud bully Kaveri into teaching her some dishes that Sujal particularly liked and then she wud march to his room with dinner for two.
It surprised Sujal that she came again. After all both had ended up crying the first time. But somewhere he was relieved and happy that she came. Dinner was something he looked forward to now.
Although the dinner wasn't like the first one. They hardly talked. Kashish wud come lay down dinner announce the position of his meal and then sit on the right chair and start eating. Sujal too didn't question her presence on the 2nd night and the days that followed. He wud obey her voice and sit down to enjoy his dinner. It didn't even matter to him now, if he blotched his shirt with food, as long as he got to have dinner with her. Maybe life didn't end with his eye sight. He enjoyed hearing different noises she made and matching it to images in his memory. He enjoyed the delicious food and he liked her exotic smell.
A week passed in this manner, at one hand Sujal was accepting Kashish and their dinner meetings; on the other hand family's curiosity was growing unbearable. All Kashish's wud ever say was, "Oh! What's going on? Nothing. We just have dinner together."
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<<Sunday>>
Sujal lay away in his bed.. Sundays are the worst!!! Every1 is always at home and I can often hear them crossing my door.. Their steps hesitating in front of my room. Why don't they just forget that I live here.
#singing …humming#
Who is that? Sounds like Kashish…
Sujal touched his watch to check the time It's barely 6.30 What is she doing up so early? Every1 usually sleeps till 7.30… And why is she singing? Urrgh I wish I knew all the ans…
15 mins later.
Fine!! Ok I admit it. I am curious and I can't control it. I am going to see what she is doing. What a strange tune she was singing.. I'll go and come back before any1 else comes. I have around 45 min. I'll make it 30 min just to be safe.
Sujal got out of his room and followed the singing it seemed to be coming from kitchen with a lot of other noises..
Hmmm sounds like she is cooking..But this early? What's she up to??
#$%#!%!$#%#
And what's she cursing abt…
"Something wrong?" I asked
She replied, sounding oddly happy abt something "Nothing is wrong. What r u doing so early?"
"a…um… I..I…"
"You……? Did u want something? Did I disturb u while coming downstairs?"
"Uhh.. No!.. Nothing like that.. I was just .. Thirsty.. I wanted water." Yah… thts right water the basic prerequisite for life to sustain.
"Fridge is 3 steps to ur left, water's on 3rd shelf of the door."
Sujal nodded and moved to the fridge. Ok… This is weird… She isn't rushing to help me.. She just gave me directions… Is she waiting to see me making a fool by showing my clumsiness or she is training me to be independent enough to get out of her house… Both seem improbable…
"Hey Einstein… If ur done thinking get a move on. Then sit down on the table to ur right 7 steps from where u r right now. I want u to taste my pancakes."
"I don't think I am hungry..", Sujal muttered trying to follow her instructions to the fridge. Damn she I good with this direction stuff. I found the water bottle without groping or bumping.
Kashish waited patiently for sujal to have his drink. As soon as he was done she grabbed his arm and pushed him into the chair.
"There u r. Now what do u want? Chatni(coconut paste) or sambar(pulses)?"
S –I said I am not hungry.(Getting up slowly…Damn I lost my direction where do I turn?)
K –U don't have to be. 2 bites won't be that heavy on ur stomach to make u puke. So sit down and tell me how it is.
S –I didn't brush my teeth.
K –Don't worry ur corpse wud still have perfectly undecayed teeth, if u, for once ate something before cleaning ur teeth.
I heard her placing a plate in front of me and again telling me the position of food. But I stubbornly sat cross armed. No way was anyone making me do anything I didn't want to and that includes her!
"U know I worked really hard to make this. I wud be very happy if u were the fist one to taste it. It's the first time I have made pancakes."
"So what am I now? ur private guinea pig?" Sujal muttered irritably I am not gonna fall for that.. It's really stupid that u wud even come up with that corny line. As if u wud really want me before ur dad and ur brothers..
"Why do have to be so rude? Ok fine I was lying earlier coz I… well I wasn't planning for u to have it, but when u walked in I wanted u to taste it first coz… coz... well.. I…umm.. I…. If u don't have it then it wud mean u still haven't forgiven me.", Kashish completed her sentence in a rush..
"What nonsense?! What r u apologizing abt?"
"About the… umm.. Bad Food. I have been forcing u to eat for the whole week. I know u don't like it taste but u r just too nice to say anything. So u eat it being a gentleman. But I swear this pancake isn't as bad as the dinner. I'll shave ur cheek for 1 week if I am lying and I wud never again force u to have dinner with me again."
"What..? NO.. U don't make bad food!! Who said that? That's not true.."
"Noooo!!!! I know it's bad!! Rin says it's bad!!!! I know it's bad. If it wasn't u wouldn't be afraid to taste my pancake."
"It's nothing like that. calm down!!" Why is she so touchy abt her cooking? She sounds tearful.
"No it is. I get it now. I won't enter into kitchen ever. I wouldn't also force dinner on u!!"
Sujal gulped hard.. Ok…. So she is a bit touchy abt cooking… I don't want her to stop having dinner with me.. And then how cud having pancakes really hurt.. I don't have to be such an ass in front of her… "Can I have a hotter one this one has gone cold…"
Although Sujal couldn't see her but he had a feelinging that she had smiled. She was like a kid at some things… inhibited.. she definitely wud have smiled.. a big smile. Sujal too smiled correctly imaging her reaction.
"So…. How is it?"K asked.
She does sound nervous.. doesn't she know what a good cook she is nervous over a pancake… "It's delicious like all the other things u cook. And I mean it"
"..Thanks…."
Yup she is definitely happy and smiling too, her voice is warm. I didn't know my approval matter that much…
"Want another one?"
How dare I refuse when u ask with such a cute voice on top of making excellent pancake?... "Yes."
"U really think I cook okay?"
"Of course… Why wud I lie?.. I know u won't hit me if I said it was bad… U shudnt listen to Rin that much. First of all she is an idiot and secondly her taste buds are as good as that of stray cattle. She doesn't know the difference b/w grass and hay and absolutely detests civilized, well cooked food."
Sujal heard giggle at his words that made him happy. If he cud do nothing else he cud still make her smile. And he heard another voice.. Sharper, sarcastic, too sweet…
"Really? I didn't know my taste buds were that bad….. But u have to admit Mr. grewal. U r wrong abt one thing. I am not stray."
Uh oh! Why the hell did she have to come when me and kashish were having such a nice time? Did kashish drop a spoon? Sounded like that.. guess she is shocked too. Wait a min!! what is Rin doing standing next to me? Did she just eat from my plate? Yes she did!!!! I don't believe this!!!!
"Ummmm hmmm very nice Kashu.. U did a nice job… But make mine more crispy."
I know I hate her voice now. its too arrogant. Hmmm kashish seems to breathing hard and she just cursed too…. Yup she is angry at Rin… shud I intervene? No.. that wud be suicide.
"Hey sujal! U want some coffee?"
Why r u concerned Rin? "Err…n-"
"C'mon my treat, I won't burden K more with order for coffee too. As it is she is hardly managing the pancakes…"
"Umm.." What do I say??? If I don't say she wud continue her remarks on kashish's cooking and if I do.. I have a feeling that it wud make kashish angry… She really is scrapping the pan hard.. Guess she burned one. I'll just make noise by clearing my throat.
"U know Sujal, coffee is my specialty.. I don't believe I have made coffee for u before, right?"
"Right… But I don't think its as effective as Kashish's black coffee. Nothing better to clear one's head. Why don't u make some for her too? Then she can make ur pancake extra crispy.."
Ok they both stopped moving… Did I say too much? Hmm kashish is cooking again, her breathing seems calmer… Good.
"So when did kashish make coffee for u?"
"Why shud I tell u? Its b/w me and her." Was that choking sound? Did kashish hide her laugh by coughing. Rin seems to be in shock.. Thts Good! Time for her to shut up.
"Sorry I didn't mean to be nosy.. I didn't know that u two had had a…..er…."
Urrrgh!!!!! She just has to have the last word!! I hope kashish burn her pancake black!
"Wow Rin.. There… U have let ur mouth run off with ur over imagination once again."
Kashish said in a dry voice only Sujal cud detect the slight tremble in it.
"Hmm something smells nice.. What's cooking? Uh Rin!! U r working too!"
Damn!! Nick's voice. Why didn't I hear the approaching steps? Thts right I was too caught up thinking about Kashish.
Nick walked into the kitchen and thumped sujal on back without seeing his face, "Morning bro"
"Morning Nick."
#CRASH# Somebody falling over a chair
"^@%^&%$@%^*#@#$@!#"
Okay….. That was some reaction..Did he fall that hard? I shud help. Me help? I'll probably trip over him and hurt him more. I better keep sitting and be out of the way. Okay he is up. And he is having some problem breathing…. Hmm this pancake is extra delicious… Sujal popped another bite into his mouth looking amused..
"What's the matter? U look pale.. seen a ghost?"
Why does Rin say such things? He is pale coz he is hurt idiot. "Hey u okay? Didya hurt urself? Look where ur going man, its not that difficult."
"Huh!! Wha… u… Its.. aaa…. Umm
Hmmm he sounds pretty disoriented must have hit his head… Oh Kashish is helping him up now.. Uh.. I can smell the pancake burning… Maybe u can give this crisp one to Rin…
"Hey Nick… u alright?!! Sit down will u? Rin!! Why don't u make coffee for ur dear brother in law? I am sure he wud appreciate it more than sujal and me.", Kashish said.
Sujal and me…. Its sounds nice when she says my name…
"So..SS.Sujal? How u doing man? I thought u were Sid bhaiya"
"I am fine.. U sure u not hurt.. U still sound startled…"
"Yah.. I am fine I was just surprised to s-"
#Clingggg!!!#(spoon falling)
What did Rin drop? I thought she was making coffee… What's she doing?
Kashish mouthed Rin a thank you and glared at nick and placed a finger over her lips.
"Hey Rin? Cant u even handle coffee?"
"Oh its already made. Kashish left a spare pan in my way and it fell. Here u go its hot be careful."
"Hmm."…. Cocky as ever. Nick is awfully quit though.. Must have fallen hard…
"Here u go sujal.. Nick what do u want chatni or sambar? Hey Rin ur crispy pancake is ready eat it b4 it gets cold"
Hope she gave the burnt one to Rin.. Ummmmmmm how cud Rin ever say that Kashish doesn't know how to cook? Has any1 ever tasted anything better?
Nick –Hmm thanks for the pancake… Umm u did a good job.. U know.
Good. He sounds sincere. It will give a boost to Kashish's morals..
"Morning everyone…"
"Hmmm pancakes!!!!!!!!!!!! Kashish u made 'em!! I thought u were kidding yesterday."
That sounds like Kaveri and Sid bhaiya.. Hmm just two… Its difficult to make out how many pairs of foot are approaching when its more than 1… If I pay more attention maybe I can do better.
S -Morning… Guess what? Rin is making complementary coffee!! Rin wont u make some for them too? I am sure they want some too….
#uhhhuhh ugh huuhh<choking coughing sound>#
Yup, they are astonished to see Rin work.. My... She must be a real pain in the ass… looks like she never lifts a finger to do any work…. Poor Kaveri, I feel bad for her…
Rin –Sure…. Why not?.. Guess I am going to chip my nails this morning.. Slaying off to make coffee for u thankless, ungrateful ppl….
#scraping of chairs, shuffling feet, deep breaths.. awkward silence#
K –Umm so.. Nick.. How's sanskriti?
N –She is fine.
K –And??
N –And?
K –And? Well… u know… What did she say… I mean, She missing us?
Rin –Really kashish get over urself. U r not that popular…
S –Hey Rin make sure the milk doesn't boil over.. U'll chip an extra nail trying to clean that up…
R –Thanks for ur concern but I am sure Kashish being such a caring friend wud offer to do it for me. As it is she wud be cleaning up her mess…
Kaveri –Umm I'll help..I'll do all the clean u don't have to worry
Rin –Oooohhhh u r such a sweetheart. Thanks!!!
Kaveri –No problems.. Umm kashish u need help?
K –Oh no.. I am good. U sit back and enjoy breakfast today. Sujal u want another?
S –Sure… Hey can I some more chatni?
Rin –Here u go.
S –Thanks.
"Looks like I am the last one to wake up today… Morning everyone.."
Everyone except sujal, "Morning dad."
"Hmm Kashish cooking!! What a surprise smells good honey. Oh Sam u r back"
S -"Morning uncle… No kashish told me that Sam's coming back on Tuesday."
A -"Sujal!!!! I….I.."
Rin -"Oh u were waiting for Sam's call right? Yah he called up earlier.. He says he can't make it back early. sorry"
A –Oh..umm. Okay .. I see….
Hmm uncle is much better than Sid, Kaveri and Nick at hiding his astonishment to see Rin working.. Wonder what this really wud be looking right now… maybe Kashish can describe it to me in detail tonight… Hmm the coffee is good, can't believe Rin wasn't bragging about this.….
Sujal sat back and enjoyed the coffee his stomach full now… Listening to evry1's voices with full interest and concentration.
I sure am glad Kashish blackmailed me into eating breakfast.. It is quite nice… and coffee is good too although I wud never tell Rin that. She is already to high up in the clouds…Everybody seems to be liking her pancakes too. This is good for her.. although they sound a bit anxious. I wonder why…
K –Sujal. u sure don't want any more?
S –No. I am full.
Rin –More coffee?
S –Gee I wonder if my stomach can take any more coffee Rin... I think I am full.
#muttering #
Hahaaa!! Guess I upset her now…. She sure was expecting a compliment.. How I love to disappoint her..
Nick –Umm sujal?
S (Casual tone… What's with him? He sounds freaked out.. must have fallen on his head.. why has everyone gone quite?)–Yah?
Nick –Umm ….. So… We gonna see u at lunch too today…?
Sujal froze in his chair OH MY GOD!!!!! I am having a Normal Breakfast!! OUTSIDE My Room!!! That too in front of EVERY1!!!!! Holy Cow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Kashish's version of the morning.
Kashish got up early around 6 am, inspite of sleeping late. Today was a big step. Sleep was inconsequential….
She skipped downstairs making sure that everyone was asleep. It was an essential part of the plan. Around 6.30 kashish glided past Sujal's room humming loudly. A little while later she busied herself in the kitchen.. These days most of her free time seemed to be spent in kitchen only.. How she hated cooking… Standing for hrs in heat serving every1.. Being the last one to eat and then getting reproached for adding too less salt or too much spice.
And now, her mornings too. Life in kitchen is awful Kashish grumbled to herself while working hard to flip of the pancake without breaking it.
"Something wrong?" A deep voice called from behind.
Kashish smiled and answered, "Nothing's wrong. What r u doing so early?" Without turning around. She may not be blind but she wud recognize the voice anywhere.
"a…um… I..I…"
"You….? Did u want something? Did I disturb u while coming downstairs?" Kashish suppressed another smile.
"Uhh.. no!.. Nothing like that.. I was just .. thirsty.. I wanted water."
Kashish finally turned around holding the freshly cooked pancake in a plate and looked at Sujal standing in front of her. Liar… U came here coz u were curious.
"Fridge is 3 steps to ur left, water's on 3rd shelf of the door."
Sujal mutely nodded not moving a step.
"Hey Einstein… If ur done thinking get a move on. Then sit down on the table to ur right 7 steps from where u r right now. I want u to taste my pancakes."
S -I don't think I am hungry
Kashish waited patiently for sujal to have his drink. As soon as he was done she grabbed his arm and pushed him into the chair.
"There u r. now what do u want chatni(coconut) or sambar(pulses)?"
S –I said I am not hungry.
K –u don't have to be. 2 bites won't be that heavy on ur stomach to make u puke. So sit down and tell me how it is.
Kashish placed the plate in front of sujal and again said the directions for food. While sujal sat stubbornly crossing his arms.
I feel like ramming the pancake down his throat.. I didn't get up early to suffer his childish tantrums. Ok calm down. Being violent or threatening won't help. I have to be calm and patient…. Grewal get ready for some serious groveling.
(after argument)
God it is difficult to get him to sit at the table at start eating.. I can't believe I have finally stooped so a low as to emotionally blackmail him.. I am the worst!! Well at least he is eating now..
Kashish gave Sujal a dazzling smile and hurried over to flip another pancake. She noticed that Sujal too was smiling.
K –So…. How is it?
S –Its delicious like all the other things u cook. And I mean it"
"..Thanks…."u had better liked it grewal…"Want another one?"
"Sure.."
"U really think I cook okay?"
"Of course… Why wud I lie.. I know u won't hit me if I said it was bad… U shudnt listen to Rin that much. First of all she is an idiot and secondly her taste buds are as good as that of stray cattle. She doesn't know the difference b/w grass and hay and absolutely detests civilized, well cooked food."
K giggled at sujal's words it was nice to see him so relaxed and laid back..
Rin –really? I didn't know my taste buds were that bad….. But u have to admit Mr. grewal. U r wrong abt one thing. I am not stray."
SHIT!!! What is Rin doing here!! Of all the people I imagined walking into kitchen today why did she have to be the first one??!!
Rin came in her usual overbearing manner and offered to make coffee at which, Sujal hesitated, while Kashish fumed in silence. She hated getting insulted by Rin in front of Sujal.. And sujal spoke up to defend K which pleased K, she had to hide her laughter by turning it into a cough.
But sujal's defense had some which had some unexpected repercussions for Rin being Rin caught smallest of things..And asked if S and K were ever a couple.
Kashish saves the situation by being cool and calm about it and replying in a dry composed voice –Wow Rin.. There…. U have let ur mouth run off with ur over imagination once again."
Then Nick enters the kitchen -Hmm something smells nice.. What's cooking? Uh Rin!! U r working too!
As Nick cud only see the back of the person sitting on the table he thought Sam had returned, so he thumped him on his back.. –Morning Bro
S -Morning Nick.
On seeing Sujal's face and hearing his very normal reply Nick tripped against the chair.. Loosing complete sense of reality he tripped again while trying to get up. He was staring at Sujal as if was some alien from outer space.
BL*** hell!!!!!! God is playing a joke!!! I am hallucinating first Rin working now Sujal here!!! Oh my god!! I am hyperventilating!!! Help!!!! Someone slap me out of this illusion!!
Rin tried to control the situation in her manner and Kashish was just too afraid of everything falling apart to speak at that moment.. Rin then threw a spoon at nick which missed the target in order to make him shut his mouth.
#clingggg!!!#
Kashish mouthed Rin a silent thank you and glared at Nick and placed a finger over her lips. Hope he has some brains to left to understand meaning of all this and not ask oh! Rin why did u try and hit me.. He looks like a complete idiot right now.
Even sujal spoke some words to lighten to situation. He is really worried about Nick's fall. Since he can't see, doesn't know that Nick isn't injured at all and how rudely he is staring at sujal.Finally getting the whole point nick in his own way thanked kashish..
Nick –Hmm thanks for the pancake… Umm u did a good job.. U know.(still staring)
Kaveri and Sid –Morning everyone…
"Hmmm pancakes!!!!!!!!!!!! Kashish u made 'em!! I thought u were kidding yesterday."
Kashish had begged Kaveri a day ago to teach her to make pancakes.
S -Morning… Guess what? Rin is making complementary coffee!! Rin wont u make some for them too? I am sure they want some too….
Kaveri and Sid choked up on their words and breath upon seeing Sujal calmly sitting on the table and enjoying breakfast. Like Nick for them too it was hard to believe the sudden sight.
Rin –Sure…. Why not.. Guess I am going to chip my nails this morning.. Slaying off to make coffee for u thankless, ungrateful ppl….
They then sat down once again lie nick staring at sujal open mouthed at loss of words. Nick, Kaveri and Sid looked at each other and in b/w the glances stared hard at sujal.
Since the kitchen was unusually quiet for so many ppl Kashish tried to brighten up the place, lest sujal suspected the set up.
K –Umm so.. Nick.. How's Sanskriti?
N –She is fine. (too focused on Sujal to ans)
K –And?? (damn its tough to get my pigheaded brother to concentrate!!!)
N –And?
K –And? Well… U know… What did she say… I mean, she missing us?
Rin –Really Kashish get over urself, u r not that popular…
S –Hey Rin make sure the milk doesn't boil over.. U'll chip an extra nail trying to clean that up…
R –Thanks for ur concern but I am sure kashish being such a caring fried wud offer to do it for me. As it is she wud be cleaning up her mess….(Kashish now looks horrified)
Kaveri –Umm I'll help..I'll do all the clean u don't have to worry(Recovering from Sujal Shock first.)
Rin –Oooohhhh u r such a sweetheart. Thanks!!!
Oh Kaveri.. u r so good !!! like my own guardian angel!!! Ok time to settle the atmosphere and get things rolling to normal from high excitation state.
Just when things were returning to Normal Ashok arrived and mistook Sujal for Sam.
"I am the last one to wake up today… Morning everyone.."
Everyone except Sujal, "Morning dad."
"Hmm Kashish cooking!! What a surprise, smells good honey. Oh Sam u r back"
S -"Morning uncle… No Kashish told me that Sam's coming back on Tuesday."
A -"Sujal!!!! I….I.."
Another member added to gawking party… This is great even now dad is an official member of Stare At Sujal club. No wonder he didn't wanna come out. The way they treat him.. uhg.. I get creeps!!!!
Rin -"Oh u were waiting for Sam's call right? Yah he called up earlier.. He says he can't make it back early. sorry"
Although ashoke was able to recover more quickly than everyone else from the shock of seeing a normal sujal… This helped to really make things normal again. Everyone was present at the table now accept Sam. The whole family including Sujal.
Kashish eyed Sujal he seemed happy and relaxed. He was enjoying the coffee and the family chatter.
Nick –Umm Sujal?
S –Yah?
And just when all my hard work and cooking was bearing fruits, Nick had to go ahead and mess everything up!!!!
Nick –Umm ….. So… We gonna see u at lunch too today…?
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Note: k isn't a very big fan of cooking. She only cooks when there isn't any food for her. she is more of instant food and junk food person whatever fills her stomach and ills it quick. Although she loves to eat. Cooking isn't her forte and yes she took tutoring from Kaveri to improve her culinary skills and as usual Rin hovered in the background irritating kashish all the time..
Sujal is liking the food so much coz he hadn't had a decent meal for a month although dinners were delicious but breakfast was a first… so he was over enjoying the taste.
Undoubtedly an outstanding part. It actually hurt to c Sujal trying to use his memory to imagine the scene in front of him.
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Originally posted by: styleislife13
The 10 (3 part)0...was awesum....
he eyes dead,....that just made me soo sad.....gonna read this part...U r the sweetest for including the poem in such a sweet way!!!!!!And Rin...euf wid the dog jokes....really sad wen i think he's all alone!!!!!!!awww.tc
Originally posted by: styleislife13
Hey Meggs...
What an awesum part....Sujal blind....its not registering...what can i do....plz make him normal?...again.....yaar its too sad to read....Whi is rin?...have i forgotten?...is Sanskriti's nickname?....
as i said in the note... Rin is sam's wife.. he wasnt not present in earlier part coz she was sick...Kashish was right just force him.....The whole clock thing was really caring...i bet no1 eer behaved like that after the accident...The thoughts u include r marvelous...too much fun to read....its really the whole truth expressed in the thoughts....Aww....sujal....shy......uff.....never thought that wud happen....
well his going blind was also a suprise right?😉She cares soo much for him...even examining his file and all....I have hope of the 0.50% chance....he is gonna be able to see again....hopefully...all up to u.................
i havent reaally decided about tht.. u never know though.. the rate at which mediica science is evolving today there may be a cure...That line wen he said u were in a skirt......that was just ROFL....uff.....kinda embarassing....And then K's reply was even better....(in thoughts).....That was a fun scene.....But u took the crying part soo seriously.....Thta was soo sad.......He wud never have guessed it to be her who caused the mishap.....Aww....she was soooooo sad...and sujal calming her down...cutest moment....and wen she said me and u......u cud def. see them as a couple.....lolx...Wen she started crying....my eyes filled up yaar....Tragedy...ur gud at...seriouly i satrted crying...it was really emotional......And the apologizing...soo spontaneous..and that just made it better.....Really awesum scenes yaar...and the lkast line....of 2 sensilble grownups....u r an awesum writer...
tahnkyou for liking my style of writing.. i am really happy to know tht... well now they both got rid of all the guilt and and regret.... alhtough this isnt a such a good situtaion buts kind of like a new tra with new understanding...And increase ur pace........................i wud just kill that driver...he shud be hanged.....for hurting a dashing young man!!!!!!!!!! lolx......Plz update sooner .............u have me hookded wid the story...so plz update..................hope the last update was quick enough although i dont now abt the next.. i have my mid ters.. sems.. and practicles coming up in june and july so i wud be really studing hard... thts why i tried to cramp in the last chapter as quickly as possibleTc....And fab part......Luv Ayesha.
Originally posted by: styleislife13
Hey...
Ok...i just posted my reply...and went to the my posts page....1st topic Look Through My EYES......I notice the EYES in capital....was the whole blind thing planned or it just occurred naturally....coz the title says it all........Anyways a little thing i noticed.....i just know ur gonna make him capable of seeing stuff.....coz his whole life depends on it...........
Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Oh I really luv U meggs 4 such wonderful parts. U always succeed in making me emotional. I felt as if I wer as helpless as Sujal n Kashish. When Sujal was saying continuously that he actually wanted to c her but he cudnt-that thing actually pierced my heart. My hands wer itching to make him c again but the misfortune is I cant do dat.
well he cud see her right then at tht time but he can never forget her image in hi memory.. although its not as good as to the real thing .. but sujal does have an excellent photographic memory..And the last scene was fabulous. They wer finally in each others' arms crying n lessening their grief. It was indeed a beautiful part.thank you😊 even if the praise is for a crying part.. i still appriciate itI really hope Sujal can c again but I'm not so sure abt this.neither am i....Anyways, thnx 4 this amazing part n that too so early. Pls continue soon.
oh meggs dear its really very emotional...............it really did upset my mind..............last part was a shocking one and this one a very emotional one................i feel only kashish can help him in this situation and make him stronger mentally and emotionally...................it huts a lot when sujal desparately wants to c her.........oh god its worser than anything.........and kashish was calm throughout and made him to have his dinner too........sujal is too stubborn but finally got some sense and he actually apologised to her......and kashish feels guilty that coz of her hes in such a state............but the last part was really veryyyyyyyyyyyyy beatiful......they consoled each other and hugged...............sujal too had tears in his eyes........oh how i really wish like doing some magic so that sujal gets his eyesight back and everything turns normal..........their thoughts r more better than they expressing with words............cont soon yaar........thanks for the early update hope u do the next one too very soon............
Originally posted by: kashishdabest
hey meggs dear first of all just wanna apologise 4 not commenting on the previous 2 parts...i just wasn't able 2 after what had happened...it was 2 painful 4 me, and whenever i would want to comment, i didnt knw wot 2 write or say bcoz this came as a big shock 4 me....
its ok i dont mind atleast u gave me a comment now and tht too such a long one!!! i am more than happy with this. franlkly after writing the part in which i announced of his blindness i wasnt sure if anyone was going to continue reading my fic🤢.... but i am glad u all did continue and even gave such touching comments.. 😊😊😊
😊😊i cnt beleive what hapened, i never in my wildest dream imained that wud happen 2 him..dntget me wrong i really love ure fic and have always looked forward 2 reading the update but this time i just couldnt....i really hpe he recovers soon bcoz its so painful 2 see him suffer this way.....but i have 2 say u write brilliantly and it does affect the reader deeply bcoz i was affected...i will still read ure ff bcoz its a gr88 ff and i love it completely...
athankyou so much for aying the last line... it really mean a lot to me too and i wud say it again.. this will not turn into a sob story!!! yes i know things had looked pretty awfull with them fighting all the timee and now his handicap.. but now they will improve little by little ... already both of them got rid of all thier misconceptions about each other... so wht more bad can go? only good can happen from here!!anyway coming back2 the latest update.....loved it completely....Kashish deciding on what to wear...even though she knws he cnt see she still dressed up properly, she wanted 2 be normal with him and still make the effort so she took a bath and got changed....i thought it was really sweetof her....and then she cooked for him too....loved the scene wen she goes in2 the room taking the dinner, there thoughts and feeligns were just really painful...there was a desperation in them...Sujal's desperation to see her and Kashish's to bring him back to normal.....it really hurt whenever Sujal expressed that he wanted to see her...i really felt so bad for him and just wished he would recover and be able 2 see her....its just 2 painful....so after all that attitude he did eat...well atleast she got him eating....n one thing i loved bout this scene is taht they finally cleared all misunderstandings and cleared evrythign that was in their heart and mind...i knw they had been feelign so heavy hearted for ages...but glad they both are 2gether and have cried to get rid of their pain...i just loved hw both sat there in each others arms crying their heart out and ridding themselves of the pain...hpe things do get back 2 normal and Sujal gets back his eyesight somehow!!! i really wish things are fine soon....luv summi xxx
well yes they did rid of all the burden and lightened thier chests.. it was a sad moment but ensured happiness for later...
Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Undoubtedly an outstanding part. It actually hurt to c Sujal trying to use his memory to imagine the scene in front of him.
But except that hollow feeling, everything was gud. Kashish made a gr8 attempt to get him out of depression. And every1's reaction was just so funny, specially Nick's. And his last line made our dear Sujal realise that they all wer not surprised to c Rin at work but to c THE GR8 SUJAL GAREWAL at breakfast wid all.yup tht was the trap kashish had set let him meet ppl one by one.. to much at once wasnt working with sujalThe conversations wer nice n SK's thoughts wer gr8. Lovely part. I'm happy to c Sujal treading towards a normal lyf again but I really do wish him to be able to c again. After all, its his INTENSE EYES that personifies SUJAL GAREWAL.oh yes his eyes.. hmm but i wa thinking tht if i make his wear glares.. then and he really acted cool and confident then u really wudnt know...Anyways, Thnx 4 another wonderful part n that too so fast. U must hav had a tough tym. W8ing 4 the next part eagerly.
Originally posted by: togepe30
Nice !! Hope he starts to have his meals with them again !
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