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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: angadkripafan

continue plez it was a awesome part 😛 😛 but kripa belongs only 2 angad

yup😳 pritika iz soooooooo rit. kripa belongz only to angad😳

lob😳

maryam😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
I want to know the guy.
who is he?
please continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
👏 👏 👏
bravo well done 😛
kripa will look good with john abraham
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
sorry for late response but what should i do, i feel like reading other fanfics rather than continuing my own 😆 😳

anyway here we go!
Part 10
They both make their way to the home. As they reach the home, the atmosphere was fine and much better than before. It was peaceful and calm:
S:so Kripa what have u decided
Kripa: dad I think u were right, and I think I should not miss this chance.i'll go for it
S: that's like my daughter..
He smiles and hugs her
S: hmmm waisay manna pare ga jab bhi tum (looking at the guy) uskay saath hote to Kripa apna brain use karti hai
Josh who was also there and was happy at her decision
J: papa u made a good.. afterall she is dumbo
Kripa makes a puppy face and goes and hugs her mom from back
K: Mama dekho yeh sab mujhey tang karahy hain
Gayatri in a joke mood: khud hi dekhlo Kripa and u r acting like a child!!
Kripa is now mad
Mama ap bhi
Goes to the guy
Thank God koi to mere paas hai
Guy: Kripa, when did I say I was with u , afterall I help u made the decision.. u cudn't even done It by urself afterall u r baby!!
Kripa: ha ha very funny make fun of me as much u want!!
Saying this she runs to her room
Everyone is like : ah oo
Gayatry: Dekh liya aap ne kya kiya
Guy: aunti. It's not only the mens even u took our side
S; clever point!!
Gayatri: uff u mens!!!!
Guy: I m gonna check on Kripa
Josh: take me advice don't go man. She'll kill u!
Guy:but she'smy girlfriend yaar
He bites his toungue and is like Ooops and hurrily rushes to K room

Kripa who is standing near the window and is crying silently.. Guy comes from back and hugs her.
He observes this and makes her face towards him
G: I m sorry
K is bit mad and pretends not to care.
Kripa who is still in the same position and stays quiet
G: areey baba kaha na I m sorry
K: no response
G gets bit irritated by her behaviour and thinks Josh was right
Uff how stupid me and josh was right I should not hav apologized to u!
Kripa gets even more angry at josh and is like: iss josh to main nahin chorun gi
Guy decides to give one more try:
He holds his both ears and makes a puppy face : Kripa I don't like to c u crying and it makes me more sad.. I m sorry… aaj tak mainay kissi bhi girls say sorry nahin and look I m saying to u.. yes u Kripa!!
Kripa:only one condition
G: thanks god u spoke..i ithought I had to beg infront of u for ages
Kripa giggles a bit
G:o.k. madam as u say
K: And the condition is I don't know! (lol I hav not thought abt it) but don't worry I will tell u soon and if u don't accept it, it means I hav not forgave u. got it
G:alrite baba,
He kisses her both cheeks and makes her face towards him, moves his face closer
Both lost in each other, his lips brushes against her and kisses her. Kripa automatically put her arms arounds him. The kiss last for few seconds because they are interrupted by the sound of
Ahem ahem.



Guys i know u r still confused abt don't worry, Angad and kripa will face each other in next or coming up parts and no mystery guy! But he will come in later and will be revealed 😃 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
Part 11
U see Josh at door, Kripa was blushing like a crazy and at the sametime is angry that does he have to do the kissing at the wrong time.
Guy: who Josh tum… main main
Josh:kyat um
Guy: Main Main krpa ko train karwa raha tha
Josh: oh really! (he is enjoying this situation cuz he knows that both hav feeling for each other ) so Kripa how was the training going, was it passionate or shud I say luv training
Kripa: blushing, bro actually we were practising mouth to mouth resuation (spelling??)
Guy: ya ,Kripa I got to go now. C ya around bye josh
Josh: bye
Behind josh he sent a lying kiss to Kripa that made her more blushing!
Josh and kipa share a cute bro and sister moment where josh comes to know about their relationship and is happy about. He insisted Kripa to go and tell parents abt but she refused and said she have to sort her career.



Two days left for her to go the India. She has called the office and told her decision and they said they were happy for her and also offered her to go in the Mumbai's no.1 music college as they said it would be good opportunity for her to explore in more aspect, the art of the music and she can learn more. The new term would be starting soon.
Yes it is the same college where Angad studies (happy ?) She has been lately busy doing her shopping and going to Indian malls doing the shopping. She bought clothes that more likely to be indo and western but again she does not fancy to show off like wearing short and mini skirts like other foreign born girls when they come to their homeland.
She can't believe that she is going to India all alone; no one is there to bug her when she is sleeping. Lol (did I mention that she loves sleeping) Yet at the same time she is sad, she is leaving all her family and friends here.


I day to go

Today is the last day of her college. She is very gloomy to leave the college. She was surprised to the see the college decorative and found it bit more different. Till she remembers there was no function in today as again she recalls today date and looks at college now and event bulletin board but no nothing was there. The college was surprisingly empty and wonders what kind of day it is and where could everybody has gone? She was about to leave when she hears some sounds and It came from the main hall that is situated at the centre of college.
She made her way to the hall and opened the huge doors that are surrounded by Huge Victorian style pillars. Inside the hall was dark and she entered. As she entered the hall she was stunned,
The lights came on and you see the rows of chairs are placed in two columns. The hall is decorated with balloons and moreover there are huge banners saying I will miss you. All students are clapping and her sight goes to the stage where you see her teachers and principal standing there. In the middle there is a round table that is filled with rose and boutiques. This entire scene made her more emotional and made her cry. The principal and teachers made announcements for her as she is best student of the college and they also wished her for happy future. Everyone was surrounded by her giving her best wishes and flowers and boutiques. Some were asking for her autograph and she happily signed them. Then they did some pictures. All of a sudden all lights go dim and then u c a person standing at the stage with a mic In his hands…

Hi Kripa, I know u r surprised to see all this and wondering y did not I told u this but surprise is surprise. We all love u a lot and miss you but hey I will miss love you than anyone. Yes me and Kripa are in love and she is the girl of my dreams.. All goes Wooooo!!! And make sexy whistling! 😳 😛

So this is the special song I wrote for the love of my life who I can't dream of spending a days without her but how will I spend these days with out you!! The audience goes like awww and even they are sad their best student is leaving and how are they gonna have fun? Cuz she and the guy is the one who organises big functions and gets the permission from principal..

This is for you Kripa

Every night in my dreams I see you, I feel you
That is how I know you go on.
Far across the distance and spaces between us
You have come to show you go on.
Near, far, wherever you are,
I believe that the heart does go on.
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart,
And my heart will go on and on.

Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime,
And never let go till we're gone.
Love was when I loved you, one true time I hold to
In my life we'll always go on.
Near, far, wherever you are,
I believe that the heart does go on.
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart,
And my heart will go on and on.

You're here, there's nothing I fear
And I know that my heart will go on.
We'll stay forever this way,
You are safe in my heart,
And my heart will go on and on.


Kripa is shown crying and she runs to him and hugs him tightly and the guy also cries a bit because they have spent all their lives with each other(child hood friends). Unaware of everyone in the hall, they look into each other eyes and their mostly talk with their eyes that says I love u. He brushes his lips against her and they share passionate kiss.. This time they are again interrupted by someone.. guess who? 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
Part 12..
The guy is none other than Josh: Oh man is this the time I have to come always!
J: so u were both having an mouth to mouth resuation training or did I miss something
Kripa: bro, it's my last day
J: ohh my sweety sis and anyway I already know abt it
Kripa: So u did not even bothered to tell me
J: Pagli, how'd wud u understand what's a surprise
Some English guy were listening to their conservation and showed up:
EG: what's P-A-G-L-I (in American accent)
Kripa gave herself a naughty smile: it is name given to you American guys
Both josh and guy were giggling inside
EG: really, so in hindi u call us guys as Pagli
Kripa: correction It's P-A-G-L-E-Y , u can also call them K-H-O-T-H-A (lol I got this from a movie that' s called yeh dil)
EG: Pronounces K-H-O-T-H-A
Kripa, josh and mysterious.. dats right it is what u both r and they start laughing
EG gets confused is like whateva man


They all go the beach and spend some fun time. Josh leaves tham alone so that they can have a time together. They discuss about their future, how r they gonna be in touch with each other and so on! They share some fun moment and heads back towards the home. As he drops Kripa home he tells her to check her e-mails cuz he has sent something in it.Kripa who is shown confused, just gave him quick kiss on his cheeks and leaves..


It's night time.. Kripa is shown on her computer as she was really anxious to know what was in her e-mails.. she check her e-mail and she quiclkly opens the e-mals and starts reading:

Dear Kripa,
I know u r going to laugh at me while u r reading but belive me it's for your own safety. First of all u r so childish that u don't even believe that in India there is dating system. But u r too innocent that u don't even know that India is a lot westernized than in US Indian community (good point Amit) but still u need to know main points:
When u start the college the most popular guy will be aggressive and rude towards to you because to him u r behenji cuz the way u will dress.. I know it's seem confusing.. behenji is sumthing that they call people who r ugly and is padhako types. I mean they think that behenji types are gay that they don't even date, go to nite clubs and etc.. My advise to u avoid these sort of people's. Hey u r going to India for the first time so I thought y not help u as u r mine it's my duty to protect u ! don't just ignore this msg.

Love u lot
(Guy)

After reading Kripa is shown laughing and is like Pagal and decides to ring him:
K:hello
G:Kripa, kya baat hai.. itni raat ko phone kiya hai
K: tum bohot pagal ho
G:wht did I do?
K:I read ur mail
G: so finally u read it
K: wht's need of writing this stuff
G:u r telling me , u shud be thanking me
K: hey I m grown up I can take care of myself and BTW I know all abt it!!
G:uff what's the use.. u should be be grateful to me as I wrote to u and anyway I am ur BF.. it's my duty
K: Duty,, duty… let's talk abt it 2mo
K:Good nite
G:luv u
K: gd nite
G:luv u
K:luv u too
G: gd nite


i know this is boring

preview: Angad and Kripa face to face 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dude, you are killing me here. i want to know who the guy is????????????????????????
continue soon.please
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
wiked i jus luv da story plz continue quick
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwww i cant wait for A-K to come face to face 😳
that waz a great part 👏

lob 😳
maryam 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO SONI ESHA 😃
Edited by *Izzy* - 19 years ago

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