Barsaat.- Note, pg209 - Page 48

Originally posted by: touchmenot

u didn't cont i m really angry,/////////

I am sorry Sanya but I did not have time.. Chill now the easter holidays are coming up so more updates!

The next part will be in shortly later on today. Be sure to check that out😉

Originally posted by: koolchick

hi! i just read ur fanfic and i luv it 😛
it's okay, i can wait for the next couple of days but u better make sure that it doesn't take too long!
Continue soon! 😃

Thank you and BTW I luv ur siggy.My needs to be updated as it is still on 'HAPPY New Year" LOL.... I love Angad... mwaah😳. I wonder how would I keep myself If you ring my bell on my home and I open the door... I'll SCREAM!!!

As I said the next part will be in later on today..

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

luv ur fan fic plz try to cont soon. 👏

thnx and I m glad u liked it.

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Originally posted by: nabz8888

yay! u r going to cont. today!!!! i seriously can't wait!!!!!!!!!

😃 ur waiting period is finished now! It will be up in a min.

Originally posted by: nkdidi

can't wait 4 u 2 continue

here it is: 😆

Continued:

Angad Khanna was early awake today for the special reason, the reason that Kripa Sharma was getting a lot of attention yesterday made him envious but he did not know why? It was a fact that all his life he had been getting and he had been in the centre of all, it did not happen to him that he was ignored. Today he was going to dress himself extra special rather than casual what he used to do in his life day.

As he stood before the mirror humming along with a grin on his face as he already what was going to happen next! All girls all over him and he can't wait to see the reaction of Kripa Sharma or maybe her to drooling him, made him smiled. He did not know why it mattered to him but he wanted to show her that he is also something, he is the Angad Khanna.

Angad khanna drove his super red car and parked it the usual place where it ought to be. This is your day Angad Khanna he said to himself. He walked up to the huge gates of the college entered, he grinned to himself as he saw all the girls attention to him. He looked up head to see both the crowd of girls and boys were coming to him, but him with the altitude showed them no attention but carried on walking. To his surprise and shock the crowd went past him as if they are looking for someone. He then heard sudden gasps wondered what could be. He couldn't take it anymore than decided to turn back.

He saw crowd looking at some one, cheering at some one, but he couldn't see who it was as people's back were at him. So he decided to check out himself. Before he can move he heard the Bell rang and slowly all the people made their way through the class. As the people passed he saw a sudden glimpse of those people; his heart thumped louder. He saw someone with familiar back towards him hugging someone tightly. It was not like hugging; there mouth was on each other; kissing each other. He stood there …

As the crowd cleared away, he walked towards the couple, his eyes locked on them, his heart was telling it was her but his brain was not. He reached there almost, his heart buzzed as the girl moved sideways to him holding his hand revealing the face Neal! Who's the girl? Kripa? He asked himself. No, it can't be.

Angad went up to them and patted the girl back; Excuse me?

The girl turned around and it's none other than Kripa. He was shocked as she looked him in surprise. He realized how beautiful she was looking today wearing a cropped jeans up to her knees and blue sleeveless top with her soft brown hair curled down.

'Yes' she eyed him suspiciously; she took Neal's hand and smiled at him.

'Kripa'? He asked in disbelief

'Yes'

'Oh I thought it was someone else' he covered it up. Kripa smiled at him as she knew what he must be going through, she wanted to shock him and she did. Angad turned to go away suddenly...

Neal: Wait a minute man; you are the one who also performed last night... Am I right?

Angad raised his eyebrow at him and realized he was also equalled handsome to him. 'What are you thinking Angad, No one can beat you'!

'Yes you got it right!'

Neal put his hand forward that surprised Kripa and Angad; Hi, I am Rahul'

Kripa smiled as she realized Neal was back on his tricks, their old tricks. Angad was confused because he sure heard himself Kripa calling Neal! Confused so he put his hand in order to shake but before he was going to take it; Neal took it back. Angad was embarrassed

'Hey, no offence; but I choose friends with my choice, so I have my own choice actually my and Kripa choice are same, right Kripa? He squeezed her hand

'Right' she smiled back at him.

Angad was burning inside hot but he controlled himself, he has never been turned down.

'Excuse me? No offence taken but I am the Guy who rules here, you better watch out, because it's your first Day'

'So' Neal asked

'You'll understand later on or get any tips from Kripa' he sneered and turned away and went.

'Do you know him Kripa?

'What' she asked in surprise and Neal can sense her sarcasm in her voice.

'Come on Kripa'

'He's Angad'

'Wow…. Are you telling me he is the same Angad that you hated and talk on and on about him in your e-mails…. Well I must say he has taken over you maybe I can take some tips from him'

'What? No. 1 I do not talk about him in ages and you know I love you… who needs him I got you' She replied calmly.

'Kripa… you are being extra romantic', Neal gushed, 'Just a lucky day'

Kripa on the other hand does not want to hear the name Angad, it's true that she wanted to show what she is capable of and prove to him that all the thing that he pointed to her as her weaknesses were wrong. As Angad came up to her, the truth was she was all over to him, her heart all went over to him, seeing Neal with her brought her back to sense. She knew that she shouldn't be speaking to Angad after all he had done so bad things to her. She is trying to avoid Angad every time but she wanted to show him what she can do. She loves Neal very much but when Angad comes up to her something happens to her, she cannot figure it out what it is. But know her main goal is to have revenge from him by hook or crook!

She hit him playfully on his arms and then hugged. Neal put a protective arm around her to secure her as she was only his.

The rest of the day went quite soothingly, Angad on the other hand cannot help but his mind would go back to Kripa kissing him; this was the thing never thought of, she was totally different girl, her wearing jeans and tops in not her and moreover she is a model and singer same as him, but why didn't she told him even when they were friends. 'Duh Angad why did you not tell her that you were going to become a rock star' He cannot wait for the lunch as he has stored very big thing for Neal!

The bell rang, all the noise and excitement of the crowd echoed in the canteen. The news of Kripa and her new boyfriend spread so quickly that whole college knew him; the girls were excited and jealous as well because Kripa got the hot Boyfriend. Among the crowd happened to be the two eavesdroppers who listened each and everything. At the end they smiled at themselves.

Misty; I want to meet that new guy

Prithiv; me too.

As they were talking Angad joined them before he could say Hi, Misty rushed to him and hugged him. Angad as usual took this as a friendly gesture he had not intention of her.

Prithiv: So Angad did you heard'

Angad: Heard what?

Misty: That Kripa got a new boyfriend

Angad: Yeah I know… so?

Misty: so?

Angad: Come on Guys did you forget the rule of new comers, so what he is Kripa's Boyfriend we should do our job.

Prithiv: speaking of them, here they are.

Angad and Misty followed where his eyes went.

Kripa and Neal entered the canteen holding hands laughing. All eyes went to them, as they spot them. The girls heart were all out to him, they also wanted Angad and Neal, since Angad is old and they are used to him, the girls wanted something new so Neal!

Kripa and Neal noticed this, Neal put his arm over her waist and brought her more closely; he whispered something into her ear;

Neal: Haven't they seen handsome boy before?

Kripa being bratishly looked at him and smiled naughtily at him: Who told you they are looking at you?

Neal: Well, being the handsome I am who else won't look at me?

Kripa: Are you trying to say that you also love guys?

Neal: Have I told you that you are very naughty?

Kripa: yeah you did… in fact since I was 6.

Neal: So you remember?

Kripa: I have sacred each moment of us in my heart.

Neal looked at her romantically with passion in his eyes to her; she blushed as she saw Neal in this expression. She quickly paced herself out as she realized they were in the canteen

Kripa whispered; Neal not now!

As they were playing and giggling suddenly they found themselves centred among the crowd who were all around them as circle. They stopped and looked at them back. Suddenly three people entered the crowd with Angad as a head and two behind him Prithiv and Misty.

Kripa started him angrily and Angad smirked at her. So Angad headed towards them with Misty and prithiv behind. Kripa saw Misty mouth drop open as she took a clear look of Neal, Neal as naughty he is, smiled back at her with his cutest and sexy expression. Misty suddenly wished she was Kripa. Kripa understood what she was going through and she also knew about Neal joke, smiled naughtily at her. She squeezed his hand.

Angad: So Neal, as you are new, you have to do a dare… come on guys what do you say.

The crowd cheered at him, Angad smiled.

Angad: What do you say?

Kripa: stop it Angad, you are a looser you know that!

Angad with an altitude replied: 'Oh shut up Monkey'

Kripa got angry, Neal found this funny because he also loved teasing her but no matter how ever they teased and made fun of each other they would be friends!

Kripa left his hand and move towards Angad: What did you just said?

Angad: you heard it right, Monkey!

Kripa opened her mouth in shock; she does not want to be insulted in front of Neal because she knew he would always tease her when he ever got the chance but especially not know as Kripa wanted to have revenge!

Kripa: I knew it, you will never change, you are pathetic you are, looser!

Angad: looser and me? Think about it twice before you say it. Move aside I don't have to waste my time on animals.

Kripa opened her mouth to say something but Angad already pushed her aside so that he went up to Neal. Neal on the other hand watched the scene, he was laughing inside, it happened the same thing as Kripa described in her e-mail, he is not sure why?

Angad: So what's your name dude?

Neal: I don't talk to losers, he sneered and was about to turn away. Angad held him.

Angad: who is looser or not we will decide it now? So pick up Dare or truth

Neal: Dare!

Angad: Wow so confident, soch lo…!

Neal: What's there to think about?

Angad: O.K

Neal: hey wait a minute, I did not agree it all, I will only do it even if you also pick dare and play it along with me. If I won, you have to do what I tell you?

Angad stared at him; prithiv was shocked as no one had the guts to talk to him like that. He somehow liked Neal in a way. Misty and the crowds were speechless as Kripa on the other hand smiled.

Neal: So what do you say people, we can also pick him up even if he can do it to us?

To Angad's shock everyone cheered including Prithiv. He was suddenly Angry, he looked at the crowd to find them cheering and then his eyes went up to Kripa who was going to say; 'looser'

Angad: fine with me!

Neal: O.K

Angad: If you loose...

Neal: loose and me? In your dream!

Angad was getting Angry and annoyed by this man because he was always cutting him off and stood him up, he wished he could just shot him off!

Angad: we'll see about that!

Neal: What would I get in return if you loose?

Angad: I never loose!

Angad: So you have to do 3 dares is; pick and kiss a girl!

Angad had planned this dare all day along, he wanted to see kripa's reaction, and would she still be with him if kissed some other girl, surely not! This was the major rules for the girls.

Neal: That's so easy!

Angad: except your girlfriend!

The girls went woo as whom he will pick, each of them wanted to the girl. Angad took a quick glance at Kripa to see her horrified expression instead she was smiling.

Neal went up to Kripa and pulled her close, with passion in his eyes starring down at Kripa made her blush. He bought her closer and kissed her. The kiss went soothingly to passion kiss, automatically kripa's arm were all around him.

Angad stared at them in disbelief with his mouth hanging down half, he never expected this. Misty was happy but from the corner of her eye she caught Angad's reaction made her went more insecure about the relationship. Prithiv with the crowds stared at them non stop!

The kiss lasted five minutes and was interrupted by Angad who could not take it anymore as his stomach was burning inside!

A: you did not hear me right? He blurted

Neal: I sure did…

Angad: I said not your girl Friend

Neal: when did I say, Kripa is my Girl friend'. He put an arm around her and smiled at her. Kripa was half blushing as Angad stared at her with the crowd.

Angad: So?

Neal: Kripa you have not told him about us sweetheart?

Kripa: Darling; they never thought that I will have a boyfriend; they took me all around as behenjees!

As she said that Kripa looked at Angad angrily, who was embarrassed?

Neal: Anyway, Kripa and I are engaged so she is my fiance'

Angad and prithiv stared at them in horror. The truth is they are not engaged but they decided to tell people in advance and therefore they will be each others' they will get engaged when they return to New York!

Angad: It's the same thing!

Neal: it's not. Girl friends are you Girl friends anyways what would you know, I bet you just treat them like a tissue paper.

He looks at Kripa passionately and continues; Fianc are more of girl friends, in fact they are your soul mate whom you have agreed to spend all your life with you! A lot difference.

Kripa just looks at him tears in her eyes, happy. She hugs him tightly!

The crowd cheers at Neal leaving Angad stunned. He felt his heart burn ache, obsess as he saw Neal hugging Kripa, the girl with whom he had fun, best friends be and most of all he hurted her. He regretted his actions but seeing Neal his hand turned into fist? How dare of him to insult him, stood him up, speak against him and most of all steal his place…….

Coming up: something unexpected!

I hope this part was long enough to make it for the days that I have not posted the parts. In the coming weeks I will be update more recently due to Easter holidays.

Luv you all

Sanya

aww! i luved ur writing but i hated hte fact tat ppl liked neal and not angu!!!! plz do sumthin quikly and make angu the star! lol...plz cont soon!
Luv,
Prakriti

aww! i luved ur writing but i hated hte fact tat ppl liked neal and not angu!!!! plz do sumthin quikly and make angu the star! lol...plz cont soon!
Luv,
Prakriti

Originally posted by: prakriti

aww! i luved ur writing but i hated hte fact tat ppl liked neal and not angu!!!! plz do sumthin quikly and make angu the star! lol...plz cont soon!
Luv,
Prakriti

Ppl liked both, Since Neal is new so they are more over him.. Don't worry my Angad baby will be always protected. 😳