Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 64

Originally posted by: armaans*basket*

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Okay...just read through this part...what i loved most about it is that it was an all-in-all AR part...its not that i dont like the other characters, RM and Atul top the charts for me, followed by Ankit n then Anjali...but Mr.Pimpernel and his sea urchin are my absolute favs....more so because of the different characters you have made them into...

Riddhima's reluctance to dance, Armaan being a total gentleman about it and then the whole 'not-dance' as you call it,was extremely well written/....i could picturise the whole thing....and Armaan pulling the clip away and letting her hair fall was a good one too, i really liked it....The whole part involved a little bit of understanding above their normal conversation....Armaan's taking her away from others and Atul noticing it was the best part...but Muskaan's one-liner took the part for me;.....I am not really in a good mood right now, but that line made me smile...thanks for that!!

Great update Sam, thanks a lot for updating....i would hav written a more detailed analysis of the part, but as i said, i am feeling a bit low right now....Anyways thanks for providing entertainment for some time, it was needed...

Love

Kiran

Originally posted by: DMG fan

another good one!

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

u updateddd !!-- k- me gonna go read !

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actually i liked the fact that nothing too big happened-- it made it seem more real--
loved the part (as usual)-- kinda felt their relationship evolving- the whole dance part and him maintaining a distance bt stil not being able to resist loosening her hair.... also the part where he tells atul et al that he needs to take her home and the scene afterwards wen she goes all angry--
cant wait for the nxt part-- i love the armaan-ridz conversations that u write up !!--
til day after tom then.... =)

Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

Oh my good.. I have to say.. this is one of the most sophisticated-ly (is that a world) written story in the ENTIRE forum... You and NJ... awesome writers..

I love it. I love reading it too :) Can't wait for more!

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

I loved the update!

The dance sequence was really cute and i loved how Armaan said she was feeling sick so that he could get out of the bar and talk...

Atul's a lot smarter then i thought he was, hvaing noticed Riddhima's expressions and all!

Thanks for the PM....i added you as a buddy.

xXx

Sunayna

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Originally posted by: swansea

Amazingggggggggg part sweetie

i absaluately loved it alotttt

Originally posted by: krati.mehra

sam just read the update and have to say its amazing....i absolutely loved and enjoyed it....so they danced finally with him keeping a distance lol...nd she reluctant initially but than honestly admits that she does wanna dance....gr8 there... the whole part was awesome but short as well but since u update everyday we can hardly complain...just that enjoy ur prts so much...that keep wanting more...heehe...loveddd it totally....great part nd i love Muskaan here :)