Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 49

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: gari14

heyy...havent commented on yr FF...but thought i must now just to let you know how much i love your story.......youv got a really amazing and witty style of writing...incredible amout of intelligence mixed with the right amount of AR chemistry.....you just keep leaving me astonished with every update...!...love the way yr story is flowing...makes me wanna read more and more....!.....well done...!!....do continue...soon!

Thanks so much...I am so glad that you did comment....those are lovely words and am not sure whether really deserevd...but many many thanks...

Thanks sweetheart….

Originally posted by: Robin_M

wow just read part 12 and 13! soooo good! wonderfully written and described, im so very impressed! amazing! looking forward to more!

Robin thanks so much…..shall hopefully update tonight

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey I read ur last three part, they r too good, superb, I just loved them.
Pls continue soon
Thnx for the PM.

Kashish

You are welcome…thanks so much for the comments…shall try and update tonight

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spln

wow, u paused at part 13 sam? in a way um glad i dint know how much pending i cud handle to be honest...will be back, comments to all the bits, n soon!

Hey girl, how was your holiday? Hope you had a good time...Had a blast on mine!
Never realised that Is topped at no 13...unlucky? hope not...no am worried, dunno what the rest of the parts will shape up likke.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sharvi123

Hey sorry for late reply!
My name is Dhrashti, which means vision or sight.
Actually in Gujarati, we pronounce it as Dhrashti, but in Hindi people pronounce it as Dhrishti or sometimes Dhrushti!
Aww...u r not going 2 continue ff for some time :(
I will miss u and ur ff as well😔

But have a great holiday and a very very very happy new year!
Enjoy yourself but take care as well, don't break your leg again!!

Do not worry about replying to this message right now...reply 2 it once u r back from your holidays.

Dhrashti, thats a lovely meaning...I thought as much but was not sure cos as you rightlypointed out up North it is Dhrishti...
Thanks so much honey for saying that you'll miss me thats is so sweet..I missed you guys as well...I had a great holiday and am back....hope you have a great new year....shall try and update tonight.....

Originally posted by: rabiam

hey sam

wonderful update

u write really well

i jus look fwd to ur updates

update as soon as u come back

enjoy ur holidyas n happy new year

take care

love rabu

Rabu, thanks so much..I had a wonderful holiday…..happy new year to you as well….plan to update tonight….

Originally posted by: aravi

hey sam sorry for being late but then i love ur updates to the very core riddhima is a brat but then is armaan any less ooohoo the pair in black ahha ankit is being rididculous hehe wonder how angie's gonna react to them together. RM are fantastic somewhat made for each other kind still wish you a very HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR n yea enjoy ur holidays love aravi

Aravi, thanks so much girl……hope you have a great new year as well….. I am glad you liked it….

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~nyla~

hey, i have just read through your whole ff and just had to tell you that it is Awesome and definitely one of the best i have ever read. The way you have developed each character is amazing, especially Ankit who happens to be my favorite because he is so ambitious and all so i can relate to him quite well lol. Another fave is Atul and i particularly like the way you have made him a much more interesting and complex character compared to other ff's where he is just a source of entertainment because of his stupidity. Really love this aspect of your ff.

Also i think the way you have developed Armaan and Ridhima's relationship right from the very beginning is great because it kind off feels like we are going on that journey with them (corney as it sounds lol). And another great thing is that you are taking their relationship slowly and at a realistic pace so the whole ff is a lot more real.

lastly by reading your amazing ff i have realised that i have not read all of the classics, and i cannot wait to get my hands on some of the books you have mentioned like Scarlet Pimpernal.

overall an amazing ff and i just realised i sound like an english teacher 😆 but seriously your ff is awesome and i cannot wait for an update. if you can please pm me
lots of love
Nyla 😊

Nyla, thanks so much…am glad you like the characters and more important the pace…as I keep saying in my responses to comments…to me the journey is as important as the destination…in fact more so, cos its so much more fascinating and has so much more scope….am glad you liked Atul..I do too and am not too enamoured of what he's been made out to be in the serial….and please, you do not sound like an English teacher at all….I love your comments…..and if I can inspire anyone to read even one of the classics mentioned here, I think writing the FF would have been more than worth it….

Shall PM you when I update, which shall hopefully be tonight…..

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: krati.mehra

Hey

I just finished reading ur fic and i have to say its awesome....i enjoyed every bit of it...okay my bad..i shud have written the comment side by side...would have told u how exactly i felt but anyways...now am on part 12 and lemme tell u Ankit i like, Armaan all cool, nice hunky dude...anyone would like and Atul ovbiously sweet and all but Ankit and Rahul i like best....dunno why Ankit...maybe coz of this ambitious nature of his...i can see myself in him...trust me a lot of me in him...so i think i like him and Rahul...him too...
And in the girls...Anjali, am so indifferent....Muski and riddz super good...
Coming to the eqaution btw armi and riddz.....its all so natural and nice...how u potrayed it from the very begining...the meet on the beach...the scarlet pimpernel thing (i used to think i read almost all best sellers now i realise theres nearly so many i still have to read...i can't wait for the boards to get over than i think m gonna empty my acc on novels...i can't wait to read all these u mentioned...Rhett remains my fav tho)
and i like how they keep pulling each others leg...this maslow theory...my bhai a business student so i asked him about it...had me in splits and him rolling his eyes while dad enjoyed us two debating over this but it got me into a mess coz than he actually started explaining the whole thing to me...gosh ppl can't take a joke...ufff!!
hehehe
and u knw how they all asumed Rahul-Riddz and Armaan-Anjali to be togthr...its like happening everyday with close frnds...irritates me to no end...but it was nice to see all of them wanting to ask but still not sure if they shud...had i been in that situation i wud either have not cared or if i wud have been bothered i wud have asked straightaway lol but anyways i liked that angle...
okay lemme read and i'll get back...
How he missed his books and the pleasure of just being able to spend hours reading, discussing, discovering.....it brought back memories that were best left buried......past should be left where it belonged, in the annals of time... how he missed them......he missed the frisson of excitement when he began a new book.......the feel of a worn and well read tome in his hands....the world of possibilities that they opened to him.....he would have loved to share his books with her, show them to her.....she seemed to share his love of books and reading, and, he could feel a sense of excitement at being able to share his passion with someone........ As he looked around, his eyes fell on a book that he had loved but had not read in ages, and with child like excitement he pulled the book out.
*sniff* dude dn't get me started about how much i long to do just this...am desperate to get started with the novels i have been meaning to read...but can't coz of my boards...*sigh* will hav to wait till april i guess...
ahahah...i enjoy these two fighting...i think i like it that u did not jump straightaway on romance and gave it time to develop the bond...i think i like this better...awesome...
but u know i want this Anjali and Riddz to have a fite...somehow i think it wud be fun...hehe...i love watching cat fites as long as i am not involved and if its over guys except...its stupid but fun just the same...lol...
damn both the girls frnd now...thr goes my wish of seeing a cat fite btw the two...oho...anyways
dude i love this Ankit guy...wicked huh...hehehe...
okay i just cannot wait for u to update...pls do super soon...i'll be waiting
and yeah i like ur writing style..u knw i always prefer light easy reading though am used to all sort of heavy stuff...readign far from the maddening crowd, tom jones, Atlus shrugged and all but still when i have things already in my head i prefer light stuff like the one hina di just wrote...all i want for christmas kinds but i think ur writing style too is great and awesome...keep it up...loved it...wll be looking forward to the next one...
Love
Krati

Krati

Hi! Thanks Krati and nice to find yet another book lover, though I must admit that in the last few years my work and sadly my social life has not really allowed me too much time for reading except for an occasional one here and there?.

Am glad you liked the pace of the ff especially between A & R cos to me, that is a wonderful basis for a long lasting bond.....yup a lot of people identify with Ankit cos so many of us are like him today, young, ambitious, go getters....and confusions, assumptions about people, we all do that, all the time, don't we?

I am sure Maslow must be turning in his grave with the way I have messed with his theory and would be particularly offended at my questioning his gender, lol!

Ah, Atlas Shrugged is a favourite though I am not sure that I would completely agree with Howard Roark's philosophy of life.....I am not so individual centric and while personal freedom and spave is important to me, its not the cornerstone of my philosophy of life as it tends to be in many Western cultures...I guess my Asian origins are too strong rooted...

Am so glad you liked the ff and hope to see you on this thread more often.....

By the way, have read you ff and really like it........

I guess your boards must be in March, right? Study hard, and hope you crack them!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

Wow Sam,

Your ridz is really a stunner ⭐️. I've been admiring her stole collection for some parts now 😆(probably cause I have a weakness for stoles/scarves/shawls of any kind 😉)?black and rust (stunning combo that 👏, I have one with the same colour scheme) and now aquamarine. Love her cloths-sense 😳. But really, hats off to her (and you, if you can do the same) for pulling off wearing stilettos while dancing 😕. I myself happen to be one of those creatures who can trip on a perfectly smooth surface while wearing flats and indeed manage an average of a sprain/fall/bruise a week 😭. And forget graceful, klutz is far more appropriate a description for me. So I've always been in awe of higher beings of balance like you 😆.
Armaan and ridz have really gotten close haven't they? And that too without any romantic overtones, it makes the bonds so much stronger when you actually know and like the person though of course attraction is an equally crucial element. Armaan is staring to get really protective about ridz which is wonderful. What's more, his musings on the Riddhima-Rahul relationship was so cute.
Loved the girl-talk b/w Muskaan and ridz. Now that is one girl you just can't keep down!!! 😉 "Movie-star line" 🤣 And the way she just dismissed Angie from the equation was just hilarious 😆. Speaking of which, it's nice to see Angie making an effort though I wonder how long it'll last seeing Armaan-Riddhima look the perfect couple. Ankit too looks to be in a juvenile mood tonight. Armaan of course already has something cooking in his wicked brain?so let the games begin people!!!! 😈
I could never understand the fascination for e-books either 🤢. It takes all the pleasure out of reading in my opinion. You should be able to go back and forth to your fav pages, dog ear the ones you love, feel the creases on the cover of a much-loved companion?Besides one of the fundamental pleasures associated with reading is the fun of rummaging and bargain-hunting in flea-markets and second-had bookstalls in search of lost treasures; an e-reader can never equal the bliss of that particular experience. But I guess they are a convenient way of getting your hands on out of print works.
Speaking of the perfect guy (and even if we weren't 😆), I've always preferred a rebel to a goody-goody Knight, think Satan in Paradise Lost. I've just read extracts, but there are some magnificent scenes, especially one where he tells his followers "better to reign in hell than serve in heaven?" Milton's Satan has always been something of a tragic hero, rather like Karan in the Mahabharata (another magnificent piece of literature btw). Did you know that before his fall Lucifer was considered the most beautiful of god's angels and his favourite? Which is why there is this line in Paradise Lost that goes "Lucifer son of morning how art thou fallen?" My mom always tells me that you always get the feeling that Milton was secretly sympathetic towards Satan. And you can't help being so, reading it you get this image of someone who was willing to challenge heaven and all it's power to make his dreams come true and even at the end, has the guts to fling up his head defiantly and say you can break me if you want, but you'll never see me bow down to you". It's like through Satan Milton expresses humanity's war-cry to the fates, that we may be weak, mortal and gone tomorrow?but we'll still defy you. I think Milton himself realised that Satan was turning into the real hero, even if a tragic one, of the work so in Paradise Regained he reduces him to a peeping tom, with none of the earlier grandeur 🤢, but I swear, anyone who's read extracts of the 1st would now exactly where his sympathy lay. Like my mom says, Milton might have been a devout Christian, but he was first of all a poet and no true writer can ever deliberately destroy a character like that.
Vulnerability-and-strength, a sense of humour, a bit of arrogance?sounds about right, but add compassion and integrity to the mix as well. What else?physically, height of course is extremely important and I always had a thing for men with glasses (again the whole vulnerability thing I guess)?btw I see you have a thing for sexy baritones same as me. Brosnan, god now there's one sexy guy! 😍And he just keeps getting better with age?I love that Irish accent?or is it Scottish? No, I think it's Irish?I know Sean Connery is a Scot. But Scottish or Irish, both accents are equally sexy. And Connery's voice gives me the shivers ☺️. I swear the guy can make reading the telephone directory sound sexy 😉.
Hmm?I had forgotten the similarity to Indian mythology. But I find myths fascinating and it's truly amazing how folklore from such far flung cultures can be so similar to each other. The details may vary but the core remains the same, it's especially true in the case of what we call "origin myths". The great flood for example is such a popular motif that some scholars have actually postulated that it could have had an actual basis in fact. But personally I prefer to take it less literally to indicate the common roots of all humanity, something which we seen to be in danger of forgetting in today's world .
Enjoy your vacation, I really envy you 😊. Europe is one place I would love to visit, especially Spain. It must be that unique mix of European and Moorish elements that lead to the creation of such a wonderfully vibrant culture 😍. We have forgotten how much we actually owe the Arab world. A bientt! Je vous manqu 😳.

Hey girl! Bonjour!

How are you? 🤗 Am doing good??had a wonderful, wonderful holiday?only regret was not being able to extend it but my fellow homo sapien had to return and I too had work pressures so will have to do Barcelona another time?but really did have a fab holiday! Spent one full day between Thyssen, Reina and the Prado and sat for 15 mins before the Guernica?its massive and even more impressive than its pictures?..I can finally appreciate and understand Piccasso's genius! The city has fantastic architecture, a vibrant night life, some great food, and of course the best part of a trip to Madrid ? the Flamenco! You would have enjoyed the city! In fact the music of flamenco, in fact a lot of Spanish music has lots of overtones of Arabic sounds though its multi tonal and multi scale while Arabic music tends to be uni-tonal?.anyways enough of ramblings of my holiday?..

Stole collection? You and I must be kindred spirits?.Ridhima reflects her creator's passion for stoles / scarves etc of all colours, shapes, sizes etc?.. love the rust and black combination as well and blue is a BIG favourite as well..so that's why! As to the stilettos, let me confess this is purely aspirational for me, hence it finds its way here?I can just abut manage 2 inch heels?on stilettos I tether before I fall, lol! Greatly envy all my friends who are not only comfortable walking in them but also dance with great ease?.so this is just me, living my biggest fantasy as far as shoes go (and I am a footwear freak?literally freak coos I buy many, and then end up wearing only that one pair till they are no longer wearable, lol!)

To me a close friendship is the perfect basis for a perfect relationship?cos when the passion is spent and the flesh weary, it's the friendship and emotional bonding that endures?I guess that's what I am trying to show?..and I guess Muski teasing Ridhima is what all girlfriends do, don't they?

I have a huge thing for baritone?my dear homo spaien has this fantastic voice, and I sometimes get him to read out verses just fr the pleasure of hearing his voice..he grumbles often enough, that I don't really need him, just his voice on a tape would suffice, lol! And I agree Brosnan is one sexy Irishman?saw Mama Mia a while ago, and I thought he was really cute though for me he will always be synonymous with Remington Steele!

By the way, remembered you, cos I have just started reading The Amulet of Samarkand, in the Tolkein genre, a part of the Bartimeous trilogy?..its supposed to be very good, now only reading and time shall tell?.btw am glad to find someone else who agrees e-books are a no-no?.have got so inspired by all these stories about classics have ordered some old classics off the net which I hope shall be delivered soon!

I had started Paradise lost once, but never got around to completing in?I think now I shall?.actually if you look at history, it's the rake, the devil-may-care guy who has always intrigued and has been a bigger, more talked about and more remembered figure than the hero?

Ok shall stop now and get lunch ready?then shall try and update the next part if I ever get down to writing it?..

Hope you a have a great new year ahead!

bientt! Bonne journe 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri



hey Sam
have a safe flight back
and see u tomorrow with an update
i'd like to say u cud rest and update later
but i'm trying not to lie even if it is to plz 😆,my new yrs resolution😆
take care hun

and c u soon!!!!!!!!

love
Hina


You are too cute! 🤗 shall update tonight, hopefully....have cleaned up, andnow sitting in bed with ahot cup of tea...so shall write soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aarora

WOW..honey really waiting fr ur update..missing u aswell..HAPPY NEW YEAR..lots of luv..

Thats is really sweet....🤗happy new year to you as well..hope you ahve agreat year ahead....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sam
Continue soon..Can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago

hiya sam!!

do cont soon..

waiting 4 u 2 cont...

luv u lts

crazya ashu

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