Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 48

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rhama2

yes!!! first time i caught u ff before u could pm me!!!!!!!!!

coming to the epi, so between anjali and ridz, ridz broke the ice, it was such a cute attempt
ankit seems to have an eye definitely for ridz and a pinch of wickedness do exist in him that was shown in the last line.
i am eager to see i mean read anjali's reaction(u ff is almost like watching on screen, u project ur characters so well!!!)
sadly i have to wait for two weeks, which is really a longggggggggg time in comparing to ur way of updating every other day!!!
hope u have good vacation!!
enjoy ur vacation wth homo sapiens!!!
love:
aishwarya
p.s thanks for the titles!!!
will surely read them!!!

Aishwarya, well it did not end up being two weeks...had to cut holiday short courtesy professional commitments!😭😭 but I had fun! my leg ofcourse if shot to pieces cos i walked and walked and walked....😭

as to homo sapiens, my favourite homo sapien was with me, and we had a blast, so I guess i did enjoy the brief interaction with things other than my books, the walls, and the furniture...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanayq18

i have no words for u gurl...just update soon after u come back...have a nice ..relaxing ...awesome holiday...we will all miss u very much...excellent update...i love the way their relationship is growing...n i srsly loved the part where ankit is deliberately irritating anjali and making her jealous..haha...loved loved loved it an infinite number of times...u rock

Thanks Sana! Missed IF and all of you too! Hope you had agreat New Year eve!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tanasha1993

hey sam;)

awesome part
loving it how every character
has been developed and the story
so far too;) youre doing a fab job
have a great vacation and seeya
in 2009;)
love
tanu

Hiya! Hope you have agreat 2009! Glad you are liking it...back tonight..shall try and update tom....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

heya sam
gr8 part as usual dear
um impressed
ridz n armi growing close aww thats cute but why this kabab mein haddi angie n ankit argh i sooo hate them u know
update when ur back or when u have free time
enjoy ur holiday

Thanks Prerna.....to me friendship is a far sexier base to a lasting relationship than physical and instant attraction, though that always helps, lol!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

wow these ppl should all the assumptions and try to find out the truth lik muski asked rahul, hope they discover wat they feel for each other practically.
is Ankit turning wicked , don't mak Anjali a jealous bitch and effect her new found frndship with ridz drown
I think Muski and Atul will be the cupids for Armi-Ridz

I guess we are all guilty of this at some time, aren;t we? Making assumptions without bothering to check the facts...we are so confident of what our eyes see, that we wont look beyond that...no plans of making nayone really eveil, just a teeny weeny bit wicked....most of us have that in us, don't we?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dmgfan19


OHHH!! i think i read the first parts before so just jumped to 3part or something, was searching for index at end of page, how stupid of me..hehe

i read the part sam, its cool..i love the way u slowly take the story forward..man!! imaginary couples n confusion of ppl around them...got a few triangles here, actually can say venn diagrams, armaan n ridhima being in the intersection area, others scattered in two sets...ankit looked a bit confused abt muskaan or riddhima but now inclined towards ridhima....hmm..wonder how they r going to deal with all this...interesting!! i m loving this fic!!

-harika

No sweat....couple of other people also asked me for the index so I am wondering where I can I put it to be more visisble...truth be told, I missed it myself, looking for it 😆😆
I am so glad youa re liking it.....please please do reda and comment...thats what makes it worthwhile writing the fic....
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

heyy !!!

WOWW_- it was soo good !!-- and bCoZ it was soo good i felt i had to comment-- and since i tend to forget everything i want to comment on by the time i finish readin i wrote it down while i was reading-- its a little messy, so bear with me- =)

the lock-- ahh wish i was there to maybe push it off and then we'd hav a litl moment maybe kiss and .... ahh i'm getting ahead of myself-- see wat armaan makes me do !!

his dad not askin him to take over his business and him still understanding-- thats wat u call sweet, caring and sensitive-- definitely traits in my man :P

if armaan is the prisoner of zenda-- duz that mean he's not gonna end up with his princess flavia---- nooooooooooo-- dont do that to uss ;)

closet romantic-- ahh-- thats the kind of guy i need/want ;)

oh and thanx for explaining the references-- i was wondering wat they were and dint realise u had put it at the bottom so i cheked it up-- must say tho the prisoner of zenda vs scarlett pimpernell reference was veryy wel played


also-- thanx for the PM-- much-appreciated !!

ridz and anjali- friends -- well hope it stayss that way :P

the part where u mention armaan and ridz' change in relationship after that evening that armaan spent at her place and then the subsequent talks and all-- that was really well put; it came across really well

and then he's all protective about ridz being hurt by rahul-- cho chweet--

razor cut while thinkin bout a gal-- ah-- thats wen u knw u've been bitten by the love bug, or rather cutt :P

amusing how ridz thinks that armaan and anjie are together and armaan thinkin that ridz and rahul are together ;P

rahul and muskaan little dialogue on her takin the effort-- cutee

uh-oh anjali, feelin possessive and jealous? ankit, getting wicked ? this shud be interesting to watch/read


thanx for all the updates-- sorry for not reading and commentin sooner bt i like to actually relax and read so that i enjoy it more and its been hectic around here soo--

newez-- like i said-- fabbb part--
hope u have an even fabber holiday -- and a happy new yr =)

cheers !! =)

....reserved ....
Thansks so much for the lovely long comment...absolutely loved it.....Happy new year to you to...and yes I had a wonderful holiday...just relaxing now at home...
As Arati said, the famous lock should really be put into the time machine...its pretty much like "the face that launched a thousand ships" isn't it? lol!
razor cut while thinkin bout a gal-- ah-- thats wen u knw u've been bitten by the love bug, or rather cutt absolutely loved this line....
Prisoner of Zenda and Flavia will they be together? Dunno....currently they all seem to be caught up in a maze of confusions.....
you are welcome for the PM...shall start to write now and shall hopefuly update tonight...
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: armaan123

Hey Sam ...still have to read last 2 parts i need a calm seclusive place to read ur ff and enjoy... so not in a hurry to read as iam having relatives in my house..and i also miss ur updates for 2 weeks so iam gonna read it really slow ...but i dont think I can manage to do that once I start reading..LOL
I'll comment as soon as i read it but most importantly want to say enjoy ur vacation and hope u get all well with ur leg and everything..

ADVANCE WISHES FOR A VERY HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS AND HEALTHY AND WEALTHY NEW YEAR

As soon as I was free first thing I did was to read ur updates..LOL.....and again lovely updates..
EDIT:
Part-12
Love the way u discribed Ridhima's study ..and Armaan has now become The Prisoner of zenda...."While to the world you may be Scarlet Pimpernel, to me, you'll now and forever be the Prisoner of Zenda" just love this sentence which she muttered to herself ...
Love the whole convo between AR in the study...

part-13
Love the way u have illustrated Anjali's emotions ...
I totally can imagine Ridhima in beautiful black dress and Armaan in his black shirt and jeans..LOL
what is Ankit up to .. he seems like really itching to do something wicked...LOL.


....reserved......
Thanks so much! I think the convo in the study is one of my favourite parts...to me communication between two peopel is critical to develop, maintain and gow a relationship...without it everything including hemistry fizzles out after a point in time....so it had to be my favourite part.....
As to Anjali and Anki, they are not black characters just like everyone they too have shades of grey....
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey, i have just read through your whole ff and just had to tell you that it is Awesome and definitely one of the best i have ever read. The way you have developed each character is amazing, especially Ankit who happens to be my favorite because he is so ambitious and all so i can relate to him quite well lol. Another fave is Atul and i particularly like the way you have made him a much more interesting and complex character compared to other ff's where he is just a source of entertainment because of his stupidity. Really love this aspect of your ff.

Also i think the way you have developed Armaan and Ridhima's relationship right from the very beginning is great because it kind off feels like we are going on that journey with them (corney as it sounds lol). And another great thing is that you are taking their relationship slowly and at a realistic pace so the whole ff is a lot more real.

lastly by reading your amazing ff i have realised that i have not read all of the classics, and i cannot wait to get my hands on some of the books you have mentioned like Scarlet Pimpernal.

overall an amazing ff and i just realised i sound like an english teacher 😆 but seriously your ff is awesome and i cannot wait for an update. if you can please pm me
lots of love
Nyla 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SuhanaSafar

Just started this story...love the title and the writing. It's very rare that I find such an intelligent and intriguing story. Will write more once I'm caught up.

Thats an interesting name and so appropriate for the journey of life.....
am glad you like it...hope to see you back on this thread with lots of comemnts....

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