Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 45

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bollywoodqueen5 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part.... have fun on your holidays.... continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HIYA SAM!!
hav 2 admit,u rone hell of a riter...!!
um jst bowled ova....
its reli rare tat i like all de characters of a FF..
dis ff definetly seems 2 b de masterpiece....
sureli...... i luv all de ineractions btw all de characters...esp AR as usual
n mann!luvli lines...........
u alwyz surprise me wid ur sense of wittyness.....
i jst enjoy reading evry bit of ur fic...
i thot ankit wil b de devil in ur ff!!can b...i stil dunno wats in ur mind..!
bt mann!hav 2 sy i jst luvd him in dis part...
n his last compliment!!wowwwww...
um luking4wd 2 ur nxt chaps...
so take ur time...
busy holidaying !!so hav funn..
do update wn u gt time...
luv u lts
crazy ashu
Edited by ashluvdmg - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
yes!!! first time i caught u ff before u could pm me!!!!!!!!!
coming to the epi, so between anjali and ridz, ridz broke the ice, it was such a cute attempt
ankit seems to have an eye definitely for ridz and a pinch of wickedness do exist in him that was shown in the last line.
i am eager to see i mean read anjali's reaction(u ff is almost like watching on screen, u project ur characters so well!!!)
sadly i have to wait for two weeks, which is really a longggggggggg time in comparing to ur way of updating every other day!!!
hope u have good vacation!!
enjoy ur vacation wth homo sapiens!!!
love:
aishwarya
p.s thanks for the titles!!!
will surely read them!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
heyy !!!

WOWW_- it was soo good !!-- and bCoZ it was soo good i felt i had to comment-- and since i tend to forget everything i want to comment on by the time i finish readin i wrote it down while i was reading-- its a little messy, so bear with me- =)

the lock-- ahh wish i was there to maybe push it off and then we'd hav a litl moment maybe kiss and .... ahh i'm getting ahead of myself-- see wat armaan makes me do !!

his dad not askin him to take over his business and him still understanding-- thats wat u call sweet, caring and sensitive-- definitely traits in my man :P

if armaan is the prisoner of zenda-- duz that mean he's not gonna end up with his princess flavia---- nooooooooooo-- dont do that to uss ;)

closet romantic-- ahh-- thats the kind of guy i need/want ;)

oh and thanx for explaining the references-- i was wondering wat they were and dint realise u had put it at the bottom so i cheked it up-- must say tho the prisoner of zenda vs scarlett pimpernell reference was veryy wel played


also-- thanx for the PM-- much-appreciated !!

ridz and anjali- friends -- well hope it stayss that way :P

the part where u mention armaan and ridz' change in relationship after that evening that armaan spent at her place and then the subsequent talks and all-- that was really well put; it came across really well

and then he's all protective about ridz being hurt by rahul-- cho chweet--

razor cut while thinkin bout a gal-- ah-- thats wen u knw u've been bitten by the love bug, or rather cutt :P

amusing how ridz thinks that armaan and anjie are together and armaan thinkin that ridz and rahul are together ;P

rahul and muskaan little dialogue on her takin the effort-- cutee

uh-oh anjali, feelin possessive and jealous? ankit, getting wicked ? this shud be interesting to watch/read


thanx for all the updates-- sorry for not reading and commentin sooner bt i like to actually relax and read so that i enjoy it more and its been hectic around here soo--

newez-- like i said-- fabbb part--
hope u have an even fabber holiday -- and a happy new yr =)

cheers !! =)

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sam ...still have to read last 2 parts i need a calm seclusive place to read ur ff and enjoy... so not in a hurry to read as iam having relatives in my house..and i also miss ur updates for 2 weeks so iam gonna read it really slow ...but i dont think I can manage to do that once I start reading..LOL
I'll comment as soon as i read it but most importantly want to say enjoy ur vacation and hope u get all well with ur leg and everything..

ADVANCE WISHES FOR A VERY HAPPY AND PROSPEROUS AND HEALTHY AND WEALTHY NEW YEAR

As soon as I was free first thing I did was to read ur updates..LOL.....and again lovely updates..
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Part-12
Love the way u discribed Ridhima's study ..and Armaan has now become The Prisoner of zenda...."While to the world you may be Scarlet Pimpernel, to me, you'll now and forever be the Prisoner of Zenda" just love this sentence which she muttered to herself ...
Love the whole convo between AR in the study...

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Love the way u have illustrated Anjali's emotions ...
I totally can imagine Ridhima in beautiful black dress and Armaan in his black shirt and jeans..LOL
what is Ankit up to .. he seems like really itching to do something wicked...LOL.


Edited by armaan123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
i have no words for u gurl...just update soon after u come back...have a nice ..relaxing ...awesome holiday...we will all miss u very much...excellent update...i love the way their relationship is growing...n i srsly loved the part where ankit is deliberately irritating anjali and making her jealous..haha...loved loved loved it an infinite number of times...u rock
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Sam this is a mega delayed reply
like almost 2 weeks late I guess

ok the whole proposal of the freshers to the seniors was cute
ridz making an attempt to talk to anjali after the little incident was really cute
muskaan and rahul were the best in this part
Ankit is sure turning out to be a trouble
i like him but coz he's needed to be like the way he is
i mean he adds the spice to the story
so Armaan gonna pick her up for dinner was cool
and now they at the place
me onto my next reserved

love
Hina

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sam;)
awesome part
loving it how every character
has been developed and the story
so far too;) youre doing a fab job
have a great vacation and seeya
in 2009;)
love
tanu
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bernard shaw

Harika, thanks so much for the really wonderfukl comments...if I could make you feel a part of their lives, there could not be a bigger compliment for me as a writer..and its all the more precious because I am writing for the first time!
By the way, I do have an index on the first page, in the first post itself. Every part has been indexed for easy reference cos i know how much problem I have when I am tryingto read one that is not, lol!
Shall update soon and shall PM you,..


OHHH!! i think i read the first parts before so just jumped to 3part or something, was searching for index at end of page, how stupid of me..hehe

i read the part sam, its cool..i love the way u slowly take the story forward..man!! imaginary couples n confusion of ppl around them...got a few triangles here, actually can say venn diagrams, armaan n ridhima being in the intersection area, others scattered in two sets...ankit looked a bit confused abt muskaan or riddhima but now inclined towards ridhima....hmm..wonder how they r going to deal with all this...interesting!! i m loving this fic!!

-harika
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Posted: 16 years ago
heya sam
gr8 part as usual dear
um impressed
ridz n armi growing close aww thats cute but why this kabab mein haddi angie n ankit argh i sooo hate them u know
update when ur back or when u have free time
enjoy ur holiday

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