FF An ugly truth part 35 pg 97 1.7.11 (new)

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vardhani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#221

Hey ranju,

That was an awesome part explaining jai's point of view!!!! I simply hate pia, how can a person stoop so low (some people can stoop so low to be honest).

I empathize with jai if not sympathize, but I want him to tell bani everything!!!

Continue soon!!!

God bless
Dhani

P.S.: I hope your eyes get well soon!!! Don't stress yourself too much dear!!!

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#222

oh... bechara jai... so this is the ugly truth... when are u planning to bring this in front of bani? bechari pehle se bahut weak hai...

the way jai was crying reminds me of the way i used to cry... 😆

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Esther

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Posted: 16 years ago

#223

wow.........................wow..............................wow.....................

that's all I can say........................

this part was very deep!!!!!

great job Renu....................great great job!!!!!

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Shreshta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#224

my god feel for jai

he is deceived, and also not bad

hope he'll take good care of bani

cont soon

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k12345

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Posted: 16 years ago

#225

That redeemed Jai for me. Hopefully he tells Bani what he went through and not leave her in more confusion.

Nice update, take care of your self .

-Priya

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s_geetu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#226

great part.

really liked it.

please continue sooon :D

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suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#227

Jai is now a broken man because of his deeds . OFcourse misguided by Pia. But he should get over his guilt. He should now try to save his marriage & build up relationship with Bani. Bani is still concern about his wellbeing , could guess something is wrong with him without him saying anything.

Hope we see Jai working on correcting his mistake.

Continue soon pl.

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princess14

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Posted: 16 years ago

#228

that was a great udpate!!! poor jai!!! he shouldn't lose hope now...he can stilll get his family back!!

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Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#229

Hey Ranjana,

You have penned Jai's agony very well. He wronged innocent people (Bani and her family) for a cause that had no base at all. The very idea of his love for Pia bites the dust when it dawns onto him that she never loved him back and was simply playing with his emotions. I feel pity for him.

Waiting for the next part.

cheers

Shweta