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hey guys..this is ayesha n this is my second ff...im still nervous..😆 but plz plz plz comment!! heres the intro-
She was walking on the street with her arms crossed and her body crouched with tears n helplessness in her eyes..wondering why..why did he do that to me!she could not control herself and tears rolled down her cheeks..the wind was blowing swifting through her face..she was lonely and needed a shoulder to cry on..her head was aching really badly..she needed someone !
Suddenly a car crossed her in high speed,but she did not even notice it..she was too lost in wondering what just happened with her..the car stopped making a squeaky sound. the car reversed and came back right where she was standing..the window of the car opened ..
' excuse me '...a guy spoke in a husky voice..
there was no reply ..
He tried again.. 'excuse me, do you need some help?'
she was still lost in her painful thoughts..
' weird ' said the guy n drove off...
while driving the guy wondered what a weird girl she was! ignoring a person just wanting to help...
' well why do i care! '
He was driving while drumming his fingers on the staring wheel and whistling .. suddenly he looked at the time and it was 4:30 am .. and the first thought tht came to his mind was tht girl who he had just left behind..he thought tht he should go back n help her..what if she got into some trouble..it was quite late and she also did not look in a very pleasant state. he reversed his car wondering tht by now she must hav gone somewhere else now..but he just wanted to check..it wouldn't cause him any harm!
When he reached the point he saw tht the girl was still standing there in exactly the same position.. he got out of his car and went n stood in front of her..
' helloo..are u waiting for someone? '..she did not respond
he waved his hand in front of her face .. she finally blinked and came back to her senses .. she looked in a bad condition
he asked again.. ' do you need some help? '
she looked up and saw a man standing in front of her ... she did not say anything and hugged him..he could see her moving n could make out that she was crying her lungs out!
She suddenly put her hand on her head..she felt dizzy, her head was aching & her eyes started closing slowly n she fainted in his arms..
hey guys this was the intro..plz plz plz comment..it encourages me to write better parts!! plz comment..
ayesha😃
She was walking on the street with her arms crossed and her body crouched with tears n helplessness in her eyes..wondering why..why did he do that to me!she could not control herself and tears rolled down her cheeks..the wind was blowing swifting through her face..she was lonely and needed a shoulder to cry on..her head was aching really badly..she needed someone !
Suddenly a car crossed her in high speed,but she did not even notice it..she was too lost in wondering what just happened with her..the car stopped making a squeaky sound. the car reversed and came back right where she was standing..the window of the car opened ..
' excuse me '...a guy spoke in a husky voice..
there was no reply ..
He tried again.. 'excuse me, do you need some help?'
she was still lost in her painful thoughts..
' weird ' said the guy n drove off...
while driving the guy wondered what a weird girl she was! ignoring a person just wanting to help...
' well why do i care! '
He was driving while drumming his fingers on the staring wheel and whistling .. suddenly he looked at the time and it was 4:30 am .. and the first thought tht came to his mind was tht girl who he had just left behind..he thought tht he should go back n help her..what if she got into some trouble..it was quite late and she also did not look in a very pleasant state. he reversed his car wondering tht by now she must hav gone somewhere else now..but he just wanted to check..it wouldn't cause him any harm!
When he reached the point he saw tht the girl was still standing there in exactly the same position.. he got out of his car and went n stood in front of her..
' helloo..are u waiting for someone? '..she did not respond
he waved his hand in front of her face .. she finally blinked and came back to her senses .. she looked in a bad condition
he asked again.. ' do you need some help? '
she looked up and saw a man standing in front of her ... she did not say anything and hugged him..he could see her moving n could make out that she was crying her lungs out!
She suddenly put her hand on her head..she felt dizzy, her head was aching & her eyes started closing slowly n she fainted in his arms..
hey guys this was the intro..plz plz plz comment..it encourages me to write better parts!! plz comment..
ayesha😃
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