fanfic (pyaar to hona hi tha)Updated Part 29/pg 99 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
@Shafoo - Thanks so much
@Monu - Love ya THANKS so much for your review. I hope u like my future parts too.
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sorry i forgot 2 mention in my previous comment that the selection of songs was excellent.all of them r my favourite numbers.
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thnx 4 d uod8!!!!Do contiune soon!!!!!!!
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hey cute parts...
i jus loved themm..
i loved the song tujh main rab dikhta hai on sajan...muuuahhh..
ur writing awsome...
i jus loved sajan's story...nd mayur's too..
plzz cont as soon as possible..
em waiting.........sooooooooooonnnnn
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@pooja - yea they are my personal favorites too. Anyways thanx again😉

@ynaiita - Ur welcome and thanx to u too😊

@mania - Thanx and yea even i love that song and i did think it would suit Sajan.😃
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hey awesome....i just love ur ff!!!!!
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Originally posted by: ananya_s

hey awesome....i just love ur ff!!!!!



😳 😳 THANKS SO MUCH 😃 😃


For the other's posting real soon
Edited by TINAMALHONTRA - 16 years ago
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Part 12

Suddenly music starts playing

(Karan, Samrat, Raj, Mayank)

Dekho dekho hai shaam badi deewani
Dheere dheere ban jaye na koi kahani

Dekho dekho hai shaam badi deewani
Dheere dheere ban jaye na koi kahani

Dilbar hai dilkash hai dildaar nazare hain
Aaj zameen par utre kitne sitare hai

Ab lo hosh na mi danam
Hum hai dil hai aur janam

Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai
Na koi rahe sam rahe per
yeh ilzaam lage kisper
Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai

Together - All hot girls put your hands up and say
Om shanti Om

Shaam gazab ki Hungama Khez hai
Iska nasha hi gehra hai tez hai,

Shaam gazab ki Hungama Khez hai
Iska nasha hi gehra hai tez hai

Zulf khuli hai resham resham
Saans ghuli hai madham madham

Yeh to ishaare hain

Ab lo hosh na mi danam
Hum hai dil hai aur janam

Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai
Na koi rahe sam na rahe par

yeh ilzaam lage kisper

Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai

Together - All hot girls put your hands up and say
Om shanti Om

Kehne ko waise to saara sukun hai
Phir bhi yeh dil hai ki isko junoon hai

Kehne ko waise to saara sukun hai
Phir bhi yeh dil hai ki isko junoon hai

Pal do pal ko khwaab saja de
Isko usko sab ko bata de

Raaz jo sare hain

Ab lo hosh na mi danam
Hum hai dil hai aur janam
Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai

Na koi rahe sam rahe per
yeh ilzaam lage kisper

Bas deewangi deewangi deewangi hai

Together - All hot girls put your hands up and say
Om shanti Om

Dad – Vaah vaah kya kamaal ka dance karte hai excel ke stars but ab bus. The food's ready thoda khana khaa lo then you can very well take the dance floor back.

Everyone heads for the food with Vatsala and Uday leading the way.

Benji – Kitne cute lagte hai na ek saath voh kya kehti hai Nupur

C.J – Ram milai jodi

Benji – Haan Bilkul C.J tumne sab sikh liya

Dia – Hey guys hamare saath baitho

Samrat – Yea sure Candy. Vaise candy aaj kal tum apne dost ko bhul hi gayi ho. Karan zyaada pasand aa gaya hai kya.

Dia – Aisa nahi hai Sammy but sach kahu toh Karan mujhe sach main bahut pasand hai.

Samrat – Aur Raj

Dia – He will also do

Benji – Dia tumhe kya lagta hai yeh offer chal raha hai ki itne daam main yeh do cheez mil raha hai tumhe jo lena hai le lo.

Samrat – Chod na Benji kabhi kabhi confusion ho jaati hai

Dad – Are bacho acha hua tum sab yaha mil gaye Karan, Gunjan, Raj, Nupur yahan aao

Raj – Ya dad kya hua

Karan – Thank god dad aap ne bula diya varna voh Shukla humme western culture v/s Indian culture ka path pada raha tha. Shudh hindi toh ek taraf aur uski perfume ek taraf

Dad – Tabhi toh main aha ke paas baitha tha. Anyways main sonch raha tha ki pure excel main tum sab raj aur karan ke sabse kareeb ho.

Dia – Jee uncle hum hi toh unke sabse….kareeb hai

Dad – Uhm Right! Gunjan aur Nupur toh aa hi rahe hai maine sonch liya tumhe bhi invite karloon

Mayank – Kaha ke liye

Dad – Are New Year ke liye humare farm house par. Hum kal hi nikal rahe hai

Samrat – Par kal college hai

Dad – Tha ab nahi maine baat kiya princi se aur usne accept kiya ki bacho ko ek hafte ki chuti deni chahiye. Toh ek hafte ke liye hum farm house main chalenge.

Mayank – Par har saal new year maa ke saath manata aaya hoon

Nupur – Mayank sahi keh raha hai parivaar ke saath hi new year manate hai

Samrat – Ek idea hai hum aunty ko saath lete hai

Dad – Yeh bhi acha hai

Mayank – Par mom aayegi nahi aur office bhi toh nahi chod sakti

Dad – Office ka main sambhaal loonga after all itne bade empire ka kuch toh fayda hota hai aur tumhare mom ko haan bolne ke liye hum personally jayenge. Baakiyon ko koi problem

Others – Nope

Dia – Of course uncle Bilkul chalega. Hum abhi chalte hain packing bhi toh karna hai.

Dad – Ok beta bye

Dia – Bye uncle, raj, karan. Chalo guys

Slowly slowly everybody started leaving. In the end Sajan, Mayur, Raj, karan and dad were left.

Dad – chalo hum sab jaake baat karte hai

Raj – Itne sab logo ki kya zaroorat

Dad – The more the merrier.

They go to Mayank's house. Mayank goes forward with Nupur on his right and Raj on his left. MM opens the door

MM – Are mayu tu aa gaya. Are Nupur Raj tum dono bhi aaye ho kuch kaam tha kya?

Mayank – Maa tum Raj ko toh jaanti hi hogi yeh Karan hai

Nupur – Aunty karan yaad hai

MM – Oh haan tum sahi main us ki tarah lagte ho

Karan – Kis ki tarah

Nupur – Kuch nahi aur yeh meri chothi behen Gunjan hai

Gunjan – Namaste!

Mayank – aur yeh Samrat hai

MM – Oh Samrat gunjan ka dost

Mayank – Maa!!

Nupur – Aunty Samrat hum sab ka dost hai

MM – Haa haa kher tum sab ek saath yaha pe

Mayank – Voh Raj ke dad aap se kuch baat karna chahte hai

MM – mujh se

Raj – Dad come in

Mr Singh enters mumbling something when he sees Mayanks mom (Ekta kapoor style shock)

MM – Sujoy

Dad – Megha

(Note – Sujoy and Megha are just names taken I don't think Mayanks mom name is ever flashed)
Mayank – Aap ek doosre ko jaante hai

Dad – Megha Gupta, Miss talkative. Roll No 20 Pass out with 92% just missed

MM – Sujoy Singh, Mr flirty. Roll no 21 Pass out with 93% just passed

Raj – dad

MM – Are you sure tum issi ke bete ho Raj

Raj – Jee Haan kyun

MM – Kyunki tum itne ache sache aur yeh jhoota, flirty aur pata nahi kya kya

Karan – Matlab

MM – Matlab final exam main mujhse copy karke pass hua tha. Voh ek answer usne pada tha toh ek percent zyaada mila tha

Raj – DAD!!!

Dad – Kyun pooch uske return main maine usse uska first date dilaya

Mayank – MOM!!!

MM – Voh toh mayu…

Dad – Are yeh itna baat karti thi ki har koi bore ho jaata tha

MM – Aur har ladki tumhari girlfriend toh ban hi gayi thi

Nupur – AUNTY……UNCLE!!!!!!!!!!!

MM & Dad – Kya hai

Nupur – Mudde pe aaye

Dad – Are haan dekha tum kitna time waste karti ho

MM – Main……….

Nupur – AUNTY!!

Dad – Toh maine bacho se kaha ki ek hafte ke liye hum mere farm house be jaate hai aur New year manate hai toh Mayank ko tumhari yaad aa gayi toh maine usse kaha ki office ko main dekh loonga aur tumhe saath aane ko kahunga. Par ab main sonch raha hoon tumhe jhelna padega

MM – Dekho Nupur tum isko kuch nahi keh rahi Partiality

Nupur – Nahi main keh rahi hoon na……..UNCLE!!!!

MM – Toh problem kya hai Sujoy job dekhlega after all help ka karz to utarna padega na. Hum chalte hai

Nupur – Yes thank u aunty

Dad – Aunty HAA!!!HAA!!! Soncha nahi tha ki kabhi koi tumhe aunty kahega itni budhi ho gayi ho. College ki diva thi aur ab HAA!!HAA!!!

Mayank – Mom!!

Dad – Ladke marte the par iske baat karne ke vajah se darte the. Kapde kya pehenti thi

MM – Fashion tha knee length ka toh main pehenti thi

Mayank – Mom!!!

Dad – Chalo kal milte hai ek saath kitne heart attack dogi Mayank ko. Vishvaas nahi hota itna acha aur genius beta tumhara

MM – Tum toh rehne hi do

Gunjan – Chalo chalte hai bahut late ho gaya hai varna kal nahi ja payenge

Samrat – Haan chashmish sahi keh rahi hai.

After everyone leaves

Mayank – MOM!!! Yeh kya sun raha hoon tum tumhare zamane ki Dia thi. Ab jab log sunenge ki jis Dia ko main bevkoof kehta tha usi Mayank Sharma ki mom apne zamane main vaisi thi toh log kya kahenge

MM – Are Mayu kapde kum pehne se dimaag thodi hi kum ho jaata hai. Aur vaise bhi knee length toh chalta hai na.

Mayank – Nahi chalta hai maa. Ab tum Nupur ko hi dekh lo kitni pyaari lagti hai salvar kameez main. Usse toh zaroorat nahi padti fashion ko follow karne ki

MM – Haan haan JAI HO NUPUR DEVI KI!!!!!!

Nupur bhala kuch galat kar sakti hai nahi na.

Mayank – Maa tum sab kuch ko us tarah se kyun leti ho

MM – abhi abhi Sujoy aur tumne kaha na ki main bevkoof hoon toh bevkoof log aise hi baat karte hain. Ab so jaa kal jaana nahi hai kya. Good Night!

Mayank – Good Night

At Samrat's house

Samrat – Ek poora hafta chashmish ke saath is ka pura fayda uthana padega. Par sab plan karke rakhna chahiye

Phones Benji

Benji – Dafaknhahajfhg.

Samrat – Yeh kahi Uday ko toh call nahi kiya maine. (those who r confused refer to previous chapter)Benji tu hai kya

Benji – Is route ki sabhi liney vyast hai kripya thodi der bad call kijiye

Samrat – Abe uth muje pata hai tu hai. Yeh ladki ke aavaz main aata hai ladke ke nahi

Benji – Yahan ki ladkiya bhi vyast hai tabhi is route pe nahi aati. Hello this is Benji apna message is beep ke baad chod dena

Samrat – BENJI!!!!!! Acha sun raat ko so mat jaana mujhe aur Gunjan ko ek saath laane ke liye plan sonch na. Aur main uske liye kya kya karu voh bhi. Haan aur Mayank ke liye bhi sonchna. Aur C.J ko phone kar ke bhi keh dena.

Benji – Par C.J nahi aa rahi

Samrat – Oh toh tu double kaam karna

Benji – Par main kal bura dikhoonga. Tu Mayank ko keh na yeh sab karne ke liye

Samrat – Tujhe vaise bhi koi dekhne vala toh hai nahi. Mayank aur mujhe best lagna hai after all impression padega

Benji – Dost dost na raha.

Samrat – Good night!!!

Benji – Abe sone toh nahi vaala toh good night kyu

Samrat – Taaki tera kaam good ho sake

Keeps the phone down

Samrat – Chal beta Samrat packing ho gayi. Best kapde ready hai. Alarm set. Ab bus so jaa

Bhushan house

In Dia's room

Dia – Dodo voh red dress aur voh red pant. Tumhe pata hai Raj ko kaunsa colour pasand hai.

Uday – Haan Orange

Dia – ORANGE!! Yeh bada ajeeb choice hai. Mere paas ek bhi orange dress nahi hai. And it's too late. Vaise dodo tumhe kaise pata chala ki orange favourite hai uska

Uday – Simple Di voh Nupur ko keh raha tha ki khoob saare oranges rakhna kyunki usko oranges pasand hai.

Dia – DODO!!!!!!!!! Voh fruit ki baat kar raha tha. Jao aur Nupur se pooch ke aao.

Uday – Ok Di

Dia – Ab toh Dia hi best lagegi koi aur Dia jitna acha hoga hi nahi. Ab Raj aur Karan dekhte reh jayenge

Uday – Di Raj ko white pasand hai

Dia – Oh kitna acha colour hai. Chalo white pack karo. Voh mera white tee aur whit heels. Aur voh skirt. Red and white dress aur………………

In Gunur's room

Gunjan – Di abhi packing karo

Nupur – Chod na Gunjan after all kal subah uth ke karte hain

Gunjan – Subah

Nupur – haan subah chal so jaa

Gunjan – DI!! abhi utho subah kab ho jayegi pata nahi chalega. Fir aap ko uthne main bhi problem isiliye abhi.

Nupur – Thik hai meri maa. Karti hoon.

Uday comes to the door

Gunjan - voh white dress pass kar na

Gunjan – Yeh lo Di par tumhe pata hai na Raj ko white se kitna chid hai.

Nupur – Haan mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai Morena main hamari uniform white thi aur jab voh apna essay competition likhne gaya tha toh uski shirt pe sab ink gir gaya. Pura dusra school uspe has raha tha usse bahut gussa aaya. After all usse gussa bhi toh bahut aata hai. Tab se usse blue pasand aata hai. Voh kehta hai ki blue dress pe ink gira hota toh pata nahi chalta. Yeh ladke bhi ajeeb hote hain na. Samajh hi nahi aata yeh kya sonch rahe hai

Gunjan – Haan Di aur yaad hai unhone pure school ka uniform change karva diya

Nupur – Haan………

Uday – Nupur….

Then thinks

Are Uday Nupur ko kya pooch raha hai best friend ho ke bhi isse pata nahi ki Raj ko white pasand hai blue nahi. Is ka reason bhi pretty simple hai usse acha nahi laga hoga ki koi aur uska favourite colour pehne isiliye sab ko blue pehna kar bolta hai ki blue uska favourite hai. Uday you are a genius. Ab main yeh jaa kar Di ko batata hoon. Di bahut khush hogi. (Err Uday don't u think kabhi kabhi apna dimaag nahi use karna chahiye. Bechaari Dia)

Nupur – Kya hua Uday bhaiya kuch kaam tha

Uday – Nahi……matlab tha……nahi …chalo main chalta hoon.

Nupur – Dekha Gunjan ladke…..ab jaise inhe hi dekh leejiye. Tu agar khud bhagvan ko bhi neeche laake unhe kahegi ki Uday bhaiya ko samajhne ke liye toh voh bhi chakkar kha jayenge.

Gunjan – Yeh tumne sahi kaha Di

Nupur – Aur mujhe kya padi hai Raj ko kya pasand hai aur kya nahi

Gunjan – Yeh bhi thik hai.

Nupur – Chalo packing khatam kar ke sote hai varna kal uth nahi payenge.

Gunjan – Haan aur please Di white tumpe suit nahi karta.

Nupur – Pata hai bhala tune Madhuri Dixit ko kabhi white pehente hue dekha hai

Gunjan – Nahi par……

Nupur – Toh bus main kaise pehen sakti hoon

Gunjan – Par Di maine toh do ya teen picture dekhe hai Madhuri ke

Nupur – Toh kya hua maine teri rai puchi hai. Chal ab so jaa. Samrat ke saath reh kar kuch zyaada hi dimaag chal raha hai tera.

Both gets into bed and switches of the light

Gunjan – Acha Di yeh batao ki tum aur Mayank ek doosre se pyaar karte ho

Nupur opens the light

Nupur – Yeh kya keh rahi hai

Gunjan – Haan ya na

Nupur – Tu bhi kya chothi choti baatein leki baithi rehti hai.

She closes the light

Gunjan – Kher aapka toh pata nahi par jab bhi main Samrat ke saath hoti hoon kuch ajeeb lagta hai. Acha lagta hai. Main main ban ke bahar aati hoon. Main usse darti nahi hoon. Jab voh mujhe chuta hai toh acha lagta hai. Kya yeh pyaar hai Di.

No answer

Gunjan – Di….Di ….

Nupur – so jaa gunjan

Gunjan – Lagta hai Di ne kuch nahi suna. So jati hoon varna kal late ho jayega is baare main baad main baat karoongi.

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Kal ka din unke liye aur hamara next update hai unke new year ka safar

Let's see what happens in between today and the new year.

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey awesome.......i really love ur updates....i especially liked d mayank's mom aur raj's dad wala scene too gud.....frm wer do u get such woderful ideas???
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🤗Wonderful update Tina..!!
Loved Mayu's dialogue abt how beautiful Nupur looks in salwar kameez.. so sweet.. Gunjan seems to be falling in love..

Continue soon..

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